Comments received on poems by A.B. Jakobsen
The sickness of sorrow
David Wakeling said:
The author needs to lighten up.Maybe see a doctor about depression medication.Very sad poem
September 4th, 2023 16:10
David Wakeling said:
The author needs to lighten up.Maybe see a doctor about depression medication.Very sad poem
September 4th, 2023 16:10
Inadequacy
L. B. Mek said:
such a relatable topic
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(comparison\'s as our plague of existence
we strive to evolve, while anchored
to lore
crafted insurmountable by myth unfound
in that toil and woe of our everyday
realities
we Time-stamp our fate, as-if
we ever had a say, in what era
we would taste, life
and on, generations lamenting
heroes, heralded
by those cannon\'s of privileged
elitism
hoping, maybe we too
may be Time distilled
by posterity
as being mentioned, aside
those who helped us reach
our heights..)
June 26th, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
such a relatable topic
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(comparison\'s as our plague of existence
we strive to evolve, while anchored
to lore
crafted insurmountable by myth unfound
in that toil and woe of our everyday
realities
we Time-stamp our fate, as-if
we ever had a say, in what era
we would taste, life
and on, generations lamenting
heroes, heralded
by those cannon\'s of privileged
elitism
hoping, maybe we too
may be Time distilled
by posterity
as being mentioned, aside
those who helped us reach
our heights..)
June 26th, 2023 04:12
Ghost on the shore
L. B. Mek said:
so well written
lovely themes of steadfast worth
in deeds
that resonate even after we\'re gone,
remembered
by those we shared ourselves with..
(thank you for sharing dear Poet
a memorable read)
April 17th, 2023 03:18
L. B. Mek said:
so well written
lovely themes of steadfast worth
in deeds
that resonate even after we\'re gone,
remembered
by those we shared ourselves with..
(thank you for sharing dear Poet
a memorable read)
April 17th, 2023 03:18
At the cusp of eclipse
Parisab said:
Fantastical with haunting imagery-thanks for sharing
March 31st, 2023 23:27
Parisab said:
Fantastical with haunting imagery-thanks for sharing
March 31st, 2023 23:27
At the cusp of eclipse
L. B. Mek said:
(good to explore, to question
reach out to those waves of fate
and find that perfect vibration
that fits best...)
thanks for sharing, really well written
February 3rd, 2023 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
(good to explore, to question
reach out to those waves of fate
and find that perfect vibration
that fits best...)
thanks for sharing, really well written
February 3rd, 2023 04:44
Stranger years
L. B. Mek said:
\'That i write in this verse, to make sense somehow
But I realize under its echoing peal\'
wonderful couplets, I find these work
a good introduction
to your hard earned inking skills
thanks for sharing & Happy New year!
January 6th, 2023 05:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'That i write in this verse, to make sense somehow
But I realize under its echoing peal\'
wonderful couplets, I find these work
a good introduction
to your hard earned inking skills
thanks for sharing & Happy New year!
January 6th, 2023 05:56
The essence of dream
arqios said:
Where\'s the applaud tab/button!? The flow and phrasing is majestic! Thanks for sharing.
October 4th, 2022 06:27
arqios said:
Where\'s the applaud tab/button!? The flow and phrasing is majestic! Thanks for sharing.
October 4th, 2022 06:27
The one inane tongue
mfhanyx_ said:
oh. my. GOSH. this is SO good. Literally awesome. i love ur way of thinking.
August 30th, 2022 06:39
mfhanyx_ said:
oh. my. GOSH. this is SO good. Literally awesome. i love ur way of thinking.
August 30th, 2022 06:39
Where ashes lie
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing, such
an impassioned dedication
i\'m so sorry for your loss
may he rest in peace
August 12th, 2022 03:36
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing, such
an impassioned dedication
i\'m so sorry for your loss
may he rest in peace
August 12th, 2022 03:36
Torn Wings
L. B. Mek said:
\'I saw a hundred birds where only one should belong
They sit in my tree thoughtlessly chirping
A withered den from where they spew
Whence her song once always sang true\'..
once, we come across
the melody that speaks to our heart
all other music, pales
in comparison...
(thanks for sharing
such wonderful imagery, and
core metaphor, so well realised)
July 22nd, 2022 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'I saw a hundred birds where only one should belong
They sit in my tree thoughtlessly chirping
A withered den from where they spew
Whence her song once always sang true\'..
once, we come across
the melody that speaks to our heart
all other music, pales
in comparison...
(thanks for sharing
such wonderful imagery, and
core metaphor, so well realised)
July 22nd, 2022 04:25
Deep Within Mountains
Crowns4Christ said:
This gives me the chills, imagining demons clawing their way outof the purple lighted chasm ready to wreck havoc on the world
April 30th, 2022 17:45
Crowns4Christ said:
This gives me the chills, imagining demons clawing their way outof the purple lighted chasm ready to wreck havoc on the world
April 30th, 2022 17:45
Written for writing’s sake
Crowns4Christ said:
Great piece, I feel like as long as there is feeling in it, whether it\'s sadness,joy, love or laughter,
It is always worth reading, and is in everything we read or write, thank you for sharing
April 20th, 2022 17:53
Crowns4Christ said:
Great piece, I feel like as long as there is feeling in it, whether it\'s sadness,joy, love or laughter,
It is always worth reading, and is in everything we read or write, thank you for sharing
April 20th, 2022 17:53
Favour My Remembrance
Crystal Hope said:
a lot of emotion blended in this story. amazing penning
April 11th, 2022 16:13
Crystal Hope said:
a lot of emotion blended in this story. amazing penning
April 11th, 2022 16:13
