Comments received on poems by FallingAwake2
Expansive
Cassie58 said:
That’s a great place to be. I enjoyed my visit here. Your lines are expressive and I enjoyed the build up.
February 25th, 2024 00:03
Cassie58 said:
That’s a great place to be. I enjoyed my visit here. Your lines are expressive and I enjoyed the build up.
February 25th, 2024 00:03
Fail to Forget (PTSD v. 2)
jarcher54 said:
You are wise and correct... real tragedy does not inspire. Your strength is as vivid as your sorrow. The last line is perfect.
January 14th, 2024 22:54
jarcher54 said:
You are wise and correct... real tragedy does not inspire. Your strength is as vivid as your sorrow. The last line is perfect.
January 14th, 2024 22:54
Sunflowers
Cassie58 said:
A lovely composition. Sunflowers are precious as they track the path of the sun. For me they epitomize joy and happiness. You brought some sunshine to me on a dark winter morning. Thank you.
December 30th, 2023 00:44
Cassie58 said:
A lovely composition. Sunflowers are precious as they track the path of the sun. For me they epitomize joy and happiness. You brought some sunshine to me on a dark winter morning. Thank you.
December 30th, 2023 00:44
Dead and Gone
Cassie58 said:
A nice piece of brevity. Those whispers can haunt can’t they?
December 22nd, 2023 02:02
Cassie58 said:
A nice piece of brevity. Those whispers can haunt can’t they?
December 22nd, 2023 02:02
Insomnia Free Flow
arial said:
Yes sad but beautifull that what\'s poetry is all about. Isnt ?.cant help praising a good read now can we...🦋.....i am glad to hear that
November 24th, 2023 19:22
arial said:
Yes sad but beautifull that what\'s poetry is all about. Isnt ?.cant help praising a good read now can we...🦋.....i am glad to hear that
November 24th, 2023 19:22
Insomnia Free Flow
arial said:
This I can relate to ..a lot...what a great read...
November 23rd, 2023 16:26
arial said:
This I can relate to ..a lot...what a great read...
November 23rd, 2023 16:26
Hands
NinjaGirl said:
I\'ve always wondered this myself, what are you supposed to do with your hands when talking to someone?
By your sides = Weird, like a soldier
Crossed = You look angry or mad
Behind you = You\'re hiding something
Grabbing one wrist = Just looks awkward
Out/up = Weirdo, what are you doing? Starfish?
I will spend my whole life searching for the answer I swear.
November 8th, 2023 00:39
NinjaGirl said:
I\'ve always wondered this myself, what are you supposed to do with your hands when talking to someone?
By your sides = Weird, like a soldier
Crossed = You look angry or mad
Behind you = You\'re hiding something
Grabbing one wrist = Just looks awkward
Out/up = Weirdo, what are you doing? Starfish?
I will spend my whole life searching for the answer I swear.
November 8th, 2023 00:39
Snow
David Wakeling said:
I\'ve never seen the snow so I can\'t relate.Nice poem however
October 16th, 2023 02:04
David Wakeling said:
I\'ve never seen the snow so I can\'t relate.Nice poem however
October 16th, 2023 02:04
Processing the Process of Writing
Pop64 said:
The science of poetry writing. All very true and clearly conveyed.
September 28th, 2023 20:48
Pop64 said:
The science of poetry writing. All very true and clearly conveyed.
September 28th, 2023 20:48
In Bloom
L. B. Mek said:
like the tenderness
and classic imagery, revitalised
by poetic sincerity..
Thank you! dear poet
a tight haiku, anchored in nature
a bonus
September 22nd, 2023 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
like the tenderness
and classic imagery, revitalised
by poetic sincerity..
Thank you! dear poet
a tight haiku, anchored in nature
a bonus
September 22nd, 2023 05:46
Cyberstalking
FallingAwake2 said:
what wonderful insight! thank you very much for reading
September 1st, 2023 06:57
FallingAwake2 said:
what wonderful insight! thank you very much for reading
September 1st, 2023 06:57
Cyberstalking
L. B. Mek said:
different, abstract
a little feisty and terrifying
but really like the unique and
matter of fact, delivery
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 1st, 2023 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
different, abstract
a little feisty and terrifying
but really like the unique and
matter of fact, delivery
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 1st, 2023 04:22
The Witnessing
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s nothing like a shoreline respite to awaken a sense of \"reality\" in our minds. This poem draws some fine images toward the \"Truth\" of living. Thoroughly enjoyed. - Phil A.
August 19th, 2023 15:20
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s nothing like a shoreline respite to awaken a sense of \"reality\" in our minds. This poem draws some fine images toward the \"Truth\" of living. Thoroughly enjoyed. - Phil A.
August 19th, 2023 15:20
The Witnessing
jarcher54 said:
PSS Your screen name is also perfect. Especially for this poem.
August 19th, 2023 01:03
jarcher54 said:
PSS Your screen name is also perfect. Especially for this poem.
August 19th, 2023 01:03
The Witnessing
jarcher54 said:
PS Lovely title... not unique I suspect, but perfect!
August 19th, 2023 01:02
jarcher54 said:
PS Lovely title... not unique I suspect, but perfect!
August 19th, 2023 01:02
The Witnessing
jarcher54 said:
Thank you for the little intense tour de force, in this little sonnet , of the start of your day. I feel like I\'m right there with you.
August 19th, 2023 01:01
jarcher54 said:
Thank you for the little intense tour de force, in this little sonnet , of the start of your day. I feel like I\'m right there with you.
August 19th, 2023 01:01
Loren Ipsum
Bobby O said:
Darkness unexpectedly claimed all views from the position you assigned or perhaps designed a placeholder not even next in line but you kept me , my love to share found unaware or worse uncared indifference gifted without a blinking stare as you unmoved denied my dignity clear atmosphere
Say what you feel don’t just list things you wish were different
August 11th, 2023 23:39
Bobby O said:
Darkness unexpectedly claimed all views from the position you assigned or perhaps designed a placeholder not even next in line but you kept me , my love to share found unaware or worse uncared indifference gifted without a blinking stare as you unmoved denied my dignity clear atmosphere
Say what you feel don’t just list things you wish were different
August 11th, 2023 23:39
Codependency
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful clarity
while being true to your poetic potency
modernity is hard to word artistic
so much is blunt confrontation
and/or toxic wordless drama
it doesn\'t lend itself
for our subtle poetic reveals
(anyway i\'m blabbering
just a great read, loved
the sharp conversational tone
bringing in that edge
we need to maintain our boundaries
during such exchanges)
really i could go on, love this
thank you!
July 28th, 2023 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful clarity
while being true to your poetic potency
modernity is hard to word artistic
so much is blunt confrontation
and/or toxic wordless drama
it doesn\'t lend itself
for our subtle poetic reveals
(anyway i\'m blabbering
just a great read, loved
the sharp conversational tone
bringing in that edge
we need to maintain our boundaries
during such exchanges)
really i could go on, love this
thank you!
July 28th, 2023 06:29
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