Comments received on poems by arial
Soul city
Poetic Licence said:
A fun write but also has catchy feel to it, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 02:10
Poetic Licence said:
A fun write but also has catchy feel to it, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 02:10
Soul city
Neilton said:
Great write ! I feel like this could turn into a fun song!
May 13th, 2025 00:55
Neilton said:
Great write ! I feel like this could turn into a fun song!
May 13th, 2025 00:55
Branched allure
RSM0812 said:
This was really interesting with hidden meaning behind the words. Thought provoking and pretty.
May 6th, 2025 15:52
RSM0812 said:
This was really interesting with hidden meaning behind the words. Thought provoking and pretty.
May 6th, 2025 15:52
Branched allure
sorenbarrett said:
With another verse of two it could well be a song. Very nicely done
May 4th, 2025 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
With another verse of two it could well be a song. Very nicely done
May 4th, 2025 19:23
Fogged rainbows
Poetic Licence said:
There is more to this write than first seen, a deep and well written write, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 01:59
Poetic Licence said:
There is more to this write than first seen, a deep and well written write, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 01:59
Fogged rainbows
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and at the same time deep thought. Nicely written.
April 17th, 2025 17:22
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and at the same time deep thought. Nicely written.
April 17th, 2025 17:22
The uneven strokes
sorenbarrett said:
Opposites and unexpected in each line. Nicely written
April 4th, 2025 17:36
sorenbarrett said:
Opposites and unexpected in each line. Nicely written
April 4th, 2025 17:36
The sound of you
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of control and it will be there until death, well expressed write
March 18th, 2025 03:06
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of control and it will be there until death, well expressed write
March 18th, 2025 03:06
The sound of you
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unity the goes beyond death. Nicely said.
March 17th, 2025 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unity the goes beyond death. Nicely said.
March 17th, 2025 14:59
Rippling rhymes
Poetic Licence said:
A write that gently speaks to you, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 13:01
Poetic Licence said:
A write that gently speaks to you, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 13:01
The ocean waves and the calm beach
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the clever nature of this write, which you interpret for a few meanings, well written
March 5th, 2025 03:02
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the clever nature of this write, which you interpret for a few meanings, well written
March 5th, 2025 03:02
The ocean waves and the calm beach
Soman Ragavan said:
“Broken threads” : hints, suggestions we followed but which led nowhere.
“Where minds are calmer” : there is some part of us that is free from battles
“The breaths can relay where nobody wins” : something in us keeps us going, even when there is apparent loss around us.
“We just let it sway” : we let go; letting go; letting go is a device of coping, of moving on from that which cannot be achieved or which torments us. We let things go the want they want to.
“ Yes, we still get played on our set of delays” : delays have consequences; but we cannot help it.
“But no one is ours” : there is always a human compulsion to own things or even people. We want to take control of people, even those close to us. This is an inherent human nature but can also be seen in other forms of life. Animals will fight to defend their “territories.” It’s ownership not only of living beings, but also of things, dwellings, nests, jobs, property, etc.
A lot of philosophy in these six lines... Soman Ragavan.
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March 4th, 2025 19:42
Soman Ragavan said:
“Broken threads” : hints, suggestions we followed but which led nowhere.
“Where minds are calmer” : there is some part of us that is free from battles
“The breaths can relay where nobody wins” : something in us keeps us going, even when there is apparent loss around us.
“We just let it sway” : we let go; letting go; letting go is a device of coping, of moving on from that which cannot be achieved or which torments us. We let things go the want they want to.
“ Yes, we still get played on our set of delays” : delays have consequences; but we cannot help it.
“But no one is ours” : there is always a human compulsion to own things or even people. We want to take control of people, even those close to us. This is an inherent human nature but can also be seen in other forms of life. Animals will fight to defend their “territories.” It’s ownership not only of living beings, but also of things, dwellings, nests, jobs, property, etc.
A lot of philosophy in these six lines... Soman Ragavan.
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March 4th, 2025 19:42
The ocean waves and the calm beach
sorenbarrett said:
This is a very good write with a weaving of words and rhyme as well as meaning that can be taken as a metaphor. Very nice
March 4th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
This is a very good write with a weaving of words and rhyme as well as meaning that can be taken as a metaphor. Very nice
March 4th, 2025 17:40
The last bell
Poetic Licence said:
Thought provoking and interesting read, which i enjoyed
February 15th, 2025 02:50
Poetic Licence said:
Thought provoking and interesting read, which i enjoyed
February 15th, 2025 02:50
The last bell
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that required several readings to better understand. Mind provoking now I feel at rest thinking that I have probed its depths
February 14th, 2025 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that required several readings to better understand. Mind provoking now I feel at rest thinking that I have probed its depths
February 14th, 2025 17:28
A weed crown
Poetic Licence said:
many things are cast aside or not dealt with correctly, by just sticking a label on them. Enjoyed the read
December 25th, 2024 01:13
Poetic Licence said:
many things are cast aside or not dealt with correctly, by just sticking a label on them. Enjoyed the read
December 25th, 2024 01:13
A weed crown
sorenbarrett said:
Lables like categories a useless form of identification. Pejorative they deminish the dignity of the individual. A most interesting poem
December 24th, 2024 18:24
sorenbarrett said:
Lables like categories a useless form of identification. Pejorative they deminish the dignity of the individual. A most interesting poem
December 24th, 2024 18:24
Cherry blossom
Poetic Licence said:
It comes across as 2 people talking to each other, when one of them is near the end. Enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 01:50
Poetic Licence said:
It comes across as 2 people talking to each other, when one of them is near the end. Enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 01:50
Morning verses
Thoughtless said:
What if? The largest phrase in the language.
September 1st, 2024 23:46
Thoughtless said:
What if? The largest phrase in the language.
September 1st, 2024 23:46
The gentle kill
Thoughtless said:
Every silver lining has dark cloud.
Nice way to turn things upside down.
August 20th, 2024 14:03
Thoughtless said:
Every silver lining has dark cloud.
Nice way to turn things upside down.
August 20th, 2024 14:03
The gentle kill
Cassie58 said:
I hear lyrics. Do you sing ?
How do we get along …a question many will pose at times. Finding the answer isn’t always easy. Have a good Tuesday.
August 20th, 2024 13:35
Cassie58 said:
I hear lyrics. Do you sing ?
How do we get along …a question many will pose at times. Finding the answer isn’t always easy. Have a good Tuesday.
August 20th, 2024 13:35
Echo
Thoughtless said:
Wishing for anyone, a plaintiff cry of the lonely. Perhaps tabula rasa is better.
August 19th, 2024 15:00
Thoughtless said:
Wishing for anyone, a plaintiff cry of the lonely. Perhaps tabula rasa is better.
August 19th, 2024 15:00
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