Comments received on poems by arqios
third wheel
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This poem beautifully captures the evolution from loneliness to self-discovery! 🌙✨ Your vivid imagery of the “third wheel” transforming from a haunting shadow to a sanctuary is extremely powerful, my dear friend. I also really love how you portray the poet’s journey - from feeling alienated in crowded spaces to finding strength in solitude. The line “crafting lines that bind their solitude” is particularly striking, and it speaks to me of how art can be both an expression of isolation and a bridge to self-connection. That really resonates with me and, I would imagine, most poets/aritists. Anyway, I could go on...but needless to say this is an easy fave for me! 🌹👏 Well done!
December 29th, 2024 16:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This poem beautifully captures the evolution from loneliness to self-discovery! 🌙✨ Your vivid imagery of the “third wheel” transforming from a haunting shadow to a sanctuary is extremely powerful, my dear friend. I also really love how you portray the poet’s journey - from feeling alienated in crowded spaces to finding strength in solitude. The line “crafting lines that bind their solitude” is particularly striking, and it speaks to me of how art can be both an expression of isolation and a bridge to self-connection. That really resonates with me and, I would imagine, most poets/aritists. Anyway, I could go on...but needless to say this is an easy fave for me! 🌹👏 Well done!
December 29th, 2024 16:51
third wheel
Neville said:
Such exquisite ink so precisely and purposefully laid, now able to rest here framed for eternity .. excellent arqios, absolutely exquisite .. Neville
December 29th, 2024 13:09
Neville said:
Such exquisite ink so precisely and purposefully laid, now able to rest here framed for eternity .. excellent arqios, absolutely exquisite .. Neville
December 29th, 2024 13:09
third wheel
Michael Edwards said:
A great write - I\'m quite jealous lol 😂😂
December 29th, 2024 10:51
Michael Edwards said:
A great write - I\'m quite jealous lol 😂😂
December 29th, 2024 10:51
third wheel
aDarkerMind said:
a work of art indeed....
and one to favour.
enjoyed every line;
December 29th, 2024 09:28
aDarkerMind said:
a work of art indeed....
and one to favour.
enjoyed every line;
December 29th, 2024 09:28
third wheel
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about losing a wheel on a tricycle or summat, me being highly unimaginative at times! lol.
December 29th, 2024 09:15
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about losing a wheel on a tricycle or summat, me being highly unimaginative at times! lol.
December 29th, 2024 09:15
third wheel
Poetic Licence said:
Quite frighting how accurate this poem is, even though written in a beautiful form it makes a [powerful statement, really enjoyed.
December 29th, 2024 07:22
Poetic Licence said:
Quite frighting how accurate this poem is, even though written in a beautiful form it makes a [powerful statement, really enjoyed.
December 29th, 2024 07:22
third wheel
sorenbarrett said:
This is too true to be comfortable Cryptic and yet it sprouts from the pen like a new plant.
December 29th, 2024 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
This is too true to be comfortable Cryptic and yet it sprouts from the pen like a new plant.
December 29th, 2024 05:30
grappling with Today
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, as I have often said \"Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday\"
Andy
December 29th, 2024 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, as I have often said \"Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday\"
Andy
December 29th, 2024 02:55
grappling with Today
Neville said:
Now steady on fella, you just gone and re-wrote my whole Dokun .. and I dare say poemed to perfection good sir .. Neville
December 29th, 2024 02:13
Neville said:
Now steady on fella, you just gone and re-wrote my whole Dokun .. and I dare say poemed to perfection good sir .. Neville
December 29th, 2024 02:13
grappling with Today
Melancholic~Onion said:
Who wouldn\'t relate to this? We\'re all wary of tomorrow
December 29th, 2024 02:03
Melancholic~Onion said:
Who wouldn\'t relate to this? We\'re all wary of tomorrow
December 29th, 2024 02:03
grappling with Today
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem,
thoughts and
emotions penned!! 👍
I totally agree with
you, we are the architects
of our fate my friend!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 28th, 2024 20:51
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem,
thoughts and
emotions penned!! 👍
I totally agree with
you, we are the architects
of our fate my friend!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 28th, 2024 20:51
under pressure
Dan Williams said:
And the ending nicely reveals your message. Nicely done.
December 28th, 2024 20:02
Dan Williams said:
And the ending nicely reveals your message. Nicely done.
December 28th, 2024 20:02
Christmas Glow
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice One. I’d like to spend a Christmas in a Christmas Advert, a table straining under all that food and plenty of everything. But it’s not all like that isn’t it. I had a quiet one with family, in the real world.
Hope yours was good.
December 28th, 2024 20:01
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice One. I’d like to spend a Christmas in a Christmas Advert, a table straining under all that food and plenty of everything. But it’s not all like that isn’t it. I had a quiet one with family, in the real world.
Hope yours was good.
December 28th, 2024 20:01
grappling with Today
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is special. So many good lines here. I particularly like \"Dance of days\" and \"Profound truth of being\". Excellent
December 28th, 2024 15:26
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is special. So many good lines here. I particularly like \"Dance of days\" and \"Profound truth of being\". Excellent
December 28th, 2024 15:26
grappling with Today
sorenbarrett said:
Such a positive and true message. We live in the moment the only thing we have control over. Lovely
December 28th, 2024 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
Such a positive and true message. We live in the moment the only thing we have control over. Lovely
December 28th, 2024 12:28
grappling with Today
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic way of dealing with time in a positive way, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:25
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic way of dealing with time in a positive way, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:25
grappling with Today
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reminds of an old lesson that someone pretty significant in world history and religion may have said once, “So do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will bring worries of its own. Today’s trouble is enough for today\" (Matthew 6:34 NRSV). Pretty wise words, if you ask me...and your poem exudes such wisdom. Well done, arqios! 🙏❤️
December 28th, 2024 09:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reminds of an old lesson that someone pretty significant in world history and religion may have said once, “So do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will bring worries of its own. Today’s trouble is enough for today\" (Matthew 6:34 NRSV). Pretty wise words, if you ask me...and your poem exudes such wisdom. Well done, arqios! 🙏❤️
December 28th, 2024 09:27
under pressure
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us arqios.
Andy
December 28th, 2024 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us arqios.
Andy
December 28th, 2024 02:51
under pressure
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up!
Awesomazing poem,
I can feel the tension ,
the life\'s pressures
throughout each line and
in the end, the resilience
shining through! 🌟🌟🌟
Thanks for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 27th, 2024 20:41
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up!
Awesomazing poem,
I can feel the tension ,
the life\'s pressures
throughout each line and
in the end, the resilience
shining through! 🌟🌟🌟
Thanks for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 27th, 2024 20:41
under pressure
Tristan Robert Lange said:
OMG. For real. 🤯 This, my friend, is transcendent! 💯 the stuff wisdom is made of. This 5-word montage is just wow. Honestly I came in thinking...\"QUEEEEEEEEN!!!!!\" and smiled when I saw the video. And yes, of course, I watched and rocked to that brilliant song. But friend, what you delivered here is beyond just brilliant...it is transcendent. (Not knocking Queen...they\'re transcendent too...as is Under Pressure)...but wow! Just wow! 🌹🌹🌹🌹👏👏👏 Well done! ❤️
December 27th, 2024 17:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
OMG. For real. 🤯 This, my friend, is transcendent! 💯 the stuff wisdom is made of. This 5-word montage is just wow. Honestly I came in thinking...\"QUEEEEEEEEN!!!!!\" and smiled when I saw the video. And yes, of course, I watched and rocked to that brilliant song. But friend, what you delivered here is beyond just brilliant...it is transcendent. (Not knocking Queen...they\'re transcendent too...as is Under Pressure)...but wow! Just wow! 🌹🌹🌹🌹👏👏👏 Well done! ❤️
December 27th, 2024 17:37
under pressure
Neville said:
Guilt is surely the most painful of human emotions .. for those of course appropriately wired to experience it .. there are undoubtedly those who are immune ..
December 27th, 2024 11:59
Neville said:
Guilt is surely the most painful of human emotions .. for those of course appropriately wired to experience it .. there are undoubtedly those who are immune ..
December 27th, 2024 11:59
under pressure
Poetic Licence said:
The pressures and guilts of life we carry, how i wish we could unshakle completely. Enjoyed the read
December 27th, 2024 10:28
Poetic Licence said:
The pressures and guilts of life we carry, how i wish we could unshakle completely. Enjoyed the read
December 27th, 2024 10:28
under pressure
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s title reminded me of Queen\'s song Under Pressure. Pressure treated lumber lasts longer. The forces around us temper us and give us strength. A lovely write my friend
December 27th, 2024 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s title reminded me of Queen\'s song Under Pressure. Pressure treated lumber lasts longer. The forces around us temper us and give us strength. A lovely write my friend
December 27th, 2024 08:37
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