Comments received on poems by arqios



long-shadow hour
orchidee said:

And then back to light again, starting just before Christmas. Well, in UK anyway. As one of us is upside down, when is your Shortest Day?! lol.

November 13th, 2026 10:46

long-shadow hour
Tony Grannell said:

Greetings, arqios,

Twilight in to dusk in to darkness, delicately woven in to a most beautiful poem.

All the best,

Tony.

November 13th, 2026 10:02

long-shadow hour
Kevin Hulme said:

Victor Hugo described Evening as: \'Between Yes and No\'. And there\'s always something special about that time of day , when everything is Winding down. A good Write and a Fave.

November 13th, 2026 08:54

swords to plowshares
Tony Grannell said:

Greetings, arqios,

Dining on the blood of our ancestors - vegetarians and vegans come to mind and on a more serious note - the wealth of empires. A very fine poem indeed.

All the best,

Tony.

November 13th, 2026 08:40

long-shadow hour
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely portrayal of time and a gentle sliding into evening. Some of my favorite hours along with daybreak it is in these transitions that mood brightens and falls into a peaceful slumber. A fave my friend

November 13th, 2026 05:50

long-shadow hour
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

descriptive and lulls reader into night

November 13th, 2026 05:19

swords to plowshares
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Rik and so true.

Andy

November 13th, 2026 02:05

swords to plowshares
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Rik, this one hits hard. So many lives sacrificed, and yet humanity still hasn\'t learned to settle its differences without killing one another. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

November 12th, 2026 21:05

swords to plowshares
Kevin Hulme said:

The Story of any Country on Earth.
Liked it.

November 12th, 2026 20:20

swords to plowshares
orchidee said:

Good write A. I beat me sword into a plowshare. Now I can\'t take part in \'fun\' knightly duels enactments, but me garden/field is looking good though! lol.
Well, I been trying to duel with this plowshare thingy, but I\'m not getting far. lol.

November 12th, 2026 10:47

swords to plowshares
2781 said:

I remember the story of Gideon.

November 12th, 2026 08:37

swords to plowshares
Doggerel Dave said:

I have occasionally wondered if the neatly trimmed lawn at the rear of my place could once have been the scene of a massacre...

November 12th, 2026 06:55

swords to plowshares
sorenbarrett said:

Such deep feeling in this write Cryptic. How the blood of the valiant runs into the soil to become nutrient for the next generation freed from oppression. Such a vivid image and nicely fits the title. Nicely done my friend

November 12th, 2026 05:55

swords to plowshares
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

From battlefield to agriculture

November 12th, 2026 05:44

outsourced
Goldfinch60 said:

We always have choices in life Rik.

Andy

November 12th, 2026 02:15

outsourced
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Rik, I must admit, I laughed at the rubber ducky! 🀣 Apparently, even the smallest comforts aren\'t safe when the vultures come collecting! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

November 11th, 2026 22:29

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Tony Grannell said:

Greetings, arqios,

I actually enjoyed reading the poem but, I am left bewildered through no fault of your own. Im getting a tad slow of late.

All the best,

Tony.

November 11th, 2026 14:13

outsourced
orchidee said:

Good write A.

November 11th, 2026 12:56

outwritten pen
Tony Grannell said:

Greetings, arqios,

How the mind wonders, the great wonders, the ones that we can\'t compose. My kingdom for a pen. A pleasant read, drifting in mystery.

All the best,

Tony.

November 11th, 2026 12:53

outsourced
Paul Bell said:

Can I have some more comes to mind.
Yes, there\'s a plate, tuck in.
Step away from the rubber duck though, it\'s a survivor.

November 11th, 2026 08:40

outsourced
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

much enjoyed read

November 11th, 2026 07:33

outsourced
Doggerel Dave said:

Recieved - not quite sure how.πŸ™ƒ

November 11th, 2026 07:15

standing still
RSM0812 said:

Conjured with excellence and poetic professionalism. Nicely done. A fave for sure. Your imagery is beyond an echoe of words to the senses.

November 11th, 2026 07:05

outwritten pen
Kevin Hulme said:

A Love letter of Sorts to Someone?

November 11th, 2026 06:24

outsourced
sorenbarrett said:

Cryptic over chips a billionaire morsel in such a calorie rich world. Spit out indeed swallowed maybe. Is this about what it seems to be about. A puzzle with bits and pieces most intriguing. A fave

November 11th, 2026 05:28

air traffic control
Joseph M Marion said:

I absolutely love this and you\'re right on very good sir thank you for all you teach me

November 10th, 2026 14:25

outwritten pen
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

November 10th, 2026 09:50

outwritten pen
orchidee said:

Good write O. Well, put another refill in the pen then, if it\'s outwritten! lol. Do shut up, Orchi, Fido says to me. He keeps shutting me up. He\'s not rude, but has to try to stop me saying corny jokes. lol.

November 10th, 2026 09:43

outwritten pen
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Rik, this makes me want to sit down with my notebook and give myself permission to come up empty. Funny how often that’s when I finally have something to put down. Thanks, my friend. πŸ–‹οΈπŸ–€βœ¨πŸ™

November 10th, 2026 09:13

outwritten pen
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

A gentle journey in this my friend

November 10th, 2026 05:06

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