Comments received on poems by The Poet in Blue
Dandelions
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful haunting cadence to the poem. It speaks in a ghostly way setting the scene well. It holds the readers attention through the story it tells that is completed in the ending that brings us back to the beginning and the symbolic meaning of the portrait, life and death. Well written. A final proof read would may change swing dress to spring dress, and the removal of the superfluous (the) in the second line of the final stanza a minor thing would make it perfect. A definite fave
June 26th, 2025 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful haunting cadence to the poem. It speaks in a ghostly way setting the scene well. It holds the readers attention through the story it tells that is completed in the ending that brings us back to the beginning and the symbolic meaning of the portrait, life and death. Well written. A final proof read would may change swing dress to spring dress, and the removal of the superfluous (the) in the second line of the final stanza a minor thing would make it perfect. A definite fave
June 26th, 2025 07:09
A woman behind many masks
A.E.J said:
It’s amazing you have such an incredible talent.
February 28th, 2023 08:27
A.E.J said:
It’s amazing you have such an incredible talent.
February 28th, 2023 08:27
A break In the walls of depression
L. B. Mek said:
so well written, thanks for sharing
December 16th, 2022 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
so well written, thanks for sharing
December 16th, 2022 05:52
