Comments received on poems by arqios
muse
sorenbarrett said:
A visit with a muse a special occasion while a walk with one comes vary rarely and is something to celebrate. Nice Cryptic
September 4th, 2026 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
A visit with a muse a special occasion while a walk with one comes vary rarely and is something to celebrate. Nice Cryptic
September 4th, 2026 06:13
an evening harmony
Kevin Hulme said:
Like the way the same line would appear in the next Stanza. Enjoyable.
September 3rd, 2026 19:14
Kevin Hulme said:
Like the way the same line would appear in the next Stanza. Enjoyable.
September 3rd, 2026 19:14
an evening harmony
Doggerel Dave said:
Harmony the call. Painted perfectly. Thanks Rik.
September 3rd, 2026 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Harmony the call. Painted perfectly. Thanks Rik.
September 3rd, 2026 18:33
an evening harmony
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a gorgeous piece, arqios! The woven repetition moves like music while the landscape gradually settles from glowing color into starlight...gentle, immersive, and filled with wonder. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a gorgeous piece, arqios! The woven repetition moves like music while the landscape gradually settles from glowing color into starlight...gentle, immersive, and filled with wonder. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:40
an evening harmony
Friendship said:
Lovely said. Your poem \"An Evening Harmony\" explores the serene beauty and tranquility of twilight as day transitions into night.
September 3rd, 2026 07:01
Friendship said:
Lovely said. Your poem \"An Evening Harmony\" explores the serene beauty and tranquility of twilight as day transitions into night.
September 3rd, 2026 07:01
an evening harmony
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A gentle read full of nature
September 3rd, 2026 05:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A gentle read full of nature
September 3rd, 2026 05:53
an evening harmony
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful synchronized meter in this poem of soft images yet vivid create a tender and rhymical hypnotic feel to this poem Cryptic. It carries the reader to a gentler place.
September 3rd, 2026 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful synchronized meter in this poem of soft images yet vivid create a tender and rhymical hypnotic feel to this poem Cryptic. It carries the reader to a gentler place.
September 3rd, 2026 05:19
Billy’s first Calvins
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this is one hell of a poem. The shame, longing, and fierce determination of that thirteen-year-old hit with tremendous force…deeply human and painfully honest, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 2nd, 2026 21:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this is one hell of a poem. The shame, longing, and fierce determination of that thirteen-year-old hit with tremendous force…deeply human and painfully honest, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 2nd, 2026 21:45
Billy’s first Calvins
Kevin Hulme said:
There was a Fashion sometime back, when People would have the top of their Shorts sticking up over the trousers, so people could see the Brand Name. 🤔. I can relate to this Poem. In the Past I\'d look at Someone with envy for what they had. But there\'s a flip side: Maybe Someone looked at us in the same way.
An enjoyable Read. A fave.
September 2nd, 2026 09:08
Kevin Hulme said:
There was a Fashion sometime back, when People would have the top of their Shorts sticking up over the trousers, so people could see the Brand Name. 🤔. I can relate to this Poem. In the Past I\'d look at Someone with envy for what they had. But there\'s a flip side: Maybe Someone looked at us in the same way.
An enjoyable Read. A fave.
September 2nd, 2026 09:08
Billy’s first Calvins
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
nicely written piece my friend, childhood traumas live with us
September 2nd, 2026 05:45
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
nicely written piece my friend, childhood traumas live with us
September 2nd, 2026 05:45
Billy’s first Calvins
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic vow made over the sacrificial fire of shame. Having less than those around you sensitizes a child to what it means to have and often burns in a desire to acquire so as to never feel that lack again. This write puts all this in perspective of a tale of childhood. Nicely written my friend
September 2nd, 2026 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic vow made over the sacrificial fire of shame. Having less than those around you sensitizes a child to what it means to have and often burns in a desire to acquire so as to never feel that lack again. This write puts all this in perspective of a tale of childhood. Nicely written my friend
September 2nd, 2026 05:31
previous days\' acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Rik.
\"Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.\"
Andy
September 2nd, 2026 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Rik.
\"Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.\"
Andy
September 2nd, 2026 01:05
previous days\' acrostic
Kevin Hulme said:
All our Troubles seemed so far away.
Enjoyed.👍
September 1st, 2026 18:33
Kevin Hulme said:
All our Troubles seemed so far away.
Enjoyed.👍
September 1st, 2026 18:33
previous days\' acrostic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a graceful acrostic, Arqios. Memory, friendship, and yearning all sit together softly here...and the whole piece feels like holding onto the warmth of a day that has already passed. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a graceful acrostic, Arqios. Memory, friendship, and yearning all sit together softly here...and the whole piece feels like holding onto the warmth of a day that has already passed. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:37
previous days\' acrostic
orchidee said:
Good write A. How\'s that end (?) of Winter there?!
September 1st, 2026 10:30
orchidee said:
Good write A. How\'s that end (?) of Winter there?!
September 1st, 2026 10:30
previous days\' acrostic
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A gentleness here much enjoyed
September 1st, 2026 06:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A gentleness here much enjoyed
September 1st, 2026 06:58
previous days\' acrostic
Thomas W Case said:
Very creative. Excellent work.
September 1st, 2026 06:46
Thomas W Case said:
Very creative. Excellent work.
September 1st, 2026 06:46
previous days\' acrostic
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia in a song title that has inspired more songs, covers and played more than any other song. It evokes golden memories and regret filling the heart with emotion of all types. Love gained and lost. A lovely write my friend
September 1st, 2026 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia in a song title that has inspired more songs, covers and played more than any other song. It evokes golden memories and regret filling the heart with emotion of all types. Love gained and lost. A lovely write my friend
September 1st, 2026 05:36
wonderful
orchidee said:
I\'m the guy who forgot to lift his hands on the tightrope to balance - Aiieeeeee - ya hear me falling down the ravine?! lol.
August 31st, 2026 09:26
orchidee said:
I\'m the guy who forgot to lift his hands on the tightrope to balance - Aiieeeeee - ya hear me falling down the ravine?! lol.
August 31st, 2026 09:26
wonderful
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem focuses on the tender moments shared, the emotional journey of overcoming shyness, and the transformative power of love. There is a sense of wonder and appreciation for the relationship depicted, emphasizing how these moments enrich life.
August 31st, 2026 08:43
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem focuses on the tender moments shared, the emotional journey of overcoming shyness, and the transformative power of love. There is a sense of wonder and appreciation for the relationship depicted, emphasizing how these moments enrich life.
August 31st, 2026 08:43
wonderful
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is beautifully tender. It has that breathless feeling of watching affection turn into wonder...soft, intimate, and genuinely warm. Lovely piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2026 08:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is beautifully tender. It has that breathless feeling of watching affection turn into wonder...soft, intimate, and genuinely warm. Lovely piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2026 08:36
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