Comments received on poems by H. Jordan



a poem to my younger self
a thousand wishes said:

Empowering poem, Yes, do whatever you want :) be who you are like its nobodys\' buisness

July 14th, 2022 18:47

a wandering soul is restless
L. B. Mek said:

\'this, be an apt
depiction, of this
seemingly unending
\'age of anxiety\'
generational
in its making...\'
(thanks for sharing
a relatable read)

July 14th, 2022 00:57

the gifted kid burnout
orchidee said:

Good write HJ.
Have some food then, some \'fuel\', if peckish! heehee.


July 12th, 2022 13:00

the humanity in nature
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

That is sad . I do notice that I hardly see many stars in the evenings sky . A nicely expressed poem ))

July 12th, 2022 11:09

time: the ultimate escape artist
orchidee said:

A bit of silliness from me - Ohhh, time, no one has time to listen to me. I shall talk to myself, and get a decent answer that way! heehee.

July 11th, 2022 08:23

time: the ultimate escape artist
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Time goes by so fast .. often wander where it goes . I like your writing and the idea of sand

July 11th, 2022 01:33

its day and night
tallisman said:

Imaginative, really good write T

July 6th, 2022 01:04

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