Comments received on poems by arqios
turning clean
Kevin Hulme said:
The Hands of Time always outpace the Heart sadly. Good Write.
April 21st, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
The Hands of Time always outpace the Heart sadly. Good Write.
April 21st, 2026 18:43
turning clean
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like those stretches where you’re just trying to make it through…looking for even the smallest bit of relief to keep going. I’ve known that rhythm, and you captured it honestly. Strong piece and very much enjoyed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like those stretches where you’re just trying to make it through…looking for even the smallest bit of relief to keep going. I’ve known that rhythm, and you captured it honestly. Strong piece and very much enjoyed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:11
turning clean
Thomas W Case said:
Lyrical and restrained—this moves like time itself pressing gently but persistently on the body.
The grit is in the repetition: motion continuing even when everything inside is asking for stillness.
April 21st, 2026 08:32
Thomas W Case said:
Lyrical and restrained—this moves like time itself pressing gently but persistently on the body.
The grit is in the repetition: motion continuing even when everything inside is asking for stillness.
April 21st, 2026 08:32
turning clean
Paul Bell said:
This reads like a journey of despair, and sadly there seems no end to it.
Even when things turn bright, something changes it back.
April 21st, 2026 07:56
Paul Bell said:
This reads like a journey of despair, and sadly there seems no end to it.
Even when things turn bright, something changes it back.
April 21st, 2026 07:56
turning clean
sorenbarrett said:
These words raise like smoke drifting through light and dark making bends and swirling trying to find meaning and shape in a world of change from day to night and seasons. Well written my friend
April 21st, 2026 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
These words raise like smoke drifting through light and dark making bends and swirling trying to find meaning and shape in a world of change from day to night and seasons. Well written my friend
April 21st, 2026 06:49
turning clean
Friendship said:
Your poem captures the struggle to find solace and meaning amid life\'s inevitable cycles of sorrow and renewal.
April 21st, 2026 06:20
Friendship said:
Your poem captures the struggle to find solace and meaning amid life\'s inevitable cycles of sorrow and renewal.
April 21st, 2026 06:20
a morning like this
NafisaSB said:
Wishing many more such serene and peaceful moments and mornings 👍
April 21st, 2026 03:20
NafisaSB said:
Wishing many more such serene and peaceful moments and mornings 👍
April 21st, 2026 03:20
a daily challenge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. May it be so, my friend. A great challenge indeed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. May it be so, my friend. A great challenge indeed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:36
a daily challenge
orchidee said:
Good write A. I got me own problem - reaching between the two \'s\'s of \'sMILEs\' - it\'s a mile between them. There, I\'ve made any crypticness easy for ya. I\'ve spelt out the answer in capitals.
And since when was I cryptic? About once every 24 years or summat. lol.
April 20th, 2026 08:26
orchidee said:
Good write A. I got me own problem - reaching between the two \'s\'s of \'sMILEs\' - it\'s a mile between them. There, I\'ve made any crypticness easy for ya. I\'ve spelt out the answer in capitals.
And since when was I cryptic? About once every 24 years or summat. lol.
April 20th, 2026 08:26
a daily challenge
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a challenge that requires continual attention and great sensitivity
April 20th, 2026 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a challenge that requires continual attention and great sensitivity
April 20th, 2026 06:38
a morning like this
RSM0812 said:
Vivid in imagery and poetic style. Enjoyed very much.
April 20th, 2026 04:36
RSM0812 said:
Vivid in imagery and poetic style. Enjoyed very much.
April 20th, 2026 04:36
the horn keeps its own track
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Rik, friendships are so important in our lives.
Andy
April 20th, 2026 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Rik, friendships are so important in our lives.
Andy
April 20th, 2026 00:50
the horn keeps its own track
Kevin Hulme said:
Never seen the Movie. But you paint a good picture with words . Enjoyable Read b
April 19th, 2026 20:01
Kevin Hulme said:
Never seen the Movie. But you paint a good picture with words . Enjoyable Read b
April 19th, 2026 20:01
the horn keeps its own track
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet, almost sacred stillness running through it. It feels like something ancient and personal at the same time…not loud, but deeply felt. That calm gravity lingers. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet, almost sacred stillness running through it. It feels like something ancient and personal at the same time…not loud, but deeply felt. That calm gravity lingers. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:19
a morning like this
Paul Bell said:
It is amazing what you can pick up on a early morning stroll.
This is why you need a keen eye on a wander.
Mind you, now that fuel\'s dissappearing, we\'ll all be wandering to work in the morning.
April 19th, 2026 06:42
Paul Bell said:
It is amazing what you can pick up on a early morning stroll.
This is why you need a keen eye on a wander.
Mind you, now that fuel\'s dissappearing, we\'ll all be wandering to work in the morning.
April 19th, 2026 06:42
the horn keeps its own track
sorenbarrett said:
Not having seen this movie I find myself at a deficit but it is moving none the less for in it are various themes that seem archetypal and here is a relationship between two boys tied by a relic nicely worded my friend it evokes a mystical feel.
April 19th, 2026 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
Not having seen this movie I find myself at a deficit but it is moving none the less for in it are various themes that seem archetypal and here is a relationship between two boys tied by a relic nicely worded my friend it evokes a mystical feel.
April 19th, 2026 06:12
the horn keeps its own track
Katie B. said:
Love, \"where the sky folds low.\" Great imagery!
April 19th, 2026 05:15
Katie B. said:
Love, \"where the sky folds low.\" Great imagery!
April 19th, 2026 05:15
the horn keeps its own track
Friendship said:
A nicely written poem on friendship. Your poem serves as a meditation on the power of memory and the connections formed through shared experiences. The poet suggests that even in a vast world, personal connections can illuminate paths through darkness and uncertainty.
April 19th, 2026 05:12
Friendship said:
A nicely written poem on friendship. Your poem serves as a meditation on the power of memory and the connections formed through shared experiences. The poet suggests that even in a vast world, personal connections can illuminate paths through darkness and uncertainty.
April 19th, 2026 05:12
a morning like this
NafisaSB said:
wow- smallest things fuel your imagination and the verses spout out - great !
April 19th, 2026 02:19
NafisaSB said:
wow- smallest things fuel your imagination and the verses spout out - great !
April 19th, 2026 02:19
a morning like this
Goldfinch60 said:
So much can be gathered each day of our lives Rik.
Andy
April 19th, 2026 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
So much can be gathered each day of our lives Rik.
Andy
April 19th, 2026 01:17
a morning like this
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this carries that gentle act of gathering…not just objects, but moments and attention. The way those small, forgotten things slowly become a shape feels honest and unforced. It’s calm, reflective, and quietly meaningful. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 20:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this carries that gentle act of gathering…not just objects, but moments and attention. The way those small, forgotten things slowly become a shape feels honest and unforced. It’s calm, reflective, and quietly meaningful. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 20:52
a morning like this
Kevin Hulme said:
The things that make up everyday life. Well said.
April 18th, 2026 18:47
Kevin Hulme said:
The things that make up everyday life. Well said.
April 18th, 2026 18:47
a morning like this
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, arqios. I enjoyed the read.
April 18th, 2026 15:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, arqios. I enjoyed the read.
April 18th, 2026 15:27
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