Comments received on poems by shanzah
Belief
Pop64 said:
It\'s painful when love can seem one-sided. We so often lose ourselves in cases like that as it seems the subject has in this write. You can only find worth in self when first you accept all of yourself, good and bad. Then you have your power back and the only hold over you then should be reciprocal love. I enjoyed this read.
September 13th, 2023 09:02
Pop64 said:
It\'s painful when love can seem one-sided. We so often lose ourselves in cases like that as it seems the subject has in this write. You can only find worth in self when first you accept all of yourself, good and bad. Then you have your power back and the only hold over you then should be reciprocal love. I enjoyed this read.
September 13th, 2023 09:02
Grant me closure
L. B. Mek said:
yes, we must face the worst
in their eyes resides, the nightmare
we fear to admit to ourselves..
(a poignantly relatable read, thanks for sharing)
August 28th, 2023 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
yes, we must face the worst
in their eyes resides, the nightmare
we fear to admit to ourselves..
(a poignantly relatable read, thanks for sharing)
August 28th, 2023 04:41
About you
Bobby O said:
Getting addicted to the pain has avenues of risk. Perhaps the catharsis of seeing it in black and white increases focus and prompts strength to form a plan that opens s path for hope
July 4th, 2023 22:29
Bobby O said:
Getting addicted to the pain has avenues of risk. Perhaps the catharsis of seeing it in black and white increases focus and prompts strength to form a plan that opens s path for hope
July 4th, 2023 22:29
You and me against the world
Crystal Hope said:
sometimes that\'s all we have. a beautiful read here.
May 27th, 2023 14:56
Crystal Hope said:
sometimes that\'s all we have. a beautiful read here.
May 27th, 2023 14:56
To an end
Bloodorange said:
I would have to agree that line I kept it like oath with trust . Man I felt that , amazing poem . Much love to you ❤️
May 13th, 2023 09:19
Bloodorange said:
I would have to agree that line I kept it like oath with trust . Man I felt that , amazing poem . Much love to you ❤️
May 13th, 2023 09:19
To an end
Bobby O said:
I kept it like an oath w trust and so much more.
That’s a powerful line and those 12 words create an image like it was a hundred words nice write, good read.
May 13th, 2023 04:14
Bobby O said:
I kept it like an oath w trust and so much more.
That’s a powerful line and those 12 words create an image like it was a hundred words nice write, good read.
May 13th, 2023 04:14
All I wanted
Haiden Xandria said:
Sometimes our expectations didn\'t align with reality, and we need time to heal from it. A great poem that conveys emotions.
November 25th, 2022 22:43
Haiden Xandria said:
Sometimes our expectations didn\'t align with reality, and we need time to heal from it. A great poem that conveys emotions.
November 25th, 2022 22:43
All I wanted
Santajah Douglass said:
I felt your emotions and your poem has truly touch my heart. What a beautiful piece you have written.
November 25th, 2022 20:11
Santajah Douglass said:
I felt your emotions and your poem has truly touch my heart. What a beautiful piece you have written.
November 25th, 2022 20:11
