Comments received on poems by arqios
curtain call
Friendship said:
Excellent job, your poem addresses the act of revealing one\'s true self while navigating social expectations. It portrays a scene where people come together, not in elaborate costumes, but in the everyday layers of their identities, highlighting how they present themselves to the world.
April 29th, 2026 07:09
Friendship said:
Excellent job, your poem addresses the act of revealing one\'s true self while navigating social expectations. It portrays a scene where people come together, not in elaborate costumes, but in the everyday layers of their identities, highlighting how they present themselves to the world.
April 29th, 2026 07:09
curtain call
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic your work has grown deeper. To me this is the description of art revealed the common made viewable truth or not it is revealed different to each viewers eye. A fave my friend
April 29th, 2026 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic your work has grown deeper. To me this is the description of art revealed the common made viewable truth or not it is revealed different to each viewers eye. A fave my friend
April 29th, 2026 05:30
curtain call
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Wow this is one of my favorite poems of the year.. great visuals
April 29th, 2026 05:24
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Wow this is one of my favorite poems of the year.. great visuals
April 29th, 2026 05:24
slope
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can see things so further in life than is visible to the naked eye Rik.
Andy
April 29th, 2026 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can see things so further in life than is visible to the naked eye Rik.
Andy
April 29th, 2026 01:15
slope
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s like Never judging anything by it\'s appearance. A deep Poem that can apply to anything.
Good Write.
April 28th, 2026 18:56
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s like Never judging anything by it\'s appearance. A deep Poem that can apply to anything.
Good Write.
April 28th, 2026 18:56
slope
orchidee said:
A good geological write A - not that I\'ve the foggiest idea of anything cryptic! lol.
April 28th, 2026 08:49
orchidee said:
A good geological write A - not that I\'ve the foggiest idea of anything cryptic! lol.
April 28th, 2026 08:49
slope
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, there’s a quiet power in this that doesn’t need to announce itself…the sense of change beginning deep within before anything gives way. The focus on that inner point of shift holds the whole piece together. It’s subtle, but it lands. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 06:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, there’s a quiet power in this that doesn’t need to announce itself…the sense of change beginning deep within before anything gives way. The focus on that inner point of shift holds the whole piece together. It’s subtle, but it lands. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 06:12
slope
sorenbarrett said:
This goes far deeper than geology my friend this to me speaks of people and the deeper we go the more and less we understand. Here when understood we can see the motivation that leads to behavior long before it occurs.
April 28th, 2026 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
This goes far deeper than geology my friend this to me speaks of people and the deeper we go the more and less we understand. Here when understood we can see the motivation that leads to behavior long before it occurs.
April 28th, 2026 05:17
a carrying forward
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day comes to us Rik and we must enjoy every moment.
Andy
April 28th, 2026 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day comes to us Rik and we must enjoy every moment.
Andy
April 28th, 2026 01:44
a carrying forward
Kevin Hulme said:
I always get an Image of the Australian Outback I\'ve seen in Films in your Poems .
A good Write on a Moment in time.
April 27th, 2026 18:45
Kevin Hulme said:
I always get an Image of the Australian Outback I\'ve seen in Films in your Poems .
A good Write on a Moment in time.
April 27th, 2026 18:45
a carrying forward
Doggerel Dave said:
City boy, me. Not so dusty now. But a country truth comes through. Enjoyed.
April 27th, 2026 17:57
Doggerel Dave said:
City boy, me. Not so dusty now. But a country truth comes through. Enjoyed.
April 27th, 2026 17:57
a carrying forward
Katie B. said:
This is peaceful and soothing. I admire your work. I can only hope to write with your level of sophistication, elegance and truth. It is a joy to read your work.
April 27th, 2026 13:22
Katie B. said:
This is peaceful and soothing. I admire your work. I can only hope to write with your level of sophistication, elegance and truth. It is a joy to read your work.
April 27th, 2026 13:22
not the words
NafisaSB said:
poems are alays an outlet for our deepest emotions and feelings..well said..
April 27th, 2026 06:53
NafisaSB said:
poems are alays an outlet for our deepest emotions and feelings..well said..
April 27th, 2026 06:53
a carrying forward
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet, steady presence here that just breathes. It feels like time passing through the same space, held together by simple, lived moments. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 27th, 2026 06:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet, steady presence here that just breathes. It feels like time passing through the same space, held together by simple, lived moments. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 27th, 2026 06:18
a carrying forward
David Wakeling said:
For me this is a journey through a familar yard.The reader is given a detailled descritpion of the gate and surrounds only to have the yard settle to its own.Powerful images created here mi amigo
April 27th, 2026 05:27
David Wakeling said:
For me this is a journey through a familar yard.The reader is given a detailled descritpion of the gate and surrounds only to have the yard settle to its own.Powerful images created here mi amigo
April 27th, 2026 05:27
a carrying forward
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another fine write my friend
April 27th, 2026 05:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another fine write my friend
April 27th, 2026 05:22
a carrying forward
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid pictures in story form flash by flash carry this write onward down a focused path then come these lines:
\"A gate shifts in the breeze.
Somewhere, water gathers in a gutter
and carries the day forward.\"
A metaphor with deeper meaning. Nicely done and a fave
April 27th, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid pictures in story form flash by flash carry this write onward down a focused path then come these lines:
\"A gate shifts in the breeze.
Somewhere, water gathers in a gutter
and carries the day forward.\"
A metaphor with deeper meaning. Nicely done and a fave
April 27th, 2026 05:08
creekside picnic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, tthe blanket lifting and settling again really stays with me. It’s such a small movement, but it carries the whole atmosphere…like the scene is breathing on its own. Beautifully done, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, tthe blanket lifting and settling again really stays with me. It’s such a small movement, but it carries the whole atmosphere…like the scene is breathing on its own. Beautifully done, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:26
creekside picnic
Neville said:
what happened to those good old picnic days eh .. thanks for the memory my friend .. now of course we can re-visit whenever we choose .. Neville
April 26th, 2026 08:48
Neville said:
what happened to those good old picnic days eh .. thanks for the memory my friend .. now of course we can re-visit whenever we choose .. Neville
April 26th, 2026 08:48
creekside picnic
Katie B. said:
Love it! Very calming and tranquil. Do we know whose footsteps approached?
April 26th, 2026 07:06
Katie B. said:
Love it! Very calming and tranquil. Do we know whose footsteps approached?
April 26th, 2026 07:06
creekside picnic
David Wakeling said:
This is a amazing.It highlights the the absolute power of good poetry to paint a picture and transport the reader. I can taste champagne.Well done
April 26th, 2026 06:55
David Wakeling said:
This is a amazing.It highlights the the absolute power of good poetry to paint a picture and transport the reader. I can taste champagne.Well done
April 26th, 2026 06:55
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