Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
THE WATERS EDGE
FrasMac said:
and, breathe. Works for me, the suspense playing backwards, instead of wondering what\'s still to happen. Nicely done.
May 13th, 2026 11:43
FrasMac said:
and, breathe. Works for me, the suspense playing backwards, instead of wondering what\'s still to happen. Nicely done.
May 13th, 2026 11:43
TOUCHES GROUND
Neilton said:
Such a great poem ! The first verse is my favourite!!
May 13th, 2026 04:15
Neilton said:
Such a great poem ! The first verse is my favourite!!
May 13th, 2026 04:15
TOUCHES GROUND
orchidee said:
A fine write N. It\'s too much for you - you\'ve wept blood, or sweated blood, waiting for that No.7 bus. Could you try the No.4 bus instead? Or doesn\'t they go to Costcutters?! lol.
May 13th, 2026 02:36
orchidee said:
A fine write N. It\'s too much for you - you\'ve wept blood, or sweated blood, waiting for that No.7 bus. Could you try the No.4 bus instead? Or doesn\'t they go to Costcutters?! lol.
May 13th, 2026 02:36
ROAD
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, that road will take you to a wonderful place.
Andy
May 13th, 2026 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, that road will take you to a wonderful place.
Andy
May 13th, 2026 01:46
ROAD
orchidee said:
Ahh, that\'ll be the road where you never get to the next crossroads, as the bus never arrives! lol.
May 12th, 2026 10:13
orchidee said:
Ahh, that\'ll be the road where you never get to the next crossroads, as the bus never arrives! lol.
May 12th, 2026 10:13
ROAD
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve known roads like this myself…the kind where you keep moving without fully knowing what waits around the next bend. That mix of hurt, endurance, and quiet acceptance comes through clearly here. It feels reflective without losing hope. Beautifully done, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve known roads like this myself…the kind where you keep moving without fully knowing what waits around the next bend. That mix of hurt, endurance, and quiet acceptance comes through clearly here. It feels reflective without losing hope. Beautifully done, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 10:09
ROAD
sorenbarrett said:
Life as a road with its bends and inability to see what is ahead. Well written
May 12th, 2026 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Life as a road with its bends and inability to see what is ahead. Well written
May 12th, 2026 05:23
MIDNIGHT WEPT
Goldfinch60 said:
That vision will arise one day in the light Norman.
Andy
May 12th, 2026 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That vision will arise one day in the light Norman.
Andy
May 12th, 2026 01:46
MIDNIGHT WEPT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like stepping into one of those moments where memory becomes almost physical, Norman. The candles, marble, echoes, shadows…it all creates this deeply mournful dreamscape that lingered with me afterward. Really moving work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like stepping into one of those moments where memory becomes almost physical, Norman. The candles, marble, echoes, shadows…it all creates this deeply mournful dreamscape that lingered with me afterward. Really moving work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:28
MIDNIGHT WEPT
orchidee said:
Good write N. There you are at the bus stop - weeping at midnight, still waiting. Will you get the No 11 bus instead!? lol.
May 11th, 2026 11:13
orchidee said:
Good write N. There you are at the bus stop - weeping at midnight, still waiting. Will you get the No 11 bus instead!? lol.
May 11th, 2026 11:13
THE ANGEL WHO FELL
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman bringing reality to us all.
Andy
May 11th, 2026 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman bringing reality to us all.
Andy
May 11th, 2026 01:06
THE ANGEL WHO FELL
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman...what a haunting piece this is. The celestial imagery feels grand, but the emotional core stays painfully grounded...falling, aging, doubting, searching for shelter after the fire fades. And that final realization creeping in at the end...you can feel it approaching before the poem even says it outright. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 10th, 2026 11:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman...what a haunting piece this is. The celestial imagery feels grand, but the emotional core stays painfully grounded...falling, aging, doubting, searching for shelter after the fire fades. And that final realization creeping in at the end...you can feel it approaching before the poem even says it outright. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 10th, 2026 11:56
THE ANGEL WHO FELL
RSM0812 said:
This is a cool Christian doctrine poem. I love reading about angels and fall of Hell.
May 10th, 2026 06:46
RSM0812 said:
This is a cool Christian doctrine poem. I love reading about angels and fall of Hell.
May 10th, 2026 06:46
THE ANGEL WHO FELL
arqios said:
Quite epic in scope and delivery. Most enjoyed dear friend 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 05:13
arqios said:
Quite epic in scope and delivery. Most enjoyed dear friend 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 05:13
THE ANGEL WHO FELL
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse may occur even in heaven. A wonderful write that transforms the spiritual into the mortal
May 10th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse may occur even in heaven. A wonderful write that transforms the spiritual into the mortal
May 10th, 2026 04:39
THE ANGEL WHO FELL
orchidee said:
An angel appeared to you and granted you a miracle - a bus turned up! lol.
May 10th, 2026 03:18
orchidee said:
An angel appeared to you and granted you a miracle - a bus turned up! lol.
May 10th, 2026 03:18
BENEATH THE ARCH
Goldfinch60 said:
That solitude will soon pass Norman and all will be well.
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That solitude will soon pass Norman and all will be well.
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:48
BENEATH THE ARCH
arqios said:
We really need to dance more as a race. Thanks, Norman 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 17:01
arqios said:
We really need to dance more as a race. Thanks, Norman 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 17:01
BENEATH THE ARCH
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, “single droplets / from leaves fall” immediately pulled me into the scene. That quiet detail makes the whole poem breathe naturally…the world feels still, damp, and reflective all at once. Beautiful imagery throughout, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, “single droplets / from leaves fall” immediately pulled me into the scene. That quiet detail makes the whole poem breathe naturally…the world feels still, damp, and reflective all at once. Beautiful imagery throughout, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:52
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