I\'m still learning
L. B. Mek said:

the intellect of your honesty\'s eloquence
exudes
that humane quality, so rare in modernity..
you\'ve exemplified
the very Art of therapy, available
to us who utilise Poesy
as more that a literary format
envisaging, within the words
we ink so boldly, a path
to ink out our hurt and heal ourselves
heeding legacy of Sylvia Plath\'s
confessional Poetry
to pen our self emancipation words
and free ourselves
from life\'s bruises...!
stay strong, dear Poet
I laud your honesty\'s, bravery
a great write!
(please, ignore the noise
from those whose bruised ego\'s demand
that they try and derail those
more talented, than themselves
it is not your poetry, they object to
rather
it\'s the power of your sincerity
they refute
because their self-involved existence
won\'t allow them to look in the mirror
without projecting a fantasy mirage
of themselves
let alone, pen their vulnerability
and share it with the world..)

March 31st, 2023 03:42

I\'m still learning
David Wakeling said:

I tried reading this but the characters are not named so there is no point.Who is \"you\" and why should the reader care??

March 30th, 2023 16:07