Comments received on poems by arqios
influence
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
There was a poet that told me that every poem I’ve ever written before is a culmination of what I write now… is every new poem our best one? This is definitely a great one
April 9th, 2026 09:17
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
There was a poet that told me that every poem I’ve ever written before is a culmination of what I write now… is every new poem our best one? This is definitely a great one
April 9th, 2026 09:17
influence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lands quiet…but it lingers. There’s something about how stripped down it is that makes it hit even harder. Really strong. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lands quiet…but it lingers. There’s something about how stripped down it is that makes it hit even harder. Really strong. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 08:14
influence
sorenbarrett said:
How things fade over time. Even memories and feelings. Entropy always wins. Good one Cryptic
April 9th, 2026 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
How things fade over time. Even memories and feelings. Entropy always wins. Good one Cryptic
April 9th, 2026 06:20
a willing silence
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like part of a dream.
Some nice discriptive Words .
Good one.
April 8th, 2026 19:29
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like part of a dream.
Some nice discriptive Words .
Good one.
April 8th, 2026 19:29
a willing silence
sorenbarrett said:
Love this Cryptic in its personification of the house it seems so personal and human. Nicely written my friend sorry for the delayed responses today and yesterday I have been traveling for the past two days and have had no access to wifi
April 8th, 2026 15:37
sorenbarrett said:
Love this Cryptic in its personification of the house it seems so personal and human. Nicely written my friend sorry for the delayed responses today and yesterday I have been traveling for the past two days and have had no access to wifi
April 8th, 2026 15:37
a willing silence
Neville said:
like I have said a few times before, if I had favourites this would most probably be among them .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
April 8th, 2026 11:40
Neville said:
like I have said a few times before, if I had favourites this would most probably be among them .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
April 8th, 2026 11:40
a willing silence
Doggerel Dave said:
For a period of my life I lived in North Queensland. This for me is an image of a \'Queenslander\' .
Feelings of nostalgia, Rik.
April 8th, 2026 07:15
Doggerel Dave said:
For a period of my life I lived in North Queensland. This for me is an image of a \'Queenslander\' .
Feelings of nostalgia, Rik.
April 8th, 2026 07:15
a willing silence
Katie B. said:
To me it speaks of the process of aging using the house as an analogy. Beautifully done.
Katie
April 8th, 2026 05:55
Katie B. said:
To me it speaks of the process of aging using the house as an analogy. Beautifully done.
Katie
April 8th, 2026 05:55
a willing silence
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
April 8th, 2026 05:47
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
April 8th, 2026 05:47
taking up arms
Katie B. said:
Love \"supplied by rivers of throbbing wounds.\" This is a somber statement of reality.
April 7th, 2026 18:38
Katie B. said:
Love \"supplied by rivers of throbbing wounds.\" This is a somber statement of reality.
April 7th, 2026 18:38
taking up arms
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes it\'s always the Humble people that do the fighting.
The people that start it stay in bunkers.
April 7th, 2026 18:37
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes it\'s always the Humble people that do the fighting.
The people that start it stay in bunkers.
April 7th, 2026 18:37
taking up arms
NafisaSB said:
A truly amazing message that should wake us up to what’s going on around us involving us though we never volunteered
April 7th, 2026 11:20
NafisaSB said:
A truly amazing message that should wake us up to what’s going on around us involving us though we never volunteered
April 7th, 2026 11:20
taking up arms
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really lands…that pull between honour and what’s actually happening, especially in that image of it all collapsing into something brutal. It doesn’t dress war up, it just shows the cost. I appreciate you putting it this plainly. Strong write, my friend..and no worries at all about YouTube…it happens. Is that your YouTube Channel? Love the video and the poem...again, great job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 7th, 2026 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really lands…that pull between honour and what’s actually happening, especially in that image of it all collapsing into something brutal. It doesn’t dress war up, it just shows the cost. I appreciate you putting it this plainly. Strong write, my friend..and no worries at all about YouTube…it happens. Is that your YouTube Channel? Love the video and the poem...again, great job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 7th, 2026 08:47
taking up arms
Thomas W Case said:
Gritty, relentless, and unflinching—this one drags you through the mud of duty and blood.
The voice is mournful yet defiant, holding the raw weight of young lives caught in war’s machinery.
April 7th, 2026 07:52
Thomas W Case said:
Gritty, relentless, and unflinching—this one drags you through the mud of duty and blood.
The voice is mournful yet defiant, holding the raw weight of young lives caught in war’s machinery.
April 7th, 2026 07:52
taking up arms
sorenbarrett said:
Again, I cannot help but have visions of the film Lord of the rings. This certainly applies to much more than that. It seems an exhortation and call to arms that might well apply to any era. Nicely written.Cryptic
April 7th, 2026 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Again, I cannot help but have visions of the film Lord of the rings. This certainly applies to much more than that. It seems an exhortation and call to arms that might well apply to any era. Nicely written.Cryptic
April 7th, 2026 05:31
inroad spring
Goldfinch60 said:
That walk along the path will bring new life to you Rik.
Andy
April 7th, 2026 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That walk along the path will bring new life to you Rik.
Andy
April 7th, 2026 01:14
inroad spring
Kevin Hulme said:
I always get an Image of the Australian Outback in these Poems .
Nice one.
April 6th, 2026 18:54
Kevin Hulme said:
I always get an Image of the Australian Outback in these Poems .
Nice one.
April 6th, 2026 18:54
inroad spring
David Wakeling said:
This has a wonderful poetic feel about it,So enjoyable to read. Especially a second reading is important. I Always feel good after reading your work compadre. A beautiful place to explore the inroad spring is beckoning
April 6th, 2026 17:18
David Wakeling said:
This has a wonderful poetic feel about it,So enjoyable to read. Especially a second reading is important. I Always feel good after reading your work compadre. A beautiful place to explore the inroad spring is beckoning
April 6th, 2026 17:18
inroad spring
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this feels like those moments of moving on without needing closure…just letting what was remain where it is and continuing forward. I know that kind of step. Strong piece, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this feels like those moments of moving on without needing closure…just letting what was remain where it is and continuing forward. I know that kind of step. Strong piece, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:43
inroad spring
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery disguise the metaphor. Home left behind and the world with all its perils and difficulties ahead. Nicely composed it is a fave
April 6th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery disguise the metaphor. Home left behind and the world with all its perils and difficulties ahead. Nicely composed it is a fave
April 6th, 2026 06:48
inroad spring
Doggerel Dave said:
Obviously a dialogue between you and Tristan then. An enjoyable stroll though, none the less...
April 6th, 2026 06:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Obviously a dialogue between you and Tristan then. An enjoyable stroll though, none the less...
April 6th, 2026 06:15
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