Comments received on poems by tommytoons
Till The Day He Is Dead
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece with a lot of deep meaning, I enjoyed the read
February 21st, 2025 15:58
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece with a lot of deep meaning, I enjoyed the read
February 21st, 2025 15:58
Till The Day He Is Dead
sorenbarrett said:
Great religious metaphor in this poem. A sense of reliance and need for protection. Nicely worded
February 21st, 2025 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
Great religious metaphor in this poem. A sense of reliance and need for protection. Nicely worded
February 21st, 2025 15:07
Till The Day He Is Dead
whats write for me said:
The perspective is accurate, meaning is deep. Good meter and consistent theme.
February 21st, 2025 15:06
whats write for me said:
The perspective is accurate, meaning is deep. Good meter and consistent theme.
February 21st, 2025 15:06
Zero Sum
Poetic Licence said:
We will pass away as we came in to this world as nothing, but are we leaving behind. I found this a well written reflective poem and enjoyed the read
February 13th, 2025 05:13
Poetic Licence said:
We will pass away as we came in to this world as nothing, but are we leaving behind. I found this a well written reflective poem and enjoyed the read
February 13th, 2025 05:13
Zero Sum
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about what we are and leave behind. In the end as time passes we are all a zero sum. But as a ripple in a pond maybe an unseen impact on others will make a difference. A lovely reflective write that goes deeper than the surface. Loved it
February 13th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about what we are and leave behind. In the end as time passes we are all a zero sum. But as a ripple in a pond maybe an unseen impact on others will make a difference. A lovely reflective write that goes deeper than the surface. Loved it
February 13th, 2025 04:26
Aged
Doggerel Dave said:
Dunno what that\'s all about....😅😂🤣😇🙃
But seriously? A rich write.👍
July 5th, 2024 23:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Dunno what that\'s all about....😅😂🤣😇🙃
But seriously? A rich write.👍
July 5th, 2024 23:37
Complaints Department
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh the agony of it all. You gave me a smile through the tears...Thanks for that.
A rhymer always helps as well in my book.
December 17th, 2023 16:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh the agony of it all. You gave me a smile through the tears...Thanks for that.
A rhymer always helps as well in my book.
December 17th, 2023 16:11
Failing Dreams
Pop64 said:
Love the irony you present at this end of this nice rhyming, questioning piece. The waking hours, the day, are we just living the dream? I enjoyed this read.
September 20th, 2023 08:21
Pop64 said:
Love the irony you present at this end of this nice rhyming, questioning piece. The waking hours, the day, are we just living the dream? I enjoyed this read.
September 20th, 2023 08:21
The Train
Beth K said:
Absolutely beautiful, Tom! Thank you for your beautiful poem~ may your faith shine brightly through the darkness ❤️
-Beth
July 31st, 2023 12:24
Beth K said:
Absolutely beautiful, Tom! Thank you for your beautiful poem~ may your faith shine brightly through the darkness ❤️
-Beth
July 31st, 2023 12:24
“When The Door Is Open”
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, hard to trust
once your home has been invaded
by those who only cared about
the furniture you have...
thanks for sharing
July 3rd, 2023 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, hard to trust
once your home has been invaded
by those who only cared about
the furniture you have...
thanks for sharing
July 3rd, 2023 03:53
“Drawn From My Pain”
L. B. Mek said:
\'My thoughts do not seek help for laughter and smiles
But an outlet just drawn from the pain\'
where would we be
without our scribbling dreams
as avenues of escape
from this life of incessant strife...
(a great right, dear poet
I so relate
some of us are born, dipped
in that bleak noir of fate
or so it seems..)
June 9th, 2023 01:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'My thoughts do not seek help for laughter and smiles
But an outlet just drawn from the pain\'
where would we be
without our scribbling dreams
as avenues of escape
from this life of incessant strife...
(a great right, dear poet
I so relate
some of us are born, dipped
in that bleak noir of fate
or so it seems..)
June 9th, 2023 01:52
Got it out for me
L. B. Mek said:
lol
lovely flow, thanks for the chuckle
\'under attack\'
as that most common status in life
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 5th, 2023 02:19
L. B. Mek said:
lol
lovely flow, thanks for the chuckle
\'under attack\'
as that most common status in life
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 5th, 2023 02:19
Sad Spirit
L. B. Mek said:
depression, is a self fulfilling
warping, window to that abyss
of delusional, isolation ideal
alone, we feed
its very existence
however brave or exhausted
we may be
we need connective tethers
to others
to put up a sustainable fight..
(stay strong dear poet
thank you! for choosing to share
for choosing to fight)
May 19th, 2023 03:28
L. B. Mek said:
depression, is a self fulfilling
warping, window to that abyss
of delusional, isolation ideal
alone, we feed
its very existence
however brave or exhausted
we may be
we need connective tethers
to others
to put up a sustainable fight..
(stay strong dear poet
thank you! for choosing to share
for choosing to fight)
May 19th, 2023 03:28
Death Of An Ego
Audrey A. said:
I hate this feeling and totally understand. I remember that they are trapped just as I was and when they finally come around, hopefully they\'ll remember that I\'ll listen.
April 25th, 2023 21:59
Audrey A. said:
I hate this feeling and totally understand. I remember that they are trapped just as I was and when they finally come around, hopefully they\'ll remember that I\'ll listen.
April 25th, 2023 21:59
Death Of An Ego
Doggerel Dave said:
Great write with rhythm and a moral tale well told. However self deprecation can only take you so far....
April 25th, 2023 16:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Great write with rhythm and a moral tale well told. However self deprecation can only take you so far....
April 25th, 2023 16:44
\\\\\\\"Bad Voices\\\\\\\"
Doggerel Dave said:
Negotiate, mate - shoe finding is not too complex a task to offer the voices.
Pink pill should be taken regularly, if in fact any of this is true.....
April 24th, 2023 23:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Negotiate, mate - shoe finding is not too complex a task to offer the voices.
Pink pill should be taken regularly, if in fact any of this is true.....
April 24th, 2023 23:43
\\\\\\\"Bad Voices\\\\\\\"
Audrey A. said:
Excellent. I totally understand. Tell those voices to just go be hair like a good expired thought.
April 24th, 2023 10:13
Audrey A. said:
Excellent. I totally understand. Tell those voices to just go be hair like a good expired thought.
April 24th, 2023 10:13
\\\\\\\"Bad Voices\\\\\\\"
2781 said:
Your very talented, don\'t let it go to your head.
April 24th, 2023 09:34
2781 said:
Your very talented, don\'t let it go to your head.
April 24th, 2023 09:34
When My Heart Hurts
Bobby O said:
When she laughs at the bridge …
Nice line. Good piece
April 18th, 2023 23:21
Bobby O said:
When she laughs at the bridge …
Nice line. Good piece
April 18th, 2023 23:21
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