Comments received on poems by arqios
statuesque
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very beautiful and seemingly evocative with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy, sweetly rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 30th, 2026 22:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very beautiful and seemingly evocative with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy, sweetly rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 30th, 2026 22:50
statuesque
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the Pygmalion Myth.
A certain fave.
September 30th, 2026 19:45
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the Pygmalion Myth.
A certain fave.
September 30th, 2026 19:45
statuesque
arqios said:
So that didnβt work out at all. Perhaps it was too niche. Oh well π«₯π»ποΈππ»
September 30th, 2026 19:19
arqios said:
So that didnβt work out at all. Perhaps it was too niche. Oh well π«₯π»ποΈππ»
September 30th, 2026 19:19
statuesque
sorenbarrett said:
The myth of Pygmalion so carefully conceived in this poem. King sculpture creating a statue not of marble but of ivory that he fell in love with and Aphrodite turned to life marrying the two. But I see deeper meaning brought out by the latter part of the poem. A person worshiped and adored before marriage becomes common after.
\"Today she is simply
the person beside me,
doing the next thing
side by side.\"
How easily the holy, sacred and worshiped becomes the common. A fave my friend
September 30th, 2026 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
The myth of Pygmalion so carefully conceived in this poem. King sculpture creating a statue not of marble but of ivory that he fell in love with and Aphrodite turned to life marrying the two. But I see deeper meaning brought out by the latter part of the poem. A person worshiped and adored before marriage becomes common after.
\"Today she is simply
the person beside me,
doing the next thing
side by side.\"
How easily the holy, sacred and worshiped becomes the common. A fave my friend
September 30th, 2026 06:49
statuesque
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A charming and calming piece my friend
September 30th, 2026 05:57
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A charming and calming piece my friend
September 30th, 2026 05:57
welcome to canon hall
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I felt this, arqios. A lot of worthwhile work happens outside the rooms where people hand out legitimacy, and sometimes that outside work is where the real life is. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 29th, 2026 20:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I felt this, arqios. A lot of worthwhile work happens outside the rooms where people hand out legitimacy, and sometimes that outside work is where the real life is. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 29th, 2026 20:10
welcome to canon hall
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the undiscovered Voice.
September 29th, 2026 18:22
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the undiscovered Voice.
September 29th, 2026 18:22
welcome to canon hall
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
A very pleasent stroll within and outside the realm. One could hear the whispers. A lovely poem indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 15:34
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
A very pleasent stroll within and outside the realm. One could hear the whispers. A lovely poem indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 15:34
welcome to canon hall
MendedFences27 said:
A museum of poetry. Sounds like a good idea. Enjoyed your poem. Perhaps, those outside will one day be recognized. - Phil A.
September 29th, 2026 12:13
MendedFences27 said:
A museum of poetry. Sounds like a good idea. Enjoyed your poem. Perhaps, those outside will one day be recognized. - Phil A.
September 29th, 2026 12:13
welcome to canon hall
orchidee said:
Erm, is it cannon or canon? I been three hours trying to light this cannon, until someone told m it\'s a canon! lol.
September 29th, 2026 09:46
orchidee said:
Erm, is it cannon or canon? I been three hours trying to light this cannon, until someone told m it\'s a canon! lol.
September 29th, 2026 09:46
welcome to canon hall
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message here that grabs the mind and heart. So many artists that have not followed the beaten path the paved highway neglected during life have found immortality after death in creative work not accepted at their time. Encouraging and nicely presented Cryptic.
September 29th, 2026 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message here that grabs the mind and heart. So many artists that have not followed the beaten path the paved highway neglected during life have found immortality after death in creative work not accepted at their time. Encouraging and nicely presented Cryptic.
September 29th, 2026 06:17
welcome to canon hall
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Theres a certain tranquility here despite the numerous times and people who once walked the floors
September 29th, 2026 05:51
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Theres a certain tranquility here despite the numerous times and people who once walked the floors
September 29th, 2026 05:51
hate me
orchidee said:
Good write A. \'Hate\' in some older Bible versions can mean \'love less\' rather than \'hate\' itself.
September 28th, 2026 09:48
orchidee said:
Good write A. \'Hate\' in some older Bible versions can mean \'love less\' rather than \'hate\' itself.
September 28th, 2026 09:48
hate me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, thereβs something almost prayerful in this without it needing to announce itself as one. I liked that a lot. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 28th, 2026 07:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, thereβs something almost prayerful in this without it needing to announce itself as one. I liked that a lot. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 28th, 2026 07:02
hate me
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful dream from which I too often awake. Nicely written my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful dream from which I too often awake. Nicely written my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:30
hate me
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Sadly some people love to hate while others love peace my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:12
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Sadly some people love to hate while others love peace my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:12
dinner invitation
Kevin Hulme said:
Thoughts on how I feel? Fine Poem as usual.
September 27th, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
Thoughts on how I feel? Fine Poem as usual.
September 27th, 2026 18:43
dinner invitation
Paul Bell said:
Yes, your keyboard is open to suggestion and response.
Sadly the higher beings poets are only open to your response on their masterpieces.
Glad I\'m a peasent. lol
September 27th, 2026 07:16
Paul Bell said:
Yes, your keyboard is open to suggestion and response.
Sadly the higher beings poets are only open to your response on their masterpieces.
Glad I\'m a peasent. lol
September 27th, 2026 07:16
dinner invitation
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
You have put this point so elegantly, the invitation is there for all my friend
September 27th, 2026 07:05
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
You have put this point so elegantly, the invitation is there for all my friend
September 27th, 2026 07:05
dinner invitation
sorenbarrett said:
How poetically put my friend. How does anyone know the thoughts of another without comment made by them. So empty poems read without response. As a species we rely on communication and one way leaves us hanging with no feedback we know not how to respond. I write for myself and as therapy but it is rewarding knowing that I am not alone and that others share the same feelings and thoughts. A lovely write my friend and one well needed in that so small a percentage of those that read respond. Look at the numbers of reads you have and compare them to the number of comments. I have read every poem posted for the last two years on this site and it is almost exclusively the same people that respond. I may soon restrict myself to responding only to those that respond to mine.
September 27th, 2026 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
How poetically put my friend. How does anyone know the thoughts of another without comment made by them. So empty poems read without response. As a species we rely on communication and one way leaves us hanging with no feedback we know not how to respond. I write for myself and as therapy but it is rewarding knowing that I am not alone and that others share the same feelings and thoughts. A lovely write my friend and one well needed in that so small a percentage of those that read respond. Look at the numbers of reads you have and compare them to the number of comments. I have read every poem posted for the last two years on this site and it is almost exclusively the same people that respond. I may soon restrict myself to responding only to those that respond to mine.
September 27th, 2026 06:02
beyond the night
Neville said:
Liked and very much sir arqios .. indeed, the timing was perfect too it having landed on my 45 wedding anniversary πβββββπ
September 27th, 2026 00:56
Neville said:
Liked and very much sir arqios .. indeed, the timing was perfect too it having landed on my 45 wedding anniversary πβββββπ
September 27th, 2026 00:56
beyond the night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this gave me a real sense of completionβ¦not just hope, but fulfillment. I liked sitting with that. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 26th, 2026 22:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this gave me a real sense of completionβ¦not just hope, but fulfillment. I liked sitting with that. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 26th, 2026 22:55
beyond the night
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of Harvest Festival of long ago.
And filled the Church with their Produce.
September 26th, 2026 18:29
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of Harvest Festival of long ago.
And filled the Church with their Produce.
September 26th, 2026 18:29
beyond the night
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
A most beautiful poem in the pastoral shades of harveat time and wedded bliss. Serenity in perpetuity at the table of love. A complete joy to read.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
September 26th, 2026 10:43
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
A most beautiful poem in the pastoral shades of harveat time and wedded bliss. Serenity in perpetuity at the table of love. A complete joy to read.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
September 26th, 2026 10:43
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