Comments received on poems by arqios
weaving dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, you’ve talked me into calling it a night…though now I want a teddy before I go! Great write, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 22:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, you’ve talked me into calling it a night…though now I want a teddy before I go! Great write, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 22:07
weaving dreams
Doggerel Dave said:
Insomnia at night, sleep all day. I have hopes that your short enough to remeber poem may be the first step to righting the situation...
October 10th, 2026 18:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Insomnia at night, sleep all day. I have hopes that your short enough to remeber poem may be the first step to righting the situation...
October 10th, 2026 18:39
weaving dreams
Kevin Hulme said:
The Annoying thing about Dreams is how they slip from the Memory when waking.
A good short Write.
October 10th, 2026 14:54
Kevin Hulme said:
The Annoying thing about Dreams is how they slip from the Memory when waking.
A good short Write.
October 10th, 2026 14:54
weaving dreams
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
In snoring dreams and all is well with the world, the epitome of serenity. I\'m quite relaxed, myself after the reading. A lovely poem.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 10th, 2026 06:28
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
In snoring dreams and all is well with the world, the epitome of serenity. I\'m quite relaxed, myself after the reading. A lovely poem.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 10th, 2026 06:28
weaving dreams
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Dreams, our ultimate entertainment , be they good or bad
October 10th, 2026 06:02
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Dreams, our ultimate entertainment , be they good or bad
October 10th, 2026 06:02
weaving dreams
sorenbarrett said:
We all become children again in dreams and the soft covers of a bed where time has no meaning. A mother\'s loving embrace resurrected in night\'s shadows. This poem is tender and comforting. I loved particularly the first stanza where your poetic imagery breaks the silence like a snore. The last line \"to ruffle night\'s silence\" is marvelous and caught my attention right away. Well done my friend.
October 10th, 2026 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
We all become children again in dreams and the soft covers of a bed where time has no meaning. A mother\'s loving embrace resurrected in night\'s shadows. This poem is tender and comforting. I loved particularly the first stanza where your poetic imagery breaks the silence like a snore. The last line \"to ruffle night\'s silence\" is marvelous and caught my attention right away. Well done my friend.
October 10th, 2026 05:54
dry creek theory
Kevin Hulme said:
\'What leaves is not always lost\' etc is such a good way of putting Something that can live on.
A good Write.
October 9th, 2026 18:46
Kevin Hulme said:
\'What leaves is not always lost\' etc is such a good way of putting Something that can live on.
A good Write.
October 9th, 2026 18:46
dry creek theory
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, I love when someone reads something in my work that I hadn’t consciously put there. Makes me want to sit down and hear them out. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 11:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, I love when someone reads something in my work that I hadn’t consciously put there. Makes me want to sit down and hear them out. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 11:48
a band on knee
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, you\'ve really outdone yourself with this one! 🤣 I\'m trying to imagine the logistics of getting an entire jazz ensemble strapped to someone\'s leg. Talk about a knee-slapping performance! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, you\'ve really outdone yourself with this one! 🤣 I\'m trying to imagine the logistics of getting an entire jazz ensemble strapped to someone\'s leg. Talk about a knee-slapping performance! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 09:49
dry creek theory
orchidee said:
Good write A. Doh! A fancy notice said \'Shop closed due to ingress of water\'. Ingress?! Just say the darn place is flooded! lol.
They could have added \'We\'ll be open again when the water has egressed\'. Meanwhile, no one\'s got the foggiest idea of what\'s going on, cos there\'s a word we don\'t hear every day! lol.
October 9th, 2026 09:24
orchidee said:
Good write A. Doh! A fancy notice said \'Shop closed due to ingress of water\'. Ingress?! Just say the darn place is flooded! lol.
They could have added \'We\'ll be open again when the water has egressed\'. Meanwhile, no one\'s got the foggiest idea of what\'s going on, cos there\'s a word we don\'t hear every day! lol.
October 9th, 2026 09:24
dry creek theory
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a wonderfully deep and thoughtful piece my friend
October 9th, 2026 06:31
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a wonderfully deep and thoughtful piece my friend
October 9th, 2026 06:31
dry creek theory
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous metaphor here Cryptic yes poems like water sink over time underground but like that sentence found in the minds of a reader held incomplete. They are caried and find their way into new water where there was only dust. Anonymous, nameless they remain in the human consciousness completed by others and carried on to surface as new water. That water that once flowed in creeks gone underground and forgotten remains, evaporates and rains again to continually flow. The same water nameless but immortal. A fave my friend
October 9th, 2026 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous metaphor here Cryptic yes poems like water sink over time underground but like that sentence found in the minds of a reader held incomplete. They are caried and find their way into new water where there was only dust. Anonymous, nameless they remain in the human consciousness completed by others and carried on to surface as new water. That water that once flowed in creeks gone underground and forgotten remains, evaporates and rains again to continually flow. The same water nameless but immortal. A fave my friend
October 9th, 2026 06:09
a band on knee
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed the Write. Not letting things get him down by playing Music. \'Without Music, Life would be a Mistake\'. As a Philosopher once said . Who\'s name escapes me.
October 8th, 2026 19:07
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed the Write. Not letting things get him down by playing Music. \'Without Music, Life would be a Mistake\'. As a Philosopher once said . Who\'s name escapes me.
October 8th, 2026 19:07
a band on knee
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
Light and bright with a delicious play on words. The fellow is to be admired, from loneliness to that great companion - music. Well done, magical.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 8th, 2026 15:01
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
Light and bright with a delicious play on words. The fellow is to be admired, from loneliness to that great companion - music. Well done, magical.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 8th, 2026 15:01
a band on knee
Paul Bell said:
If this had a tune to it, you would be singing it.
Then someone would give you into trouble for doing their head in. lol
October 8th, 2026 07:51
Paul Bell said:
If this had a tune to it, you would be singing it.
Then someone would give you into trouble for doing their head in. lol
October 8th, 2026 07:51
a band on knee
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a message as well as a minstrel feel. It speaks to happiness being internal and self determined told in wonderful rhyme and with a mirthful feel it plays its music joyfully. Nicely done my friend
October 8th, 2026 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a message as well as a minstrel feel. It speaks to happiness being internal and self determined told in wonderful rhyme and with a mirthful feel it plays its music joyfully. Nicely done my friend
October 8th, 2026 06:27
wormhole versetronaut
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Rik showing that words can bring all to us all.
Andy
October 8th, 2026 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Rik showing that words can bring all to us all.
Andy
October 8th, 2026 01:06
wormhole versetronaut
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I came here expecting poetry and somehow ended up contemplating quantum physics, mortality, and the possibility that my words might outlive me. My brain is going to need a cup of cold brew after this journey! 😂 Absolutely loved the ride, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 7th, 2026 22:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I came here expecting poetry and somehow ended up contemplating quantum physics, mortality, and the possibility that my words might outlive me. My brain is going to need a cup of cold brew after this journey! 😂 Absolutely loved the ride, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 7th, 2026 22:15
wormhole versetronaut
Kevin Hulme said:
Another fine Poem on the Creative Process of Writing a Poem . And I suppose they\'ll Survive longer than us.
October 7th, 2026 18:59
Kevin Hulme said:
Another fine Poem on the Creative Process of Writing a Poem . And I suppose they\'ll Survive longer than us.
October 7th, 2026 18:59
wormhole versetronaut
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
The contemporary and the bards of yore together in a constellation of words now and forever in the ether of poetic light. A superlative passage of poetry and a complete joy to read, truly.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 7th, 2026 08:51
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
The contemporary and the bards of yore together in a constellation of words now and forever in the ether of poetic light. A superlative passage of poetry and a complete joy to read, truly.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 7th, 2026 08:51
wormhole versetronaut
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent Cryptic a poem, a metaphor a masterpiece weaving science, astrophysics and poetry into an emotional piece of art. Lovely my friend and a fave
October 7th, 2026 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent Cryptic a poem, a metaphor a masterpiece weaving science, astrophysics and poetry into an emotional piece of art. Lovely my friend and a fave
October 7th, 2026 08:14
wormhole versetronaut
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey Rik, I know this is a rich use of language, however my simple mind can take it no deeper than that.
October 7th, 2026 06:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey Rik, I know this is a rich use of language, however my simple mind can take it no deeper than that.
October 7th, 2026 06:02
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