Comments received on poems by arqios



cooler months 2026
Salvia.S said:

You made the season feel like permission. Nicely written!

May 6th, 2026 08:58

cooler months 2026
orchidee said:

Well, as one of us is \'upside down\' (lol) the air warms here in the UK just now (we hope!) as you have our equivalent of November maybe.

May 6th, 2026 08:36

cooler months 2026
Katie B. said:

Beautiful, calm, inviting. Excellent piece.

May 6th, 2026 08:28

cooler months 2026
Tristan Robert Lange said:

“A room with enough light to see by, / and enough quiet to stay as long as you like” is such a lovely passage, Rik. It perfectly captures the emotional atmosphere the poem creates. It also reminds me that as we in the Northern Hemisphere prepare for summer here, SAD is kicking in elsewhere. Keeping that part of it in my prayers, even as I breathe a sigh of relief. Wonderful piece, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

May 6th, 2026 08:04

cooler months 2026
Friendship said:

Lovely written, your poem reflects on the changing seasons, specifically the shift towards cooler days and longer evenings, which prompts a slower, more contemplative state of being.

May 6th, 2026 07:12

cooler months 2026
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic invitation to a more comfortable place one that has cooled and offers peace and rest. Lovely my friend

May 6th, 2026 06:21

cooler months 2026
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

great images my friend

May 6th, 2026 05:49

meme-ma
Paul Bell said:

Once, speaks volumes.
The scent lingers, maybe more than the memory.


May 6th, 2026 05:08

meme-ma
Goldfinch60 said:

Smells can trigger so many memories Rik.

Andy

May 6th, 2026 01:51

meme-ma
Kevin Hulme said:

As certain Aromas can bring thoughts of Childhood or other events in your life.
Well written.

May 5th, 2026 18:40

meme-ma
Salvia.S said:

So much love in so few lines. Nicely written!

May 5th, 2026 12:38

meme-ma
Tristan Robert Lange said:

arqios, this really moved me…the way it holds onto presence through something as subtle as scent. It feels intimate and lasting…like memory woven into both space and self. It lingers in the best way. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

May 5th, 2026 10:29

meme-ma
orchidee said:

Good write A.

May 5th, 2026 09:08

meme-ma
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

much enjoyed my friend

May 5th, 2026 09:00

meme-ma
Thomas W Case said:

This lands like memory that never fully left the room, still hanging in the air even after the moment has gone.
There’s a quiet, aching beauty in how it lingers—minimal words carrying a deep, persistent echo.

May 5th, 2026 07:45

meme-ma
David Wakeling said:

A beautiful piece short and sweet.Enjoyable

May 5th, 2026 06:52

meme-ma
sorenbarrett said:

Funny how much more keen the senses when emotion is aroused. Nicely written Cryptic

May 5th, 2026 06:39

meme-ma
Friendship said:

Lovely write

May 5th, 2026 05:29

the fade
Salvia.S said:

Absolutely loved it ❤️ Beautifully written!!!!

May 5th, 2026 02:30

the fade
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever senryu Rik.

Andy

May 5th, 2026 01:24

where your hand was
NafisaSB said:

the warmth will remain where the bond is strong, even when the person has left....short and so beautiful

May 4th, 2026 23:33

the fade
Kevin Hulme said:

The Cozy Duvet Cover of Happy Memories.
A nice little Write.

May 4th, 2026 18:36

the fade
David Wakeling said:

A sad view of the human condition here amigo.A guess we have to battle through

May 4th, 2026 17:53

the fade
Cerise456 said:

Beautifully written

May 4th, 2026 14:52

the fade
Tristan Robert Lange said:

arqios, this is simple but it lands deep…love without a shared language, and then only memory left holding it together. Quiet, but it carries. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

May 4th, 2026 12:43

the fade
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

nice piece that speaks freely

May 4th, 2026 10:34

the fade
orchidee said:

Good write A.

May 4th, 2026 10:30

the fade
Friendship said:

Nicely done

May 4th, 2026 07:40

the fade
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and creative Cryptic this senryu speaks for itself

May 4th, 2026 06:58

where your hand was
Salvia.S said:

Warmth fading faster than the rain did. That’s the whole story. Nicely written

May 4th, 2026 05:33

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