Comments received on poems by FallingAwake2
Of Course
Caring dove said:
Love the feeling to this poem … there’s a soft sound to some of your lines and I like the rhyming and way it flows with so much ease
Nicely expressed poem
November 14th, 2024 17:04
Caring dove said:
Love the feeling to this poem … there’s a soft sound to some of your lines and I like the rhyming and way it flows with so much ease
Nicely expressed poem
November 14th, 2024 17:04
Fun Guy
Thoughtless said:
A fun write. Nice one. The title points one in the right direction.
August 15th, 2024 13:55
Thoughtless said:
A fun write. Nice one. The title points one in the right direction.
August 15th, 2024 13:55
Hypervigilance
sorenbarrett said:
Paranoia follows suspicion and how can one not be suspicious? A raw and powerful write.
August 15th, 2024 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
Paranoia follows suspicion and how can one not be suspicious? A raw and powerful write.
August 15th, 2024 12:56
Lying to Myself
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of aloneness in this piece is outstanding. The last part of the poem is the most powerful \"alone,, I lie to myself\" We all lie to ourselves, but when alone without anyone to correct this view we are truely in peril. Nicely written
August 10th, 2024 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of aloneness in this piece is outstanding. The last part of the poem is the most powerful \"alone,, I lie to myself\" We all lie to ourselves, but when alone without anyone to correct this view we are truely in peril. Nicely written
August 10th, 2024 06:28
Paradox of All
sorenbarrett said:
A painted picture in words of a philosophical view. Nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
A painted picture in words of a philosophical view. Nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 05:45
Unrelatable
Cassie58 said:
So much truth in this poem. How well do we ever know another? Listen with your heart and hope for the best.
June 20th, 2024 00:17
Cassie58 said:
So much truth in this poem. How well do we ever know another? Listen with your heart and hope for the best.
June 20th, 2024 00:17
Unrelatable
Alan R said:
What a fantastic write! I relate and I second this! I feel, when we are trying to \"learn\" others, if we are being constantly nudged into validating them, it becomes even more difficult to understand the truth, specially when it means we have to give up our reality to make their version exist. Every one has their own version of reality, if we find a way to make these respectfully and peacefully coexist then getting to know others would be fun.
June 19th, 2024 00:46
Alan R said:
What a fantastic write! I relate and I second this! I feel, when we are trying to \"learn\" others, if we are being constantly nudged into validating them, it becomes even more difficult to understand the truth, specially when it means we have to give up our reality to make their version exist. Every one has their own version of reality, if we find a way to make these respectfully and peacefully coexist then getting to know others would be fun.
June 19th, 2024 00:46
Rising In Love
Cassie58 said:
A perfect picture of togetherness. Quite lovely. When the I becomes We. Have a great day.
May 29th, 2024 02:41
Cassie58 said:
A perfect picture of togetherness. Quite lovely. When the I becomes We. Have a great day.
May 29th, 2024 02:41
Expansive
Cassie58 said:
That’s a great place to be. I enjoyed my visit here. Your lines are expressive and I enjoyed the build up.
February 25th, 2024 00:03
Cassie58 said:
That’s a great place to be. I enjoyed my visit here. Your lines are expressive and I enjoyed the build up.
February 25th, 2024 00:03
Fail to Forget (PTSD v. 2)
jarcher54 said:
You are wise and correct... real tragedy does not inspire. Your strength is as vivid as your sorrow. The last line is perfect.
January 14th, 2024 22:54
jarcher54 said:
You are wise and correct... real tragedy does not inspire. Your strength is as vivid as your sorrow. The last line is perfect.
January 14th, 2024 22:54
Sunflowers
Cassie58 said:
A lovely composition. Sunflowers are precious as they track the path of the sun. For me they epitomize joy and happiness. You brought some sunshine to me on a dark winter morning. Thank you.
December 30th, 2023 00:44
Cassie58 said:
A lovely composition. Sunflowers are precious as they track the path of the sun. For me they epitomize joy and happiness. You brought some sunshine to me on a dark winter morning. Thank you.
December 30th, 2023 00:44
Dead and Gone
Cassie58 said:
A nice piece of brevity. Those whispers can haunt can’t they?
December 22nd, 2023 02:02
Cassie58 said:
A nice piece of brevity. Those whispers can haunt can’t they?
December 22nd, 2023 02:02
Insomnia Free Flow
arial said:
Yes sad but beautifull that what\'s poetry is all about. Isnt ?.cant help praising a good read now can we...🦋.....i am glad to hear that
November 24th, 2023 19:22
arial said:
Yes sad but beautifull that what\'s poetry is all about. Isnt ?.cant help praising a good read now can we...🦋.....i am glad to hear that
November 24th, 2023 19:22
Insomnia Free Flow
arial said:
This I can relate to ..a lot...what a great read...
November 23rd, 2023 16:26
arial said:
This I can relate to ..a lot...what a great read...
November 23rd, 2023 16:26
Hands
NinjaGirl said:
I\'ve always wondered this myself, what are you supposed to do with your hands when talking to someone?
By your sides = Weird, like a soldier
Crossed = You look angry or mad
Behind you = You\'re hiding something
Grabbing one wrist = Just looks awkward
Out/up = Weirdo, what are you doing? Starfish?
I will spend my whole life searching for the answer I swear.
November 8th, 2023 00:39
NinjaGirl said:
I\'ve always wondered this myself, what are you supposed to do with your hands when talking to someone?
By your sides = Weird, like a soldier
Crossed = You look angry or mad
Behind you = You\'re hiding something
Grabbing one wrist = Just looks awkward
Out/up = Weirdo, what are you doing? Starfish?
I will spend my whole life searching for the answer I swear.
November 8th, 2023 00:39
Snow
David Wakeling said:
I\'ve never seen the snow so I can\'t relate.Nice poem however
October 16th, 2023 02:04
David Wakeling said:
I\'ve never seen the snow so I can\'t relate.Nice poem however
October 16th, 2023 02:04
Processing the Process of Writing
Pop64 said:
The science of poetry writing. All very true and clearly conveyed.
September 28th, 2023 20:48
Pop64 said:
The science of poetry writing. All very true and clearly conveyed.
September 28th, 2023 20:48
In Bloom
L. B. Mek said:
like the tenderness
and classic imagery, revitalised
by poetic sincerity..
Thank you! dear poet
a tight haiku, anchored in nature
a bonus
September 22nd, 2023 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
like the tenderness
and classic imagery, revitalised
by poetic sincerity..
Thank you! dear poet
a tight haiku, anchored in nature
a bonus
September 22nd, 2023 05:46
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