Comments received on poems by arial



Angels of night
Bobby O said:

Too used to these strings
Great line. It says so many things and perfectly balances the piece. I like it. Nice write.

May 21st, 2023 00:06

Lingering
L. B. Mek said:

thanks for sharing
really like the brevity of your poetry
indeed, so much abundant nature
striving to remind us
there\'s still worth in each gifted, breath
yet weary eyes exist, befuddled
by memory\'s painful live stream
recollecting antics
and so
like most of modernity, we walk
while scrolling, images
removed from all that surrounds us
and those opportunities
to that better we dream of
yet, fail to notice...

March 31st, 2023 05:19

A stroll in the storm
L. B. Mek said:

really expressive
I like your utilisation of art
to affirm your resolution
indeed, may it truly be
\'just a stage, in your timeline\'
and better days, await you
just around that next birthday
corner..
hope fate rewards, your positive mindset
a rarity, in our doom n gloom modernity\'s
\'age of anxiety\'
thanks for sharing, stay strong!

March 27th, 2023 05:18

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