Comments received on poems by Greg57
Laundry
Parisab said:
We are glad you found your way! Laundry is meditation and sorting life for me: I make sure all socks go for a dip in pairs-good write!
August 11th, 2023 21:01
Parisab said:
We are glad you found your way! Laundry is meditation and sorting life for me: I make sure all socks go for a dip in pairs-good write!
August 11th, 2023 21:01
Laundry
Sunsetmet said:
I love this creative style and the words
Funny comical and really truthful and The title says it all but you put the clothes together pristine divine and smelly sweet LOL
August 11th, 2023 15:14
Sunsetmet said:
I love this creative style and the words
Funny comical and really truthful and The title says it all but you put the clothes together pristine divine and smelly sweet LOL
August 11th, 2023 15:14
Working together
L. B. Mek said:
so true! thanks for sharing dear poet
(we\'re all 99.9% dna identical
yet we wage wars on minuscule differences
like our skin colour, belief systems, or sexual preferences
meanwhile
we\'re racing to occupy Mars...
there seems to be a gap
in our \'thinking\'
a notion of logic that\'s obscenely, missing...
February 13th, 2023 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
so true! thanks for sharing dear poet
(we\'re all 99.9% dna identical
yet we wage wars on minuscule differences
like our skin colour, belief systems, or sexual preferences
meanwhile
we\'re racing to occupy Mars...
there seems to be a gap
in our \'thinking\'
a notion of logic that\'s obscenely, missing...
February 13th, 2023 04:52
To my wife
Doggerel Dave said:
Hold fast for one teensy little moment - I think I need clarification here:
Your very first entry here - a rhyming rant on the merits of daylight saving , you made a comment in response to another poet, thus: \'I told my wife (Bella) about your comment on my poem, and she said you two have exchanged comments. Small world\" Can I therefore assume that all of the above is addressed to our very own Bella Shepard, and your exchanges immediately above are a wee bit of a leg-pull??? Shame on you Bella, if this is so (gotta blame the woman.... 🙂 )
February 13th, 2023 01:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Hold fast for one teensy little moment - I think I need clarification here:
Your very first entry here - a rhyming rant on the merits of daylight saving , you made a comment in response to another poet, thus: \'I told my wife (Bella) about your comment on my poem, and she said you two have exchanged comments. Small world\" Can I therefore assume that all of the above is addressed to our very own Bella Shepard, and your exchanges immediately above are a wee bit of a leg-pull??? Shame on you Bella, if this is so (gotta blame the woman.... 🙂 )
February 13th, 2023 01:08
Working together
Bella Shepard said:
Such words of wisdom dear poet, and so much food for thought. Loved it and it\'s a fav!
February 12th, 2023 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
Such words of wisdom dear poet, and so much food for thought. Loved it and it\'s a fav!
February 12th, 2023 13:52
LEAVES
Rozina said:
Beautiful poem. There are so many kinds of leaves, some look like flowers. Although we don\'t have the seasons here, during the windy season leaves are blown all over and I imagine it\'s autumn.
April 17th, 2022 17:34
Rozina said:
Beautiful poem. There are so many kinds of leaves, some look like flowers. Although we don\'t have the seasons here, during the windy season leaves are blown all over and I imagine it\'s autumn.
April 17th, 2022 17:34
THE PERCEPTION OF TIME
Rozina said:
I enjoyed your poem. It has reminded me to slow down and savour every moment.
April 16th, 2022 17:52
Rozina said:
I enjoyed your poem. It has reminded me to slow down and savour every moment.
April 16th, 2022 17:52
To my wife
Christina8 said:
My 20 years of marriage is nothing next to your 50+! But I think, and this is just my personal opinion, but it was a great poem and an even better speech at the end. Great job!!
March 28th, 2022 18:58
Christina8 said:
My 20 years of marriage is nothing next to your 50+! But I think, and this is just my personal opinion, but it was a great poem and an even better speech at the end. Great job!!
March 28th, 2022 18:58
To my wife
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m sure that your wife truly appreciates this. I know I\'m choked up just reading it. And I\'m sure that it is reciprocal. When two hearts are bonded thus, there is no separation.
March 28th, 2022 16:02
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m sure that your wife truly appreciates this. I know I\'m choked up just reading it. And I\'m sure that it is reciprocal. When two hearts are bonded thus, there is no separation.
March 28th, 2022 16:02
To my wife
Crowns4Christ said:
Beautiful poem for your wife,I can feel the unending love you have for her
March 28th, 2022 14:36
Crowns4Christ said:
Beautiful poem for your wife,I can feel the unending love you have for her
March 28th, 2022 14:36
Memories from my childhood: Dice Baseball
Bella Shepard said:
Wonderful childhood memories, always great to share. Well told and fun. So why did dice baseball not take off?
March 28th, 2022 12:20
Bella Shepard said:
Wonderful childhood memories, always great to share. Well told and fun. So why did dice baseball not take off?
March 28th, 2022 12:20
Memories from my childhood: Dice Baseball
L. B. Mek said:
loved this
great writing, grabbed me
and hurled me into a world
a few minutes ago, I never knew existed
a modern take, tapping into
that melancholic ode, to youth\'s
cherished memories
that poetry like Byron\'s, \'so we\'ll go no more a roving\'
and Frost\'s, \'Birches\'
captured, so well...
thanks for sharing
March 28th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
loved this
great writing, grabbed me
and hurled me into a world
a few minutes ago, I never knew existed
a modern take, tapping into
that melancholic ode, to youth\'s
cherished memories
that poetry like Byron\'s, \'so we\'ll go no more a roving\'
and Frost\'s, \'Birches\'
captured, so well...
thanks for sharing
March 28th, 2022 05:15
Computers: (the computer perspective)
Bella Shepard said:
For someone who has always been technologically challenged, this rings so true. I especially love the last line. Really enjoyed this journey, I feel a little better about my computer.
March 25th, 2022 12:27
Bella Shepard said:
For someone who has always been technologically challenged, this rings so true. I especially love the last line. Really enjoyed this journey, I feel a little better about my computer.
March 25th, 2022 12:27
Computers: (the computer perspective)
Thekkinkkattil said:
A good write .Enjoyed it
March 25th, 2022 07:40
Thekkinkkattil said:
A good write .Enjoyed it
March 25th, 2022 07:40
Computers: The \"Human\" perspective
orchidee said:
Circa 1983 - was that when mobile phones were the size of a large block of cheese (rectangular), and if you carried your computer, you had to carry a TV set and CPU (Central Processing Unit) box around with you?! lol.
March 24th, 2022 12:57
orchidee said:
Circa 1983 - was that when mobile phones were the size of a large block of cheese (rectangular), and if you carried your computer, you had to carry a TV set and CPU (Central Processing Unit) box around with you?! lol.
March 24th, 2022 12:57
Daylight Savings Time
Christina8 said:
Great rhyme about our ridiculous daylight savings time! Awesome job! Welcome to MPS by the way!
March 23rd, 2022 13:15
Christina8 said:
Great rhyme about our ridiculous daylight savings time! Awesome job! Welcome to MPS by the way!
March 23rd, 2022 13:15
Daylight Savings Time
Bella Shepard said:
Absolutely love this rant on daylight savings time. Great rhyming and flow. Well done!
March 23rd, 2022 11:47
Bella Shepard said:
Absolutely love this rant on daylight savings time. Great rhyming and flow. Well done!
March 23rd, 2022 11:47
