Comments received on poems by arqios
writing on sand
David Wakeling said:
There is the choice.Peace or war.To write our own destiny in sand.This made me think
May 1st, 2026 20:17
David Wakeling said:
There is the choice.Peace or war.To write our own destiny in sand.This made me think
May 1st, 2026 20:17
writing on sand
Kevin Hulme said:
The Voices of the Peaceful are usually drowned out by the Cries of Hateful few.
Good Write.
May 1st, 2026 18:25
Kevin Hulme said:
The Voices of the Peaceful are usually drowned out by the Cries of Hateful few.
Good Write.
May 1st, 2026 18:25
writing on sand
arqios said:
A poorly opener for the first of the month- pinch and a punch 🥊
May 1st, 2026 18:22
arqios said:
A poorly opener for the first of the month- pinch and a punch 🥊
May 1st, 2026 18:22
writing on sand
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic this poem seems to emphasize that transient and non-permanent nature of peace nicely done
May 1st, 2026 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic this poem seems to emphasize that transient and non-permanent nature of peace nicely done
May 1st, 2026 15:08
writing on sand
orchidee said:
Dang it! I been trying to write on sand in this sandstorm. I\'m getting nowhere! lol. That might be some deep insight or metaphor of your poem, but I\'ve not the foggiest idea of what it might be. No change there then for me.
May 1st, 2026 09:21
orchidee said:
Dang it! I been trying to write on sand in this sandstorm. I\'m getting nowhere! lol. That might be some deep insight or metaphor of your poem, but I\'ve not the foggiest idea of what it might be. No change there then for me.
May 1st, 2026 09:21
writing on sand
arqios said:
Thanks for that Fave, Friendship. And so early too🙏🕊️
May 1st, 2026 05:56
arqios said:
Thanks for that Fave, Friendship. And so early too🙏🕊️
May 1st, 2026 05:56
writing on sand
Friendship said:
Well written. My brain is working today . Your poem reflects on the duality of being involved in societal issues, the significance of peace, and the fleeting nature of existence.
May 1st, 2026 05:56
Friendship said:
Well written. My brain is working today . Your poem reflects on the duality of being involved in societal issues, the significance of peace, and the fleeting nature of existence.
May 1st, 2026 05:56
misreadings
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not going to think about it - I\'ll ask:
On this other site, you were locked out by management, right? Here, management are, I think very benign. I personally have only been chastised once, my comment only removed which in retrospect was justified. They can and have removed the occasional \'poet\'. However I could not see you coming anywhere near that eventuality.
May 1st, 2026 00:48
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not going to think about it - I\'ll ask:
On this other site, you were locked out by management, right? Here, management are, I think very benign. I personally have only been chastised once, my comment only removed which in retrospect was justified. They can and have removed the occasional \'poet\'. However I could not see you coming anywhere near that eventuality.
May 1st, 2026 00:48
misreadings
David Wakeling said:
A very important reflection in a poetic mirror. An enjoyable and educational work.Well done
April 30th, 2026 19:21
David Wakeling said:
A very important reflection in a poetic mirror. An enjoyable and educational work.Well done
April 30th, 2026 19:21
misreadings
Kevin Hulme said:
I was on another Poetry Website before this , and my account was \'Disabled\'. No reason given. Although MPS I find is Miles better.
April 30th, 2026 18:34
Kevin Hulme said:
I was on another Poetry Website before this , and my account was \'Disabled\'. No reason given. Although MPS I find is Miles better.
April 30th, 2026 18:34
misreadings
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic I take that some people read way too much into things and I may do this as well but I think the secret is to realize that one\'s interpretation of view is not the only valid one and not impose meaning that was never meant. Probably another misinterpretation but that is what I see.
April 30th, 2026 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic I take that some people read way too much into things and I may do this as well but I think the secret is to realize that one\'s interpretation of view is not the only valid one and not impose meaning that was never meant. Probably another misinterpretation but that is what I see.
April 30th, 2026 05:45
curtain call
Neville said:
Excellent ++ & I have no hesitation in assigning my most coveted ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
April 30th, 2026 00:09
Neville said:
Excellent ++ & I have no hesitation in assigning my most coveted ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
April 30th, 2026 00:09
curtain call
David Wakeling said:
For me this can go either of two ways. The actors namely the people are liars and really not concerned with truth or it is a metaphor for life. Life is filled with mendacity. Lies upon lies. This is a great poem because it creates a great image from the outset. Enjoyed reading
April 30th, 2026 00:02
David Wakeling said:
For me this can go either of two ways. The actors namely the people are liars and really not concerned with truth or it is a metaphor for life. Life is filled with mendacity. Lies upon lies. This is a great poem because it creates a great image from the outset. Enjoyed reading
April 30th, 2026 00:02
curtain call
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, that image of a space left imperfect…still bearing the marks of use…really stayed with me. It gives the whole piece a lived-in truth that feels undeniable. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 23:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, that image of a space left imperfect…still bearing the marks of use…really stayed with me. It gives the whole piece a lived-in truth that feels undeniable. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 23:26
curtain call
Poetic Licence said:
The cast of the world and how we all portray ourselves to the world, either what we think they want to see or what we are prepared to show, but as with all things, the truth is rarely forthcoming and remains hidden behind the masks and the layers we build, pleasure to read
April 29th, 2026 22:06
Poetic Licence said:
The cast of the world and how we all portray ourselves to the world, either what we think they want to see or what we are prepared to show, but as with all things, the truth is rarely forthcoming and remains hidden behind the masks and the layers we build, pleasure to read
April 29th, 2026 22:06
slope
Poetic Licence said:
Very clever and deep write, learning to understand from our behaviour and mistakes, in order to prevent us heading onto that slippery slope. Something that would benifit us all if we all learnt to do that, pleasure to read
April 29th, 2026 21:50
Poetic Licence said:
Very clever and deep write, learning to understand from our behaviour and mistakes, in order to prevent us heading onto that slippery slope. Something that would benifit us all if we all learnt to do that, pleasure to read
April 29th, 2026 21:50
curtain call
Friendship said:
Excellent job, your poem addresses the act of revealing one\'s true self while navigating social expectations. It portrays a scene where people come together, not in elaborate costumes, but in the everyday layers of their identities, highlighting how they present themselves to the world.
April 29th, 2026 07:09
Friendship said:
Excellent job, your poem addresses the act of revealing one\'s true self while navigating social expectations. It portrays a scene where people come together, not in elaborate costumes, but in the everyday layers of their identities, highlighting how they present themselves to the world.
April 29th, 2026 07:09
curtain call
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic your work has grown deeper. To me this is the description of art revealed the common made viewable truth or not it is revealed different to each viewers eye. A fave my friend
April 29th, 2026 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic your work has grown deeper. To me this is the description of art revealed the common made viewable truth or not it is revealed different to each viewers eye. A fave my friend
April 29th, 2026 05:30
curtain call
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Wow this is one of my favorite poems of the year.. great visuals
April 29th, 2026 05:24
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Wow this is one of my favorite poems of the year.. great visuals
April 29th, 2026 05:24
slope
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can see things so further in life than is visible to the naked eye Rik.
Andy
April 29th, 2026 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can see things so further in life than is visible to the naked eye Rik.
Andy
April 29th, 2026 01:15
slope
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s like Never judging anything by it\'s appearance. A deep Poem that can apply to anything.
Good Write.
April 28th, 2026 18:56
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s like Never judging anything by it\'s appearance. A deep Poem that can apply to anything.
Good Write.
April 28th, 2026 18:56
slope
orchidee said:
A good geological write A - not that I\'ve the foggiest idea of anything cryptic! lol.
April 28th, 2026 08:49
orchidee said:
A good geological write A - not that I\'ve the foggiest idea of anything cryptic! lol.
April 28th, 2026 08:49
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