Comments received on poems by Mariamariaaa



I Do
L. B. Mek said:

if we keep on jumping from one bad relationship to another
we have to ask, if we\'re the problem
since we
are the common denominator in all
our relationships..
first thing to consider
how are we choosing our partners
and why?
if we keep on choosing people
with the same traits
then we already have an easy fix to work with...
(a relatable write, thanks for sharing
sorry if my words seem toxic
or i\'m accusing you of anything
that wasn\'t my intent)

August 4th, 2023 05:57

Habib
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully sweet, words like these
manifest hope from our everyday nightmares
and help anchor happiness to our lives
I hope you\'ve found or go-on to find
your life\'s true habibi
thanks for sharing, stay blessed dear poet

December 16th, 2022 05:22

Smell All the Roses
L. B. Mek said:

really insightful, thanks for sharing dear poet
your words made me remember the lyrics
to a Tina Dico song titled, \'a quarter to forever\':
\'Take your time
It\'s a quarter to forever now

To everyone who thinks that love was just a dream they had
Who thinks tomorrow and the future has nothing new to add and
To everyone who\'s watched their hopes run out and slam the door
And everyone who still don\'t know what they are looking for or
Found it and dropped it on the floor
Whose hands and arms have gotten sore
From holding on too tight to what once was

Take your time
It\'s a quarter to forever now\'

December 16th, 2022 05:19

Habib
Mara \"Marzipan\" said:

Sweet and heartfelt, you can tell that the person is deeply in love. Great job.

December 13th, 2022 09:23

The Neglect
L. B. Mek said:

such a great read
I laud the defiant voice in your artistry
thanks for sharing

December 12th, 2022 02:23