Comments received on poems by arqios
briefly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I’ve felt that kind of quiet easing before…where grief doesn’t leave, but it softens just enough to breathe again. Very relatable. This brought that space back clearly. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 23rd, 2026 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I’ve felt that kind of quiet easing before…where grief doesn’t leave, but it softens just enough to breathe again. Very relatable. This brought that space back clearly. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 23rd, 2026 08:56
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Friendship said:
Beautifully written. Your poem addresses themes of loss, grief, and the natural world, particularly how morning light can symbolize hope and healing, albeit temporarily, for those who are in mourning.
April 23rd, 2026 06:51
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. Your poem addresses themes of loss, grief, and the natural world, particularly how morning light can symbolize hope and healing, albeit temporarily, for those who are in mourning.
April 23rd, 2026 06:51
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sorenbarrett said:
There is softness with this poem a tenderness and glow that settles like dust particles in that ray of light through the window pane. The concept of borrowed light enhances the view that we all are borrowed here even time and light. Lovely my dear friend and a fave
April 23rd, 2026 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
There is softness with this poem a tenderness and glow that settles like dust particles in that ray of light through the window pane. The concept of borrowed light enhances the view that we all are borrowed here even time and light. Lovely my dear friend and a fave
April 23rd, 2026 06:14
not the words
Goldfinch60 said:
Feelings can overcome so many bad things in life Rik.
Andy
April 23rd, 2026 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Feelings can overcome so many bad things in life Rik.
Andy
April 23rd, 2026 01:22
not the words
Mutley Ravishes said:
Now what was Bruce Lee saying about the \"finger pointing at the moon\"?!
April 22nd, 2026 19:00
Mutley Ravishes said:
Now what was Bruce Lee saying about the \"finger pointing at the moon\"?!
April 22nd, 2026 19:00
not the words
Kevin Hulme said:
When you read a Poem that Produces a Strong feeling: It\'s something else.
Good Write.
April 22nd, 2026 18:27
Kevin Hulme said:
When you read a Poem that Produces a Strong feeling: It\'s something else.
Good Write.
April 22nd, 2026 18:27
not the words
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this is all about that restraint…saying just enough, then letting it open on its own. That final turn really stayed with me…you trust it, and it works. I’ve chased that kind of balance myself. This lands clean and strong. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this is all about that restraint…saying just enough, then letting it open on its own. That final turn really stayed with me…you trust it, and it works. I’ve chased that kind of balance myself. This lands clean and strong. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:23
not the words
Doggerel Dave said:
And that should be the way of it every time. Please take this as enthusiastic endorsement.
Inverted commas? A quotation?
April 22nd, 2026 06:49
Doggerel Dave said:
And that should be the way of it every time. Please take this as enthusiastic endorsement.
Inverted commas? A quotation?
April 22nd, 2026 06:49
not the words
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
“If you focus on one leaf you can miss an entire forest”
April 22nd, 2026 06:20
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
“If you focus on one leaf you can miss an entire forest”
April 22nd, 2026 06:20
not the words
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a compelling truth where words are merely the tool by which poetic feeling can be expressed a type of projector of the image. Nicely said my friend
April 22nd, 2026 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a compelling truth where words are merely the tool by which poetic feeling can be expressed a type of projector of the image. Nicely said my friend
April 22nd, 2026 05:38
turning clean
Kevin Hulme said:
The Hands of Time always outpace the Heart sadly. Good Write.
April 21st, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
The Hands of Time always outpace the Heart sadly. Good Write.
April 21st, 2026 18:43
turning clean
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like those stretches where you’re just trying to make it through…looking for even the smallest bit of relief to keep going. I’ve known that rhythm, and you captured it honestly. Strong piece and very much enjoyed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like those stretches where you’re just trying to make it through…looking for even the smallest bit of relief to keep going. I’ve known that rhythm, and you captured it honestly. Strong piece and very much enjoyed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:11
turning clean
Thomas W Case said:
Lyrical and restrained—this moves like time itself pressing gently but persistently on the body.
The grit is in the repetition: motion continuing even when everything inside is asking for stillness.
April 21st, 2026 08:32
Thomas W Case said:
Lyrical and restrained—this moves like time itself pressing gently but persistently on the body.
The grit is in the repetition: motion continuing even when everything inside is asking for stillness.
April 21st, 2026 08:32
turning clean
Paul Bell said:
This reads like a journey of despair, and sadly there seems no end to it.
Even when things turn bright, something changes it back.
April 21st, 2026 07:56
Paul Bell said:
This reads like a journey of despair, and sadly there seems no end to it.
Even when things turn bright, something changes it back.
April 21st, 2026 07:56
turning clean
sorenbarrett said:
These words raise like smoke drifting through light and dark making bends and swirling trying to find meaning and shape in a world of change from day to night and seasons. Well written my friend
April 21st, 2026 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
These words raise like smoke drifting through light and dark making bends and swirling trying to find meaning and shape in a world of change from day to night and seasons. Well written my friend
April 21st, 2026 06:49
turning clean
Friendship said:
Your poem captures the struggle to find solace and meaning amid life\'s inevitable cycles of sorrow and renewal.
April 21st, 2026 06:20
Friendship said:
Your poem captures the struggle to find solace and meaning amid life\'s inevitable cycles of sorrow and renewal.
April 21st, 2026 06:20
a morning like this
NafisaSB said:
Wishing many more such serene and peaceful moments and mornings 👍
April 21st, 2026 03:20
NafisaSB said:
Wishing many more such serene and peaceful moments and mornings 👍
April 21st, 2026 03:20
a daily challenge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. May it be so, my friend. A great challenge indeed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. May it be so, my friend. A great challenge indeed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:36
a daily challenge
orchidee said:
Good write A. I got me own problem - reaching between the two \'s\'s of \'sMILEs\' - it\'s a mile between them. There, I\'ve made any crypticness easy for ya. I\'ve spelt out the answer in capitals.
And since when was I cryptic? About once every 24 years or summat. lol.
April 20th, 2026 08:26
orchidee said:
Good write A. I got me own problem - reaching between the two \'s\'s of \'sMILEs\' - it\'s a mile between them. There, I\'ve made any crypticness easy for ya. I\'ve spelt out the answer in capitals.
And since when was I cryptic? About once every 24 years or summat. lol.
April 20th, 2026 08:26
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