Comments received on poems by arial
Heart Beats Fast
peto said:
Nicely done arial
Enjoyed the repetition
Also
,\"let\'s see the happiness we blanked \"
Is a superb line
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
April 25th, 2024 21:40
peto said:
Nicely done arial
Enjoyed the repetition
Also
,\"let\'s see the happiness we blanked \"
Is a superb line
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
April 25th, 2024 21:40
A bearer of a name
Cloie said:
Your poem navigates the complexities of existence with vivid imagery and introspection. It\'s a beautiful reflection on the struggle to find meaning amidst fatigue and the fleeting moments of joy that bring solace.
February 25th, 2024 05:51
Cloie said:
Your poem navigates the complexities of existence with vivid imagery and introspection. It\'s a beautiful reflection on the struggle to find meaning amidst fatigue and the fleeting moments of joy that bring solace.
February 25th, 2024 05:51
A bearer of a name
David Wakeling said:
This is very well written.Some deep reflections here
February 24th, 2024 15:19
David Wakeling said:
This is very well written.Some deep reflections here
February 24th, 2024 15:19
Melody of a cremated soul
AuburnScribbler said:
I has to read this, because of the title alone, which is an absolute corker!
Wonderfully written here arial, and the two questions you have raised in this poem, are incredibly pertinent, as with today, there is a lot of over idolising of celebrities, to jump on some sort of bandwagon, and with hardships repeating all over the world, the clear increase of the concern of people\'s mental health.
If only such praises that are given to such art (for the right reasons), can be the foundation of a change in the way we operate, as a species.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 11th, 2023 08:43
AuburnScribbler said:
I has to read this, because of the title alone, which is an absolute corker!
Wonderfully written here arial, and the two questions you have raised in this poem, are incredibly pertinent, as with today, there is a lot of over idolising of celebrities, to jump on some sort of bandwagon, and with hardships repeating all over the world, the clear increase of the concern of people\'s mental health.
If only such praises that are given to such art (for the right reasons), can be the foundation of a change in the way we operate, as a species.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 11th, 2023 08:43
A hug from a sweet child
peto said:
You captured a beautiful moment here
Thanks for sharing it
July 27th, 2023 04:39
peto said:
You captured a beautiful moment here
Thanks for sharing it
July 27th, 2023 04:39
Slow sigh slow sigh
Bobby O said:
Beautifully creative use of recurring and sliding theme.
Nice write good read
July 22nd, 2023 00:41
Bobby O said:
Beautifully creative use of recurring and sliding theme.
Nice write good read
July 22nd, 2023 00:41
Beating rhythms
L. B. Mek said:
very creative and intimate
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2023 02:53
L. B. Mek said:
very creative and intimate
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2023 02:53
Angels of night
Bobby O said:
Too used to these strings
Great line. It says so many things and perfectly balances the piece. I like it. Nice write.
May 21st, 2023 00:06
Bobby O said:
Too used to these strings
Great line. It says so many things and perfectly balances the piece. I like it. Nice write.
May 21st, 2023 00:06
Lingering
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
really like the brevity of your poetry
indeed, so much abundant nature
striving to remind us
there\'s still worth in each gifted, breath
yet weary eyes exist, befuddled
by memory\'s painful live stream
recollecting antics
and so
like most of modernity, we walk
while scrolling, images
removed from all that surrounds us
and those opportunities
to that better we dream of
yet, fail to notice...
March 31st, 2023 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
really like the brevity of your poetry
indeed, so much abundant nature
striving to remind us
there\'s still worth in each gifted, breath
yet weary eyes exist, befuddled
by memory\'s painful live stream
recollecting antics
and so
like most of modernity, we walk
while scrolling, images
removed from all that surrounds us
and those opportunities
to that better we dream of
yet, fail to notice...
March 31st, 2023 05:19
A stroll in the storm
L. B. Mek said:
really expressive
I like your utilisation of art
to affirm your resolution
indeed, may it truly be
\'just a stage, in your timeline\'
and better days, await you
just around that next birthday
corner..
hope fate rewards, your positive mindset
a rarity, in our doom n gloom modernity\'s
\'age of anxiety\'
thanks for sharing, stay strong!
March 27th, 2023 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
really expressive
I like your utilisation of art
to affirm your resolution
indeed, may it truly be
\'just a stage, in your timeline\'
and better days, await you
just around that next birthday
corner..
hope fate rewards, your positive mindset
a rarity, in our doom n gloom modernity\'s
\'age of anxiety\'
thanks for sharing, stay strong!
March 27th, 2023 05:18
