Comments received on poems by tommytoons



Till The Day He Is Dead
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

February 21st, 2025 18:50

Till The Day He Is Dead
Poetic Licence said:

A well written piece with a lot of deep meaning, I enjoyed the read

February 21st, 2025 15:58

Till The Day He Is Dead
sorenbarrett said:

Great religious metaphor in this poem. A sense of reliance and need for protection. Nicely worded

February 21st, 2025 15:07

Till The Day He Is Dead
whats write for me said:

The perspective is accurate, meaning is deep. Good meter and consistent theme.

February 21st, 2025 15:06

Zero Sum
Poetic Licence said:

We will pass away as we came in to this world as nothing, but are we leaving behind. I found this a well written reflective poem and enjoyed the read

February 13th, 2025 05:13

Zero Sum
sorenbarrett said:

A poem about what we are and leave behind. In the end as time passes we are all a zero sum. But as a ripple in a pond maybe an unseen impact on others will make a difference. A lovely reflective write that goes deeper than the surface. Loved it

February 13th, 2025 04:26

His Solitude
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 27th, 2024 10:16

His Solitude
2781 said:

I knew that man.

December 27th, 2024 09:28

Aged
Doggerel Dave said:

Dunno what that\'s all about....😅😂🤣😇🙃

But seriously? A rich write.👍

July 5th, 2024 23:37

Complaints Department
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh the agony of it all. You gave me a smile through the tears...Thanks for that.
A rhymer always helps as well in my book.

December 17th, 2023 16:11

Failing Dreams
Pop64 said:

Love the irony you present at this end of this nice rhyming, questioning piece. The waking hours, the day, are we just living the dream? I enjoyed this read.

September 20th, 2023 08:21

Goat
Michael D said:

Sounds just like me. Love it

August 9th, 2023 18:12

The Train
tommytoons said:

Thank you so much. His words inspire me.

August 1st, 2023 06:46

The Train
Beth K said:

Absolutely beautiful, Tom! Thank you for your beautiful poem~ may your faith shine brightly through the darkness ❤️
-Beth

July 31st, 2023 12:24

“When The Door Is Open”
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, hard to trust
once your home has been invaded
by those who only cared about
the furniture you have...
thanks for sharing

July 3rd, 2023 03:53

“Drawn From My Pain”
L. B. Mek said:

\'My thoughts do not seek help for laughter and smiles

But an outlet just drawn from the pain\'
where would we be
without our scribbling dreams
as avenues of escape
from this life of incessant strife...
(a great right, dear poet
I so relate
some of us are born, dipped
in that bleak noir of fate
or so it seems..)

June 9th, 2023 01:52

Got it out for me
L. B. Mek said:

lol
lovely flow, thanks for the chuckle
\'under attack\'
as that most common status in life
thanks for sharing, dear poet

June 5th, 2023 02:19

Sad Spirit
tommytoons said:

Thanks, appreciated.

May 22nd, 2023 09:28

Sad Spirit
L. B. Mek said:

depression, is a self fulfilling
warping, window to that abyss
of delusional, isolation ideal
alone, we feed
its very existence
however brave or exhausted
we may be
we need connective tethers
to others
to put up a sustainable fight..
(stay strong dear poet
thank you! for choosing to share
for choosing to fight)

May 19th, 2023 03:28

Rulers
2781 said:

Amen.

May 11th, 2023 09:14

\"Mothers Who Dare\"
tommytoons said:



May 8th, 2023 09:38

\"Mothers Who Dare\"
L. B. Mek said:

a lovely dedication, thanks for sharing

May 8th, 2023 07:58

\"Mothers Who Dare\"
2781 said:

The greatest among them shall be your servant.

May 8th, 2023 07:56

Who Sees Me
2781 said:

My Suspicion was correct.

April 26th, 2023 18:18

Death Of An Ego
Audrey A. said:

I hate this feeling and totally understand. I remember that they are trapped just as I was and when they finally come around, hopefully they\'ll remember that I\'ll listen.

April 25th, 2023 21:59

Death Of An Ego
Doggerel Dave said:

Great write with rhythm and a moral tale well told. However self deprecation can only take you so far....

April 25th, 2023 16:44

\\\\\\\"Bad Voices\\\\\\\"
Doggerel Dave said:

Negotiate, mate - shoe finding is not too complex a task to offer the voices.
Pink pill should be taken regularly, if in fact any of this is true.....

April 24th, 2023 23:43

\\\\\\\"Bad Voices\\\\\\\"
Audrey A. said:

Excellent. I totally understand. Tell those voices to just go be hair like a good expired thought.

April 24th, 2023 10:13

\\\\\\\"Bad Voices\\\\\\\"
2781 said:

Your very talented, don\'t let it go to your head.

April 24th, 2023 09:34

When My Heart Hurts
Bobby O said:

When she laughs at the bridge …
Nice line. Good piece

April 18th, 2023 23:21

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