Comments received on poems by BlessedbyGod
Bald Is Beautiful
mvvenkataraman said:
One fully bald-headed actor in Tamil Nadu,
Who lost hair at the age of 25 itself,
Started to use wig and became great
In the field of cinema and also politics,
Till his death, none could see his baldness,
He received India\'s highest award after his end!
But, all can\'t use wig being damn costly,
A nice poem to enthuse those who are bald,
May God give joy by forgetting baldness,
But, one thing, tonsuring head often
Right from the childhood will stop baldness,
This is a proven truth, can be followed!
January 2nd, 2023 21:53
mvvenkataraman said:
One fully bald-headed actor in Tamil Nadu,
Who lost hair at the age of 25 itself,
Started to use wig and became great
In the field of cinema and also politics,
Till his death, none could see his baldness,
He received India\'s highest award after his end!
But, all can\'t use wig being damn costly,
A nice poem to enthuse those who are bald,
May God give joy by forgetting baldness,
But, one thing, tonsuring head often
Right from the childhood will stop baldness,
This is a proven truth, can be followed!
January 2nd, 2023 21:53
Breathing God
orchidee said:
Good write BC.
A corny joke from me about breathing - I tried to save on air. Did not breathe for 24 hours one day. I did not feel well afterwards. Doh! lol.
January 2nd, 2023 03:01
orchidee said:
Good write BC.
A corny joke from me about breathing - I tried to save on air. Did not breathe for 24 hours one day. I did not feel well afterwards. Doh! lol.
January 2nd, 2023 03:01
Perfectly planned
orchidee said:
A fine write BC.
The plan\'s all gone downhill with KP though! heehee.
December 31st, 2022 03:04
orchidee said:
A fine write BC.
The plan\'s all gone downhill with KP though! heehee.
December 31st, 2022 03:04
Perfectly planned
mvvenkataraman said:
Your poem is rhymed with perfection,
Your words are also crystal clear,
You could have given a fine gap
Between each two lines with knack,
That would project your poem better,
It is a wonderful couplet indeed,
In future create a gap between two lines
If it happens to be a couplet or
If it is quatrain, between four lines,
Your poem is creative spiritually also!
December 30th, 2022 22:37
mvvenkataraman said:
Your poem is rhymed with perfection,
Your words are also crystal clear,
You could have given a fine gap
Between each two lines with knack,
That would project your poem better,
It is a wonderful couplet indeed,
In future create a gap between two lines
If it happens to be a couplet or
If it is quatrain, between four lines,
Your poem is creative spiritually also!
December 30th, 2022 22:37
The Mission
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fab poem against satan and evil in an apt superb style. Kudos!
Plz also read my newest poem too
December 30th, 2022 11:28
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fab poem against satan and evil in an apt superb style. Kudos!
Plz also read my newest poem too
December 30th, 2022 11:28
The Mission
ForeverJesus7 said:
I love this piece. It is so true, and very creative. I really like this piece, my love.
You are my beautiful butterfly, and I really love you.
Dion and Melissa Phillips Crown: together forever in Christ Jesus
December 29th, 2022 01:59
ForeverJesus7 said:
I love this piece. It is so true, and very creative. I really like this piece, my love.
You are my beautiful butterfly, and I really love you.
Dion and Melissa Phillips Crown: together forever in Christ Jesus
December 29th, 2022 01:59
Reconnected
orchidee said:
Good write C4C.
I was affected - badly - by KP\'s return, and that\'s a fact! lol.
December 28th, 2022 02:57
orchidee said:
Good write C4C.
I was affected - badly - by KP\'s return, and that\'s a fact! lol.
December 28th, 2022 02:57
Reconnected
Goldfinch60 said:
A true friendship lasts a lifetime as I am sure this one will Melissa.
Andy
December 28th, 2022 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
A true friendship lasts a lifetime as I am sure this one will Melissa.
Andy
December 28th, 2022 01:27
Believe
orchidee said:
It\'s a true write C4C. We know we don\'t mean believing \'religion\' or \'rituals\'.
I feel we would still hold to Jesus as Saviour even if our faith dwindles.
I\'ve not actually been to church for ages, since lockdown. Not sure which church to go to now.
December 26th, 2022 03:26
orchidee said:
It\'s a true write C4C. We know we don\'t mean believing \'religion\' or \'rituals\'.
I feel we would still hold to Jesus as Saviour even if our faith dwindles.
I\'ve not actually been to church for ages, since lockdown. Not sure which church to go to now.
December 26th, 2022 03:26
Believe
Goldfinch60 said:
Just something I wrote when my wife was suffering from dementia. I used to believe, I was a Chaplain at one time so I had your belief:
Abandoning christianity.
Andy Brister (Goldfinch60) – August 2019.
Most of my life I had believed,
Believed in the Christian way,
The way of Christ.
Said to be Christ Our Lord,
The Saviour of Our World,
Son of God.
But where was He?
Where was He when my wife was ill?
Struck down with dementia!
All her life she had sung His praises,
Always there for Him,
But He was not there for her,
Or for me!
I looked after her
Often praying to my Christian God,
But nothing happened.
Each day she got worse
Until that time,
That time when I could not help her,
Help her any more,
So to a Care Home she went.
I was so sad,
So guilty,
But it had to happen,
Or I would also be there.
My Faith had become strained,
My Spirit was still there,
But not the spirit of the christian church,
My christian faith failed completely.
Then came that day,
That day at Church when I stopped,
Stopped praising Jesus,
Jesus as the son of god.
Yes Jesus was a good man
But not the saviour
Believed by the christian church.
That day changed my life,
It was like a weight had been shed,
Shed from by body.
All was well within me,
My own life had returned,
My Spirit was with me
And always will be.
But the ways of the christian church have left me
And relief pervades my body,
My body and mind.
December 26th, 2022 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Just something I wrote when my wife was suffering from dementia. I used to believe, I was a Chaplain at one time so I had your belief:
Abandoning christianity.
Andy Brister (Goldfinch60) – August 2019.
Most of my life I had believed,
Believed in the Christian way,
The way of Christ.
Said to be Christ Our Lord,
The Saviour of Our World,
Son of God.
But where was He?
Where was He when my wife was ill?
Struck down with dementia!
All her life she had sung His praises,
Always there for Him,
But He was not there for her,
Or for me!
I looked after her
Often praying to my Christian God,
But nothing happened.
Each day she got worse
Until that time,
That time when I could not help her,
Help her any more,
So to a Care Home she went.
I was so sad,
So guilty,
But it had to happen,
Or I would also be there.
My Faith had become strained,
My Spirit was still there,
But not the spirit of the christian church,
My christian faith failed completely.
Then came that day,
That day at Church when I stopped,
Stopped praising Jesus,
Jesus as the son of god.
Yes Jesus was a good man
But not the saviour
Believed by the christian church.
That day changed my life,
It was like a weight had been shed,
Shed from by body.
All was well within me,
My own life had returned,
My Spirit was with me
And always will be.
But the ways of the christian church have left me
And relief pervades my body,
My body and mind.
December 26th, 2022 02:11
Christmas Star
orchidee said:
Good write BC.
Oh, I can\'t have figgy pudding. It..... well, think of baked beans, etc!
In mad moments at school we sang \'We all like figgy pudding (we do not!) so bring it out here!\' lol.
It\'s the figs you see, not the raisins, etc.
December 25th, 2022 03:06
orchidee said:
Good write BC.
Oh, I can\'t have figgy pudding. It..... well, think of baked beans, etc!
In mad moments at school we sang \'We all like figgy pudding (we do not!) so bring it out here!\' lol.
It\'s the figs you see, not the raisins, etc.
December 25th, 2022 03:06
Christmas Star
ForeverJesus7 said:
I enjoy every poem you ever write. I love that they are always true. I love you, my butterfly. You are my beautiful wife.
Persistence is key
December 25th, 2022 01:48
ForeverJesus7 said:
I enjoy every poem you ever write. I love that they are always true. I love you, my butterfly. You are my beautiful wife.
Persistence is key
December 25th, 2022 01:48
Merry Christmas
orchidee said:
Ohhh, Happy Easter to ya! Well, I might forget to say it later, with KP driving me to distraction! heehee.
Then I gotta remember the cats birthday too - both of \'em on the same day! lol.(true).
December 22nd, 2022 14:15
orchidee said:
Ohhh, Happy Easter to ya! Well, I might forget to say it later, with KP driving me to distraction! heehee.
Then I gotta remember the cats birthday too - both of \'em on the same day! lol.(true).
December 22nd, 2022 14:15
Merry Christmas
ForeverJesus7 said:
Merry Christmas to everyone on MyPoeticSide from Melissa and Dion Phillips Crown. May we continue to write. May the Lord watch over us all, and may we all remember the real reason for Christmas: the birth of Christ our Savior.
Persistence is key
December 22nd, 2022 10:32
ForeverJesus7 said:
Merry Christmas to everyone on MyPoeticSide from Melissa and Dion Phillips Crown. May we continue to write. May the Lord watch over us all, and may we all remember the real reason for Christmas: the birth of Christ our Savior.
Persistence is key
December 22nd, 2022 10:32
Same person different profile
orchidee said:
Don\'t ya just hate it when that happens! Cooeee C4C, erm, BC now! lol.
December 22nd, 2022 03:09
orchidee said:
Don\'t ya just hate it when that happens! Cooeee C4C, erm, BC now! lol.
December 22nd, 2022 03:09
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