Comments received on poems by Hyacinthe
About you
L. B. Mek said:
\'I wanted to go out and trade our hearts.
You seemed to be able to breathe
While I couldn’t feel a beat.\'
choice wording, memorable lines
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 3rd, 2022 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'I wanted to go out and trade our hearts.
You seemed to be able to breathe
While I couldn’t feel a beat.\'
choice wording, memorable lines
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 3rd, 2022 03:24
What’s the matter?
L. B. Mek said:
(forgive me, I read your words
and was inspired to poetically reply
I meant no disrespect, in doing so
just got carried away, is all)
\'let\'s delve deeper:
within Time, we Exist
that Matters
for when
we cease, to Exist
so does the Time
we gave Life, to
What\'s history, without us
witnessing it
What does it matter, how much future
others still have
if we\'re denied a role, as part of it..
In the now, we squander
is it Time or matter, we surrender
is it us that Matter
or does matter\'s, Effect on us
Define our worth..
Milky ways, as chocolate bars
bite-sized science
as our, Factoids of tangible
in a world
beyond, our imagination\'s
surreal..
\'What’s the matter?
In a matter of time
It won’t matter,
So why is this matter so maddening in my mind?\'..
because, we\'re pulling on fate\'s
galloping reins
and all we get in reply, is a distant
laughter
in that mirror, that\'s a callous reflective
but refuses to act as a revealing reflector
in our lives...\'
May 26th, 2022 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
(forgive me, I read your words
and was inspired to poetically reply
I meant no disrespect, in doing so
just got carried away, is all)
\'let\'s delve deeper:
within Time, we Exist
that Matters
for when
we cease, to Exist
so does the Time
we gave Life, to
What\'s history, without us
witnessing it
What does it matter, how much future
others still have
if we\'re denied a role, as part of it..
In the now, we squander
is it Time or matter, we surrender
is it us that Matter
or does matter\'s, Effect on us
Define our worth..
Milky ways, as chocolate bars
bite-sized science
as our, Factoids of tangible
in a world
beyond, our imagination\'s
surreal..
\'What’s the matter?
In a matter of time
It won’t matter,
So why is this matter so maddening in my mind?\'..
because, we\'re pulling on fate\'s
galloping reins
and all we get in reply, is a distant
laughter
in that mirror, that\'s a callous reflective
but refuses to act as a revealing reflector
in our lives...\'
May 26th, 2022 03:57
Boo!
L. B. Mek said:
\'that lingering venomous remnant
monstrosity, of a once
warped love, tainting
potential
in all the new, entering our lives..\'
(really like
the technical aspects to your poem
and your choice to word it so enticingly, accessible..
in my humble opinion
this, is a very accomplished poem
showcasing your practised skill..
such a wonderful read)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 12th, 2022 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'that lingering venomous remnant
monstrosity, of a once
warped love, tainting
potential
in all the new, entering our lives..\'
(really like
the technical aspects to your poem
and your choice to word it so enticingly, accessible..
in my humble opinion
this, is a very accomplished poem
showcasing your practised skill..
such a wonderful read)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 12th, 2022 03:23
A Dead One\'s Nightmare
Rocky Lagou said:
A poem that truly piques the interest! I enjoyed your tone and that rhyme you kept throughout was also a nice added touch. The message is quite deep as well, all the hardships and fears of life still lingering even after death. Well done!
April 27th, 2022 12:21
Rocky Lagou said:
A poem that truly piques the interest! I enjoyed your tone and that rhyme you kept throughout was also a nice added touch. The message is quite deep as well, all the hardships and fears of life still lingering even after death. Well done!
April 27th, 2022 12:21
I\'m not a shark
Nicholas Browning said:
I ain\'t a shark either. This was nice.
April 25th, 2022 23:22
Nicholas Browning said:
I ain\'t a shark either. This was nice.
April 25th, 2022 23:22
Me and the Willows
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! Beautiful poem you have here....wonderful metaphors and message. Thanks for sharing!
April 21st, 2022 13:13
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! Beautiful poem you have here....wonderful metaphors and message. Thanks for sharing!
April 21st, 2022 13:13
Me and the Willows
Rocky Lagou said:
This is truly quite the spectacle. I adore this metaphor which I feel could be hinting at change. At the same time this brings to the mind Frost\'s poem \"The Road Not Taken,\" with the whole \"what matters is that I took the risk and it paid off\" tone you\'re conveying. Really nice.
April 21st, 2022 12:43
Rocky Lagou said:
This is truly quite the spectacle. I adore this metaphor which I feel could be hinting at change. At the same time this brings to the mind Frost\'s poem \"The Road Not Taken,\" with the whole \"what matters is that I took the risk and it paid off\" tone you\'re conveying. Really nice.
April 21st, 2022 12:43
