Comments received on poems by arqios
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios… this has such a quiet warmth…like something lived in. That subtle shift in the room carries so much…those small, almost unnoticed changes that end up meaning everything. I’ve felt mornings like that, and you brought it through beautifully. Well done, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios… this has such a quiet warmth…like something lived in. That subtle shift in the room carries so much…those small, almost unnoticed changes that end up meaning everything. I’ve felt mornings like that, and you brought it through beautifully. Well done, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:40
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2781 said:
Reminded me of something almost lost, but not completely.
Most lovely, I thought...
April 13th, 2026 07:56
2781 said:
Reminded me of something almost lost, but not completely.
Most lovely, I thought...
April 13th, 2026 07:56
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sorenbarrett said:
What a nice subtle way to tell that slow and gradual are often noticed by slight variations in accompanying things. A gentle and soft poem that speaks of life. Very nice Cryptic a fave
April 13th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice subtle way to tell that slow and gradual are often noticed by slight variations in accompanying things. A gentle and soft poem that speaks of life. Very nice Cryptic a fave
April 13th, 2026 06:30
through the blue
Doggerel Dave said:
Although not your intent, but thanks a bunch anyway, this did evoke fond memories of swims I had in the Tobruk Memorial Baths, Townsville. Ah - memories of youth.
As for your call, further memories of gasbags past and present, avoided where possible, attention diverted when unable.
A good \'un.
April 12th, 2026 15:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Although not your intent, but thanks a bunch anyway, this did evoke fond memories of swims I had in the Tobruk Memorial Baths, Townsville. Ah - memories of youth.
As for your call, further memories of gasbags past and present, avoided where possible, attention diverted when unable.
A good \'un.
April 12th, 2026 15:20
through the blue
orchidee said:
Good write A. Yes, water is rather wet, if I recall correctly! lol.
April 12th, 2026 10:26
orchidee said:
Good write A. Yes, water is rather wet, if I recall correctly! lol.
April 12th, 2026 10:26
through the blue
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the image of the gull dragging the chip packet really caught me. It’s small, almost incidental, but it mirrors the whole piece…a subtle resistance that doesn’t need to announce itself. That detail delivers, along with the whole poem! Great job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 12th, 2026 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the image of the gull dragging the chip packet really caught me. It’s small, almost incidental, but it mirrors the whole piece…a subtle resistance that doesn’t need to announce itself. That detail delivers, along with the whole poem! Great job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 12th, 2026 10:24
through the blue
Katie B. said:
Oh wow Arqios I truly enjoyed this one. I was on a swim team when I was young, and it brought back memories. It all glides and flows. It is steady and vivid. Your work is something to be most proud of. This is a definite FAVE my friend.
April 12th, 2026 07:12
Katie B. said:
Oh wow Arqios I truly enjoyed this one. I was on a swim team when I was young, and it brought back memories. It all glides and flows. It is steady and vivid. Your work is something to be most proud of. This is a definite FAVE my friend.
April 12th, 2026 07:12
through the blue
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem reflects on themes of freedom, self-acceptance, and the rejection of unnecessary guidance.
April 12th, 2026 06:16
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem reflects on themes of freedom, self-acceptance, and the rejection of unnecessary guidance.
April 12th, 2026 06:16
through the blue
sorenbarrett said:
So unique and creative Cryptic this poem speaks the obvious in a most unique manner. In all of these I see metaphor as well. Nicely done my friend a fave
April 12th, 2026 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
So unique and creative Cryptic this poem speaks the obvious in a most unique manner. In all of these I see metaphor as well. Nicely done my friend a fave
April 12th, 2026 05:58
the shark silhouette
Kevin Hulme said:
Reading it, I had an Image of the Loch Ness Monster. Those Grainy Pictures that say nothing. Although the Poem could be about so many things. Nice one.
April 11th, 2026 18:25
Kevin Hulme said:
Reading it, I had an Image of the Loch Ness Monster. Those Grainy Pictures that say nothing. Although the Poem could be about so many things. Nice one.
April 11th, 2026 18:25
the shark silhouette
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this brought me back to those moments where you project meaning onto something that’s really just passing by…thinking it’s a sign, a direction, something to become. I’ve been there. You captured that feeling well, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this brought me back to those moments where you project meaning onto something that’s really just passing by…thinking it’s a sign, a direction, something to become. I’ve been there. You captured that feeling well, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:19
the shark silhouette
Friendship said:
Well done, your poem reflects on the tension between hope and the reality of life’s unpredictability.
April 11th, 2026 09:08
Friendship said:
Well done, your poem reflects on the tension between hope and the reality of life’s unpredictability.
April 11th, 2026 09:08
the shark silhouette
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting shadows in form of sharks appear in all of our lives unseen but present circling fates that may take us from the deep. A lovely metaphor well written Cryptic.
April 11th, 2026 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting shadows in form of sharks appear in all of our lives unseen but present circling fates that may take us from the deep. A lovely metaphor well written Cryptic.
April 11th, 2026 06:29
infirm affectations
Dan Williams said:
Simple yet right on target. \"shut the door on maddening din\" offers hope for relief. Nice.
April 11th, 2026 01:43
Dan Williams said:
Simple yet right on target. \"shut the door on maddening din\" offers hope for relief. Nice.
April 11th, 2026 01:43
infirm affectations
NafisaSB said:
yes, even though it has its benefits, there are many things that make us question its relevance and importance...
April 10th, 2026 23:59
NafisaSB said:
yes, even though it has its benefits, there are many things that make us question its relevance and importance...
April 10th, 2026 23:59
infirm affectations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a precise brutality in this…you blend physical imagery with something more internal without ever naming it outright. The result feels controlled, almost procedural, but underneath it all there’s something unresolved that keeps pressing through. That tension is what gives the piece its staying power. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a precise brutality in this…you blend physical imagery with something more internal without ever naming it outright. The result feels controlled, almost procedural, but underneath it all there’s something unresolved that keeps pressing through. That tension is what gives the piece its staying power. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 09:06
infirm affectations
Friendship said:
well written. Your poem revolves around the themes of pain, healing, and resilience. The imagery of physical injuries and the process of recovery reflects a broader commentary on the struggles and challenges faced in life.
April 10th, 2026 07:43
Friendship said:
well written. Your poem revolves around the themes of pain, healing, and resilience. The imagery of physical injuries and the process of recovery reflects a broader commentary on the struggles and challenges faced in life.
April 10th, 2026 07:43
infirm affectations
sorenbarrett said:
Cures for what ails ya. Disinfect, clean, bandage and plaster. This write Cryptic although health oriented seems to talk of society and development organizationally as well
April 10th, 2026 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Cures for what ails ya. Disinfect, clean, bandage and plaster. This write Cryptic although health oriented seems to talk of society and development organizationally as well
April 10th, 2026 05:14
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