Comments received on poems by tommytoons
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Doggerel Dave said:
Oh the agony of it all. You gave me a smile through the tears...Thanks for that.
A rhymer always helps as well in my book.
December 17th, 2023 16:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh the agony of it all. You gave me a smile through the tears...Thanks for that.
A rhymer always helps as well in my book.
December 17th, 2023 16:11
Failing Dreams
Pop64 said:
Love the irony you present at this end of this nice rhyming, questioning piece. The waking hours, the day, are we just living the dream? I enjoyed this read.
September 20th, 2023 08:21
Pop64 said:
Love the irony you present at this end of this nice rhyming, questioning piece. The waking hours, the day, are we just living the dream? I enjoyed this read.
September 20th, 2023 08:21
The Train
Beth K said:
Absolutely beautiful, Tom! Thank you for your beautiful poem~ may your faith shine brightly through the darkness ❤️
-Beth
July 31st, 2023 12:24
Beth K said:
Absolutely beautiful, Tom! Thank you for your beautiful poem~ may your faith shine brightly through the darkness ❤️
-Beth
July 31st, 2023 12:24
“When The Door Is Open”
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, hard to trust
once your home has been invaded
by those who only cared about
the furniture you have...
thanks for sharing
July 3rd, 2023 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, hard to trust
once your home has been invaded
by those who only cared about
the furniture you have...
thanks for sharing
July 3rd, 2023 03:53
“Drawn From My Pain”
L. B. Mek said:
\'My thoughts do not seek help for laughter and smiles
But an outlet just drawn from the pain\'
where would we be
without our scribbling dreams
as avenues of escape
from this life of incessant strife...
(a great right, dear poet
I so relate
some of us are born, dipped
in that bleak noir of fate
or so it seems..)
June 9th, 2023 01:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'My thoughts do not seek help for laughter and smiles
But an outlet just drawn from the pain\'
where would we be
without our scribbling dreams
as avenues of escape
from this life of incessant strife...
(a great right, dear poet
I so relate
some of us are born, dipped
in that bleak noir of fate
or so it seems..)
June 9th, 2023 01:52
Got it out for me
L. B. Mek said:
lol
lovely flow, thanks for the chuckle
\'under attack\'
as that most common status in life
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 5th, 2023 02:19
L. B. Mek said:
lol
lovely flow, thanks for the chuckle
\'under attack\'
as that most common status in life
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 5th, 2023 02:19
Sad Spirit
L. B. Mek said:
depression, is a self fulfilling
warping, window to that abyss
of delusional, isolation ideal
alone, we feed
its very existence
however brave or exhausted
we may be
we need connective tethers
to others
to put up a sustainable fight..
(stay strong dear poet
thank you! for choosing to share
for choosing to fight)
May 19th, 2023 03:28
L. B. Mek said:
depression, is a self fulfilling
warping, window to that abyss
of delusional, isolation ideal
alone, we feed
its very existence
however brave or exhausted
we may be
we need connective tethers
to others
to put up a sustainable fight..
(stay strong dear poet
thank you! for choosing to share
for choosing to fight)
May 19th, 2023 03:28
Death Of An Ego
Audrey A. said:
I hate this feeling and totally understand. I remember that they are trapped just as I was and when they finally come around, hopefully they\'ll remember that I\'ll listen.
April 25th, 2023 21:59
Audrey A. said:
I hate this feeling and totally understand. I remember that they are trapped just as I was and when they finally come around, hopefully they\'ll remember that I\'ll listen.
April 25th, 2023 21:59
Death Of An Ego
Doggerel Dave said:
Great write with rhythm and a moral tale well told. However self deprecation can only take you so far....
April 25th, 2023 16:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Great write with rhythm and a moral tale well told. However self deprecation can only take you so far....
April 25th, 2023 16:44
\\\\\\\"Bad Voices\\\\\\\"
Doggerel Dave said:
Negotiate, mate - shoe finding is not too complex a task to offer the voices.
Pink pill should be taken regularly, if in fact any of this is true.....
April 24th, 2023 23:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Negotiate, mate - shoe finding is not too complex a task to offer the voices.
Pink pill should be taken regularly, if in fact any of this is true.....
April 24th, 2023 23:43
\\\\\\\"Bad Voices\\\\\\\"
Audrey A. said:
Excellent. I totally understand. Tell those voices to just go be hair like a good expired thought.
April 24th, 2023 10:13
Audrey A. said:
Excellent. I totally understand. Tell those voices to just go be hair like a good expired thought.
April 24th, 2023 10:13
\\\\\\\"Bad Voices\\\\\\\"
2781 said:
Your very talented, don\'t let it go to your head.
April 24th, 2023 09:34
2781 said:
Your very talented, don\'t let it go to your head.
April 24th, 2023 09:34
When My Heart Hurts
Bobby O said:
When she laughs at the bridge …
Nice line. Good piece
April 18th, 2023 23:21
Bobby O said:
When she laughs at the bridge …
Nice line. Good piece
April 18th, 2023 23:21
Taste the Soup
Bobby O said:
A literal episode one might remember for a long time
April 14th, 2023 18:54
Bobby O said:
A literal episode one might remember for a long time
April 14th, 2023 18:54
Companions For Never
L. B. Mek said:
differentiate loneliness from
chosen, solitude
it\'s ok to give up on love
just
don\'t give up on yourself
acceptance, is a good place to start
stay strong! thanks for sharing
(forgive me if my words annoy
or trigger
a negative reaction, in you
I merely meant to offer words of support)
March 10th, 2023 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
differentiate loneliness from
chosen, solitude
it\'s ok to give up on love
just
don\'t give up on yourself
acceptance, is a good place to start
stay strong! thanks for sharing
(forgive me if my words annoy
or trigger
a negative reaction, in you
I merely meant to offer words of support)
March 10th, 2023 04:39
I Miss Me
Doggerel Dave said:
🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 - Understood completely - all seven stanzas. Oddly familiar..... My teeth are OK though - Its the seat of my pants, having paid all the bills to maintain them.
February 8th, 2023 20:04
Doggerel Dave said:
🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 - Understood completely - all seven stanzas. Oddly familiar..... My teeth are OK though - Its the seat of my pants, having paid all the bills to maintain them.
February 8th, 2023 20:04
The Dad I Never Knew
mvvenkataraman said:
Ode to every dad,
Who is always sad,
As worries are had,
He never feels glad,
As life mustn\'t turn bad,
They control their lad,
Pressures they just add,
And seem to be so mad!
January 11th, 2023 01:55
mvvenkataraman said:
Ode to every dad,
Who is always sad,
As worries are had,
He never feels glad,
As life mustn\'t turn bad,
They control their lad,
Pressures they just add,
And seem to be so mad!
January 11th, 2023 01:55
When the Word Is Broken
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing humorous about that at all, tom - too bloody real..... 😥 Shall continue to search for the update....
Great form; good read.
November 7th, 2022 18:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing humorous about that at all, tom - too bloody real..... 😥 Shall continue to search for the update....
Great form; good read.
November 7th, 2022 18:27
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