Comments received on poems by arqios
neo-priesthood
sorenbarrett said:
Chilling it carries a lonely feel, one of isolation insulated from the electronic and human an alienation in a cold dark universe. Well written my friend
August 26th, 2026 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
Chilling it carries a lonely feel, one of isolation insulated from the electronic and human an alienation in a cold dark universe. Well written my friend
August 26th, 2026 07:41
neo-priesthood
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a warning ignored my friend until its too late
August 26th, 2026 07:08
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a warning ignored my friend until its too late
August 26th, 2026 07:08
neo-priesthood
Syd said:
This is brilliant arqios, no one notices the small changes over a long period until it\'s too late. Indeed, the faint warmth of the severs will be the only thing keeping us warm in the near future.
I do use and embrace new technology and I\'m aware of the dangers it brings. Great awareness write.
- Syd 🍄
August 26th, 2026 06:44
Syd said:
This is brilliant arqios, no one notices the small changes over a long period until it\'s too late. Indeed, the faint warmth of the severs will be the only thing keeping us warm in the near future.
I do use and embrace new technology and I\'m aware of the dangers it brings. Great awareness write.
- Syd 🍄
August 26th, 2026 06:44
durable measure
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminds me of people who flourish without attention, praise, or advantage. Their strength rarely announces itself, yet it lasts. Lovely piece, arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminds me of people who flourish without attention, praise, or advantage. Their strength rarely announces itself, yet it lasts. Lovely piece, arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:55
durable measure
Kevin Hulme said:
This could be a Metaphor for certain types of people.
A good Write.
August 25th, 2026 18:52
Kevin Hulme said:
This could be a Metaphor for certain types of people.
A good Write.
August 25th, 2026 18:52
durable measure
orchidee said:
Good write A. We have couple of indoor plants that we often forget to water. That\'s KP, stuck in a corner and forgotten (on purpose!). lol.
August 25th, 2026 10:31
orchidee said:
Good write A. We have couple of indoor plants that we often forget to water. That\'s KP, stuck in a corner and forgotten (on purpose!). lol.
August 25th, 2026 10:31
durable measure
sorenbarrett said:
Deep meaning in this metaphor my friend. Some plants we treat with great care giving all we think they need yet they are fragile compared to the strength of those that survive on their own, sometimes in the most adverse conditions. I have a plant left by a mother in law sitting in a corner now for over fifty years, sometimes watered sometimes going months without. It lives vibrant as the day I first saw it, I call it immortal. A fave my friend
August 25th, 2026 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
Deep meaning in this metaphor my friend. Some plants we treat with great care giving all we think they need yet they are fragile compared to the strength of those that survive on their own, sometimes in the most adverse conditions. I have a plant left by a mother in law sitting in a corner now for over fifty years, sometimes watered sometimes going months without. It lives vibrant as the day I first saw it, I call it immortal. A fave my friend
August 25th, 2026 06:27
terminal lights
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Terminal light\" equals nothingness, perhaps?
August 24th, 2026 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Terminal light\" equals nothingness, perhaps?
August 24th, 2026 19:19
terminal lights
Kevin Hulme said:
That\'s one way of looking at the Journey of Life.
Like it.
August 24th, 2026 16:09
Kevin Hulme said:
That\'s one way of looking at the Journey of Life.
Like it.
August 24th, 2026 16:09
terminal lights
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful little piece, my friend. We awaken to existence already in motion, unable to choose its beginning and carried steadily toward its ending. The brevity makes that inevitability hit even harder. Excellent work, arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful little piece, my friend. We awaken to existence already in motion, unable to choose its beginning and carried steadily toward its ending. The brevity makes that inevitability hit even harder. Excellent work, arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:16
terminal lights
sorenbarrett said:
Another metaphor I take it, As we all form part of the train it seems our leader has not checked his gauges and here we go full speed ahead in the dark headed for an abrupt stop at the end of the line. Could be just me and maybe my prejudices of politics and society in general though.
August 24th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Another metaphor I take it, As we all form part of the train it seems our leader has not checked his gauges and here we go full speed ahead in the dark headed for an abrupt stop at the end of the line. Could be just me and maybe my prejudices of politics and society in general though.
August 24th, 2026 06:30
terminal lights
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
short, sharp and direct says it all
August 24th, 2026 05:33
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
short, sharp and direct says it all
August 24th, 2026 05:33
Gemini Rising
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes the early Morning. Between Yes and No.
Good Write.
August 23rd, 2026 19:16
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes the early Morning. Between Yes and No.
Good Write.
August 23rd, 2026 19:16
Gemini Rising
David Wakeling said:
Gotta love personification and metaphor.I can imagine stars and planets communicating to each other by light and geavity.An enjoyable read compadre
August 23rd, 2026 19:09
David Wakeling said:
Gotta love personification and metaphor.I can imagine stars and planets communicating to each other by light and geavity.An enjoyable read compadre
August 23rd, 2026 19:09
Gemini Rising
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful piece, my friend. You capture that sacred stillness before daybreak, when the heavens feel privately shared and even departure carries grace. Quiet, intimate, and deeply moving. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful piece, my friend. You capture that sacred stillness before daybreak, when the heavens feel privately shared and even departure carries grace. Quiet, intimate, and deeply moving. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:57
Gemini Rising
orchidee said:
Good write A. Erm, which one of the twins is Gemini? What\'s the other twin\'s name? lol. Do shut up Orchi, Fido says to me. lol.
August 23rd, 2026 07:52
orchidee said:
Good write A. Erm, which one of the twins is Gemini? What\'s the other twin\'s name? lol. Do shut up Orchi, Fido says to me. lol.
August 23rd, 2026 07:52
Gemini Rising
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn quiet intimacy in this, with the two stars becoming a private little world shared by “you, and me.” I especially like how they don’t fight the sunrise—they simply exist for their brief moment and then surrender the sky, which gives the poem a graceful sense of impermanence.
August 23rd, 2026 07:32
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn quiet intimacy in this, with the two stars becoming a private little world shared by “you, and me.” I especially like how they don’t fight the sunrise—they simply exist for their brief moment and then surrender the sky, which gives the poem a graceful sense of impermanence.
August 23rd, 2026 07:32
Gemini Rising
sorenbarrett said:
I bow to your poetic grace my friend. Your word choice is magnificent as is your imagery but best of all is your pulling of the threads to join all into a well sewn piece.
August 23rd, 2026 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
I bow to your poetic grace my friend. Your word choice is magnificent as is your imagery but best of all is your pulling of the threads to join all into a well sewn piece.
August 23rd, 2026 05:59
Gemini Rising
Mutley Ravishes said:
I love that almost imperceptible transition from dark to light in the mornings, then the reverse in the evenings. Great write.
August 23rd, 2026 05:57
Mutley Ravishes said:
I love that almost imperceptible transition from dark to light in the mornings, then the reverse in the evenings. Great write.
August 23rd, 2026 05:57
la monde d\'jour
David Wakeling said:
What a wonderful eye you have to see this world and create it.I was transported,Wonderful
August 22nd, 2026 23:08
David Wakeling said:
What a wonderful eye you have to see this world and create it.I was transported,Wonderful
August 22nd, 2026 23:08
flicker
rrodriguez said:
This is wonderfully written. I read it twice to get a better feel for how time passed. However, there\'s a flicker there that still flutters. Thank you for sharing.
August 22nd, 2026 19:07
rrodriguez said:
This is wonderfully written. I read it twice to get a better feel for how time passed. However, there\'s a flicker there that still flutters. Thank you for sharing.
August 22nd, 2026 19:07
la monde d\'jour
orchidee said:
A fine, erm, Spanish titled poem there A. lol.
As I said, I\'m no good at languages. Fido knows 3,467 languages, but he doesn\'t brag about it, e.g. He says \'Le woof\". Oh it\'s nutty! lol.
August 22nd, 2026 12:34
orchidee said:
A fine, erm, Spanish titled poem there A. lol.
As I said, I\'m no good at languages. Fido knows 3,467 languages, but he doesn\'t brag about it, e.g. He says \'Le woof\". Oh it\'s nutty! lol.
August 22nd, 2026 12:34
la monde d\'jour
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful piece, my friend. The ordinary becomes cosmic, every stranger contains an unseen universe, and the entire world quietly remakes itself overnight. I absolutely loved this, Rik. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful piece, my friend. The ordinary becomes cosmic, every stranger contains an unseen universe, and the entire world quietly remakes itself overnight. I absolutely loved this, Rik. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:06
la monde d\'jour
sorenbarrett said:
Pleasantly comfortable the warmth of its serenity woven in surreal cloth felt good against the skin and its tune was pleasant to the ear. I loved this one Cryptic it was fanciful but real in some esoteric way. A fave my good friend
August 22nd, 2026 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
Pleasantly comfortable the warmth of its serenity woven in surreal cloth felt good against the skin and its tune was pleasant to the ear. I loved this one Cryptic it was fanciful but real in some esoteric way. A fave my good friend
August 22nd, 2026 07:29
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