Comments received on poems by StarL07
What Was That Dream Again?
L. B. Mek said:
\'The empty feeling of traversing worlds
Back to where I wake up daily
Distant sounds, close-up whispers
Somewhat familiar screams.
Even the desire to never forget
Cannot unveil a dream\'..
under \'life weary\'
in the dictionary
your words should appear..
(such a relatable, depiction
astute imagery
and such seamless, poetic flow)
a great read! thanks for sharing
stay strong, dear poet
April 5th, 2022 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'The empty feeling of traversing worlds
Back to where I wake up daily
Distant sounds, close-up whispers
Somewhat familiar screams.
Even the desire to never forget
Cannot unveil a dream\'..
under \'life weary\'
in the dictionary
your words should appear..
(such a relatable, depiction
astute imagery
and such seamless, poetic flow)
a great read! thanks for sharing
stay strong, dear poet
April 5th, 2022 03:24
To Live or To Die
Dahlia said:
very well penned and a harsh reality that
attacks humanity, many, sadly, succumbed,to it during the worst of the pandemia, I guess they felt the way described in the poem and they off the planet, sadly...
Dahlia Vitalia
March 26th, 2022 15:46
Dahlia said:
very well penned and a harsh reality that
attacks humanity, many, sadly, succumbed,to it during the worst of the pandemia, I guess they felt the way described in the poem and they off the planet, sadly...
Dahlia Vitalia
March 26th, 2022 15:46
To Live or To Die
Crowns4Christ said:
Put your trust into the hands of God my dear,you will find purpose
March 26th, 2022 13:11
Crowns4Christ said:
Put your trust into the hands of God my dear,you will find purpose
March 26th, 2022 13:11
The Cabin in The Woods
Rocky Lagou said:
What a clever analogy! You wrote this really well! I love the imagery you incorporate and that wistful tone you convey is quite sad. Hopefully new cabins with new people will be on the horizon. Fantastic!
March 18th, 2022 12:38
Rocky Lagou said:
What a clever analogy! You wrote this really well! I love the imagery you incorporate and that wistful tone you convey is quite sad. Hopefully new cabins with new people will be on the horizon. Fantastic!
March 18th, 2022 12:38
The Cabin in The Woods
dean langmuir said:
Good one,cabins are another friend to enjoy,enjoy your day
March 18th, 2022 11:33
dean langmuir said:
Good one,cabins are another friend to enjoy,enjoy your day
March 18th, 2022 11:33
