Comments received on poems by arqios
the horn keeps its own track
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet, almost sacred stillness running through it. It feels like something ancient and personal at the same time…not loud, but deeply felt. That calm gravity lingers. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet, almost sacred stillness running through it. It feels like something ancient and personal at the same time…not loud, but deeply felt. That calm gravity lingers. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:19
a morning like this
Paul Bell said:
It is amazing what you can pick up on a early morning stroll.
This is why you need a keen eye on a wander.
Mind you, now that fuel\'s dissappearing, we\'ll all be wandering to work in the morning.
April 19th, 2026 06:42
Paul Bell said:
It is amazing what you can pick up on a early morning stroll.
This is why you need a keen eye on a wander.
Mind you, now that fuel\'s dissappearing, we\'ll all be wandering to work in the morning.
April 19th, 2026 06:42
the horn keeps its own track
sorenbarrett said:
Not having seen this movie I find myself at a deficit but it is moving none the less for in it are various themes that seem archetypal and here is a relationship between two boys tied by a relic nicely worded my friend it evokes a mystical feel.
April 19th, 2026 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
Not having seen this movie I find myself at a deficit but it is moving none the less for in it are various themes that seem archetypal and here is a relationship between two boys tied by a relic nicely worded my friend it evokes a mystical feel.
April 19th, 2026 06:12
the horn keeps its own track
Katie B. said:
Love, \"where the sky folds low.\" Great imagery!
April 19th, 2026 05:15
Katie B. said:
Love, \"where the sky folds low.\" Great imagery!
April 19th, 2026 05:15
the horn keeps its own track
Friendship said:
A nicely written poem on friendship. Your poem serves as a meditation on the power of memory and the connections formed through shared experiences. The poet suggests that even in a vast world, personal connections can illuminate paths through darkness and uncertainty.
April 19th, 2026 05:12
Friendship said:
A nicely written poem on friendship. Your poem serves as a meditation on the power of memory and the connections formed through shared experiences. The poet suggests that even in a vast world, personal connections can illuminate paths through darkness and uncertainty.
April 19th, 2026 05:12
a morning like this
NafisaSB said:
wow- smallest things fuel your imagination and the verses spout out - great !
April 19th, 2026 02:19
NafisaSB said:
wow- smallest things fuel your imagination and the verses spout out - great !
April 19th, 2026 02:19
a morning like this
Goldfinch60 said:
So much can be gathered each day of our lives Rik.
Andy
April 19th, 2026 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
So much can be gathered each day of our lives Rik.
Andy
April 19th, 2026 01:17
a morning like this
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this carries that gentle act of gathering…not just objects, but moments and attention. The way those small, forgotten things slowly become a shape feels honest and unforced. It’s calm, reflective, and quietly meaningful. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 20:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this carries that gentle act of gathering…not just objects, but moments and attention. The way those small, forgotten things slowly become a shape feels honest and unforced. It’s calm, reflective, and quietly meaningful. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 20:52
a morning like this
Kevin Hulme said:
The things that make up everyday life. Well said.
April 18th, 2026 18:47
Kevin Hulme said:
The things that make up everyday life. Well said.
April 18th, 2026 18:47
a morning like this
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, arqios. I enjoyed the read.
April 18th, 2026 15:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, arqios. I enjoyed the read.
April 18th, 2026 15:27
a morning like this
Katie B. said:
Treasures found in what a day brings. Tell me more, is there a deeper meaning behind the obvious.
April 18th, 2026 05:15
Katie B. said:
Treasures found in what a day brings. Tell me more, is there a deeper meaning behind the obvious.
April 18th, 2026 05:15
a morning like this
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of a person I knew that would gather bits and pieces that they formed into artwork. It also is a metaphor for me of those things we gather along the day that becomes our psychological, metaphysical, formation of each day. Lovely Cryptic
April 18th, 2026 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of a person I knew that would gather bits and pieces that they formed into artwork. It also is a metaphor for me of those things we gather along the day that becomes our psychological, metaphysical, formation of each day. Lovely Cryptic
April 18th, 2026 05:12
when you are old
Kevin Hulme said:
\'When you are Old\' is one of my favourite Yeats Poems.
A good Version you did.
April 17th, 2026 18:08
Kevin Hulme said:
\'When you are Old\' is one of my favourite Yeats Poems.
A good Version you did.
April 17th, 2026 18:08
when you are old
Doggerel Dave said:
Given the topic, just wot is the idea of making the text so small I needed to utilise CTRL and mouse wheel to read it... Turning that wheel fair exhausted me. Can tell you haven\'t quite reached this state yet... No consideration, the younger generation and so on...
Smooth poetry I could feel.
April 17th, 2026 17:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Given the topic, just wot is the idea of making the text so small I needed to utilise CTRL and mouse wheel to read it... Turning that wheel fair exhausted me. Can tell you haven\'t quite reached this state yet... No consideration, the younger generation and so on...
Smooth poetry I could feel.
April 17th, 2026 17:13
when you are old
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dearest friend, there’s a quiet warmth here…a gentle reimagining that honors its roots while still feeling like your own voice. Knowing it’s shaped in response to Yeats adds another layer…like a conversation carried forward rather than repeated. It stays grounded in memory and presence, and that’s what gives it its strength. Beautifully done, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 10:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dearest friend, there’s a quiet warmth here…a gentle reimagining that honors its roots while still feeling like your own voice. Knowing it’s shaped in response to Yeats adds another layer…like a conversation carried forward rather than repeated. It stays grounded in memory and presence, and that’s what gives it its strength. Beautifully done, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 10:57
when you are old
Friendship said:
Nicely done. I must be really old, cause it\'s hard to read. Your typing was so small.😊
April 17th, 2026 07:51
Friendship said:
Nicely done. I must be really old, cause it\'s hard to read. Your typing was so small.😊
April 17th, 2026 07:51
when you are old
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done Cryptic it reads smoothly and kindly. Well done
April 17th, 2026 06:04
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done Cryptic it reads smoothly and kindly. Well done
April 17th, 2026 06:04
the other impulse
Goldfinch60 said:
May that impulse lift us into the love of life Rik.
Andy
April 17th, 2026 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May that impulse lift us into the love of life Rik.
Andy
April 17th, 2026 01:16
the other impulse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a clarity here that comes from restraint…letting the idea stand without dressing it up. It moves from limitation into action in a way that feels natural and grounded. It’s brief, but it carries more than it lets on. Powerful write, arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a clarity here that comes from restraint…letting the idea stand without dressing it up. It moves from limitation into action in a way that feels natural and grounded. It’s brief, but it carries more than it lets on. Powerful write, arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:24
shower
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it took a lot out of me. This is minimal in the best way…each line doing its part, building to that quiet reset. The movement from separation to contact feels both physical and internal, and it lingers longer than you’d expect from something this short. Powerful write, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it took a lot out of me. This is minimal in the best way…each line doing its part, building to that quiet reset. The movement from separation to contact feels both physical and internal, and it lingers longer than you’d expect from something this short. Powerful write, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:33
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