Comments received on poems by arial
Morning verses
Thoughtless said:
What if? The largest phrase in the language.
September 1st, 2024 23:46
Thoughtless said:
What if? The largest phrase in the language.
September 1st, 2024 23:46
The gentle kill
Thoughtless said:
Every silver lining has dark cloud.
Nice way to turn things upside down.
August 20th, 2024 14:03
Thoughtless said:
Every silver lining has dark cloud.
Nice way to turn things upside down.
August 20th, 2024 14:03
The gentle kill
Cassie58 said:
I hear lyrics. Do you sing ?
How do we get along …a question many will pose at times. Finding the answer isn’t always easy. Have a good Tuesday.
August 20th, 2024 13:35
Cassie58 said:
I hear lyrics. Do you sing ?
How do we get along …a question many will pose at times. Finding the answer isn’t always easy. Have a good Tuesday.
August 20th, 2024 13:35
Echo
Thoughtless said:
Wishing for anyone, a plaintiff cry of the lonely. Perhaps tabula rasa is better.
August 19th, 2024 15:00
Thoughtless said:
Wishing for anyone, a plaintiff cry of the lonely. Perhaps tabula rasa is better.
August 19th, 2024 15:00
Echo
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of a search for someone with a common interest.
August 19th, 2024 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of a search for someone with a common interest.
August 19th, 2024 11:01
Cosplay hiring
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view of things. Nicely done
August 17th, 2024 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view of things. Nicely done
August 17th, 2024 13:39
Sinking ships in my mirage oceans
sorenbarrett said:
A message of reaching one\'s limit sent and received. Powerful
August 8th, 2024 12:19
sorenbarrett said:
A message of reaching one\'s limit sent and received. Powerful
August 8th, 2024 12:19
A clip between blinks
Maplespal said:
you need more sleep
there is always more
past a religious noose
past the sheep
to the distant shore
where memories snooze
June 24th, 2024 16:39
Maplespal said:
you need more sleep
there is always more
past a religious noose
past the sheep
to the distant shore
where memories snooze
June 24th, 2024 16:39
Heart Beats Fast
peto said:
Nicely done arial
Enjoyed the repetition
Also
,\"let\'s see the happiness we blanked \"
Is a superb line
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
April 25th, 2024 21:40
peto said:
Nicely done arial
Enjoyed the repetition
Also
,\"let\'s see the happiness we blanked \"
Is a superb line
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
April 25th, 2024 21:40
A bearer of a name
Cloie said:
Your poem navigates the complexities of existence with vivid imagery and introspection. It\'s a beautiful reflection on the struggle to find meaning amidst fatigue and the fleeting moments of joy that bring solace.
February 25th, 2024 05:51
Cloie said:
Your poem navigates the complexities of existence with vivid imagery and introspection. It\'s a beautiful reflection on the struggle to find meaning amidst fatigue and the fleeting moments of joy that bring solace.
February 25th, 2024 05:51
A bearer of a name
David Wakeling said:
This is very well written.Some deep reflections here
February 24th, 2024 15:19
David Wakeling said:
This is very well written.Some deep reflections here
February 24th, 2024 15:19
Melody of a cremated soul
AuburnScribbler said:
I has to read this, because of the title alone, which is an absolute corker!
Wonderfully written here arial, and the two questions you have raised in this poem, are incredibly pertinent, as with today, there is a lot of over idolising of celebrities, to jump on some sort of bandwagon, and with hardships repeating all over the world, the clear increase of the concern of people\'s mental health.
If only such praises that are given to such art (for the right reasons), can be the foundation of a change in the way we operate, as a species.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 11th, 2023 08:43
AuburnScribbler said:
I has to read this, because of the title alone, which is an absolute corker!
Wonderfully written here arial, and the two questions you have raised in this poem, are incredibly pertinent, as with today, there is a lot of over idolising of celebrities, to jump on some sort of bandwagon, and with hardships repeating all over the world, the clear increase of the concern of people\'s mental health.
If only such praises that are given to such art (for the right reasons), can be the foundation of a change in the way we operate, as a species.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 11th, 2023 08:43
A hug from a sweet child
peto said:
You captured a beautiful moment here
Thanks for sharing it
July 27th, 2023 04:39
peto said:
You captured a beautiful moment here
Thanks for sharing it
July 27th, 2023 04:39
Slow sigh slow sigh
Bobby O said:
Beautifully creative use of recurring and sliding theme.
Nice write good read
July 22nd, 2023 00:41
Bobby O said:
Beautifully creative use of recurring and sliding theme.
Nice write good read
July 22nd, 2023 00:41
Beating rhythms
L. B. Mek said:
very creative and intimate
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2023 02:53
L. B. Mek said:
very creative and intimate
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2023 02:53
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