Comments received on poems by arqios
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Bella Shepard said:
You describe in wonderful detail the toll that the ravages of time gradually take upon the human body and mind. Poignant and perfect!
November 15th, 2025 11:56
Bella Shepard said:
You describe in wonderful detail the toll that the ravages of time gradually take upon the human body and mind. Poignant and perfect!
November 15th, 2025 11:56
unhinged
NafisaSB said:
More to live for too- don’t forget that the future is waiting with open arms - there is always something interesting and compelling about each day that dawns
November 15th, 2025 11:06
NafisaSB said:
More to live for too- don’t forget that the future is waiting with open arms - there is always something interesting and compelling about each day that dawns
November 15th, 2025 11:06
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, the whole piece breathes like someone moving through exile inside their own mind…your imagery carries a soft grief that lingers long after the read. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 15th, 2025 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, the whole piece breathes like someone moving through exile inside their own mind…your imagery carries a soft grief that lingers long after the read. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 15th, 2025 08:09
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sorenbarrett said:
In some ways existential a realization of deterioration in body and mind. Time takes its toll. Well done my friend
November 15th, 2025 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
In some ways existential a realization of deterioration in body and mind. Time takes its toll. Well done my friend
November 15th, 2025 06:38
signals
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the whole piece hangs on that fragile line between hope and hesitation…the door ajar, the pocketed promise, the dial tone stretching thin. It’s tender, human, and painfully true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 14th, 2025 14:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the whole piece hangs on that fragile line between hope and hesitation…the door ajar, the pocketed promise, the dial tone stretching thin. It’s tender, human, and painfully true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 14th, 2025 14:43
signals
Paul Bell said:
I think we\'ve all done it, stared at the phone wondering, hoping it rings, rehearsing the words that never get said.
It\'s a mad couple world of, should I, I will, but what if. This is why Bars were invented.
November 14th, 2025 11:05
Paul Bell said:
I think we\'ve all done it, stared at the phone wondering, hoping it rings, rehearsing the words that never get said.
It\'s a mad couple world of, should I, I will, but what if. This is why Bars were invented.
November 14th, 2025 11:05
signals
orchidee said:
Good write A. Yes, I know a number never dialled - I got cut orf! lol.
November 14th, 2025 08:29
orchidee said:
Good write A. Yes, I know a number never dialled - I got cut orf! lol.
November 14th, 2025 08:29
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Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, arqios. Oh boy, have I victimized myself with not connecting.
November 14th, 2025 07:36
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, arqios. Oh boy, have I victimized myself with not connecting.
November 14th, 2025 07:36
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Doggerel Dave said:
Hope but ambivalence too; complexity all artfully melded, Rik.
November 14th, 2025 06:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope but ambivalence too; complexity all artfully melded, Rik.
November 14th, 2025 06:35
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Michael Edwards said:
Read it twice and will return - super write arqios.
November 14th, 2025 06:14
Michael Edwards said:
Read it twice and will return - super write arqios.
November 14th, 2025 06:14
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, I like the sense of may or may not call
November 14th, 2025 06:02
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, I like the sense of may or may not call
November 14th, 2025 06:02
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sorenbarrett said:
There is such a sad tone to this poem an offer made a call not connected. The message is clear but there is static on the line. Well expressed that feeling between friends and acquaintances. Wistful, longing a connection not to be made
November 14th, 2025 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
There is such a sad tone to this poem an offer made a call not connected. The message is clear but there is static on the line. Well expressed that feeling between friends and acquaintances. Wistful, longing a connection not to be made
November 14th, 2025 05:56
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Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe we should 86 the 67. Don\'t do Social media; so had to look it up. A fine Poem.
November 13th, 2025 19:37
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe we should 86 the 67. Don\'t do Social media; so had to look it up. A fine Poem.
November 13th, 2025 19:37
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Unhinged? Who? Me? 🤪 My friend, this feels like a scroll breathing…identity, time, and message looping into a quiet chant. You made the in-between its own terrain. Love this lots. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 13th, 2025 15:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Unhinged? Who? Me? 🤪 My friend, this feels like a scroll breathing…identity, time, and message looping into a quiet chant. You made the in-between its own terrain. Love this lots. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 13th, 2025 15:16
unhinged
orchidee said:
Thought you was writing about me there - unhinged - in my behaviour towards KP. lol.
November 13th, 2025 14:41
orchidee said:
Thought you was writing about me there - unhinged - in my behaviour towards KP. lol.
November 13th, 2025 14:41
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Neilton said:
A combination of poetry and social media trends.Very interesting!!
November 13th, 2025 12:29
Neilton said:
A combination of poetry and social media trends.Very interesting!!
November 13th, 2025 12:29
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sorenbarrett said:
Branded by age Not sure if this was the intent but I see each of us as that parchment or page that curls with age and unrolls each day with words that march and fade. That pause or hinge is a time of reflection or change. A lovely write of reflection on the passing of time in each life.
November 13th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Branded by age Not sure if this was the intent but I see each of us as that parchment or page that curls with age and unrolls each day with words that march and fade. That pause or hinge is a time of reflection or change. A lovely write of reflection on the passing of time in each life.
November 13th, 2025 06:26
star black out
Goldfinch60 said:
That memory will always be with us Rik.
Andy
November 13th, 2025 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That memory will always be with us Rik.
Andy
November 13th, 2025 02:14
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, the way you link stars, cells, memory, and music creates a whole orbit of meaning…small and infinite at the same time. Stunning piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 12th, 2025 21:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, the way you link stars, cells, memory, and music creates a whole orbit of meaning…small and infinite at the same time. Stunning piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 12th, 2025 21:10
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orchidee said:
I was The Birdman. I flapped me wings and fell in a black hole. Do ya hear me? I\'m don \'ere in this \'ole! lol.
November 12th, 2025 10:06
orchidee said:
I was The Birdman. I flapped me wings and fell in a black hole. Do ya hear me? I\'m don \'ere in this \'ole! lol.
November 12th, 2025 10:06
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Paul Bell said:
The artist maybe dead, but the music still shines bright.
Bowie must be the most original artist ever and like the star it never wanes.
November 12th, 2025 06:33
Paul Bell said:
The artist maybe dead, but the music still shines bright.
Bowie must be the most original artist ever and like the star it never wanes.
November 12th, 2025 06:33
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sorenbarrett said:
Whether this poem is intended as a tribute to a great star or not it applies. His album \"Space Odyssey\" (one of his most famous) ties him to this poem. He was dark not in complexion but in the aura he projected. Very nicely written my friend
November 12th, 2025 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
Whether this poem is intended as a tribute to a great star or not it applies. His album \"Space Odyssey\" (one of his most famous) ties him to this poem. He was dark not in complexion but in the aura he projected. Very nicely written my friend
November 12th, 2025 06:17
a moment turning
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Undoubtedly one of the best I have come across on tbe theme of aging. A fave.
November 12th, 2025 05:56
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Undoubtedly one of the best I have come across on tbe theme of aging. A fave.
November 12th, 2025 05:56
Chad on his soapbox
Tom Dylan said:
Wonderful! And the last line just smashed it!
November 12th, 2025 03:30
Tom Dylan said:
Wonderful! And the last line just smashed it!
November 12th, 2025 03:30
Chad on his soapbox
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Stop and Smell the Roses\' in fact.
Plenty of these People about. Well Said.
November 11th, 2025 19:58
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Stop and Smell the Roses\' in fact.
Plenty of these People about. Well Said.
November 11th, 2025 19:58
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orchidee said:
Good write Chad, erm Arqios. Or.... just call me Chad. lol.
November 11th, 2025 09:48
orchidee said:
Good write Chad, erm Arqios. Or.... just call me Chad. lol.
November 11th, 2025 09:48
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this one preaches without sermonizing...clever, convicting, and compassionate all at once. The final plea lands beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 11th, 2025 09:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this one preaches without sermonizing...clever, convicting, and compassionate all at once. The final plea lands beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 11th, 2025 09:37
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