Comments received on poems by Menaga
விதியின் விதி
mvvenkataraman said:
Of course walking on the sea is also correct,
But, that will be very few steps only,
After that, we have to swim or just drown,
You use the word \"drown\" and so you are right!
January 20th, 2023 06:18
mvvenkataraman said:
Of course walking on the sea is also correct,
But, that will be very few steps only,
After that, we have to swim or just drown,
You use the word \"drown\" and so you are right!
January 20th, 2023 06:18
விதியின் விதி
mvvenkataraman said:
Here I compare sea with tears as both are salty,
And I assume I am journeying with tears,
One day I will immerse in them to quit the World,
My imagination, as we can\'t walk on the sea!
January 20th, 2023 06:13
mvvenkataraman said:
Here I compare sea with tears as both are salty,
And I assume I am journeying with tears,
One day I will immerse in them to quit the World,
My imagination, as we can\'t walk on the sea!
January 20th, 2023 06:13
விதியின் விதி
danieloptera said:
It is great that u write, but it would be more helpful to most of us if there was an English version.
January 20th, 2023 04:56
danieloptera said:
It is great that u write, but it would be more helpful to most of us if there was an English version.
January 20th, 2023 04:56
மிஞ்சியது என்ன?
Menaga said:
Sure sir. With your blessings I can make it happen .
January 5th, 2023 07:34
Menaga said:
Sure sir. With your blessings I can make it happen .
January 5th, 2023 07:34
மிஞ்சியது என்ன?
mvvenkataraman said:
Kindly send your Tamil poems as they are good
And give to brain enough thought-food!
January 5th, 2023 03:09
mvvenkataraman said:
Kindly send your Tamil poems as they are good
And give to brain enough thought-food!
January 5th, 2023 03:09
உணர்வுகள்
mvvenkataraman said:
In the morning time, caw of crow,
In the evening time, charm of the Sun.
Scent of the Earth before the rain,
The smile of that little child,
The laments of the elderly woman,
The rays of the Moon in the night,
Dark clouds during rainy season,
The fragrance of the white flower,
The flow of the river,
The wide look of the wavy Sea,
How beautiful!
My mind by forgetting me,
Has it blended with these feelings?!
December 30th, 2022 12:36
mvvenkataraman said:
In the morning time, caw of crow,
In the evening time, charm of the Sun.
Scent of the Earth before the rain,
The smile of that little child,
The laments of the elderly woman,
The rays of the Moon in the night,
Dark clouds during rainy season,
The fragrance of the white flower,
The flow of the river,
The wide look of the wavy Sea,
How beautiful!
My mind by forgetting me,
Has it blended with these feelings?!
December 30th, 2022 12:36
உணர்வுகள்
mvvenkataraman said:
I am not just like that patting,
Indeed your poem is touching,
I am proud of you indeed,
May God bless you kindly!
December 30th, 2022 12:28
mvvenkataraman said:
I am not just like that patting,
Indeed your poem is touching,
I am proud of you indeed,
May God bless you kindly!
December 30th, 2022 12:28
உணர்வுகள்
bellflower said:
this is so beautiful expression and appreciation of nature and feeling them in thyself....beautiful.
December 30th, 2022 05:44
bellflower said:
this is so beautiful expression and appreciation of nature and feeling them in thyself....beautiful.
December 30th, 2022 05:44
இன்று நான்
mvvenkataraman said:
O God- Tamil words are here seen,
What a lovely joy and true bliss,
My Mother Tongue is allowed here,
Accidentally I came across this truth,
Even the Sky isn\'t equal to my mirth,
Lovely to have a sudden discovery,
THE POEM INDEED IS EXCELLENT,
IT MAKES ME MUSE DEEPLY,
ALL THE BEST MY DEAR POET!
SPELLING ERRORS-
விண்மீனை/ வெண்பனி
December 29th, 2022 12:50
mvvenkataraman said:
O God- Tamil words are here seen,
What a lovely joy and true bliss,
My Mother Tongue is allowed here,
Accidentally I came across this truth,
Even the Sky isn\'t equal to my mirth,
Lovely to have a sudden discovery,
THE POEM INDEED IS EXCELLENT,
IT MAKES ME MUSE DEEPLY,
ALL THE BEST MY DEAR POET!
SPELLING ERRORS-
விண்மீனை/ வெண்பனி
December 29th, 2022 12:50
Grow up
languale said:
Such a beautiful use of language! I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Maybe you want to check on mine too? I\'d be happy if you leave a comment. I\'ts always exiting to know what other people like about your work. :)
June 2nd, 2022 11:21
languale said:
Such a beautiful use of language! I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Maybe you want to check on mine too? I\'d be happy if you leave a comment. I\'ts always exiting to know what other people like about your work. :)
June 2nd, 2022 11:21
REALITY
L. B. Mek said:
\'this be, that self deluding
warped, cyclicality
modernity\'s self-professing, nihilism
of nothingness
and a wasted life\'s, fading
to all-things
futile and sans, of meaning...\'
(Please forgive me
if you deem my words, rude
and what do I know?
but here\'s words form someone
you might respect enough
to heed:
\'What\'s the best thing in the world?
June-rose, by May-dew impearled;
Sweet south-wind, that means no rain;
Truth, not cruel to a friend;
Pleasure, not in haste to end;
Beauty, not self-decked and curled
Till its pride is over-plain;
Love, when, so, you\'re loved again.
What\'s the best thing in the world?
--Something out of it, I think.\'
Poem by, Elizabeth Browning
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4204
)
thanks for sharing!
again, I reiterate
I mean no disrespect
you\'re entitled to your perspective
May 12th, 2022 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'this be, that self deluding
warped, cyclicality
modernity\'s self-professing, nihilism
of nothingness
and a wasted life\'s, fading
to all-things
futile and sans, of meaning...\'
(Please forgive me
if you deem my words, rude
and what do I know?
but here\'s words form someone
you might respect enough
to heed:
\'What\'s the best thing in the world?
June-rose, by May-dew impearled;
Sweet south-wind, that means no rain;
Truth, not cruel to a friend;
Pleasure, not in haste to end;
Beauty, not self-decked and curled
Till its pride is over-plain;
Love, when, so, you\'re loved again.
What\'s the best thing in the world?
--Something out of it, I think.\'
Poem by, Elizabeth Browning
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4204
)
thanks for sharing!
again, I reiterate
I mean no disrespect
you\'re entitled to your perspective
May 12th, 2022 04:07
How I wish, I could be?
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing .. like your mention of nature in this
May 10th, 2022 05:44
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing .. like your mention of nature in this
May 10th, 2022 05:44
