Comments received on poems by arqios
The Treaty of Scatterings
Elaine P. said:
arqios,
I\'m not a cat person, but I loved your poem.
Your friend,
Elaine
January 30th, 2026 17:35
Elaine P. said:
arqios,
I\'m not a cat person, but I loved your poem.
Your friend,
Elaine
January 30th, 2026 17:35
The Treaty of Scatterings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this is playful world-building with a beating heart. The language is vivid, the humor precise, and beneath it all is a gentle meditation on humility and belonging. Ending in purring feels exactly right. A wonderful piece, dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 30th, 2026 10:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this is playful world-building with a beating heart. The language is vivid, the humor precise, and beneath it all is a gentle meditation on humility and belonging. Ending in purring feels exactly right. A wonderful piece, dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 30th, 2026 10:04
The Treaty of Scatterings
orchidee said:
Good write A. Ooh, combining the familiar with the metaphorical. So that means - doubt if I will understand any crypticness in it! lol.
January 30th, 2026 08:54
orchidee said:
Good write A. Ooh, combining the familiar with the metaphorical. So that means - doubt if I will understand any crypticness in it! lol.
January 30th, 2026 08:54
The Treaty of Scatterings
sorenbarrett said:
Such a marvelous poem Cryptic that combines the familiar with the metaphorical. Cats personified and even symbolic in a most figurative manner. The power struggle, politics, ownership, territory and servitude all in one. I have often thought my animals smarter than me have me provide them shelter, food, water, warmth and coolness and on top of it all think I\'m in control when they have me trained. It is I that takes them out for a walk entertains their whims and fancies all for a few gestures on their part and even keeps their environment clean. For what a purr a wag of the tail. It is the same for those that govern or are governed in this world or country we call our own.
January 30th, 2026 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
Such a marvelous poem Cryptic that combines the familiar with the metaphorical. Cats personified and even symbolic in a most figurative manner. The power struggle, politics, ownership, territory and servitude all in one. I have often thought my animals smarter than me have me provide them shelter, food, water, warmth and coolness and on top of it all think I\'m in control when they have me trained. It is I that takes them out for a walk entertains their whims and fancies all for a few gestures on their part and even keeps their environment clean. For what a purr a wag of the tail. It is the same for those that govern or are governed in this world or country we call our own.
January 30th, 2026 07:01
be still
Paul Bell said:
Some go through their life being privileged, some get found out.
One thing is for certain, they all go the same way, even if the headstone is bigger.,
January 29th, 2026 12:33
Paul Bell said:
Some go through their life being privileged, some get found out.
One thing is for certain, they all go the same way, even if the headstone is bigger.,
January 29th, 2026 12:33
be still
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is quiet wisdom shaped by impact. From hiding and deflection to the acceptance of being simply human, the poem never postures. It just bears witness…and that stillness at the end feels like survival, not surrender. Strong work, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 29th, 2026 11:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is quiet wisdom shaped by impact. From hiding and deflection to the acceptance of being simply human, the poem never postures. It just bears witness…and that stillness at the end feels like survival, not surrender. Strong work, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 29th, 2026 11:06
be still
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the themes of identity, vulnerability, and the universal struggle for self-acceptance. It reflects on the experience of feeling hidden or unrecognized in a world that often overlooks individual struggles and emotions.
January 29th, 2026 10:46
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the themes of identity, vulnerability, and the universal struggle for self-acceptance. It reflects on the experience of feeling hidden or unrecognized in a world that often overlooks individual struggles and emotions.
January 29th, 2026 10:46
be still
sorenbarrett said:
A somber write my friend is has a lonely feel and seems painted in sepia and grey. From gay colors it fades into dim reminders that one is worth no more than any other and we are all grains of sand on a large beach. Very nice Cryptic and a fave
January 29th, 2026 10:04
sorenbarrett said:
A somber write my friend is has a lonely feel and seems painted in sepia and grey. From gay colors it fades into dim reminders that one is worth no more than any other and we are all grains of sand on a large beach. Very nice Cryptic and a fave
January 29th, 2026 10:04
a celestial journey
Goldfinch60 said:
Those stars are holes i heaven\'s floor Rik.
Andy
January 29th, 2026 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Those stars are holes i heaven\'s floor Rik.
Andy
January 29th, 2026 02:47
a celestial journey
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That image of stars as ancient runes really stays with me. It frames the cosmos as something read slowly, not conquered. Mystery here isn’t a puzzle…it’s a posture. Beautifully thought out and written, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 28th, 2026 10:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That image of stars as ancient runes really stays with me. It frames the cosmos as something read slowly, not conquered. Mystery here isn’t a puzzle…it’s a posture. Beautifully thought out and written, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 28th, 2026 10:59
a celestial journey
orchidee said:
Good write A. I never knew ya lived in Wales? heehee. Bonjour to ya - a Welsh greeting there, yes?! lol.
January 28th, 2026 10:56
orchidee said:
Good write A. I never knew ya lived in Wales? heehee. Bonjour to ya - a Welsh greeting there, yes?! lol.
January 28th, 2026 10:56
a celestial journey
Friendship said:
Nicely worded. Your poem inspires awe and reflection about the universe and our connection to it, encouraging readers to find meaning and solace in the celestial world.
January 28th, 2026 08:08
Friendship said:
Nicely worded. Your poem inspires awe and reflection about the universe and our connection to it, encouraging readers to find meaning and solace in the celestial world.
January 28th, 2026 08:08
a celestial journey
Michael Edwards said:
A fine read even to an old sceptic like me - beautifully worded.
January 28th, 2026 07:42
Michael Edwards said:
A fine read even to an old sceptic like me - beautifully worded.
January 28th, 2026 07:42
a celestial journey
sorenbarrett said:
I love the introduction of Welsh words in this poem. It gives it a special feel for its meaning and the runes and stars that are ancient view long lost to men of today residing only in vague feelings that come from a distant blood. Very nice Cryptic
January 28th, 2026 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
I love the introduction of Welsh words in this poem. It gives it a special feel for its meaning and the runes and stars that are ancient view long lost to men of today residing only in vague feelings that come from a distant blood. Very nice Cryptic
January 28th, 2026 05:25
the plunge
Goldfinch60 said:
May that will to keep our life going never stop Rik.
Andy
January 28th, 2026 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
May that will to keep our life going never stop Rik.
Andy
January 28th, 2026 02:42
winter palette
Dan Williams said:
So nice, ad timely. Tree shadows sketch silver, indeed.
January 28th, 2026 01:02
Dan Williams said:
So nice, ad timely. Tree shadows sketch silver, indeed.
January 28th, 2026 01:02
at first light
NafisaSB said:
i like the positivity and calm this poem conveys...well done...
January 28th, 2026 00:38
NafisaSB said:
i like the positivity and calm this poem conveys...well done...
January 28th, 2026 00:38
the plunge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this is a thoughtful meditation on making meaning with limited tools. Form, terrain, and signal all work together here, shaping what can exist next. It’s restrained, intelligent, and quietly hopeful. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 27th, 2026 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this is a thoughtful meditation on making meaning with limited tools. Form, terrain, and signal all work together here, shaping what can exist next. It’s restrained, intelligent, and quietly hopeful. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 27th, 2026 09:06
the plunge
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept Cryptic I often trip over commas left laying around and once in a while step in muddy pools of homophones stubbing my toe on misspellings. I have plenty of scraps but my buildings are often set on poor footings and roofs leak. Nicely done my friend
January 27th, 2026 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept Cryptic I often trip over commas left laying around and once in a while step in muddy pools of homophones stubbing my toe on misspellings. I have plenty of scraps but my buildings are often set on poor footings and roofs leak. Nicely done my friend
January 27th, 2026 05:49
Are Ya Done!?
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Rik, nowadays you barely see scabs on children\'s knees as we did in our childhood times.
Andy
January 27th, 2026 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Rik, nowadays you barely see scabs on children\'s knees as we did in our childhood times.
Andy
January 27th, 2026 02:27
Are Ya Done!?
Dan Williams said:
\"as if the sound itself could clean a wound\' sets a wonderful tone here, Then \"inventing danger\" and \"a kind of sunset souvenir\" add color and character. Nicely done.
January 27th, 2026 01:23
Dan Williams said:
\"as if the sound itself could clean a wound\' sets a wonderful tone here, Then \"inventing danger\" and \"a kind of sunset souvenir\" add color and character. Nicely done.
January 27th, 2026 01:23
Are Ya Done!?
Friendship said:
Your poem brought back my childhood experiences of playing outside, getting hurt, and the ritual of applying iodine to wounds. It reflects on the physical and emotional marks left by these experiences, portraying a sense of nostalgia and the fleeting nature of childhood.
January 26th, 2026 16:08
Friendship said:
Your poem brought back my childhood experiences of playing outside, getting hurt, and the ritual of applying iodine to wounds. It reflects on the physical and emotional marks left by these experiences, portraying a sense of nostalgia and the fleeting nature of childhood.
January 26th, 2026 16:08
Are Ya Done!?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this took me straight back. The ritual of injury and reassurance, the half-brave protest, the quiet tenderness underneath it all…it feels universal in the best way. It stirred something familiar and gentle. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 26th, 2026 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this took me straight back. The ritual of injury and reassurance, the half-brave protest, the quiet tenderness underneath it all…it feels universal in the best way. It stirred something familiar and gentle. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 26th, 2026 09:07
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