Comments received on poems by nephilim56
LIFEBLOOD
Doggerel Dave said:
Could fill the space on many a plain white tombstone.
October 24th, 2024 08:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Could fill the space on many a plain white tombstone.
October 24th, 2024 08:26
FROM CAD TO SAM
Doggerel Dave said:
Like to elaborate in a couple of lines?
Thanks.
September 30th, 2024 16:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Like to elaborate in a couple of lines?
Thanks.
September 30th, 2024 16:25
DIFFERENT
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice lines in this beautiful and thought provoking poem. Lovely
August 19th, 2024 08:06
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice lines in this beautiful and thought provoking poem. Lovely
August 19th, 2024 08:06
BROKEN GLASS
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write of freedom? Well democracy? Maybe? Loved the poem
August 12th, 2024 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write of freedom? Well democracy? Maybe? Loved the poem
August 12th, 2024 08:51
COWARD ( EXECUTED WW1 )
Doggerel Dave said:
I can remember a time, many years ago when I dwelt on this topic a lot. Couldn\'t leave it alone. Sometimes that feeling returns as for example when confronted by your poem.
I thought I was reading about a horrendous history, And that humanity, politics and so on was now better than that… how misguided.
July 11th, 2024 19:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I can remember a time, many years ago when I dwelt on this topic a lot. Couldn\'t leave it alone. Sometimes that feeling returns as for example when confronted by your poem.
I thought I was reading about a horrendous history, And that humanity, politics and so on was now better than that… how misguided.
July 11th, 2024 19:35
COWARD ( EXECUTED WW1 )
Cassie58 said:
Such a moving poem. You have captured the carnage so well. Shot for cowardice, when they were suffering from the awful effects of shell shock. Judged by madmen. Thank you for remembering them.
July 11th, 2024 14:14
Cassie58 said:
Such a moving poem. You have captured the carnage so well. Shot for cowardice, when they were suffering from the awful effects of shell shock. Judged by madmen. Thank you for remembering them.
July 11th, 2024 14:14
THE FIRST DAY OF THE SOMME
aDarkerMind said:
have now read this three times,
and will read it many more times.
very impressed.
June 16th, 2024 04:26
aDarkerMind said:
have now read this three times,
and will read it many more times.
very impressed.
June 16th, 2024 04:26
THE FIRST DAY OF THE SOMME
2781 said:
I don\'t know who named it the great war.
June 15th, 2024 07:14
2781 said:
I don\'t know who named it the great war.
June 15th, 2024 07:14
TOMORROWS TEARS
Thad Wilk said:
Very touching and
poignant indeed !
Eloquently penned,
and my pleasure
to read..
Best regards, peace, Thad
May 31st, 2024 10:10
Thad Wilk said:
Very touching and
poignant indeed !
Eloquently penned,
and my pleasure
to read..
Best regards, peace, Thad
May 31st, 2024 10:10
SISTER
Neilton said:
I could never imagine losing my sister!
A really touching poem ! I send my condolences on the loss of your friend\'s sister !
May 2nd, 2024 16:00
Neilton said:
I could never imagine losing my sister!
A really touching poem ! I send my condolences on the loss of your friend\'s sister !
May 2nd, 2024 16:00
FROM THE FRONT
2781 said:
I think it\'s better to pace yourself.
I try not to over do it.
April 26th, 2024 06:57
2781 said:
I think it\'s better to pace yourself.
I try not to over do it.
April 26th, 2024 06:57
CRAZY
Lorenz said:
At last ! Combat poetry for a change from little pink panties !
April 12th, 2024 13:35
Lorenz said:
At last ! Combat poetry for a change from little pink panties !
April 12th, 2024 13:35
CRAZY
Doggerel Dave said:
Summed up nicely - the way the system works (or rather doesn\'t) for many.
April 12th, 2024 10:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Summed up nicely - the way the system works (or rather doesn\'t) for many.
April 12th, 2024 10:34
DEAD ROOMS
A.D. Small said:
I love how you painted the picture here very beautiful piece!!!
April 3rd, 2024 03:13
A.D. Small said:
I love how you painted the picture here very beautiful piece!!!
April 3rd, 2024 03:13
MANKIND
Doggerel Dave said:
In a nutshell.
\"They\" never ask me or you. But \"We\'\" don\'t travel into space \'cos at anytime now or in the past I won\'t be going: -
It, given the immensity of the universe is a ridiculous enterprise anyway.
March 31st, 2024 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
In a nutshell.
\"They\" never ask me or you. But \"We\'\" don\'t travel into space \'cos at anytime now or in the past I won\'t be going: -
It, given the immensity of the universe is a ridiculous enterprise anyway.
March 31st, 2024 16:47
MY FATHERS PLACE
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Was he here at all ?\' Yes - I know. All I have is some very conflicting memories of my parents, sometimes very strong, sometimes quite weak...
And when I\'m gone ?
Thanks for a neat poetic question.
March 25th, 2024 06:09
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Was he here at all ?\' Yes - I know. All I have is some very conflicting memories of my parents, sometimes very strong, sometimes quite weak...
And when I\'m gone ?
Thanks for a neat poetic question.
March 25th, 2024 06:09
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