Comments received on poems by arqios



let poem\'s arise
Tonya Titus said:

Love this! The poet\'s mantra.

February 5th, 2026 09:50

Occam’s Razor
orchidee said:

You know William of Ockham, or of Occam? He lived in the UK, some distance from my home town, but in the South of the UK (1287-1347).

February 5th, 2026 09:13

Occam’s Razor
Paul Bell said:

We lie to you because the truth would hurt you.
I think Churchill said. \'\'The truth is protected by a bodyguard of lies.
Starmer highlighted it perfectly yesterday.

February 5th, 2026 08:57

Occam’s Razor
Doggerel Dave said:

Always liked (even if I was unsure how to spell it – which is an indication of the depth of my understanding) Occam’s razor, when utilized in scientific debate. However when used to arbitrate on my personal perceptions, I think I’m in a wee bit of trouble. The phrase “made me think” which was the go a while back here irritated me, but in this instance I believe I will resort to it!

February 5th, 2026 05:53

Occam’s Razor
sorenbarrett said:

Such a poignant poem today where no one knows what to believe. Perception indeed the starting point of belief and conviction. So nicely worded My friend a fave

February 5th, 2026 05:08

let poem\'s arise
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Rik and so true for the writing of our words.

Andy

February 5th, 2026 02:11

let poem\'s arise
orchidee said:

Yes, I was gonna fly with a poem, and literally as The Birdman, but I crashed! lol.
How many times I gotta jump off this cliff before anyone, or myself, realises I can\'t fly? lol.

February 4th, 2026 11:20

let poem\'s arise
Tristan Robert Lange said:

arqios, this is gentle and affirming. It carries a quiet confidence about creation, letting patience and care do the work. That calm strength really lands. Excellent job and a tremendous use of metaphor, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

February 4th, 2026 10:30

let poem\'s arise
Friendship said:

Your poem explores the transformative power of creativity, emphasizing how discarded thoughts and experiences can evolve into something beautiful and meaningful, akin to the metamorphosis of a caterpillar into a butterfly.

February 4th, 2026 09:07

let poem\'s arise
sorenbarrett said:

Such a beautiful metaphor that metamorphosizes as the poem unfolds. Wonderfully done my friend

February 4th, 2026 05:59

she rides the wind
orchidee said:

A fine write A.

February 3rd, 2026 11:55

she rides the wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Dearest friend, this reads like an unfolding myth...in real time. Nature, spirit, and transformation braided together, not romanticized but respected. The force you describe unsettles and compels in equal measure. A striking piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

February 3rd, 2026 10:38

she rides the wind
Thomas W Case said:

She moves like a storm made flesh—beautiful, dangerous, and utterly alive.
You can almost feel the chill in your bones, yet you wouldn’t want her any other way.

February 3rd, 2026 07:56

she rides the wind
sorenbarrett said:

I love nature and respect her, her force is undeniable and unstoppable. The wind the earths cleaning lady sweeps all and leaves it polished. A lovely poem my friend that has force and deeper meaning. A poem after my own heart and a fave

February 3rd, 2026 05:45

Montgomery Slyde
cellinic said:

A very sincere and deep statement, best wishes

February 3rd, 2026 04:22

Montgomery Slyde
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Montgomery Slyde - don\'t know if he is a historical character or something you made up. Honestly it doesn\'t matter. What matters are lines like:
\"his shoes rehearsing
arguments against the floorboards.\"

Some poems demand to be recognised with \'fave\'. This one is one of them.


February 3rd, 2026 03:59

Montgomery Slyde
Goldfinch60 said:

I have met him in my past Rik, but never again. LOL

Andy

February 3rd, 2026 02:08

Montgomery Slyde
Doggerel Dave said:

Almost an obituary for someone I believe I encountered in the past.... or maybe it was all in the writing.....

February 2nd, 2026 18:04

Montgomery Slyde
orchidee said:

Good write A. You know Monty?! heehee.

February 2nd, 2026 14:01

Montgomery Slyde
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Arqios, Montgomery Slyde is a study in performed confidence. Bravado, memory, and myth prop him up just long enough to bow before the fall. The poem never condemns him…it simply watches, and that restraint is powerful. Excellent work, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

February 2nd, 2026 13:43

Montgomery Slyde
sorenbarrett said:

This is a description worthy of a fave as a tip of the hat to a poet that has a way with words.

February 2nd, 2026 08:44

00:00, 2026
Vipassana said:

short & sweet

February 1st, 2026 19:47

descent
Vipassana said:

The mountain says nothing.

And somehow,

that is enough.

Beautiful.

February 1st, 2026 19:10

riddle of the two kin
Vipassana said:

Very nice. Particularly like the phrase:

One waits on ice

bare as dawn

February 1st, 2026 19:01

observance
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Arqios, this is stark and contemplative. It feels stripped down to essentials…no sentiment, no adornment, just still presence. The restraint gives it real gravity. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

February 1st, 2026 15:28

observance
orchidee said:

Good write A.

February 1st, 2026 12:24

the plunge
Thomas W Case said:

You make the page feel alive—like walking through a landscape instead of reading words.
The quiet inventiveness lingers; the reader is invited to build alongside you, step by careful step.

February 1st, 2026 07:37

the plunge
Thomas W Case said:

You make the page feel alive—like walking through a landscape instead of reading words.
The quiet inventiveness lingers; the reader is invited to build alongside you, step by careful step.

February 1st, 2026 07:37

observance
Paul Bell said:

I always think the snow comes down to cover up bad gardens, if only for a time.
Winter sure is the reflection time, good or bad.
We promise ourselves change, and some manage, most don\'t.


February 1st, 2026 07:35

observance
sorenbarrett said:

We strip the bones bare to understand the structure and see beyond the surface. Yet arriving at the core in simplicity we see that we are all what we are and in that beauty acceptance a cold stark truth, undeniable all are part of the same nature. A lovely poem and a fave my friend

February 1st, 2026 06:07

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