Comments received on poems by tommytoons



I Miss Me
Doggerel Dave said:

πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚ - Understood completely - all seven stanzas. Oddly familiar..... My teeth are OK though - Its the seat of my pants, having paid all the bills to maintain them.

February 8th, 2023 20:04

The Dad I Never Knew
mvvenkataraman said:

Ode to every dad,
Who is always sad,
As worries are had,
He never feels glad,
As life mustn\'t turn bad,
They control their lad,
Pressures they just add,
And seem to be so mad!

January 11th, 2023 01:55

When the Word Is Broken
Doggerel Dave said:

Nothing humorous about that at all, tom - too bloody real..... πŸ˜₯ Shall continue to search for the update....

Great form; good read.

November 7th, 2022 18:27

When the Word Is Broken
E Naughton said:

Fantastic poem, I got a little lost in there, so relatable

November 7th, 2022 17:03

No One Noticed
L. B. Mek said:

heart-breaking, I\'m sorry if this theme is taken from your reality
thanks for sharing

October 28th, 2022 05:44

No One Noticed
orchidee said:

I noticed this fine poem TT!

October 28th, 2022 02:13

β€œSome Pieces Are Gone”
arqios said:

Resonates within the reader. This is so relatable. Thanks for sharing.

August 24th, 2022 19:40

Time At Play
L. B. Mek said:

such a wonderful and important message
thanks for sharing

June 2nd, 2022 03:49

Time At Play
arqios said:

Taken on board from such a quite persuasive and inspiring poem. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.

June 1st, 2022 21:12

Put It Down
L. B. Mek said:

so true, thanks for sharing

May 30th, 2022 04:24

Throw it away
Jonas Robinson said:

I bleed to someone who feels this. It makes me regret so many decisions I have made in my life that I can never make up for. Thank you for sharing.

May 25th, 2022 17:07

Ode to Coffee
L. B. Mek said:

\'Like I am almost a human being\'
(than that zombified reflection
smirking - back, at my attempts
to marry, my toothbrush with its
awaiting toothpaste, bride...)
lol
thank for sharing
wonderfully fun, cheers β˜•

May 10th, 2022 03:34

Ode to Coffee
Saxon Crow said:

Coffee is the most sacred of things..... Ever!

May 10th, 2022 01:32

Ode to Coffee
Natalia B. Odair said:

Absolutely wonderful, laugh of the day! Thanks for this.

May 9th, 2022 13:41

Be Empty Once Again
Dahlia said:

So beautiful a super readπŸ‘

April 17th, 2022 15:38

Be Empty Once Again
orchidee said:

Good write T.

April 17th, 2022 09:47

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