Comments received on poems by arqios
recross
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this speaks to me. There have been people whose paths diverged from mine not because anyone was wrong, but because life simply carried us in different directions. The poem captures that bittersweet acceptance beautifully. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this speaks to me. There have been people whose paths diverged from mine not because anyone was wrong, but because life simply carried us in different directions. The poem captures that bittersweet acceptance beautifully. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:06
recross
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet maturity in this—feeling the ache, but still honoring the necessity of distance.
Feels like you’re holding both truths at once… loss in one hand, acceptance in the other.
June 7th, 2026 06:51
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet maturity in this—feeling the ache, but still honoring the necessity of distance.
Feels like you’re holding both truths at once… loss in one hand, acceptance in the other.
June 7th, 2026 06:51
recross
sorenbarrett said:
Well thought out this poem presents human relationships as electrical in nature, at times needing insulation from one another and although the poem seems to look forward to future crossings I see it as leading sparks (be they good or bad) and a possible short in the system. Nicely done my friend and a fave
June 7th, 2026 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
Well thought out this poem presents human relationships as electrical in nature, at times needing insulation from one another and although the poem seems to look forward to future crossings I see it as leading sparks (be they good or bad) and a possible short in the system. Nicely done my friend and a fave
June 7th, 2026 05:49
the baron declares
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of the \'Python\' Sketch where a Man Claimed to have written all of Shakespeare\'s Plays . And his Wife the Sonnets. A very Surreal Poem. Enjoyed.
June 6th, 2026 19:15
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of the \'Python\' Sketch where a Man Claimed to have written all of Shakespeare\'s Plays . And his Wife the Sonnets. A very Surreal Poem. Enjoyed.
June 6th, 2026 19:15
the baron declares
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m here again, unless a blip cuts me off again. Good write A.
June 6th, 2026 11:22
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m here again, unless a blip cuts me off again. Good write A.
June 6th, 2026 11:22
the price of looking
orchidee said:
It\'s not showing recent poems on here - a blip? You having trouble posting too?
June 6th, 2026 10:59
orchidee said:
It\'s not showing recent poems on here - a blip? You having trouble posting too?
June 6th, 2026 10:59
the baron declares
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really made me smile. The poem captures that wonderful spirit of tall tales where every obstacle becomes an epic challenge and every trivial victory becomes a legendary feat. I had a great time with this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really made me smile. The poem captures that wonderful spirit of tall tales where every obstacle becomes an epic challenge and every trivial victory becomes a legendary feat. I had a great time with this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:31
the baron declares
Katie B. said:
Clever, entertaining tale. A most enjoyable read my friend.
June 6th, 2026 06:32
Katie B. said:
Clever, entertaining tale. A most enjoyable read my friend.
June 6th, 2026 06:32
the baron declares
sorenbarrett said:
Like the memory and story with some word play. Grueling was a great one reminiscent of gruel that goes well with the table. The fantastic exploits beyond belief are filed away as the exaggerations we all experience from fishermen to all that tell us of there exploits with poetic license. Great fun my friend and another fave
June 6th, 2026 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Like the memory and story with some word play. Grueling was a great one reminiscent of gruel that goes well with the table. The fantastic exploits beyond belief are filed away as the exaggerations we all experience from fishermen to all that tell us of there exploits with poetic license. Great fun my friend and another fave
June 6th, 2026 05:58
let the shadows drift
Mutley Ravishes said:
Daring to dream, and then working (with a lot of help from \"someone\"!) to see it materialize is a trip and a half, isn`t it? I`ve found all the \"seven sins\" are called in to play their parts in this work. Those \"parts\" being (necessary) opposition to the materialization of the dreams! What do you think?
Great write, Arqios.
June 6th, 2026 00:17
Mutley Ravishes said:
Daring to dream, and then working (with a lot of help from \"someone\"!) to see it materialize is a trip and a half, isn`t it? I`ve found all the \"seven sins\" are called in to play their parts in this work. Those \"parts\" being (necessary) opposition to the materialization of the dreams! What do you think?
Great write, Arqios.
June 6th, 2026 00:17
let the shadows drift
Kevin Hulme said:
I get the feeling this is something that\'s Sustains us through the Ages . Hope maybe.
June 5th, 2026 19:44
Kevin Hulme said:
I get the feeling this is something that\'s Sustains us through the Ages . Hope maybe.
June 5th, 2026 19:44
10-4 coded shouts
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t think I ever owned a proper kite. Twigs and paper, string and wind was all you needed.
Then they invented girls and the world changed forever.
June 5th, 2026 10:24
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t think I ever owned a proper kite. Twigs and paper, string and wind was all you needed.
Then they invented girls and the world changed forever.
June 5th, 2026 10:24
let the shadows drift
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good advice well written
June 5th, 2026 07:51
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good advice well written
June 5th, 2026 07:51
let the shadows drift
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I found myself thinking about ideas, communities, and even people while reading this. Things can be forgotten, overlooked, or tested, yet somehow persist because others continue to carry them forward. I really enjoyed that aspect of the poem. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I found myself thinking about ideas, communities, and even people while reading this. Things can be forgotten, overlooked, or tested, yet somehow persist because others continue to carry them forward. I really enjoyed that aspect of the poem. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:31
let the shadows drift
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about human aspiration.Wanting more that Life can give.And so let the shadows drift because in the end you make your own destiny.I could br wrong here but that\'s life.
June 5th, 2026 05:35
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about human aspiration.Wanting more that Life can give.And so let the shadows drift because in the end you make your own destiny.I could br wrong here but that\'s life.
June 5th, 2026 05:35
let the shadows drift
sorenbarrett said:
Ideals and idols come and go just as shadows pass but one is always left with oneself. Let that light shine and cast its own shadows. Well written my friend
June 5th, 2026 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Ideals and idols come and go just as shadows pass but one is always left with oneself. Let that light shine and cast its own shadows. Well written my friend
June 5th, 2026 05:30
10-4 coded shouts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this took me right back to that strange season of life where everything feels urgent and alive. Friends become entire worlds, every day feels important, and you are constantly reaching toward something just beyond your grasp. This resonated with me. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this took me right back to that strange season of life where everything feels urgent and alive. Friends become entire worlds, every day feels important, and you are constantly reaching toward something just beyond your grasp. This resonated with me. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:11
the price of looking
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really moved me. I love how the poem refuses to frame love purely as suffering or sacrifice. Instead, it embraces the cost willingly. There is tenderness and devotion here, but also a quiet acceptance that beauty is rarely free. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really moved me. I love how the poem refuses to frame love purely as suffering or sacrifice. Instead, it embraces the cost willingly. There is tenderness and devotion here, but also a quiet acceptance that beauty is rarely free. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:11
10-4 coded shouts
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
deep write my friend, much enjoyed
June 4th, 2026 06:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
deep write my friend, much enjoyed
June 4th, 2026 06:53
10-4 coded shouts
sorenbarrett said:
This one seemed to me Cryptic a series of connected snapshots of not only action but emotion and something beyond. There seems a theme of connection and the whole poem is filled with excitement and urgency. Lovely my friend
June 4th, 2026 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
This one seemed to me Cryptic a series of connected snapshots of not only action but emotion and something beyond. There seems a theme of connection and the whole poem is filled with excitement and urgency. Lovely my friend
June 4th, 2026 06:50
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