Comments received on poems by FallingAwake2
Hands
NinjaGirl said:
I\'ve always wondered this myself, what are you supposed to do with your hands when talking to someone?
By your sides = Weird, like a soldier
Crossed = You look angry or mad
Behind you = You\'re hiding something
Grabbing one wrist = Just looks awkward
Out/up = Weirdo, what are you doing? Starfish?
I will spend my whole life searching for the answer I swear.
November 8th, 2023 00:39
NinjaGirl said:
I\'ve always wondered this myself, what are you supposed to do with your hands when talking to someone?
By your sides = Weird, like a soldier
Crossed = You look angry or mad
Behind you = You\'re hiding something
Grabbing one wrist = Just looks awkward
Out/up = Weirdo, what are you doing? Starfish?
I will spend my whole life searching for the answer I swear.
November 8th, 2023 00:39
Snow
David Wakeling said:
I\'ve never seen the snow so I can\'t relate.Nice poem however
October 16th, 2023 02:04
David Wakeling said:
I\'ve never seen the snow so I can\'t relate.Nice poem however
October 16th, 2023 02:04
Processing the Process of Writing
Pop64 said:
The science of poetry writing. All very true and clearly conveyed.
September 28th, 2023 20:48
Pop64 said:
The science of poetry writing. All very true and clearly conveyed.
September 28th, 2023 20:48
In Bloom
L. B. Mek said:
like the tenderness
and classic imagery, revitalised
by poetic sincerity..
Thank you! dear poet
a tight haiku, anchored in nature
a bonus
September 22nd, 2023 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
like the tenderness
and classic imagery, revitalised
by poetic sincerity..
Thank you! dear poet
a tight haiku, anchored in nature
a bonus
September 22nd, 2023 05:46
Cyberstalking
FallingAwake2 said:
what wonderful insight! thank you very much for reading
September 1st, 2023 06:57
FallingAwake2 said:
what wonderful insight! thank you very much for reading
September 1st, 2023 06:57
Cyberstalking
L. B. Mek said:
different, abstract
a little feisty and terrifying
but really like the unique and
matter of fact, delivery
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 1st, 2023 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
different, abstract
a little feisty and terrifying
but really like the unique and
matter of fact, delivery
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 1st, 2023 04:22
The Witnessing
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s nothing like a shoreline respite to awaken a sense of \"reality\" in our minds. This poem draws some fine images toward the \"Truth\" of living. Thoroughly enjoyed. - Phil A.
August 19th, 2023 15:20
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s nothing like a shoreline respite to awaken a sense of \"reality\" in our minds. This poem draws some fine images toward the \"Truth\" of living. Thoroughly enjoyed. - Phil A.
August 19th, 2023 15:20
The Witnessing
jarcher54 said:
PSS Your screen name is also perfect. Especially for this poem.
August 19th, 2023 01:03
jarcher54 said:
PSS Your screen name is also perfect. Especially for this poem.
August 19th, 2023 01:03
The Witnessing
jarcher54 said:
PS Lovely title... not unique I suspect, but perfect!
August 19th, 2023 01:02
jarcher54 said:
PS Lovely title... not unique I suspect, but perfect!
August 19th, 2023 01:02
The Witnessing
jarcher54 said:
Thank you for the little intense tour de force, in this little sonnet , of the start of your day. I feel like I\'m right there with you.
August 19th, 2023 01:01
jarcher54 said:
Thank you for the little intense tour de force, in this little sonnet , of the start of your day. I feel like I\'m right there with you.
August 19th, 2023 01:01
Loren Ipsum
Bobby O said:
Darkness unexpectedly claimed all views from the position you assigned or perhaps designed a placeholder not even next in line but you kept me , my love to share found unaware or worse uncared indifference gifted without a blinking stare as you unmoved denied my dignity clear atmosphere
Say what you feel don’t just list things you wish were different
August 11th, 2023 23:39
Bobby O said:
Darkness unexpectedly claimed all views from the position you assigned or perhaps designed a placeholder not even next in line but you kept me , my love to share found unaware or worse uncared indifference gifted without a blinking stare as you unmoved denied my dignity clear atmosphere
Say what you feel don’t just list things you wish were different
August 11th, 2023 23:39
Codependency
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful clarity
while being true to your poetic potency
modernity is hard to word artistic
so much is blunt confrontation
and/or toxic wordless drama
it doesn\'t lend itself
for our subtle poetic reveals
(anyway i\'m blabbering
just a great read, loved
the sharp conversational tone
bringing in that edge
we need to maintain our boundaries
during such exchanges)
really i could go on, love this
thank you!
July 28th, 2023 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful clarity
while being true to your poetic potency
modernity is hard to word artistic
so much is blunt confrontation
and/or toxic wordless drama
it doesn\'t lend itself
for our subtle poetic reveals
(anyway i\'m blabbering
just a great read, loved
the sharp conversational tone
bringing in that edge
we need to maintain our boundaries
during such exchanges)
really i could go on, love this
thank you!
July 28th, 2023 06:29
Status Quo
jarcher54 said:
The word \"sad\" is a poem all by itself, but your three stanzas are beautiful because they are so real, so relatable, so honest... and pretty damn brave.
June 23rd, 2023 00:06
jarcher54 said:
The word \"sad\" is a poem all by itself, but your three stanzas are beautiful because they are so real, so relatable, so honest... and pretty damn brave.
June 23rd, 2023 00:06
Waiting
jarcher54 said:
This is truly haunting! A lovely thing to read as I turn off the lamp and drift to sleep in the wee wee hours...
June 22nd, 2023 02:52
jarcher54 said:
This is truly haunting! A lovely thing to read as I turn off the lamp and drift to sleep in the wee wee hours...
June 22nd, 2023 02:52
\"Placeholder\" Raw Freestyle
Bobby O said:
I really like this piece on multiple levels. Succinct phrasing w clever metaphor and motion and logical development that delivers w an end that satisfies and proffers artistic inspiration.
Nice write Good Read
June 1st, 2023 00:58
Bobby O said:
I really like this piece on multiple levels. Succinct phrasing w clever metaphor and motion and logical development that delivers w an end that satisfies and proffers artistic inspiration.
Nice write Good Read
June 1st, 2023 00:58
Buried in Blue
Parisab said:
Sorry for your loss-I’m so touched by your poem honoring his memory
April 29th, 2023 02:21
Parisab said:
Sorry for your loss-I’m so touched by your poem honoring his memory
April 29th, 2023 02:21
Buried in Blue
Parisab said:
Very special-the 2nd thru 4th stanza could even stand on its own
April 29th, 2023 00:46
Parisab said:
Very special-the 2nd thru 4th stanza could even stand on its own
April 29th, 2023 00:46
Mopping the River
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, thanks for sharing
(that cursed cadence of paradox
we seek warmth when we\'re lonely
yet
our pulsing beat is most attractive
when we\'re soaring upon smiles)
April 10th, 2023 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, thanks for sharing
(that cursed cadence of paradox
we seek warmth when we\'re lonely
yet
our pulsing beat is most attractive
when we\'re soaring upon smiles)
April 10th, 2023 05:13
Taking My Shot
Doggerel Dave said:
The only redeeming feature of this piece (apart from the fact that it is well constructed) is the rose stuck out of the barrel of the gun.
Noted you live in the United States, so I guess the gun imagery is par for the course with you Guys there.....🙂
February 17th, 2023 19:03
Doggerel Dave said:
The only redeeming feature of this piece (apart from the fact that it is well constructed) is the rose stuck out of the barrel of the gun.
Noted you live in the United States, so I guess the gun imagery is par for the course with you Guys there.....🙂
February 17th, 2023 19:03
Existential Angst
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll pay that one; extend it to \"I never asked to be born who I am\" and you have a guiding principle which should not only relate to me but underlie my judgement of others - did they ask to be born the way they are?
February 17th, 2023 18:54
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll pay that one; extend it to \"I never asked to be born who I am\" and you have a guiding principle which should not only relate to me but underlie my judgement of others - did they ask to be born the way they are?
February 17th, 2023 18:54
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