Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
TWILIGHT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Really enjoyed this. What stayed with me most is the ending, “That died in Winters / Broken heart.” That closing lands quietly but heavily...like the final settling of cold after everything else has faded. The seasonal imagery throughout ties together beautifully. Wonderful write, friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 15:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Really enjoyed this. What stayed with me most is the ending, “That died in Winters / Broken heart.” That closing lands quietly but heavily...like the final settling of cold after everything else has faded. The seasonal imagery throughout ties together beautifully. Wonderful write, friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 15:40
TWILIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful pairing of seasons with emotion and hope. Very nicely done a fave Norman
May 8th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful pairing of seasons with emotion and hope. Very nicely done a fave Norman
May 8th, 2026 04:15
TWILIGHT
orchidee said:
Good write N. Twilight came.... and you were still waiting for that bus! lol.
May 8th, 2026 02:25
orchidee said:
Good write N. Twilight came.... and you were still waiting for that bus! lol.
May 8th, 2026 02:25
CITY OF POETS
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Norman in a place within our minds.
Andy
May 8th, 2026 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Norman in a place within our minds.
Andy
May 8th, 2026 01:44
CITY OF POETS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like wandering empty streets after everyone else has gone home…left alone with memory, regret, and fragments of old dreams. There’s a deep loneliness here that feels very real. Powerful piece, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like wandering empty streets after everyone else has gone home…left alone with memory, regret, and fragments of old dreams. There’s a deep loneliness here that feels very real. Powerful piece, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:06
CITY OF POETS
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of memory, loss, and the passage of time within the context of a city filled with poets. It reflects on the emotional weight of recollection and the fleeting nature of life, as well as the desire for connection that often remains unfulfilled.
May 7th, 2026 08:41
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of memory, loss, and the passage of time within the context of a city filled with poets. It reflects on the emotional weight of recollection and the fleeting nature of life, as well as the desire for connection that often remains unfulfilled.
May 7th, 2026 08:41
CITY OF POETS
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words, images and thoughts accompany this surreal creation of another place. Well done
May 7th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words, images and thoughts accompany this surreal creation of another place. Well done
May 7th, 2026 04:15
CITY OF POETS
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Did you take a bus trip to the city?! lol.
May 7th, 2026 02:10
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Did you take a bus trip to the city?! lol.
May 7th, 2026 02:10
AN EMPTY ROOM
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories from empty rooms are so inspiring Norman.
Andy
May 7th, 2026 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories from empty rooms are so inspiring Norman.
Andy
May 7th, 2026 01:40
AN EMPTY ROOM
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“The marks where pictures hung” really stayed with me, Norman. Such a small detail, yet it instantly carries absence, time, and memory all together. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 07:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“The marks where pictures hung” really stayed with me, Norman. Such a small detail, yet it instantly carries absence, time, and memory all together. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 07:56
AN EMPTY ROOM
Paul Bell said:
It\'s strange how an empty room can conjure up such feeling.
Yet, it needs to be empty to get the taste of what was before.
The layers of paint, wallpaper, little scribbles on the wall, they all say something.
May 6th, 2026 04:54
Paul Bell said:
It\'s strange how an empty room can conjure up such feeling.
Yet, it needs to be empty to get the taste of what was before.
The layers of paint, wallpaper, little scribbles on the wall, they all say something.
May 6th, 2026 04:54
AN EMPTY ROOM
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reminders of the past. It is interesting how many marks bring back memories of times past and occurrences forgotten. A well written piece
May 6th, 2026 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reminders of the past. It is interesting how many marks bring back memories of times past and occurrences forgotten. A well written piece
May 6th, 2026 04:50
AN EMPTY ROOM
orchidee said:
Good write N. An empty bus shelter too? Did the bus pick up the people, or did they go home, tired of waiting for it to arrive?! lol.
May 6th, 2026 02:15
orchidee said:
Good write N. An empty bus shelter too? Did the bus pick up the people, or did they go home, tired of waiting for it to arrive?! lol.
May 6th, 2026 02:15
ETERNAL WINGS
Goldfinch60 said:
Those mysteries are always there before us Norman.
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those mysteries are always there before us Norman.
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:42
THE LONESOME DREAM
NafisaSB said:
Sad but true. We see this happening in so many places
May 5th, 2026 22:36
NafisaSB said:
Sad but true. We see this happening in so many places
May 5th, 2026 22:36
ETERNAL WINGS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me…there’s a quiet reverence running through it that feels almost meditative. It doesn’t rush…just unfolds gently, line by line. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me…there’s a quiet reverence running through it that feels almost meditative. It doesn’t rush…just unfolds gently, line by line. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:13
ETERNAL WINGS
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem seeks to express the complexity of human emotions and the quest for understanding in a world filled with pain and beauty, ultimately aiming to inspire contemplation and connection with the divine.
May 5th, 2026 05:34
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem seeks to express the complexity of human emotions and the quest for understanding in a world filled with pain and beauty, ultimately aiming to inspire contemplation and connection with the divine.
May 5th, 2026 05:34
ETERNAL WINGS
sorenbarrett said:
This has a most interesting flow pattern with waves and surges as if a backwash after the wave. Nicely written
May 5th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This has a most interesting flow pattern with waves and surges as if a backwash after the wave. Nicely written
May 5th, 2026 03:50
ETERNAL WINGS
orchidee said:
So..... you\'ve given up waiting for the bus, and are gonna take wings and fly into town?! lol.
May 5th, 2026 02:22
orchidee said:
So..... you\'ve given up waiting for the bus, and are gonna take wings and fly into town?! lol.
May 5th, 2026 02:22
A MYSTICAL BREEZE
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tender touches can be so overwhelming in true love Norman.
Andy
May 5th, 2026 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tender touches can be so overwhelming in true love Norman.
Andy
May 5th, 2026 01:22
A MYSTICAL BREEZE
arqios said:
There is a transporting inspiration beyond ordinary experience into a space of emotional and imaginative richness by way of an intangible presence like the breeze and that is comforting and transforming. 🙏🕊️
May 4th, 2026 18:26
arqios said:
There is a transporting inspiration beyond ordinary experience into a space of emotional and imaginative richness by way of an intangible presence like the breeze and that is comforting and transforming. 🙏🕊️
May 4th, 2026 18:26
A MYSTICAL BREEZE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a soft strength…tender, calming, and steady all the way through. The way it moves through touch, warmth, and wonder…yeah, it settles in and lingers. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a soft strength…tender, calming, and steady all the way through. The way it moves through touch, warmth, and wonder…yeah, it settles in and lingers. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:40
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