Comments received on poems by charles69
The April Fool Fool
Doggerel Dave said:
Ain\'t you gone yet?? Still smells like a song!
April 1st, 2023 20:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Ain\'t you gone yet?? Still smells like a song!
April 1st, 2023 20:52
Ain\'t That Wierd
Doggerel Dave said:
Weird is about right , mate. I tried to get a grip on the place, but never quite made it - very elusive.. Enjoyable in its own off beat way.
March 30th, 2023 18:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Weird is about right , mate. I tried to get a grip on the place, but never quite made it - very elusive.. Enjoyable in its own off beat way.
March 30th, 2023 18:24
I Don\'t Wanna Work Anymore
Doggerel Dave said:
To try something different is a good way to keep that poetic muscle alert and functioning. I couldn\'t sympathise more with your desire to do this.
March 28th, 2023 22:19
Doggerel Dave said:
To try something different is a good way to keep that poetic muscle alert and functioning. I couldn\'t sympathise more with your desire to do this.
March 28th, 2023 22:19
I Don\'t Wanna Work Anymore
Doggerel Dave said:
I knew that feeling, well expressed here, twenty one years ago, decided and never looked back. No regrets.
Are these the words of a song, Charles?
March 27th, 2023 23:41
Doggerel Dave said:
I knew that feeling, well expressed here, twenty one years ago, decided and never looked back. No regrets.
Are these the words of a song, Charles?
March 27th, 2023 23:41
If I Just Had Enough Money
L. B. Mek said:
crazy, I too have known hunger
so can relate
but some have hunger pains
as their daily rewards
for working twelve hour shifts;
so many pitfalls in life
money is a factor, to so much
misery, in the world
still, while you have your \'honey\'
try to remember
you already have one treasure
that money can\'t buy...
hope your luck changes for the better
sooner than later, dear poet
till then, fight to find
your gifted smiles in life
and cherish
even those brief moments of reprieve or relief
stay strong!
March 27th, 2023 03:25
L. B. Mek said:
crazy, I too have known hunger
so can relate
but some have hunger pains
as their daily rewards
for working twelve hour shifts;
so many pitfalls in life
money is a factor, to so much
misery, in the world
still, while you have your \'honey\'
try to remember
you already have one treasure
that money can\'t buy...
hope your luck changes for the better
sooner than later, dear poet
till then, fight to find
your gifted smiles in life
and cherish
even those brief moments of reprieve or relief
stay strong!
March 27th, 2023 03:25
If I Just Had Enough Money
Doggerel Dave said:
You get my full empathy here. Povery is shit - been there, done that. Not there now.
The temptation here is to go political, but there\'s enough of that in my other stuff if you need reinforcement.
Thoroughly enjoyed a well writ piece, Charles.
March 25th, 2023 16:52
Doggerel Dave said:
You get my full empathy here. Povery is shit - been there, done that. Not there now.
The temptation here is to go political, but there\'s enough of that in my other stuff if you need reinforcement.
Thoroughly enjoyed a well writ piece, Charles.
March 25th, 2023 16:52
Belle And Pore Ben
L. B. Mek said:
stark, subtle
encapsulating that wondrous
beauty of life..
may they rest in peace
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 24th, 2023 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
stark, subtle
encapsulating that wondrous
beauty of life..
may they rest in peace
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 24th, 2023 06:01
Shakespeare Doesn\'t Live Here Anymore
Norman Flagtea said:
I really liked your poem, Charles! \"Stream of Consciousness\" is always a very creative and powerful method to me. (If it is a method at all.)
Lawrence Ferlinghetti says: The poet doesn\'t have to understand his poems.
And Archibald McLeish wrote: A poem should not mean. But be.
March 18th, 2023 08:59
Norman Flagtea said:
I really liked your poem, Charles! \"Stream of Consciousness\" is always a very creative and powerful method to me. (If it is a method at all.)
Lawrence Ferlinghetti says: The poet doesn\'t have to understand his poems.
And Archibald McLeish wrote: A poem should not mean. But be.
March 18th, 2023 08:59
Shakespeare Doesn\'t Live Here Anymore
David Wakeling said:
Although a lot of work has been put in to write this I could really understand any of it.Nothing is explained.
March 18th, 2023 05:56
David Wakeling said:
Although a lot of work has been put in to write this I could really understand any of it.Nothing is explained.
March 18th, 2023 05:56
A Gentle Boy
Olaf Gatermann said:
A moving narrative that you put in a fine and sad ballad.
February 23rd, 2023 17:49
Olaf Gatermann said:
A moving narrative that you put in a fine and sad ballad.
February 23rd, 2023 17:49
Nursing Home Nurse
Christina8 said:
I\'m a nurse and this is a wonderful poem! Thanks for writing it!
February 20th, 2023 08:49
Christina8 said:
I\'m a nurse and this is a wonderful poem! Thanks for writing it!
February 20th, 2023 08:49
Nursing Home Nurse
L. B. Mek said:
\'It\'s never their intention\'
love the humanity
in your portrayal of empathetic job satisfaction
thanks for sharing, dear poet
you\'ve imbued so much warmth
in-to these lines
February 20th, 2023 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'It\'s never their intention\'
love the humanity
in your portrayal of empathetic job satisfaction
thanks for sharing, dear poet
you\'ve imbued so much warmth
in-to these lines
February 20th, 2023 03:47
Nursing Home Nurse
Doggerel Dave said:
Are you (or they - I\'m a little confused) paid enough?
Sounds like the place has a great atmosphere - which says something for your write, I think.
February 19th, 2023 20:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Are you (or they - I\'m a little confused) paid enough?
Sounds like the place has a great atmosphere - which says something for your write, I think.
February 19th, 2023 20:12
They\'ll Cut Off The Lights And Gas Tomorrow....
Doggerel Dave said:
Succinct neat poem about a situation which afflicts too many in so called civilized societies.
Well said.
February 17th, 2023 05:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Succinct neat poem about a situation which afflicts too many in so called civilized societies.
Well said.
February 17th, 2023 05:03
They\'ll Cut Off The Lights And Gas Tomorrow....
L. B. Mek said:
(a Truth, of so many
inflations and great depressions
as our seasonal reality
nightmares, hold no fears for us
police sirens, as lullaby\'s...)
thanks for sharing, stay strong
February 17th, 2023 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
(a Truth, of so many
inflations and great depressions
as our seasonal reality
nightmares, hold no fears for us
police sirens, as lullaby\'s...)
thanks for sharing, stay strong
February 17th, 2023 04:44
They\'ll Cut Off The Lights And Gas Tomorrow....
2781 said:
I give your poem a like if it wasn\'t a sad reality.
February 16th, 2023 19:56
2781 said:
I give your poem a like if it wasn\'t a sad reality.
February 16th, 2023 19:56
Beyonce
Ok Waleed said:
Eh good poem but I hate that you named the poem Beyoncé instead of the woman you compared her too
February 10th, 2023 01:16
Ok Waleed said:
Eh good poem but I hate that you named the poem Beyoncé instead of the woman you compared her too
February 10th, 2023 01:16
You Broke My Heart At Walmart And I Cried All The Way To Sears
Eileen Clark said:
Good evening, now this is a fun poem to read, my cup of tea. I enjoyed reading it from the beginning right to the end.
February 9th, 2023 19:23
Eileen Clark said:
Good evening, now this is a fun poem to read, my cup of tea. I enjoyed reading it from the beginning right to the end.
February 9th, 2023 19:23
Beyonce
Eileen Clark said:
I had read it already and didn\'t leave a comment or a like because that type of poetry is not especially my cup of tea, hope we still keep reading each others poems though. :)
February 9th, 2023 19:16
Eileen Clark said:
I had read it already and didn\'t leave a comment or a like because that type of poetry is not especially my cup of tea, hope we still keep reading each others poems though. :)
February 9th, 2023 19:16
Inceptus forlay
orchidee said:
Ahhh, a good French lesson there?!
I never was any good at languages! lol.
January 25th, 2023 03:09
orchidee said:
Ahhh, a good French lesson there?!
I never was any good at languages! lol.
January 25th, 2023 03:09
The Dot.Com Blues
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully composed, lovely flow to it all
thank you dear Poet
January 13th, 2023 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully composed, lovely flow to it all
thank you dear Poet
January 13th, 2023 04:34
You Broke My Heart At Walmart And I Cried All The Way To Sears
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully fun to read
limitless in scope, to contemplate
(Bukowski inked
the very notion of Pain, is absurd
merely, because it exists..
maybe, within your lines
we can heed whispers to a similar
explanation for romances necessity
in our lives
how absurd, to wilfully invest
everything
in someone, as a mirror to our fallible
self...
still, they do call it shopping \'therapy\')
forgive my rambling, was just inspired by your words
thanks for sharing dear Poet
January 13th, 2023 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully fun to read
limitless in scope, to contemplate
(Bukowski inked
the very notion of Pain, is absurd
merely, because it exists..
maybe, within your lines
we can heed whispers to a similar
explanation for romances necessity
in our lives
how absurd, to wilfully invest
everything
in someone, as a mirror to our fallible
self...
still, they do call it shopping \'therapy\')
forgive my rambling, was just inspired by your words
thanks for sharing dear Poet
January 13th, 2023 04:32
You Broke My Heart At Walmart And I Cried All The Way To Sears
Doggerel Dave said:
How many buy and buy as a substitute for a lack in other parts of their lives? Good question worth considering under all the fun. Thanks Chas.
January 11th, 2023 01:11
Doggerel Dave said:
How many buy and buy as a substitute for a lack in other parts of their lives? Good question worth considering under all the fun. Thanks Chas.
January 11th, 2023 01:11
The Dot.Com Blues
orchidee said:
Did she keep her maiden name when you married.? lol. Good write Mr Com, erm, Charles.
January 10th, 2023 03:54
orchidee said:
Did she keep her maiden name when you married.? lol. Good write Mr Com, erm, Charles.
January 10th, 2023 03:54
You Broke My Heart At Walmart And I Cried All The Way To Sears
charles69 said:
it was meant to be humorous
thanks for the comment
tomorrow I\'m submitting another humorous poem, about the computer and one\'s man\'s adventures
January 9th, 2023 14:35
charles69 said:
it was meant to be humorous
thanks for the comment
tomorrow I\'m submitting another humorous poem, about the computer and one\'s man\'s adventures
January 9th, 2023 14:35
You Broke My Heart At Walmart And I Cried All The Way To Sears
Rocky Lagou said:
Hahaha, this is hilarious!
The overall message is really sad, any heartbreak is depressing, but omg that refrain literally had me wheezing.
(Sorry of this wasn\'t meant to be a humorous poem
January 9th, 2023 13:45
Rocky Lagou said:
Hahaha, this is hilarious!
The overall message is really sad, any heartbreak is depressing, but omg that refrain literally had me wheezing.
(Sorry of this wasn\'t meant to be a humorous poem
January 9th, 2023 13:45
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