Comments received on poems by Samprikta Paul
THE WATER CALLED TO ME
NafisaSB said:
glad you put the footnote that you are doing well - it\'s definitely an inspired piece...
July 7th, 2026 08:06
NafisaSB said:
glad you put the footnote that you are doing well - it\'s definitely an inspired piece...
July 7th, 2026 08:06
THE WATER CALLED TO ME
MendedFences27 said:
Down Dismal then Delighted
Sitting next to the sea.
Smelling the fresh and salty air.
Perhaps, a hint of Ozone.
Search the horizon for what I can see.
A boat, a ship, the rising Sun, what do I care?
My heart\'s broken, my love is gone.
The ocean has taken her away from me.
My pain becomes more than I can bear.
How can I exist all alone?
Something is there, I hope I can see.
Two women surfing, A fun-loving pair.
Perhaps, I will take their picture on my phone.
\"Hi, can I take your picture while you\'re in the sea?\"
\"Yes? Great, keep your wet suits on, don\'t worry about your hair.\"
\"If you like I\'ll send it to your phones.\"
\"What are your names? Oh, and your numbers please.\"
\"Thanks, O.K. Mind if I call you there? Great!\'
Wow, I think my pains all gone.
My poem per your request. Enjoyed your poem. Never felt that it might mean suicide. Just a poor soul waiting for the next episode in his life, - Phil A.
July 6th, 2026 15:55
MendedFences27 said:
Down Dismal then Delighted
Sitting next to the sea.
Smelling the fresh and salty air.
Perhaps, a hint of Ozone.
Search the horizon for what I can see.
A boat, a ship, the rising Sun, what do I care?
My heart\'s broken, my love is gone.
The ocean has taken her away from me.
My pain becomes more than I can bear.
How can I exist all alone?
Something is there, I hope I can see.
Two women surfing, A fun-loving pair.
Perhaps, I will take their picture on my phone.
\"Hi, can I take your picture while you\'re in the sea?\"
\"Yes? Great, keep your wet suits on, don\'t worry about your hair.\"
\"If you like I\'ll send it to your phones.\"
\"What are your names? Oh, and your numbers please.\"
\"Thanks, O.K. Mind if I call you there? Great!\'
Wow, I think my pains all gone.
My poem per your request. Enjoyed your poem. Never felt that it might mean suicide. Just a poor soul waiting for the next episode in his life, - Phil A.
July 6th, 2026 15:55
THE WATER CALLED TO ME
sorenbarrett said:
There is pain in this poem and a desire to depart. Well done
July 6th, 2026 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
There is pain in this poem and a desire to depart. Well done
July 6th, 2026 12:29
A DATE WITH A BOY!
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope it works out for you...... Come back if it doesn\'t, and we can talk.
June 27th, 2026 04:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope it works out for you...... Come back if it doesn\'t, and we can talk.
June 27th, 2026 04:48
A DATE WITH A BOY!
sorenbarrett said:
Love under control but close to the edge in this poem, there was the thrill of looking over the edge and feeling the thrill. Well done
June 26th, 2026 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
Love under control but close to the edge in this poem, there was the thrill of looking over the edge and feeling the thrill. Well done
June 26th, 2026 16:36
I\'m Blue
NafisaSB said:
happens to most of us some time or the other - the answer is to take into account what is good in our lives, and be grateful; and you will feel better once you count your blessings..
June 19th, 2026 06:59
NafisaSB said:
happens to most of us some time or the other - the answer is to take into account what is good in our lives, and be grateful; and you will feel better once you count your blessings..
June 19th, 2026 06:59
Power of love
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and great word play on seeing through it and love being blind. Loved it a great write my friend
June 14th, 2026 14:50
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and great word play on seeing through it and love being blind. Loved it a great write my friend
June 14th, 2026 14:50
I\'m Blue
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
if you cant get the good parts from what has passed, create new ones in the present and future , good write
June 12th, 2026 09:47
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
if you cant get the good parts from what has passed, create new ones in the present and future , good write
June 12th, 2026 09:47
I\'m Blue
sorenbarrett said:
One should not wish to be yellow, at least in American English, for it is equivalent with a coward. Blue is a much better color, my favorite in fact. All kidding aside this is a sad poem reflecting fear and guilt as underlying motivations for depression. When one confronts one\'s fear it falls away, maybe into nothing maybe into anger but regardless one now has something to be proud about and guilt dissolves. With the dawning of this new day the sun comes out and will paint you golden.
June 12th, 2026 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
One should not wish to be yellow, at least in American English, for it is equivalent with a coward. Blue is a much better color, my favorite in fact. All kidding aside this is a sad poem reflecting fear and guilt as underlying motivations for depression. When one confronts one\'s fear it falls away, maybe into nothing maybe into anger but regardless one now has something to be proud about and guilt dissolves. With the dawning of this new day the sun comes out and will paint you golden.
June 12th, 2026 09:11
No IS A NO
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse there is no excuse, disrespect of another is no brother. Well written
June 11th, 2026 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse there is no excuse, disrespect of another is no brother. Well written
June 11th, 2026 06:14
Back home to heaven
peto said:
Live every moment like it\'s your last
One of these days it will be
Having discovered your writing
I\'ve met one of those beautiful souls you wrote of
Keep em coming
June 9th, 2026 10:07
peto said:
Live every moment like it\'s your last
One of these days it will be
Having discovered your writing
I\'ve met one of those beautiful souls you wrote of
Keep em coming
June 9th, 2026 10:07
Back home to heaven
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
So true, we never know when our demise will occur
June 9th, 2026 08:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
So true, we never know when our demise will occur
June 9th, 2026 08:26
Back home to heaven
sorenbarrett said:
Uncertainty marks all things from quantum mechanics to our lives and we live in a world of probabilities a gamble where the house always wins. This we know all must die in the end it is just when the movie ends that we do not know. Well written
June 9th, 2026 03:28
sorenbarrett said:
Uncertainty marks all things from quantum mechanics to our lives and we live in a world of probabilities a gamble where the house always wins. This we know all must die in the end it is just when the movie ends that we do not know. Well written
June 9th, 2026 03:28
Story of Artists and Art
peto said:
Cathartic and life saving
A work of art indeed
I look forward to reading more from you
June 8th, 2026 08:42
peto said:
Cathartic and life saving
A work of art indeed
I look forward to reading more from you
June 8th, 2026 08:42
Story of Artists and Art
sorenbarrett said:
Sqmprikta in reading this I believe writing can heal it heals the writer and at times the reader. Writing can be a therapy venting things held in. Well said.
June 8th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Sqmprikta in reading this I believe writing can heal it heals the writer and at times the reader. Writing can be a therapy venting things held in. Well said.
June 8th, 2026 04:51
Story of Artists and Art
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, especially last two lines that closes the poem
June 8th, 2026 02:14
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, especially last two lines that closes the poem
June 8th, 2026 02:14
Ethereal Thread
Teddy.15 said:
Such wisdom a a young age is admirable, I am always romantically enthralled by the Rocky Adrien type love, such soulmates do exist and not one soul should except anything less. Even if reality has its own plan the heart wants to be in that position of pure love and happiness. I hope with all my heart you find yours. Brava. 🌹
June 7th, 2026 05:04
Teddy.15 said:
Such wisdom a a young age is admirable, I am always romantically enthralled by the Rocky Adrien type love, such soulmates do exist and not one soul should except anything less. Even if reality has its own plan the heart wants to be in that position of pure love and happiness. I hope with all my heart you find yours. Brava. 🌹
June 7th, 2026 05:04
Ethereal Thread
sorenbarrett said:
Destiny at work in this poem where meeting comes before knowing and it bodes a future romance. Well written
June 7th, 2026 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Destiny at work in this poem where meeting comes before knowing and it bodes a future romance. Well written
June 7th, 2026 04:53
An Angel
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
So simply put so very effective, good write
June 6th, 2026 03:50
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
So simply put so very effective, good write
June 6th, 2026 03:50
My Dream
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
If we try and fail we have not lost, its not trying thats the failure, good luck
June 6th, 2026 03:38
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
If we try and fail we have not lost, its not trying thats the failure, good luck
June 6th, 2026 03:38
STUCK!
Teddy.15 said:
Change direction where ever it was you were going wasn\'t the right path. 🌹 A wonderful. Write
June 6th, 2026 03:04
Teddy.15 said:
Change direction where ever it was you were going wasn\'t the right path. 🌹 A wonderful. Write
June 6th, 2026 03:04
My Dream
Teddy.15 said:
If you really want it you will find a way to have it I am sure. 🌹
June 6th, 2026 03:01
Teddy.15 said:
If you really want it you will find a way to have it I am sure. 🌹
June 6th, 2026 03:01
My Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Keep your dream it is what life is built on. A lovely write that speaks of desires and wishes. Well done
May 19th, 2026 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
Keep your dream it is what life is built on. A lovely write that speaks of desires and wishes. Well done
May 19th, 2026 12:18
Cianalas
Official 1SP said:
Your poem moves like a memory the soul remembers even when the mind does not. The way you blend longing, past‑life echoes, and that haunting sense of belonging to a place you’ve never touched feels beautifully otherworldly. The imagery of witches, fire, and unseen presences gives the piece a depth that lingers—like a doorway cracked open to something ancient. This is the kind of writing that doesn’t just describe a feeling; it summons it. Truly captivating.
March 18th, 2026 02:36
Official 1SP said:
Your poem moves like a memory the soul remembers even when the mind does not. The way you blend longing, past‑life echoes, and that haunting sense of belonging to a place you’ve never touched feels beautifully otherworldly. The imagery of witches, fire, and unseen presences gives the piece a depth that lingers—like a doorway cracked open to something ancient. This is the kind of writing that doesn’t just describe a feeling; it summons it. Truly captivating.
March 18th, 2026 02:36
STUCK!
Official 1SP said:
This feels like the moment when the heart whispers truths the world can’t hear. The way you shaped doubt, fear, and resilience into imagery is powerful. You’re not alone in that “what‑if” spiral—your voice makes it seen.
March 18th, 2026 02:30
Official 1SP said:
This feels like the moment when the heart whispers truths the world can’t hear. The way you shaped doubt, fear, and resilience into imagery is powerful. You’re not alone in that “what‑if” spiral—your voice makes it seen.
March 18th, 2026 02:30
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