Comments received on poems by crypticbard
long night
L. B. Mek said:
congrats! dear Poet
brilliantly succinct, true
poetic brevity
thanks for sharing
August 5th, 2022 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
congrats! dear Poet
brilliantly succinct, true
poetic brevity
thanks for sharing
August 5th, 2022 03:03
tidy groomy trim
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose, because they are always on display, we need to keep them neat and tidy. But they do have a very evolutionary basis. We can do so many things with them; grow them, cut them, buff them, paint them, chew them, scratch with them, peel labels with them. What would we do without them?
August 4th, 2022 14:23
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose, because they are always on display, we need to keep them neat and tidy. But they do have a very evolutionary basis. We can do so many things with them; grow them, cut them, buff them, paint them, chew them, scratch with them, peel labels with them. What would we do without them?
August 4th, 2022 14:23
tidy groomy trim
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
this is deep, dear Poet:
\'cleanliness is next to godliness\'
while soldiers, must
be in uniform to be and act, \'as one\'..
while society\'s first impressions
are dependant on clean shoes and
trimmed nails..
meanwhile our cupboards, just can\'t
get clean!
(deep!
could unpack this all day long..
well done!)
August 4th, 2022 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
this is deep, dear Poet:
\'cleanliness is next to godliness\'
while soldiers, must
be in uniform to be and act, \'as one\'..
while society\'s first impressions
are dependant on clean shoes and
trimmed nails..
meanwhile our cupboards, just can\'t
get clean!
(deep!
could unpack this all day long..
well done!)
August 4th, 2022 03:58
tidy groomy trim
orchidee said:
I\'m glad someone\'s integuments are trim. It\'s all right for some, having trim integuments! I might faint if I didn\'t know what they were. lol.
August 4th, 2022 01:55
orchidee said:
I\'m glad someone\'s integuments are trim. It\'s all right for some, having trim integuments! I might faint if I didn\'t know what they were. lol.
August 4th, 2022 01:55
pact
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Hope me teef don\'t flow away anywhere. I talk some rubbish. lol.
August 2nd, 2022 11:28
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Hope me teef don\'t flow away anywhere. I talk some rubbish. lol.
August 2nd, 2022 11:28
pact
L. B. Mek said:
if you, but
thread
a reminiscing
nod
my way, once
in a while
oh, poetic kin
of mine...
August 2nd, 2022 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
if you, but
thread
a reminiscing
nod
my way, once
in a while
oh, poetic kin
of mine...
August 2nd, 2022 05:16
promise
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m lost in \"dusky swirls of distant pealing thunder\", beautiful imagery, beautiful words!
July 31st, 2022 10:42
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m lost in \"dusky swirls of distant pealing thunder\", beautiful imagery, beautiful words!
July 31st, 2022 10:42
branches of a tree
Bella Shepard said:
I love your shape poem! I see that beautiful tree summer green, with the nest that was home to hatchlings who now come to my feeder. What would we do without their beauty?
July 30th, 2022 13:57
Bella Shepard said:
I love your shape poem! I see that beautiful tree summer green, with the nest that was home to hatchlings who now come to my feeder. What would we do without their beauty?
July 30th, 2022 13:57
branches of a tree
orchidee said:
Good write CB. I saw some pines. No branches on most of them for about 30 feet - maybe more.
July 30th, 2022 01:32
orchidee said:
Good write CB. I saw some pines. No branches on most of them for about 30 feet - maybe more.
July 30th, 2022 01:32
some things we overlook
orchidee said:
I\'m not overlooking this fine write CB.
July 28th, 2022 08:35
orchidee said:
I\'m not overlooking this fine write CB.
July 28th, 2022 08:35
home
Neville said:
yet sadly, home is all too often where the hurt is ........................... Neville
July 28th, 2022 03:19
Neville said:
yet sadly, home is all too often where the hurt is ........................... Neville
July 28th, 2022 03:19
silent glow
Bella Shepard said:
Such beautiful emotion, expressed so beautifully. Simple, true, fav!
July 27th, 2022 09:40
Bella Shepard said:
Such beautiful emotion, expressed so beautifully. Simple, true, fav!
July 27th, 2022 09:40
silent glow
Neville said:
I seriously hope that this little work of poetic art gets all the attention and recognition that it so writefully deserves ............... Neville
July 27th, 2022 09:36
Neville said:
I seriously hope that this little work of poetic art gets all the attention and recognition that it so writefully deserves ............... Neville
July 27th, 2022 09:36
home
L. B. Mek said:
bricks, curated
into a custom fit, home
with tears of laughter and fear
as cement, a mix bag
of our experiences of life..
wonderful metaphor
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 26th, 2022 01:57
L. B. Mek said:
bricks, curated
into a custom fit, home
with tears of laughter and fear
as cement, a mix bag
of our experiences of life..
wonderful metaphor
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 26th, 2022 01:57
Summer Moon
Neville said:
this is so cool crypticbard it would be sheer lunacy to suggest otherwise ..
July 25th, 2022 02:57
Neville said:
this is so cool crypticbard it would be sheer lunacy to suggest otherwise ..
July 25th, 2022 02:57
Summer Moon
Bella Shepard said:
So beautifully written, such a personality you\'ve given this glorious moon. It is my routine to bid her goodnight before I go to bed, and good morning when I step out for my walk. Love the moon, absolutely love this poem, such a fav.
July 20th, 2022 14:59
Bella Shepard said:
So beautifully written, such a personality you\'ve given this glorious moon. It is my routine to bid her goodnight before I go to bed, and good morning when I step out for my walk. Love the moon, absolutely love this poem, such a fav.
July 20th, 2022 14:59
Summer Moon
Teddy.15 said:
I adore the moon, she is in fact magical and you have brought all that magic and beautiful rhyming to this absolutely gorgeous poem, such a pleasure to read.
July 20th, 2022 11:27
Teddy.15 said:
I adore the moon, she is in fact magical and you have brought all that magic and beautiful rhyming to this absolutely gorgeous poem, such a pleasure to read.
July 20th, 2022 11:27
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