Comments received on poems by arial
The magic castle
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write on perspectives and the issue of who is the imprisoned one and which is the happy one. Well done
January 11th, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write on perspectives and the issue of who is the imprisoned one and which is the happy one. Well done
January 11th, 2026 13:03
Folks song
sorenbarrett said:
I love the way that you have made the example of the sand that later is copied with the staying of the people. It makes one wonder why and the answer to me is the same for the sand and people it is who we are. A lovely write
December 27th, 2025 14:28
sorenbarrett said:
I love the way that you have made the example of the sand that later is copied with the staying of the people. It makes one wonder why and the answer to me is the same for the sand and people it is who we are. A lovely write
December 27th, 2025 14:28
Him her
sorenbarrett said:
This is a magnificent poem of opposites and the dance that they do. A lovely poem that deserves a fave
December 11th, 2025 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
This is a magnificent poem of opposites and the dance that they do. A lovely poem that deserves a fave
December 11th, 2025 15:08
Thunder
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems to say that if it was not meant to be it is not meant to be
November 8th, 2025 15:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems to say that if it was not meant to be it is not meant to be
November 8th, 2025 15:51
1 into 25
sorenbarrett said:
Here the incongruities merge into cold tea under covers. Very nicely written
November 3rd, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
Here the incongruities merge into cold tea under covers. Very nicely written
November 3rd, 2025 11:49
Nightmares
NafisaSB said:
the turmoil within you, the mention of the night owl keeping in sync with your thoughts - all this has been beautifully laid down...enjoyed the read
October 14th, 2025 23:49
NafisaSB said:
the turmoil within you, the mention of the night owl keeping in sync with your thoughts - all this has been beautifully laid down...enjoyed the read
October 14th, 2025 23:49
Human
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer to self and God as one reflects. Well written
October 14th, 2025 13:44
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer to self and God as one reflects. Well written
October 14th, 2025 13:44
Falling star
RSM0812 said:
This ebvokes to me the seperation of dreams and reality. Where do we draw the line and what can we learn. Nice ✍️
October 14th, 2025 05:21
RSM0812 said:
This ebvokes to me the seperation of dreams and reality. Where do we draw the line and what can we learn. Nice ✍️
October 14th, 2025 05:21
Nightmares
RSM0812 said:
An interesting read. I find myself asking what do the owls symbolize. You can break it down for me if you want. I thouroughly enjoyed the read.
October 11th, 2025 20:46
RSM0812 said:
An interesting read. I find myself asking what do the owls symbolize. You can break it down for me if you want. I thouroughly enjoyed the read.
October 11th, 2025 20:46
Nightmares
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, some owls are guardian\'s of the night or omens of death, so having these in a nightmare could be a good or bad thing, depending on your view, enjoyed the read
October 11th, 2025 17:19
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, some owls are guardian\'s of the night or omens of death, so having these in a nightmare could be a good or bad thing, depending on your view, enjoyed the read
October 11th, 2025 17:19
Nightmares
sorenbarrett said:
They say owls are omens of death but I feel akin with them and have sat at my back yard table calling them and sitting with three of them around me at the table and another two on my roof. Love those noble beasts. A good poem that I related to
October 11th, 2025 16:40
sorenbarrett said:
They say owls are omens of death but I feel akin with them and have sat at my back yard table calling them and sitting with three of them around me at the table and another two on my roof. Love those noble beasts. A good poem that I related to
October 11th, 2025 16:40
Evening strolls
RSM0812 said:
Nothing like a women taking care of her man! Nicely done. I truely enjoyed the read.
October 6th, 2025 20:24
RSM0812 said:
Nothing like a women taking care of her man! Nicely done. I truely enjoyed the read.
October 6th, 2025 20:24
Evening strolls
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of nurturing love and care taking over for another that is loved. Well written
October 6th, 2025 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of nurturing love and care taking over for another that is loved. Well written
October 6th, 2025 14:57
Fallen leaf
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Sad and deeply felt. Nicely done.
September 24th, 2025 16:36
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Sad and deeply felt. Nicely done.
September 24th, 2025 16:36
Fallen leaf
sorenbarrett said:
The image of a treadmill road that has no real destination. Nicely worded
September 24th, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
The image of a treadmill road that has no real destination. Nicely worded
September 24th, 2025 11:23
A knock on my door
sorenbarrett said:
A poem most thought provoking that drops one into a situation and plucks one out leaving a fragment with no memory. Nicely done
September 20th, 2025 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem most thought provoking that drops one into a situation and plucks one out leaving a fragment with no memory. Nicely done
September 20th, 2025 10:18
A delightful pinch
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that provokes thought. Well done
September 9th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that provokes thought. Well done
September 9th, 2025 10:45
Christmas eve
sorenbarrett said:
Time moves on and the first signs of year end and the winter of Christmas signaled by September and the fall. Nice write
September 1st, 2025 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Time moves on and the first signs of year end and the winter of Christmas signaled by September and the fall. Nice write
September 1st, 2025 11:35
Identity
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written there have been many a night I did not want to go home. Good write
August 29th, 2025 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written there have been many a night I did not want to go home. Good write
August 29th, 2025 14:10
Warmth of kin
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being tied by blood that they want to be free off, sadly we can\'t choose our family, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 00:50
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being tied by blood that they want to be free off, sadly we can\'t choose our family, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 00:50
Warmth of kin
sorenbarrett said:
It seems like the major feeling here is discontent. We have no say over being born or to whom. We choose our friends not our family. Sell written
August 11th, 2025 15:56
sorenbarrett said:
It seems like the major feeling here is discontent. We have no say over being born or to whom. We choose our friends not our family. Sell written
August 11th, 2025 15:56
Lalalala
sorenbarrett said:
A call for accounting, a lineup, a revelee and none appear a haunting experience. Nicely depicted in this poem.
August 5th, 2025 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
A call for accounting, a lineup, a revelee and none appear a haunting experience. Nicely depicted in this poem.
August 5th, 2025 16:46
Hello rainy day
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking afraid no and never smile in vain. Fun read
July 27th, 2025 18:32
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking afraid no and never smile in vain. Fun read
July 27th, 2025 18:32
Unicorn
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written piece expressing the longing for last visit, well written
July 14th, 2025 22:16
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written piece expressing the longing for last visit, well written
July 14th, 2025 22:16
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