The Way We Are
L. B. Mek said:

seamless flow, wonderfully written
thanks for sharing and happy new year
dear Poet

January 13th, 2023 06:12

Work In Progress
orchidee said:

A fictional write? i.e. not thinking of anyone in particular?
Or about you? Or someone you know?
The thing with this is that it repeats itself, goes round in circles - another shot or fix or whatever we call it, is needed after a while, and so on.

January 6th, 2023 03:23

Heartstrings
L. B. Mek said:

thanks for sharing, showcasing great insight
(dating scene, is a warzone
for anyone trying to create something
lasting or genuine
and there\'s no bullet proof jackets
for our hearts
we simply learn to dodge the bullets
or survive with our scars intact
till...
then its all, as easy as breathing!
only
that \'till...\'
ain\'t promised to all of us
some of us have to bow out
limp out of that battlefield
with our shrapnel regret\'s and bruised nightmares
yet, some others
find the willpower to stay and wait it out
...how I envy them)
may love Prevail, when all else fails

December 9th, 2022 05:52