Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
COME HOME
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of memories and the past now gone. A lovely write and a fave
September 16th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of memories and the past now gone. A lovely write and a fave
September 16th, 2025 04:46
A LATIN GARDEN
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this poem has a special thing about it that I can not put my finger on. It has good flow and a rolling meter that carries the reader onward, the rhyme is good and engaging and the message is haunting but there is something else intangible that I like about it. A fave
September 15th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Norman this poem has a special thing about it that I can not put my finger on. It has good flow and a rolling meter that carries the reader onward, the rhyme is good and engaging and the message is haunting but there is something else intangible that I like about it. A fave
September 15th, 2025 05:05
POWER SCREAMING
sorenbarrett said:
A most thought provoking poem about the nature of man. Man a social animal that thrives in community is acculturated follower by nature looking to a leader for direction and when it is the wrong leader freedom is lost. Lovely write
September 14th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
A most thought provoking poem about the nature of man. Man a social animal that thrives in community is acculturated follower by nature looking to a leader for direction and when it is the wrong leader freedom is lost. Lovely write
September 14th, 2025 04:58
STREETLIGHTS FLICKER
sorenbarrett said:
Late night writing in a poem that rocks with rhythm in ABAB rhyme. Nicely done
September 13th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Late night writing in a poem that rocks with rhythm in ABAB rhyme. Nicely done
September 13th, 2025 04:22
MIDNIGHT MUSE
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Love the playful rhythmic sound and words. Beautiful
September 12th, 2025 09:51
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Love the playful rhythmic sound and words. Beautiful
September 12th, 2025 09:51
MIDNIGHT MUSE
sorenbarrett said:
I love this noir depiction of the muse and her disappearance and anticipated return it is lovely and a fave
September 12th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
I love this noir depiction of the muse and her disappearance and anticipated return it is lovely and a fave
September 12th, 2025 04:47
OLD PHOTOGRAPHS
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of photographs but about time and memories left behind. Some stored in the open and others tucked away. Nicely worded and somewhat nostalgic in nature. Nicely penned.
September 11th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of photographs but about time and memories left behind. Some stored in the open and others tucked away. Nicely worded and somewhat nostalgic in nature. Nicely penned.
September 11th, 2025 03:55
DEAFENING SILENCE
NinjaGirl said:
I think this is beautiful! Could you just explain line 16? I\'m not sure what it means. Otherwise I absolutely love it.
September 10th, 2025 18:09
NinjaGirl said:
I think this is beautiful! Could you just explain line 16? I\'m not sure what it means. Otherwise I absolutely love it.
September 10th, 2025 18:09
DEAFENING SILENCE
sorenbarrett said:
The short lines give this a rocking hypnotic feel and it sends its message of silence silently. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
The short lines give this a rocking hypnotic feel and it sends its message of silence silently. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 04:10
NO MORE PAIN
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic and nicely worded this poem presents the process of death in stark images of reality both good and bad. Nicely done
September 9th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic and nicely worded this poem presents the process of death in stark images of reality both good and bad. Nicely done
September 9th, 2025 04:18
ABANDONED
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Such beautiful, melancholic imagery: the teardrop in rain really touched me. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 10:32
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Such beautiful, melancholic imagery: the teardrop in rain really touched me. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 10:32
ABANDONED
sorenbarrett said:
Captured by the multiple levels of the first stanza I have to say you have painted the picture well
September 8th, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Captured by the multiple levels of the first stanza I have to say you have painted the picture well
September 8th, 2025 05:01
ABANDONED
Lorenz said:
I love the lunar beauty of this feeling of abandonment ...
September 8th, 2025 03:51
Lorenz said:
I love the lunar beauty of this feeling of abandonment ...
September 8th, 2025 03:51
MADMEN
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Wow, this is haunting and intense. The imagery of violence, history, and lingering injustice is so vivid. Nicely written.
September 7th, 2025 09:16
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Wow, this is haunting and intense. The imagery of violence, history, and lingering injustice is so vivid. Nicely written.
September 7th, 2025 09:16
MADMEN
sorenbarrett said:
A poem speaking of the power of the words used by poet, historian, madman. Nicely done in this rather haunting poem
September 7th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
A poem speaking of the power of the words used by poet, historian, madman. Nicely done in this rather haunting poem
September 7th, 2025 05:19
THE INEVITABLE STORM
sorenbarrett said:
This poem can be read literally or metaphorically but I choose to read it in the middle of someone in a literal storm but speaking to the storm metaphorically. Time and age affect all and is a storm that we all weather regardless. Even the wind dies eventually and often at night. Nicely written
September 6th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem can be read literally or metaphorically but I choose to read it in the middle of someone in a literal storm but speaking to the storm metaphorically. Time and age affect all and is a storm that we all weather regardless. Even the wind dies eventually and often at night. Nicely written
September 6th, 2025 04:08
THE GRINDSTONE
sorenbarrett said:
Capitalism at its best (worst). Empires built on dead men\'s bones and passed on fortunes. Corruption rules and he that dies with the most toys wins. A good read
September 5th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Capitalism at its best (worst). Empires built on dead men\'s bones and passed on fortunes. Corruption rules and he that dies with the most toys wins. A good read
September 5th, 2025 04:19
ALWAYS BOLD
arqios said:
Learning from mistakes is a lifeskill hard to learn and harder to practise! Inspiring, Norman 🕊️🙏🏻
September 4th, 2025 18:55
arqios said:
Learning from mistakes is a lifeskill hard to learn and harder to practise! Inspiring, Norman 🕊️🙏🏻
September 4th, 2025 18:55
ALWAYS BOLD
RSM0812 said:
Love is powerfull. This poem is full of great imagery and imagination that takes the reader on a journey of wisdom and guise. Nice work.
September 4th, 2025 10:14
RSM0812 said:
Love is powerfull. This poem is full of great imagery and imagination that takes the reader on a journey of wisdom and guise. Nice work.
September 4th, 2025 10:14
ALWAYS BOLD
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message in this poem as advice give from old to young. Nicely done
September 4th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message in this poem as advice give from old to young. Nicely done
September 4th, 2025 04:47
THE OTHER
RSM0812 said:
An all too familiar scene at the end of a crazy night. People should really try and behave themselves. But unfortunately they seldom do. Especially at a bar afyer last call. An enjoyable read. Nice write.
September 3rd, 2025 05:37
RSM0812 said:
An all too familiar scene at the end of a crazy night. People should really try and behave themselves. But unfortunately they seldom do. Especially at a bar afyer last call. An enjoyable read. Nice write.
September 3rd, 2025 05:37
THE BLUE HOUR
RSM0812 said:
Reminds me of having to be home before the street lights came on. Lol. Always wanted to keep playing.
September 3rd, 2025 05:34
RSM0812 said:
Reminds me of having to be home before the street lights came on. Lol. Always wanted to keep playing.
September 3rd, 2025 05:34
THE GREATEST LOSS
sorenbarrett said:
There can be no greater grief than that of losing one\'s child. No parent should outlive their children. A very sad poem well done
September 3rd, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
There can be no greater grief than that of losing one\'s child. No parent should outlive their children. A very sad poem well done
September 3rd, 2025 04:53
PAINTED NAILS
arqios said:
Memories are such powerful things! Reminds me of poor old Ms Havisham and Pip🙏🏻🕊️
September 2nd, 2025 16:27
arqios said:
Memories are such powerful things! Reminds me of poor old Ms Havisham and Pip🙏🏻🕊️
September 2nd, 2025 16:27
PAINTED NAILS
Lorenz said:
I worked for years in community with people suffering from mental ilness .It couldn\'t fail to inspire me .
September 2nd, 2025 10:50
Lorenz said:
I worked for years in community with people suffering from mental ilness .It couldn\'t fail to inspire me .
September 2nd, 2025 10:50
PAINTED NAILS
sorenbarrett said:
A disabled mind taken advantage of and all the complications that follow in a memory that distorts fantasy from reality serves as a metaphor for all of us with our own mental limitations in a plane where there is a separate reality for each. Loved it
September 2nd, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A disabled mind taken advantage of and all the complications that follow in a memory that distorts fantasy from reality serves as a metaphor for all of us with our own mental limitations in a plane where there is a separate reality for each. Loved it
September 2nd, 2025 04:48
HARD MAN
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that reflects choices we have to make that determine our future. Nicely worded
September 1st, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that reflects choices we have to make that determine our future. Nicely worded
September 1st, 2025 04:44
« Return to the profile of nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
