Comments received on poems by Christ



(SHOULDN\\\\\\\'T BE) FOR YOU 8-12-23
Pop64 said:

Sometimes, many times, we fall captive to others, but the truth is we fall captive to ourselves, because we empower others. This clearly tells the tale of that and if true, I pray you find you. be strong and write on.

September 8th, 2023 14:01

Blue Showers
Parisab said:

You have something special here. ‘I’m afraid it is dented within me’ the tattoos we want to forget. Thanks for sharing and keep writing…

September 6th, 2023 14:52

Alone But Never Lonely
W. Charlie Martineau, Jr. said:

This poem is amazing! Such a great defining voice of the state of society. Lines are drawn with pain and hate, when love and compassion are the cure. Thank you for this.

November 16th, 2022 16:41

And To Think.
Shetonya Latryce said:

Hey sometimes we just need to put it like it is. Thanks for sharing.

September 21st, 2022 21:08

And To Think.
Christ said:

also the part where I talk about a sad man, that person is me

September 21st, 2022 17:13

And To Think.
Christ said:

There are very few times where you\'ll get to see me; the teenager that I\'m supposed to sound like, and not older and wiser than I naturally down. Sometimes I forget I\'m not the same age as my very own mother and I\'m actually this soft, fragile little teenager. I\'ve really made myself soft; I used to be so closed off, private, and shy. I guess it\'s a give-and-take situation. Time to go ask for a hug from my best friend that I fell in love with

September 21st, 2022 17:10

THINGS I WANTED TO SAY BUT NEVER DID (JOURNAL/ALBUM)
Christ said:

You guys don\'t have to read all of it; I tend to write a lot, and it\'s only related the slightest bit, so you\'re not missing anything by skipping any

September 21st, 2022 05:37

THINGS I WANTED TO SAY BUT NEVER DID (JOURNAL/ALBUM)
Christ said:

You guys don\'t have to read all of it; I tend to write a lot, and it\'s only related the slightest bit, so you\'re not missing anything by skipping any

September 20th, 2022 22:58

9-14-22 @ 6:13 pm My Touch Is Made Of Glass
shaa said:

I love it, its quite vivid,and whose to say it aint poetry. Poetry is art and art can be anything even a smile 😊

September 15th, 2022 10:13

Manners Are Not Needed When You’re Hungr
Raven333 said:

Oh girl I have felt that hunger to, it is a powerful one.. great write

September 14th, 2022 14:55

Manners Are Not Needed When You’re Hungr
Christ said:

there\'s supposed to be a \'y\' at the word \"Hungry\"

September 14th, 2022 13:52

   The Song Of The Soul 
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

Suspenseful and interesting, welldone and understood.

September 12th, 2022 16:26

   The Song Of The Soul 
Christ said:

btw \"the chef\" is my crush\'s nickname. Don\'t ask why..you\'ll find out tomorrow

September 12th, 2022 11:45

What I Knew I Had 
shaa said:

Enjoyed how it started got lost somewhere in between think I\'ll have to re-read it

September 10th, 2022 15:53

      A Dry Throat And A Bloody Back
shaa said:

After reading your bio I must say I\'m impressed,at your age I was still wallowing after my crush. Keep up cant wait to read more from you

September 9th, 2022 23:23

      A Dry Throat And A Bloody Back
Raven333 said:

What a great write my fellow poet, such a way with words and I so could identify unfortunately.. as I have learned to it seems there really isn\'t anybody there.. God Bless

September 9th, 2022 20:46

      A Dry Throat And A Bloody Back
Doggerel Dave said:

Read your bio on your home page. Go for it. the greater range of people contribute here the better.
I personally don\'t find poetry involving intimate personal relationships (love) very interesting (being polite here) so there are many times when I don\'t comment at all...
Look after yourself.

September 9th, 2022 18:45