Comments received on poems by charles69
Easy Money
L. B. Mek said:
(and yet, how many que outside foodbanks
every night
how many university students
sleep in their cars
after working three part-time jobs
just to pay for lessons
that can\'t guarantee them career\'s, but
saddle them with debts
before they\'re deemed old enough to drink...)
you shine a light, on an aspect of modernity
that none of us want to contemplate...
thanks for sharing, a great read
January 6th, 2023 06:56
L. B. Mek said:
(and yet, how many que outside foodbanks
every night
how many university students
sleep in their cars
after working three part-time jobs
just to pay for lessons
that can\'t guarantee them career\'s, but
saddle them with debts
before they\'re deemed old enough to drink...)
you shine a light, on an aspect of modernity
that none of us want to contemplate...
thanks for sharing, a great read
January 6th, 2023 06:56
Christmas On The Road
L. B. Mek said:
this is the Poetry, I live for
how I cherish your sincerity
humility, vulnerability and unflinching bravery
I aspire to scribble something this meaningful
before my journey with Poesy is inked dry..
thanks for sharing
hope and your son, stay safe
(I worked in logistics for a long time
and some of the greatest people I have ever met were long haul drivers
there\'s wisdom on those roads
they can\'t teach on blackboards)
Happy New Year dear Poet
January 6th, 2023 06:17
L. B. Mek said:
this is the Poetry, I live for
how I cherish your sincerity
humility, vulnerability and unflinching bravery
I aspire to scribble something this meaningful
before my journey with Poesy is inked dry..
thanks for sharing
hope and your son, stay safe
(I worked in logistics for a long time
and some of the greatest people I have ever met were long haul drivers
there\'s wisdom on those roads
they can\'t teach on blackboards)
Happy New Year dear Poet
January 6th, 2023 06:17
Boston Lay Beneath Our Pity
sorenbarrett said:
This was a touching piece that goes deeper than the surface. In a sense we are all homeless but we all have a home inside ourselves that we can find when we need it. I felt the layering in this piece and it required more than one reading to really appreciate.
January 4th, 2023 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
This was a touching piece that goes deeper than the surface. In a sense we are all homeless but we all have a home inside ourselves that we can find when we need it. I felt the layering in this piece and it required more than one reading to really appreciate.
January 4th, 2023 11:39
An Athlete Was Murdered, A Politician Disappeared
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing narrative
(even devoid of context or details)
well written, thanks for sharing
November 28th, 2022 06:02
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing narrative
(even devoid of context or details)
well written, thanks for sharing
November 28th, 2022 06:02
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