Comments received on poems by arial
Warmth of kin
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being tied by blood that they want to be free off, sadly we can\'t choose our family, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 00:50
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being tied by blood that they want to be free off, sadly we can\'t choose our family, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 00:50
Warmth of kin
sorenbarrett said:
It seems like the major feeling here is discontent. We have no say over being born or to whom. We choose our friends not our family. Sell written
August 11th, 2025 15:56
sorenbarrett said:
It seems like the major feeling here is discontent. We have no say over being born or to whom. We choose our friends not our family. Sell written
August 11th, 2025 15:56
Lalalala
sorenbarrett said:
A call for accounting, a lineup, a revelee and none appear a haunting experience. Nicely depicted in this poem.
August 5th, 2025 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
A call for accounting, a lineup, a revelee and none appear a haunting experience. Nicely depicted in this poem.
August 5th, 2025 16:46
Hello rainy day
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking afraid no and never smile in vain. Fun read
July 27th, 2025 18:32
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking afraid no and never smile in vain. Fun read
July 27th, 2025 18:32
Unicorn
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written piece expressing the longing for last visit, well written
July 14th, 2025 22:16
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written piece expressing the longing for last visit, well written
July 14th, 2025 22:16
Unicorn
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for one more visit that is longing in its asking. Nicely written
July 14th, 2025 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for one more visit that is longing in its asking. Nicely written
July 14th, 2025 14:43
A sailing ship in a deserted land
sorenbarrett said:
A write about who one is and the personal nature of that Nicely done
July 8th, 2025 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
A write about who one is and the personal nature of that Nicely done
July 8th, 2025 13:57
Decree of the realm
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written write of understanding what is important and what we need to let go, and excepting to just let life be, nicely expressed and written
June 20th, 2025 17:06
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written write of understanding what is important and what we need to let go, and excepting to just let life be, nicely expressed and written
June 20th, 2025 17:06
Decree of the realm
Alex Arnot said:
Very vibrant imagery! Strange how peaceful moments make us reflect on our gloomiest feelings.
June 20th, 2025 15:14
Alex Arnot said:
Very vibrant imagery! Strange how peaceful moments make us reflect on our gloomiest feelings.
June 20th, 2025 15:14
Decree of the realm
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of what is of value and with a sense of peace and acceptance to let it be. Wonderful
June 20th, 2025 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of what is of value and with a sense of peace and acceptance to let it be. Wonderful
June 20th, 2025 14:24
Leaflets
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with sense of longing for something that cannot return, it kinda has a catchy flow to it, nicely written
June 15th, 2025 02:28
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with sense of longing for something that cannot return, it kinda has a catchy flow to it, nicely written
June 15th, 2025 02:28
Leaflets
sorenbarrett said:
There is melody in the words but from their meaning I take that there is a longing for the past that will never return. Nicely done
June 14th, 2025 17:21
sorenbarrett said:
There is melody in the words but from their meaning I take that there is a longing for the past that will never return. Nicely done
June 14th, 2025 17:21
The ocean waves and the calm beach
Caring dove said:
Nice feel and tone to this poem I like it ))
June 10th, 2025 21:27
Caring dove said:
Nice feel and tone to this poem I like it ))
June 10th, 2025 21:27
I notice
sorenbarrett said:
Heart felt the heart to poetry. Touching and sad it bleeds. It is human. Pain sings in this piece. Direct but a metaphor. In simplicity less is more. A fave
June 10th, 2025 20:21
sorenbarrett said:
Heart felt the heart to poetry. Touching and sad it bleeds. It is human. Pain sings in this piece. Direct but a metaphor. In simplicity less is more. A fave
June 10th, 2025 20:21
Mirage
RSM0812 said:
Great imagery in this piece. I can easily picture both the scene and emotion. Nicely done.
June 8th, 2025 08:56
RSM0812 said:
Great imagery in this piece. I can easily picture both the scene and emotion. Nicely done.
June 8th, 2025 08:56
Soul city
Poetic Licence said:
A fun write but also has catchy feel to it, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 02:10
Poetic Licence said:
A fun write but also has catchy feel to it, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 02:10
Soul city
Neilton said:
Great write ! I feel like this could turn into a fun song!
May 13th, 2025 00:55
Neilton said:
Great write ! I feel like this could turn into a fun song!
May 13th, 2025 00:55
Branched allure
RSM0812 said:
This was really interesting with hidden meaning behind the words. Thought provoking and pretty.
May 6th, 2025 15:52
RSM0812 said:
This was really interesting with hidden meaning behind the words. Thought provoking and pretty.
May 6th, 2025 15:52
Branched allure
sorenbarrett said:
With another verse of two it could well be a song. Very nicely done
May 4th, 2025 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
With another verse of two it could well be a song. Very nicely done
May 4th, 2025 19:23
Fogged rainbows
Poetic Licence said:
There is more to this write than first seen, a deep and well written write, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 01:59
Poetic Licence said:
There is more to this write than first seen, a deep and well written write, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 01:59
Fogged rainbows
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and at the same time deep thought. Nicely written.
April 17th, 2025 17:22
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and at the same time deep thought. Nicely written.
April 17th, 2025 17:22
The uneven strokes
sorenbarrett said:
Opposites and unexpected in each line. Nicely written
April 4th, 2025 17:36
sorenbarrett said:
Opposites and unexpected in each line. Nicely written
April 4th, 2025 17:36
The sound of you
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of control and it will be there until death, well expressed write
March 18th, 2025 03:06
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of control and it will be there until death, well expressed write
March 18th, 2025 03:06
The sound of you
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unity the goes beyond death. Nicely said.
March 17th, 2025 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unity the goes beyond death. Nicely said.
March 17th, 2025 14:59
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