Comments received on poems by nephilim56
THE OLD NOTE
Poetic Licence said:
The note brought back sad memories of loss, nicely expressed in this well written piece
February 22nd, 2025 06:21
Poetic Licence said:
The note brought back sad memories of loss, nicely expressed in this well written piece
February 22nd, 2025 06:21
THE OLD NOTE
arqios said:
Beautiful! I loved finding old notes and written stuff in various nooks of the old ancestral home, when it was still around… almost as fun as taking a ride on a true to life time machine 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 05:54
arqios said:
Beautiful! I loved finding old notes and written stuff in various nooks of the old ancestral home, when it was still around… almost as fun as taking a ride on a true to life time machine 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 05:54
THE OLD NOTE
sorenbarrett said:
I feel sadness and loss in this poem that has a haunting quality. It reads like a voice out of the fog. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
I feel sadness and loss in this poem that has a haunting quality. It reads like a voice out of the fog. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 05:19
UNKNOWN HERO
arqios said:
A tragic hero and a wonderful verse to tell their tale🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 06:00
arqios said:
A tragic hero and a wonderful verse to tell their tale🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 06:00
UNKNOWN HERO
sorenbarrett said:
The wounds of war after triumph still bleed. A wonderful write of metaphor that bleeds into the readers mind. Well done
February 21st, 2025 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
The wounds of war after triumph still bleed. A wonderful write of metaphor that bleeds into the readers mind. Well done
February 21st, 2025 05:36
TRAIN STATION
arqios said:
Most families have had this kind of experience in every major conflict in the history of humanity 🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 05:05
arqios said:
Most families have had this kind of experience in every major conflict in the history of humanity 🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 05:05
TRAIN STATION
sorenbarrett said:
A timeless poem casting a distant image set in a distant time so as not to touch tender nerves but set this in perspective. Well done and with graphic images that remind us well what war is and its lack of purpose. Well done
February 20th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A timeless poem casting a distant image set in a distant time so as not to touch tender nerves but set this in perspective. Well done and with graphic images that remind us well what war is and its lack of purpose. Well done
February 20th, 2025 04:54
JAGGED
arqios said:
Like a razor or a saw in its movement, tempo and rhythm 🙏🏻🕊
February 19th, 2025 05:30
arqios said:
Like a razor or a saw in its movement, tempo and rhythm 🙏🏻🕊
February 19th, 2025 05:30
JAGGED
sorenbarrett said:
It is the flow and rhyme of this poem that I loved the most. Very nicely done and deserves a fave
February 19th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is the flow and rhyme of this poem that I loved the most. Very nicely done and deserves a fave
February 19th, 2025 05:04
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
sorenbarrett said:
Chasing a dream is a long journey that is like trying to catch a cloud in a net or the classic looking for the end of a rainbow. A lovely write.
February 18th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
Chasing a dream is a long journey that is like trying to catch a cloud in a net or the classic looking for the end of a rainbow. A lovely write.
February 18th, 2025 05:45
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic view on life and the battles we face, enjoyable read
February 18th, 2025 05:21
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic view on life and the battles we face, enjoyable read
February 18th, 2025 05:21
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
arqios said:
A very romantic view of life and it’s challenges. Don Quixote’s windmill giants are a far cry from this reality. 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:07
arqios said:
A very romantic view of life and it’s challenges. Don Quixote’s windmill giants are a far cry from this reality. 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:07
BOXING BOOTH
arqios said:
A vivid tale as well as a metaphorical treatise in the circus of life, taking blows but always a sideshow… how much is the value of a life where life is meant to be of highest value!?
February 17th, 2025 05:24
arqios said:
A vivid tale as well as a metaphorical treatise in the circus of life, taking blows but always a sideshow… how much is the value of a life where life is meant to be of highest value!?
February 17th, 2025 05:24
BOXING BOOTH
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal memory loss and Parkinson\'s disease in the metaphorical more serious still. A wonderful write with great short lines like punches and careful wording delivering each blow
February 17th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal memory loss and Parkinson\'s disease in the metaphorical more serious still. A wonderful write with great short lines like punches and careful wording delivering each blow
February 17th, 2025 04:50
OLD SOLDIER
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes clear the devastation of war and the question that occurs to survivors. Well written and heartfelt
February 16th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes clear the devastation of war and the question that occurs to survivors. Well written and heartfelt
February 16th, 2025 04:20
OLD SOLDIER
arqios said:
It’s tough all around for the soldiering kind. Thanks for giving voice to this 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 04:01
arqios said:
It’s tough all around for the soldiering kind. Thanks for giving voice to this 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 04:01
STRANGER
RSM0812 said:
Really good read. Great rhym scheme. I really liked this one.
February 15th, 2025 14:38
RSM0812 said:
Really good read. Great rhym scheme. I really liked this one.
February 15th, 2025 14:38
WINTER SKY
RSM0812 said:
This is awesome. I really like the short stanza style and rhyming patterns. Tells the story with great imagery also. \"Upon first kiss, of winter sky\". Very pretty to imagine.
February 15th, 2025 10:42
RSM0812 said:
This is awesome. I really like the short stanza style and rhyming patterns. Tells the story with great imagery also. \"Upon first kiss, of winter sky\". Very pretty to imagine.
February 15th, 2025 10:42
ECHO
sorenbarrett said:
An image that had not occurred to me, love that burnt an echo. Very poetic and evokes several vivid images. The poem flows well and is a pleasurable read.
February 15th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
An image that had not occurred to me, love that burnt an echo. Very poetic and evokes several vivid images. The poem flows well and is a pleasurable read.
February 15th, 2025 04:34
ECHO
Poetic Licence said:
This read has a lovely flow as you read it, enjoyed
February 15th, 2025 03:22
Poetic Licence said:
This read has a lovely flow as you read it, enjoyed
February 15th, 2025 03:22
GABRIEL
arqios said:
If it’s the message announced that is needed, then Gabriel is the one to be heeded!
February 14th, 2025 07:42
arqios said:
If it’s the message announced that is needed, then Gabriel is the one to be heeded!
February 14th, 2025 07:42
GABRIEL
Poetic Licence said:
Has a lovely feeling as you read through, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 05:28
Poetic Licence said:
Has a lovely feeling as you read through, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 05:28
GABRIEL
sorenbarrett said:
Such a rocking rhythm to this poem the meter rolls on and on carrying the reader to the end; Very nicely done
February 14th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
Such a rocking rhythm to this poem the meter rolls on and on carrying the reader to the end; Very nicely done
February 14th, 2025 05:04
HUMBLE
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written this poem flowes off the tongue easily. Very nice
February 13th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written this poem flowes off the tongue easily. Very nice
February 13th, 2025 03:54
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