Comments received on poems by arqios



There be no poetry-by-numbers
Neville said:


oh\' yes indeed, freedom .. let\'s now go take a walk on the wild side ..

December 17th, 2023 09:56

wishful thinking
Neville said:


You are such a smarty pants .. bet you were a thesaurus in a previous life ..

December 17th, 2023 04:35

pareidolia
Neville said:


This is quite brill & I aint talking fish neither .. and what\'s more, you are the only other poet I can recall who has touched on a subject that I have variously written about before on several occasions .. ps Your new avatar resembles a cloud at the moment .. must be summat to do with the residual jetlag .. Neville

December 17th, 2023 04:32

poetically breathe
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant work.

December 16th, 2023 13:18

poetically breathe
2781 said:

His word will not return void.

December 15th, 2023 05:47

poetically breathe
Nicholas Browning said:

Elsewhere? You cheatin\' on MPS? O. O

lol, don\'t mind me

December 15th, 2023 05:17

poetically breathe
orchidee said:

Good write A.
A cue for my corny joke: I tried not breathing for 24 hours, to save air for one day. I did it, but didn\'t feel well afterwards. Doh! lol.

December 15th, 2023 04:30

Branches of a tree
orchidee said:

A fine write CB.

December 14th, 2023 10:57

Branches of a tree
Nicholas Browning said:

This is actually pretty well done. I like the finish, and the (seemingly) scattered symbols add a sense of depth not often seen in poetry. Very nice.

December 14th, 2023 06:37

wishful thinking
orchidee said:

Now, yes, why they bash us with the Bible in some places?! Ouch, that hurt! lol. There\'s preaching though, which we expect from sermons.

December 11th, 2023 08:12

pareidolia
Doggerel Dave said:

Happens all the time (sounds too). Didn\'t know it has been named. Thanks for that....now all I\'ve got to do is find out how to pronounce.......

December 8th, 2023 07:19

pareidolia
orchidee said:

Ahhh, I percieve an old trout when I look at KP! heehee.
Well, I saw a cloud formation like Africa on the way to church once. Then the service, unbeknown to me, included two missionaries just setting out to Africa!

December 8th, 2023 03:12

Atacama symphony
orchidee said:

I never knew there was so much in a symphony - well, I know now! lol.

December 7th, 2023 08:18

until that day comes
Muse Gong said:

A real poet.


December 5th, 2023 06:08

limbo
orchidee said:

Yep, happened to me when I married KP! lol.

December 5th, 2023 05:04

To Persephoné
2781 said:

Sounds like my afternoons up the shed.

December 4th, 2023 07:15

To Persephoné
orchidee said:

A fine write CB - and Advent them?
I\'m gonna do some lugubrious melodic sounds - do ya hear me singing. Or do I sound taciturn or melancholic?! lol.

December 4th, 2023 02:52

until that day comes
2781 said:

Reminded me of searching for revelation which has very little to do with Christmas.
Forgive me, I am off the planet!

November 26th, 2023 10:13

until that day comes
orchidee said:

An Advent theme?
I\'m a week early in my poem today. lol. Better early than never?! lol.


November 26th, 2023 04:56

pitcher plant
Doggerel Dave said:

Never thought of it quite like that...... Deserved its presentation.

November 25th, 2023 18:57

pitcher plant
Thomas W Case said:

Nice work.

November 25th, 2023 10:57

N-tropy
sorenbarrett said:

English a funny non phonetic language. N-joyed it

November 25th, 2023 08:54

pitcher plant
sorenbarrett said:

Wise and it seems almost Taoist and a little Zen

November 25th, 2023 08:53

N-tropy
orchidee said:

A N-ice write CB.

November 24th, 2023 07:20

Welcome to my limbo
orchidee said:

Fine writes CB.

November 23rd, 2023 12:56

Welcome to my limbo
2781 said:

It\'s a mystery

November 23rd, 2023 07:54

gingko tree
orchidee said:

watashi wotsit - what N said. I dunno wot I\'m talking about! Bit of French there?!
No change there then from me, 99% of the time. lol.

November 22nd, 2023 12:55

gingko tree
Neville said:


watashi wa secoia no you nani otoko desu ga 、 watashi ga hanare te iru ma ni kai te kudasai .. Nevosan

November 22nd, 2023 06:58

smokescreen
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

November 21st, 2023 21:11

smokescreen
Neville said:



but don\'t forget about the mirrors ..

November 21st, 2023 06:54



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