Comments received on poems by arqios
the fade
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this is simple but it lands deep…love without a shared language, and then only memory left holding it together. Quiet, but it carries. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this is simple but it lands deep…love without a shared language, and then only memory left holding it together. Quiet, but it carries. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:43
the fade
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and creative Cryptic this senryu speaks for itself
May 4th, 2026 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and creative Cryptic this senryu speaks for itself
May 4th, 2026 06:58
where your hand was
Salvia.S said:
Warmth fading faster than the rain did. That’s the whole story. Nicely written
May 4th, 2026 05:33
Salvia.S said:
Warmth fading faster than the rain did. That’s the whole story. Nicely written
May 4th, 2026 05:33
where your hand was
Goldfinch60 said:
That memory will never be forgotten Rik.
Andy
May 4th, 2026 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
That memory will never be forgotten Rik.
Andy
May 4th, 2026 01:55
where your hand was
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this is beautifully restrained… a fleeting moment that still carries presence and memory. It’s quiet, but it lands deep. It stays with you. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this is beautifully restrained… a fleeting moment that still carries presence and memory. It’s quiet, but it lands deep. It stays with you. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:53
where your hand was
Kevin Hulme said:
Quite a lot in a few Words.
Sometimes a few words speak Volumes.
May 3rd, 2026 10:33
Kevin Hulme said:
Quite a lot in a few Words.
Sometimes a few words speak Volumes.
May 3rd, 2026 10:33
where your hand was
Paul Bell said:
Even if you reverse this it still glows.
Clever write.
May 3rd, 2026 08:18
Paul Bell said:
Even if you reverse this it still glows.
Clever write.
May 3rd, 2026 08:18
where your hand was
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to proximity in time and space as well as emotional warmth. A lovely write my friend as short as the passing warmth
May 3rd, 2026 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to proximity in time and space as well as emotional warmth. A lovely write my friend as short as the passing warmth
May 3rd, 2026 06:11
where your hand was
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Way to use spacing to let it soak.. talented as always
May 3rd, 2026 05:39
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Way to use spacing to let it soak.. talented as always
May 3rd, 2026 05:39
poetical query
Kevin Hulme said:
I think Poets look at life though a different Microscope than other people.
I love the Work of Petrarch. And when you mentioned Boccaccio - who is new to me- I had to look up. Reading his Work now. Live and Learn.
May 2nd, 2026 19:30
Kevin Hulme said:
I think Poets look at life though a different Microscope than other people.
I love the Work of Petrarch. And when you mentioned Boccaccio - who is new to me- I had to look up. Reading his Work now. Live and Learn.
May 2nd, 2026 19:30
poetical query
David Wakeling said:
Some great and fundamental questions.The poets are first and last to create the spiritual.Made me think
May 2nd, 2026 18:48
David Wakeling said:
Some great and fundamental questions.The poets are first and last to create the spiritual.Made me think
May 2nd, 2026 18:48
poetical query
sorenbarrett said:
My friend you took the very topic that has held me for the past few weeks. At the risk of boring you I will tell you for some time I have been intrigued with what makes a good poem. On another site they offer AI suggestions and a rating scale of overall rating, poetic similarity and images used. I took some of the most famous poems from Dylan Thomas, Robert Frost, and Shakespeare and found they got ratings of between four and five out of ten yet they hold the public imagination and are lauded. I have taken others that have gotten a ten out of ten and they are unknown. A good poem must be read first to be good or it is just that tree that fell in the forest and the question becomes did it make a noise when there was no one there to hear it. I have written poems with one intent and had them interpretated in different ways that people said was inspiring. I question was it me or they that made it inspiriting. I think that it takes a combination of the writer and reader and the readiness of the one interpreting the piece. Sorry for the rant my friend. My most popular poems on this site and read the most frequently are not the ones that I would have thought or chosen myself.
May 2nd, 2026 12:22
sorenbarrett said:
My friend you took the very topic that has held me for the past few weeks. At the risk of boring you I will tell you for some time I have been intrigued with what makes a good poem. On another site they offer AI suggestions and a rating scale of overall rating, poetic similarity and images used. I took some of the most famous poems from Dylan Thomas, Robert Frost, and Shakespeare and found they got ratings of between four and five out of ten yet they hold the public imagination and are lauded. I have taken others that have gotten a ten out of ten and they are unknown. A good poem must be read first to be good or it is just that tree that fell in the forest and the question becomes did it make a noise when there was no one there to hear it. I have written poems with one intent and had them interpretated in different ways that people said was inspiring. I question was it me or they that made it inspiriting. I think that it takes a combination of the writer and reader and the readiness of the one interpreting the piece. Sorry for the rant my friend. My most popular poems on this site and read the most frequently are not the ones that I would have thought or chosen myself.
May 2nd, 2026 12:22
poetical query
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, that idea of an “inner pyre” is what stays with me…that quiet burn beneath the lines. It gives the whole piece its pulse. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, that idea of an “inner pyre” is what stays with me…that quiet burn beneath the lines. It gives the whole piece its pulse. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:17
poetical query
Mutley Ravishes said:
I believe (haha!) it does. Why? I contribute rhymes to another site (concerned with \"addiction\"). It`s like talking to a brick wall (for the most part).
Great questions, Arqios.
May 2nd, 2026 08:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
I believe (haha!) it does. Why? I contribute rhymes to another site (concerned with \"addiction\"). It`s like talking to a brick wall (for the most part).
Great questions, Arqios.
May 2nd, 2026 08:22
poetical query
Katie B. said:
In some ways it does take a poet to know a poet. Well written.
May 2nd, 2026 07:53
Katie B. said:
In some ways it does take a poet to know a poet. Well written.
May 2nd, 2026 07:53
poetical query
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem revolves around the nature of poetry and its ability to evoke emotion and reflection in both the poet and the reader.
May 2nd, 2026 06:49
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem revolves around the nature of poetry and its ability to evoke emotion and reflection in both the poet and the reader.
May 2nd, 2026 06:49
writing on sand
David Wakeling said:
There is the choice.Peace or war.To write our own destiny in sand.This made me think
May 1st, 2026 20:17
David Wakeling said:
There is the choice.Peace or war.To write our own destiny in sand.This made me think
May 1st, 2026 20:17
writing on sand
Kevin Hulme said:
The Voices of the Peaceful are usually drowned out by the Cries of Hateful few.
Good Write.
May 1st, 2026 18:25
Kevin Hulme said:
The Voices of the Peaceful are usually drowned out by the Cries of Hateful few.
Good Write.
May 1st, 2026 18:25
writing on sand
arqios said:
A poorly opener for the first of the month- pinch and a punch 🥊
May 1st, 2026 18:22
arqios said:
A poorly opener for the first of the month- pinch and a punch 🥊
May 1st, 2026 18:22
writing on sand
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic this poem seems to emphasize that transient and non-permanent nature of peace nicely done
May 1st, 2026 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic this poem seems to emphasize that transient and non-permanent nature of peace nicely done
May 1st, 2026 15:08
writing on sand
orchidee said:
Dang it! I been trying to write on sand in this sandstorm. I\'m getting nowhere! lol. That might be some deep insight or metaphor of your poem, but I\'ve not the foggiest idea of what it might be. No change there then for me.
May 1st, 2026 09:21
orchidee said:
Dang it! I been trying to write on sand in this sandstorm. I\'m getting nowhere! lol. That might be some deep insight or metaphor of your poem, but I\'ve not the foggiest idea of what it might be. No change there then for me.
May 1st, 2026 09:21
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