Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
PAIN
teardrop said:
Love this read. Well written and your rhyming not forced ( I am a big fan of rhyming poetry) Also tells a story which makes it very enjoyable/ Seems to come from the heart. Thank you for the read.
February 9th, 2025 05:31
teardrop said:
Love this read. Well written and your rhyming not forced ( I am a big fan of rhyming poetry) Also tells a story which makes it very enjoyable/ Seems to come from the heart. Thank you for the read.
February 9th, 2025 05:31
RAINDROP
sorenbarrett said:
Some beautiful imagery here nicely worded and lands upon the reader\'s ear like a kiss
February 9th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Some beautiful imagery here nicely worded and lands upon the reader\'s ear like a kiss
February 9th, 2025 04:44
RAINDROP
arqios said:
A beautiful poem to got lost inside of, in spite of some heavy hitting spots. A triumph! 🙏🏻🕊️
February 9th, 2025 03:45
arqios said:
A beautiful poem to got lost inside of, in spite of some heavy hitting spots. A triumph! 🙏🏻🕊️
February 9th, 2025 03:45
THE SKY
Poetic Licence said:
A gentle, touching and beautiful write, enjoyed the read
February 8th, 2025 08:14
Poetic Licence said:
A gentle, touching and beautiful write, enjoyed the read
February 8th, 2025 08:14
THE SKY
arqios said:
I love the way repetition here is used prudently and to much effect! 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 05:32
arqios said:
I love the way repetition here is used prudently and to much effect! 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 05:32
THE SKY
sorenbarrett said:
Soft pretty words fill this poem and they echo in the mind long afterward
February 8th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Soft pretty words fill this poem and they echo in the mind long afterward
February 8th, 2025 04:27
MORTAL
arqios said:
Since the first humans and the first funeral grief has been an undertone where mortality and thoughts of posterity are concerned. Your poem delves wonderfully into this ever present element in our existence and journey to the afterlife 🙏🏻🕊
February 7th, 2025 06:23
arqios said:
Since the first humans and the first funeral grief has been an undertone where mortality and thoughts of posterity are concerned. Your poem delves wonderfully into this ever present element in our existence and journey to the afterlife 🙏🏻🕊
February 7th, 2025 06:23
MORTAL
Poetic Licence said:
I think that is the nicest i have heard death talked about, a very enjoyable read
February 7th, 2025 06:15
Poetic Licence said:
I think that is the nicest i have heard death talked about, a very enjoyable read
February 7th, 2025 06:15
MORTAL
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely your word choice has eliminate all superfluous words rapidly painting the image. And beautiful image it is.
February 7th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely your word choice has eliminate all superfluous words rapidly painting the image. And beautiful image it is.
February 7th, 2025 04:35
CLWYDIAN HILLS
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely piece on how our yesterdays can help us find hope in tomorrow on reflection, enjoyed the read
February 6th, 2025 05:26
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely piece on how our yesterdays can help us find hope in tomorrow on reflection, enjoyed the read
February 6th, 2025 05:26
CLWYDIAN HILLS
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful portrayal of how each step is the begining of a new journey how each day is the begining of a new life and memory is just that reflection upon what was. Haunting in a way and hopeful in another
February 6th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful portrayal of how each step is the begining of a new journey how each day is the begining of a new life and memory is just that reflection upon what was. Haunting in a way and hopeful in another
February 6th, 2025 03:53
BEACH
arqios said:
Quite a cycle in different variations, how do we ‘beg’ and ‘succumb’ only to do it all again, over and over again! 🙏🏻🕊
February 5th, 2025 08:08
arqios said:
Quite a cycle in different variations, how do we ‘beg’ and ‘succumb’ only to do it all again, over and over again! 🙏🏻🕊
February 5th, 2025 08:08
BEACH
Poetic Licence said:
The harsh reality of being homeless, good imagery as you read through this piece, really enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 05:10
Poetic Licence said:
The harsh reality of being homeless, good imagery as you read through this piece, really enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 05:10
BEACH
sorenbarrett said:
And so we all drift from fantasy or dreams where we escape the reality and light of day. A great metapor with wonderful imagry tell this story. Lovely
February 5th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
And so we all drift from fantasy or dreams where we escape the reality and light of day. A great metapor with wonderful imagry tell this story. Lovely
February 5th, 2025 04:48
TEMPLE
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful composition. Speaks to me of love. Felt the warmth in the chosen words.
February 4th, 2025 06:53
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful composition. Speaks to me of love. Felt the warmth in the chosen words.
February 4th, 2025 06:53
TEMPLE
sorenbarrett said:
I found this poem particularly beautiful in its comparison of the emotion of love with the sacredness of one\'s religion. Beautifully worded
February 4th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
I found this poem particularly beautiful in its comparison of the emotion of love with the sacredness of one\'s religion. Beautifully worded
February 4th, 2025 04:05
TEMPLE
arqios said:
This is quite a a stirring invocation! One with much action and active seeking. 🙏🏻👍🕊️
February 4th, 2025 03:54
arqios said:
This is quite a a stirring invocation! One with much action and active seeking. 🙏🏻👍🕊️
February 4th, 2025 03:54
UPON THE STREET
arqios said:
A superb metaphor should that be the chosen route! A very moving poem in its literal sense. 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
February 4th, 2025 01:51
arqios said:
A superb metaphor should that be the chosen route! A very moving poem in its literal sense. 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
February 4th, 2025 01:51
THE FINAL TIME
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. It explains an anxiousness of leaving sanctity for an unknown. Great write.
February 3rd, 2025 07:06
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. It explains an anxiousness of leaving sanctity for an unknown. Great write.
February 3rd, 2025 07:06
UPON THE STREET
sorenbarrett said:
Take me home is what I get from the last line. Beautifully worded in verse the rhyme carries one onward as a plesent aroma draws the bee. At first a soft sadness of melancholy that turns mystical and dream like with some great lines (dream on a battered shore, memories melted, a chill to place its icy lips) Great lines. A poem worthy of a fave
February 3rd, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
Take me home is what I get from the last line. Beautifully worded in verse the rhyme carries one onward as a plesent aroma draws the bee. At first a soft sadness of melancholy that turns mystical and dream like with some great lines (dream on a battered shore, memories melted, a chill to place its icy lips) Great lines. A poem worthy of a fave
February 3rd, 2025 05:29
UPON THE STREET
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and poignant piece. have been before where this piece goes, sadly to many people are suffering this today, and there should be no homelessness in the western world. Well written
February 3rd, 2025 04:27
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and poignant piece. have been before where this piece goes, sadly to many people are suffering this today, and there should be no homelessness in the western world. Well written
February 3rd, 2025 04:27
MAN IN THE TOWER
Cassie58 said:
The presentation for this poem works very well. Your words impact powerfully. Great read.
February 2nd, 2025 12:18
Cassie58 said:
The presentation for this poem works very well. Your words impact powerfully. Great read.
February 2nd, 2025 12:18
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