Comments received on poems by nephilim56
COWARD ( EXECUTED WW1 )
Doggerel Dave said:
I can remember a time, many years ago when I dwelt on this topic a lot. Couldn\'t leave it alone. Sometimes that feeling returns as for example when confronted by your poem.
I thought I was reading about a horrendous history, And that humanity, politics and so on was now better than that… how misguided.
July 11th, 2024 19:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I can remember a time, many years ago when I dwelt on this topic a lot. Couldn\'t leave it alone. Sometimes that feeling returns as for example when confronted by your poem.
I thought I was reading about a horrendous history, And that humanity, politics and so on was now better than that… how misguided.
July 11th, 2024 19:35
COWARD ( EXECUTED WW1 )
Cassie58 said:
Such a moving poem. You have captured the carnage so well. Shot for cowardice, when they were suffering from the awful effects of shell shock. Judged by madmen. Thank you for remembering them.
July 11th, 2024 14:14
Cassie58 said:
Such a moving poem. You have captured the carnage so well. Shot for cowardice, when they were suffering from the awful effects of shell shock. Judged by madmen. Thank you for remembering them.
July 11th, 2024 14:14
THE FIRST DAY OF THE SOMME
aDarkerMind said:
have now read this three times,
and will read it many more times.
very impressed.
June 16th, 2024 04:26
aDarkerMind said:
have now read this three times,
and will read it many more times.
very impressed.
June 16th, 2024 04:26
THE FIRST DAY OF THE SOMME
2781 said:
I don\'t know who named it the great war.
June 15th, 2024 07:14
2781 said:
I don\'t know who named it the great war.
June 15th, 2024 07:14
TOMORROWS TEARS
Thad Wilk said:
Very touching and
poignant indeed !
Eloquently penned,
and my pleasure
to read..
Best regards, peace, Thad
May 31st, 2024 10:10
Thad Wilk said:
Very touching and
poignant indeed !
Eloquently penned,
and my pleasure
to read..
Best regards, peace, Thad
May 31st, 2024 10:10
SISTER
Neilton said:
I could never imagine losing my sister!
A really touching poem ! I send my condolences on the loss of your friend\'s sister !
May 2nd, 2024 16:00
Neilton said:
I could never imagine losing my sister!
A really touching poem ! I send my condolences on the loss of your friend\'s sister !
May 2nd, 2024 16:00
FROM THE FRONT
2781 said:
I think it\'s better to pace yourself.
I try not to over do it.
April 26th, 2024 06:57
2781 said:
I think it\'s better to pace yourself.
I try not to over do it.
April 26th, 2024 06:57
CRAZY
Lorenz said:
At last ! Combat poetry for a change from little pink panties !
April 12th, 2024 13:35
Lorenz said:
At last ! Combat poetry for a change from little pink panties !
April 12th, 2024 13:35
CRAZY
Doggerel Dave said:
Summed up nicely - the way the system works (or rather doesn\'t) for many.
April 12th, 2024 10:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Summed up nicely - the way the system works (or rather doesn\'t) for many.
April 12th, 2024 10:34
DEAD ROOMS
A.D. Small said:
I love how you painted the picture here very beautiful piece!!!
April 3rd, 2024 03:13
A.D. Small said:
I love how you painted the picture here very beautiful piece!!!
April 3rd, 2024 03:13
MANKIND
Doggerel Dave said:
In a nutshell.
\"They\" never ask me or you. But \"We\'\" don\'t travel into space \'cos at anytime now or in the past I won\'t be going: -
It, given the immensity of the universe is a ridiculous enterprise anyway.
March 31st, 2024 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
In a nutshell.
\"They\" never ask me or you. But \"We\'\" don\'t travel into space \'cos at anytime now or in the past I won\'t be going: -
It, given the immensity of the universe is a ridiculous enterprise anyway.
March 31st, 2024 16:47
MY FATHERS PLACE
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Was he here at all ?\' Yes - I know. All I have is some very conflicting memories of my parents, sometimes very strong, sometimes quite weak...
And when I\'m gone ?
Thanks for a neat poetic question.
March 25th, 2024 06:09
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Was he here at all ?\' Yes - I know. All I have is some very conflicting memories of my parents, sometimes very strong, sometimes quite weak...
And when I\'m gone ?
Thanks for a neat poetic question.
March 25th, 2024 06:09
A COLD MARCH DAY
Cassie58 said:
The painful reality of a partnership ending in death. A funeral scene that many of us one day may have to witness. I felt the chill. Nicely penned stanzas. Visual.
March 8th, 2024 22:22
Cassie58 said:
The painful reality of a partnership ending in death. A funeral scene that many of us one day may have to witness. I felt the chill. Nicely penned stanzas. Visual.
March 8th, 2024 22:22
THEATRE
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve worked in theatre (London, West End). You\'ve cracked it perfectly.
March 1st, 2024 04:23
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve worked in theatre (London, West End). You\'ve cracked it perfectly.
March 1st, 2024 04:23
SOLDIER
Doggerel Dave said:
The guilt, I believe should be shared - although in some instances, for some individuals economic disadvantage initially kicked them into the armed services.
Question well posed.
February 23rd, 2024 20:29
Doggerel Dave said:
The guilt, I believe should be shared - although in some instances, for some individuals economic disadvantage initially kicked them into the armed services.
Question well posed.
February 23rd, 2024 20:29
KNOWING AND WAITING
Doggerel Dave said:
Deeply felt I feel, but deeply relevant to us all. A universal experience for most, I believe.
Spare but complete.
February 7th, 2024 07:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Deeply felt I feel, but deeply relevant to us all. A universal experience for most, I believe.
Spare but complete.
February 7th, 2024 07:29
IMMORTAL ROSE
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Immortal rose” by nephilim56
The rose is said to be a symbol of love. This rose here is immortal; it never dies. Sometimes people keep a dried rose petal between two pages in a book. This heart metaphorically has pages. A rose is kept between the pages of the heart. The heart is a broken one.
A suspended sky probably signifies that life has stopped in time. Tear-filled eye denotes paid and suffering. “Frozen in time” : life moves on, but this being himself cannot do so. He remains frozen in his memories. The years go by, but he is stuck in past memories. Soman Ragavan. 11 January, 2024.
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January 11th, 2024 09:00
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Immortal rose” by nephilim56
The rose is said to be a symbol of love. This rose here is immortal; it never dies. Sometimes people keep a dried rose petal between two pages in a book. This heart metaphorically has pages. A rose is kept between the pages of the heart. The heart is a broken one.
A suspended sky probably signifies that life has stopped in time. Tear-filled eye denotes paid and suffering. “Frozen in time” : life moves on, but this being himself cannot do so. He remains frozen in his memories. The years go by, but he is stuck in past memories. Soman Ragavan. 11 January, 2024.
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January 11th, 2024 09:00
CRUEL BREEZE
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A poignant muse expressed in awesome poetics wow! Admiring the word choice as well. Kudos for the poem!
Plz plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
January 8th, 2024 03:10
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A poignant muse expressed in awesome poetics wow! Admiring the word choice as well. Kudos for the poem!
Plz plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
January 8th, 2024 03:10
UK TODAY
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought you described Australia for a moment...
Well said.
December 21st, 2023 17:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought you described Australia for a moment...
Well said.
December 21st, 2023 17:19
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