Comments received on poems by FallingAwake2
Soundtrack of Silence
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of incompatibilities in this poem to emphasize the dimension of things and this makes it so much more powerful. For this and the creative use of it in the sound of atoms, grass growing and truth it is a fave
May 23rd, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of incompatibilities in this poem to emphasize the dimension of things and this makes it so much more powerful. For this and the creative use of it in the sound of atoms, grass growing and truth it is a fave
May 23rd, 2025 04:41
Soundtrack of Silence
Poetic Licence said:
A tender write I sense expressing the missing of a past loved is not getting any easier with the passing of time, nicely expressed and written
May 23rd, 2025 02:26
Poetic Licence said:
A tender write I sense expressing the missing of a past loved is not getting any easier with the passing of time, nicely expressed and written
May 23rd, 2025 02:26
Conscious Sea
Poetic Licence said:
A deep think and thought provoking write, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 13:38
Poetic Licence said:
A deep think and thought provoking write, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 13:38
Conscious Sea
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking and deep philosophical poem that dives deep. Very nice
May 10th, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking and deep philosophical poem that dives deep. Very nice
May 10th, 2025 11:49
Absence
Mourgana of the Fey said:
There is a feeling of loss within the wording of this poem, a well composed piece with deep reflective images!
April 12th, 2025 06:40
Mourgana of the Fey said:
There is a feeling of loss within the wording of this poem, a well composed piece with deep reflective images!
April 12th, 2025 06:40
Absence
Poetic Licence said:
I find this a touching write, a sad sense longing for someone that has gradually slipped out of there grasp, nicely expressed and written
April 12th, 2025 04:36
Poetic Licence said:
I find this a touching write, a sad sense longing for someone that has gradually slipped out of there grasp, nicely expressed and written
April 12th, 2025 04:36
Absence
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sends a message of rapidly distancing and falling out of grasp. It is painful in its alienation and leaves a sense of longing. Sad and lost are two words that come to mind. Well written
April 12th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sends a message of rapidly distancing and falling out of grasp. It is painful in its alienation and leaves a sense of longing. Sad and lost are two words that come to mind. Well written
April 12th, 2025 04:19
The Break in Being
MDStone said:
What a well written and accurately descriptive poem. Thanks for sharing with us.
February 26th, 2025 09:30
MDStone said:
What a well written and accurately descriptive poem. Thanks for sharing with us.
February 26th, 2025 09:30
The Break in Being
sorenbarrett said:
A great approach with vivid images of the process of rest or sleep and some unlikely pairing of these images to such natural processes. Very nicely done
February 26th, 2025 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
A great approach with vivid images of the process of rest or sleep and some unlikely pairing of these images to such natural processes. Very nicely done
February 26th, 2025 09:30
Framed Lies
sorenbarrett said:
White lies can easiy grow and become gray then black. A good write with metaphor. Very nice
January 30th, 2025 17:38
sorenbarrett said:
White lies can easiy grow and become gray then black. A good write with metaphor. Very nice
January 30th, 2025 17:38
Framed Lies
Poetic Licence said:
Over time they become more frequent and bigger as we try to cover the initial ones, and then become a barrier we get stuck behind. Powerful piece of writing.
January 30th, 2025 03:01
Poetic Licence said:
Over time they become more frequent and bigger as we try to cover the initial ones, and then become a barrier we get stuck behind. Powerful piece of writing.
January 30th, 2025 03:01
Everest
Poetic Licence said:
I guess it doesn`t matter how much resilience you have, eventually life will get you, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 03:54
Poetic Licence said:
I guess it doesn`t matter how much resilience you have, eventually life will get you, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 03:54
Everest
Cassie58 said:
It always amazes me where some people get their inner resilience from. I guess until we are tested ourselves we will never know. The examples you have written about, certainly would be extreme circumstances. I thought of George Mallory, who lost his life on Everest. I also thought of war poets. Thank you for sharing.
January 29th, 2025 02:49
Cassie58 said:
It always amazes me where some people get their inner resilience from. I guess until we are tested ourselves we will never know. The examples you have written about, certainly would be extreme circumstances. I thought of George Mallory, who lost his life on Everest. I also thought of war poets. Thank you for sharing.
January 29th, 2025 02:49
Painting Vibrance on a Clean Slate
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the metaphor here. Second chances offer hope. Nicely conveyed. Have a good day.
January 19th, 2025 08:46
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the metaphor here. Second chances offer hope. Nicely conveyed. Have a good day.
January 19th, 2025 08:46
Of Course
Caring dove said:
Love the feeling to this poem … there’s a soft sound to some of your lines and I like the rhyming and way it flows with so much ease
Nicely expressed poem
November 14th, 2024 17:04
Caring dove said:
Love the feeling to this poem … there’s a soft sound to some of your lines and I like the rhyming and way it flows with so much ease
Nicely expressed poem
November 14th, 2024 17:04
Fun Guy
Thoughtless said:
A fun write. Nice one. The title points one in the right direction.
August 15th, 2024 13:55
Thoughtless said:
A fun write. Nice one. The title points one in the right direction.
August 15th, 2024 13:55
Hypervigilance
sorenbarrett said:
Paranoia follows suspicion and how can one not be suspicious? A raw and powerful write.
August 15th, 2024 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
Paranoia follows suspicion and how can one not be suspicious? A raw and powerful write.
August 15th, 2024 12:56
Lying to Myself
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of aloneness in this piece is outstanding. The last part of the poem is the most powerful \"alone,, I lie to myself\" We all lie to ourselves, but when alone without anyone to correct this view we are truely in peril. Nicely written
August 10th, 2024 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of aloneness in this piece is outstanding. The last part of the poem is the most powerful \"alone,, I lie to myself\" We all lie to ourselves, but when alone without anyone to correct this view we are truely in peril. Nicely written
August 10th, 2024 06:28
Paradox of All
sorenbarrett said:
A painted picture in words of a philosophical view. Nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
A painted picture in words of a philosophical view. Nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 05:45
Unrelatable
Cassie58 said:
So much truth in this poem. How well do we ever know another? Listen with your heart and hope for the best.
June 20th, 2024 00:17
Cassie58 said:
So much truth in this poem. How well do we ever know another? Listen with your heart and hope for the best.
June 20th, 2024 00:17
Unrelatable
Alan R said:
What a fantastic write! I relate and I second this! I feel, when we are trying to \"learn\" others, if we are being constantly nudged into validating them, it becomes even more difficult to understand the truth, specially when it means we have to give up our reality to make their version exist. Every one has their own version of reality, if we find a way to make these respectfully and peacefully coexist then getting to know others would be fun.
June 19th, 2024 00:46
Alan R said:
What a fantastic write! I relate and I second this! I feel, when we are trying to \"learn\" others, if we are being constantly nudged into validating them, it becomes even more difficult to understand the truth, specially when it means we have to give up our reality to make their version exist. Every one has their own version of reality, if we find a way to make these respectfully and peacefully coexist then getting to know others would be fun.
June 19th, 2024 00:46
Rising In Love
Cassie58 said:
A perfect picture of togetherness. Quite lovely. When the I becomes We. Have a great day.
May 29th, 2024 02:41
Cassie58 said:
A perfect picture of togetherness. Quite lovely. When the I becomes We. Have a great day.
May 29th, 2024 02:41
Expansive
Cassie58 said:
That’s a great place to be. I enjoyed my visit here. Your lines are expressive and I enjoyed the build up.
February 25th, 2024 00:03
Cassie58 said:
That’s a great place to be. I enjoyed my visit here. Your lines are expressive and I enjoyed the build up.
February 25th, 2024 00:03
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