Comments received on poems by arial
The sound of you
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of control and it will be there until death, well expressed write
March 18th, 2025 03:06
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of control and it will be there until death, well expressed write
March 18th, 2025 03:06
The sound of you
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unity the goes beyond death. Nicely said.
March 17th, 2025 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unity the goes beyond death. Nicely said.
March 17th, 2025 14:59
Rippling rhymes
Poetic Licence said:
A write that gently speaks to you, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 13:01
Poetic Licence said:
A write that gently speaks to you, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 13:01
The ocean waves and the calm beach
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the clever nature of this write, which you interpret for a few meanings, well written
March 5th, 2025 03:02
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the clever nature of this write, which you interpret for a few meanings, well written
March 5th, 2025 03:02
The ocean waves and the calm beach
Soman Ragavan said:
“Broken threads” : hints, suggestions we followed but which led nowhere.
“Where minds are calmer” : there is some part of us that is free from battles
“The breaths can relay where nobody wins” : something in us keeps us going, even when there is apparent loss around us.
“We just let it sway” : we let go; letting go; letting go is a device of coping, of moving on from that which cannot be achieved or which torments us. We let things go the want they want to.
“ Yes, we still get played on our set of delays” : delays have consequences; but we cannot help it.
“But no one is ours” : there is always a human compulsion to own things or even people. We want to take control of people, even those close to us. This is an inherent human nature but can also be seen in other forms of life. Animals will fight to defend their “territories.” It’s ownership not only of living beings, but also of things, dwellings, nests, jobs, property, etc.
A lot of philosophy in these six lines... Soman Ragavan.
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March 4th, 2025 19:42
Soman Ragavan said:
“Broken threads” : hints, suggestions we followed but which led nowhere.
“Where minds are calmer” : there is some part of us that is free from battles
“The breaths can relay where nobody wins” : something in us keeps us going, even when there is apparent loss around us.
“We just let it sway” : we let go; letting go; letting go is a device of coping, of moving on from that which cannot be achieved or which torments us. We let things go the want they want to.
“ Yes, we still get played on our set of delays” : delays have consequences; but we cannot help it.
“But no one is ours” : there is always a human compulsion to own things or even people. We want to take control of people, even those close to us. This is an inherent human nature but can also be seen in other forms of life. Animals will fight to defend their “territories.” It’s ownership not only of living beings, but also of things, dwellings, nests, jobs, property, etc.
A lot of philosophy in these six lines... Soman Ragavan.
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March 4th, 2025 19:42
The ocean waves and the calm beach
sorenbarrett said:
This is a very good write with a weaving of words and rhyme as well as meaning that can be taken as a metaphor. Very nice
March 4th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
This is a very good write with a weaving of words and rhyme as well as meaning that can be taken as a metaphor. Very nice
March 4th, 2025 17:40
The last bell
Poetic Licence said:
Thought provoking and interesting read, which i enjoyed
February 15th, 2025 02:50
Poetic Licence said:
Thought provoking and interesting read, which i enjoyed
February 15th, 2025 02:50
The last bell
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that required several readings to better understand. Mind provoking now I feel at rest thinking that I have probed its depths
February 14th, 2025 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that required several readings to better understand. Mind provoking now I feel at rest thinking that I have probed its depths
February 14th, 2025 17:28
A weed crown
Poetic Licence said:
many things are cast aside or not dealt with correctly, by just sticking a label on them. Enjoyed the read
December 25th, 2024 01:13
Poetic Licence said:
many things are cast aside or not dealt with correctly, by just sticking a label on them. Enjoyed the read
December 25th, 2024 01:13
A weed crown
sorenbarrett said:
Lables like categories a useless form of identification. Pejorative they deminish the dignity of the individual. A most interesting poem
December 24th, 2024 18:24
sorenbarrett said:
Lables like categories a useless form of identification. Pejorative they deminish the dignity of the individual. A most interesting poem
December 24th, 2024 18:24
Cherry blossom
Poetic Licence said:
It comes across as 2 people talking to each other, when one of them is near the end. Enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 01:50
Poetic Licence said:
It comes across as 2 people talking to each other, when one of them is near the end. Enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 01:50
Morning verses
Thoughtless said:
What if? The largest phrase in the language.
September 1st, 2024 23:46
Thoughtless said:
What if? The largest phrase in the language.
September 1st, 2024 23:46
The gentle kill
Thoughtless said:
Every silver lining has dark cloud.
Nice way to turn things upside down.
August 20th, 2024 14:03
Thoughtless said:
Every silver lining has dark cloud.
Nice way to turn things upside down.
August 20th, 2024 14:03
The gentle kill
Cassie58 said:
I hear lyrics. Do you sing ?
How do we get along …a question many will pose at times. Finding the answer isn’t always easy. Have a good Tuesday.
August 20th, 2024 13:35
Cassie58 said:
I hear lyrics. Do you sing ?
How do we get along …a question many will pose at times. Finding the answer isn’t always easy. Have a good Tuesday.
August 20th, 2024 13:35
Echo
Thoughtless said:
Wishing for anyone, a plaintiff cry of the lonely. Perhaps tabula rasa is better.
August 19th, 2024 15:00
Thoughtless said:
Wishing for anyone, a plaintiff cry of the lonely. Perhaps tabula rasa is better.
August 19th, 2024 15:00
Echo
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of a search for someone with a common interest.
August 19th, 2024 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of a search for someone with a common interest.
August 19th, 2024 11:01
Cosplay hiring
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view of things. Nicely done
August 17th, 2024 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view of things. Nicely done
August 17th, 2024 13:39
Sinking ships in my mirage oceans
sorenbarrett said:
A message of reaching one\'s limit sent and received. Powerful
August 8th, 2024 12:19
sorenbarrett said:
A message of reaching one\'s limit sent and received. Powerful
August 8th, 2024 12:19
A clip between blinks
Maplespal said:
you need more sleep
there is always more
past a religious noose
past the sheep
to the distant shore
where memories snooze
June 24th, 2024 16:39
Maplespal said:
you need more sleep
there is always more
past a religious noose
past the sheep
to the distant shore
where memories snooze
June 24th, 2024 16:39
Heart Beats Fast
peto said:
Nicely done arial
Enjoyed the repetition
Also
,\"let\'s see the happiness we blanked \"
Is a superb line
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
April 25th, 2024 21:40
peto said:
Nicely done arial
Enjoyed the repetition
Also
,\"let\'s see the happiness we blanked \"
Is a superb line
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
April 25th, 2024 21:40
A bearer of a name
Cloie said:
Your poem navigates the complexities of existence with vivid imagery and introspection. It\'s a beautiful reflection on the struggle to find meaning amidst fatigue and the fleeting moments of joy that bring solace.
February 25th, 2024 05:51
Cloie said:
Your poem navigates the complexities of existence with vivid imagery and introspection. It\'s a beautiful reflection on the struggle to find meaning amidst fatigue and the fleeting moments of joy that bring solace.
February 25th, 2024 05:51
A bearer of a name
David Wakeling said:
This is very well written.Some deep reflections here
February 24th, 2024 15:19
David Wakeling said:
This is very well written.Some deep reflections here
February 24th, 2024 15:19
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