Comments received on poems by undreamed_friend
My Moon
Rocky Lagou said:
Very nicely written. I love this atmosphere that you set, and the moon metaphor grounds this poem into the idea that this love going on is intense. Thanks and stay safe.
January 7th, 2024 01:47
Rocky Lagou said:
Very nicely written. I love this atmosphere that you set, and the moon metaphor grounds this poem into the idea that this love going on is intense. Thanks and stay safe.
January 7th, 2024 01:47
Raindrps
Kinsey Peterson said:
i love poems about the small things in life- so thank you for treating me another wonderful piece of writing
August 19th, 2023 12:49
Kinsey Peterson said:
i love poems about the small things in life- so thank you for treating me another wonderful piece of writing
August 19th, 2023 12:49
Trust
L. B. Mek said:
so true, it seems
harder it gets
after every conversation
not knowing
what to trust or even, what
to say and think
in the face of society\'s
abundant
hypocritical, collective idiocy...
(reality, is fast becoming
a concept, beyond
our tethers to tangibility....)
wonderfully succiscnt, thanks for sharing
April 21st, 2023 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
so true, it seems
harder it gets
after every conversation
not knowing
what to trust or even, what
to say and think
in the face of society\'s
abundant
hypocritical, collective idiocy...
(reality, is fast becoming
a concept, beyond
our tethers to tangibility....)
wonderfully succiscnt, thanks for sharing
April 21st, 2023 05:23
A tale of friendship
Lorna said:
Great sentiments well said in short form (which I love).........
April 5th, 2023 04:01
Lorna said:
Great sentiments well said in short form (which I love).........
April 5th, 2023 04:01
Simple
Christina8 said:
This is absolutely wonderful! The feelings expressed are so true. Who wouldn\'t love a poem?? Great job!
February 7th, 2023 09:20
Christina8 said:
This is absolutely wonderful! The feelings expressed are so true. Who wouldn\'t love a poem?? Great job!
February 7th, 2023 09:20
Depression
jarcher54 said:
I enjoy how you bring \"nature\" into the very end of the haiku as your soul drifts into the breeze. Be well. Cling to your young soul.
January 28th, 2023 01:39
jarcher54 said:
I enjoy how you bring \"nature\" into the very end of the haiku as your soul drifts into the breeze. Be well. Cling to your young soul.
January 28th, 2023 01:39
Peace
jarcher54 said:
Such a delicate little poem. I found peace just reading it. Thank you. Young folks like you are inspiring to older folks like me. A kitten in one\'s lap is a wonderful metaphor for happiness from the simplest things, peace from the warmth of another creature.
January 28th, 2023 01:32
jarcher54 said:
Such a delicate little poem. I found peace just reading it. Thank you. Young folks like you are inspiring to older folks like me. A kitten in one\'s lap is a wonderful metaphor for happiness from the simplest things, peace from the warmth of another creature.
January 28th, 2023 01:32
Anxiety
L. B. Mek said:
6, 9, 6, format
new to me, but flows well
poignant words, deeply insightful
thanks for sharing
January 27th, 2023 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
6, 9, 6, format
new to me, but flows well
poignant words, deeply insightful
thanks for sharing
January 27th, 2023 04:07
Innocent
Z.mile said:
An effortless poem demonstrating the innocence of children.
January 26th, 2023 06:12
Z.mile said:
An effortless poem demonstrating the innocence of children.
January 26th, 2023 06:12
A life full of joy in a world of pain
Noelle See said:
Once again your poem is great!!
January 21st, 2023 19:44
Noelle See said:
Once again your poem is great!!
January 21st, 2023 19:44
Are two days enough to judge you?
Noelle See said:
You write your feelings so well!!
January 21st, 2023 19:43
Noelle See said:
You write your feelings so well!!
January 21st, 2023 19:43
All I want is a happy you
Noelle See said:
This is so great. I\'m sorry about whatever happened but the poem is great.
January 21st, 2023 19:42
Noelle See said:
This is so great. I\'m sorry about whatever happened but the poem is great.
January 21st, 2023 19:42
Peace
Noelle See said:
This poem really touched my heart because I relate. I interpreted it as you need to stop searching for someone because the more you try the worse you get hurt. Sometimes you have to let things go and it hurts a lot but it is what\'s best for you. Don\'t let them keep hurting you.
N.A Atkins
January 21st, 2023 12:40
Noelle See said:
This poem really touched my heart because I relate. I interpreted it as you need to stop searching for someone because the more you try the worse you get hurt. Sometimes you have to let things go and it hurts a lot but it is what\'s best for you. Don\'t let them keep hurting you.
N.A Atkins
January 21st, 2023 12:40
January a new hope
Kinsey Peterson said:
Each new year is an opportunity. Always forgive yourself first.
January 9th, 2023 10:23
Kinsey Peterson said:
Each new year is an opportunity. Always forgive yourself first.
January 9th, 2023 10:23
A Purpose To Live
mvvenkataraman said:
We always need a purpose to live,
Once that is firmly established,
Then, we can easily carry on life,
Like Edison making new inventions,
We must create a purpose surely,
Thanks for your useful poem.
January 4th, 2023 21:25
mvvenkataraman said:
We always need a purpose to live,
Once that is firmly established,
Then, we can easily carry on life,
Like Edison making new inventions,
We must create a purpose surely,
Thanks for your useful poem.
January 4th, 2023 21:25
A Purpose To Live
charles69 said:
I like the way you combined your poem with an explanation of the meaning of it. A poem can sometimes be only fully appreciated only by help of a comment. I think this compliments your work, your poem and in no way detracts from it. Maybe more modern poets should follow your example. Keep up the good work!
January 4th, 2023 09:27
charles69 said:
I like the way you combined your poem with an explanation of the meaning of it. A poem can sometimes be only fully appreciated only by help of a comment. I think this compliments your work, your poem and in no way detracts from it. Maybe more modern poets should follow your example. Keep up the good work!
January 4th, 2023 09:27
December
mvvenkataraman said:
Great philosophy is sprinkled in your poem,
I feel you are sad and feel in a way upset,
Never mind, the New Year will set right
Your life to fill it with mirth and success,
I like your poem as it tells the truth only
As everyone has had some kind of sorrow,
Pen more to provoke our thoughts please!
January 1st, 2023 22:13
mvvenkataraman said:
Great philosophy is sprinkled in your poem,
I feel you are sad and feel in a way upset,
Never mind, the New Year will set right
Your life to fill it with mirth and success,
I like your poem as it tells the truth only
As everyone has had some kind of sorrow,
Pen more to provoke our thoughts please!
January 1st, 2023 22:13
