Comments received on poems by GoldenRibbon00 or UnderTheGreenLeaves
Sleepless Knight
L. B. Mek said:
a fantasy, damning
of that blight, we name
Insomnia...
I so, relate!
thanks for sharing
March 25th, 2022 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
a fantasy, damning
of that blight, we name
Insomnia...
I so, relate!
thanks for sharing
March 25th, 2022 06:03
The Warrior\'s Flame
L. B. Mek said:
Awesome!
keep growing dear poet, soar
ever higher
thank you!
March 25th, 2022 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
Awesome!
keep growing dear poet, soar
ever higher
thank you!
March 25th, 2022 05:34
-A Stranger Did Come Along- A Bard\'s Song
L. B. Mek said:
I wish Rothfuss
will release book 3
and let Kvothe\'s tale, finish
one way or another
next promised date we have is July 11th...
we can but hope, lol
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
a wonderful song of dedication
to one of the best written prose
in the history of the fantasy genre
and I really liked these lines:)
\'Legends I Did Tell Of
Of Kings Made Hollow
By Rings Of Sorrow\'
March 21st, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
I wish Rothfuss
will release book 3
and let Kvothe\'s tale, finish
one way or another
next promised date we have is July 11th...
we can but hope, lol
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
a wonderful song of dedication
to one of the best written prose
in the history of the fantasy genre
and I really liked these lines:)
\'Legends I Did Tell Of
Of Kings Made Hollow
By Rings Of Sorrow\'
March 21st, 2022 05:43
The Crocodile Warrior
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was great! I love the way your works take me through little worlds of fantasy. Your characters are very creative and rich in personality. Well done!
March 18th, 2022 10:06
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was great! I love the way your works take me through little worlds of fantasy. Your characters are very creative and rich in personality. Well done!
March 18th, 2022 10:06
The Order of the Sisters of the Vermillion Rose
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was quite peculiar. I lived for these characters and these tribes, they\'re all so captivating. I think the line that most caught my attention was, \"Training in both the Arts of Combat and Knowledge.\" As not only is physical training important, but so is the mind. Great job. You should write a novel!
March 17th, 2022 13:10
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was quite peculiar. I lived for these characters and these tribes, they\'re all so captivating. I think the line that most caught my attention was, \"Training in both the Arts of Combat and Knowledge.\" As not only is physical training important, but so is the mind. Great job. You should write a novel!
March 17th, 2022 13:10
The TombStone 31 Express (Prologue & Chapter 1)
L. B. Mek said:
a really captivating premise
I really enjoyed your effortless flow
from thought to conversation,
loved the pacing of your chapter
and the intrigue in your prologue..
may I recommend
at least for a website like MPS
where people are used to reading much shorter works
you reduce your uploads to around a thousand words or less,
that way people won\'t be scared away by the length, alone
and more people can appreciate you wonderful talent
and it may be better to choose two or three days, with gaps between
to upload your work
and keep, to those days/ times
so the same people that enjoy your work
can look for you at those times..
(just my 2 cents worth, of helpful suggestions
please
ignore them, if you don\'t think they have any merit)
lastly, if you continue this series
it may be good to offer a link
to the previous chapters in the \'authors comments\' section
of your new uploads..
thank you! for choosing to share
March 15th, 2022 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
a really captivating premise
I really enjoyed your effortless flow
from thought to conversation,
loved the pacing of your chapter
and the intrigue in your prologue..
may I recommend
at least for a website like MPS
where people are used to reading much shorter works
you reduce your uploads to around a thousand words or less,
that way people won\'t be scared away by the length, alone
and more people can appreciate you wonderful talent
and it may be better to choose two or three days, with gaps between
to upload your work
and keep, to those days/ times
so the same people that enjoy your work
can look for you at those times..
(just my 2 cents worth, of helpful suggestions
please
ignore them, if you don\'t think they have any merit)
lastly, if you continue this series
it may be good to offer a link
to the previous chapters in the \'authors comments\' section
of your new uploads..
thank you! for choosing to share
March 15th, 2022 05:21
Death\'s Winning Hand
L. B. Mek said:
very vivid, true to your profiles words:
\'For in Creativity do we become the Shapers of own Worlds\'
thanks for sharing, dear writer
but sadly
I don\'t have time to read each of your past writes
but I will be sure
to look out for All, of the future writes
you choose to share
March 15th, 2022 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
very vivid, true to your profiles words:
\'For in Creativity do we become the Shapers of own Worlds\'
thanks for sharing, dear writer
but sadly
I don\'t have time to read each of your past writes
but I will be sure
to look out for All, of the future writes
you choose to share
March 15th, 2022 04:57
Alone Am I Amongst the Twilight Trees
Rocky Lagou said:
This was truly an embarkment through a journey of the mystical. So finely crafted and I really enjoyed the images you painted. Well done!
March 14th, 2022 08:28
Rocky Lagou said:
This was truly an embarkment through a journey of the mystical. So finely crafted and I really enjoyed the images you painted. Well done!
March 14th, 2022 08:28
Alone Am I Amongst the Twilight Trees
L. B. Mek said:
well polished, an enjoyable snippet
and a promising showcasing of your talent
if you enjoy this writing thing
I hope you upload your series on one of the numerous websites that cater for niche fantasy readers
\'royalroad\' maybe?
as well as here on MPS, of course! lol
I wish you all the best, thanks for sharing
March 14th, 2022 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
well polished, an enjoyable snippet
and a promising showcasing of your talent
if you enjoy this writing thing
I hope you upload your series on one of the numerous websites that cater for niche fantasy readers
\'royalroad\' maybe?
as well as here on MPS, of course! lol
I wish you all the best, thanks for sharing
March 14th, 2022 05:50
Musica Lux & Transformatio (Music Light and Transformation)
dean langmuir said:
I enjoyed,thank you,poem on
March 13th, 2022 15:15
dean langmuir said:
I enjoyed,thank you,poem on
March 13th, 2022 15:15
The Crows Are Restless
L. B. Mek said:
\'Gibbering and Gabbering they will March upon each and every City\'..
a little insightful commentary
in amongst the fantasy..
I really enjoyed your writing, this was an intriguing read
thanks for sharing
March 11th, 2022 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'Gibbering and Gabbering they will March upon each and every City\'..
a little insightful commentary
in amongst the fantasy..
I really enjoyed your writing, this was an intriguing read
thanks for sharing
March 11th, 2022 04:55
