Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
UNSUNG HERO
rrodriguez said:
It\'s resiliance that counts, you\'re right—enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.
August 6th, 2025 17:28
rrodriguez said:
It\'s resiliance that counts, you\'re right—enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.
August 6th, 2025 17:28
ASYLUM
sorenbarrett said:
God help any life form that extends a hand to the human species. Like a virus it will destroy them infecting their way of life. A good write
August 6th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
God help any life form that extends a hand to the human species. Like a virus it will destroy them infecting their way of life. A good write
August 6th, 2025 04:56
LAST SHADOW
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the gentle weaving of metaphor into subtle foreshadowing in this poem The last stanza leaving the reader with the feeling of the relationship washed away with the incoming tide. Loved the imagery in this poem as well
August 5th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the gentle weaving of metaphor into subtle foreshadowing in this poem The last stanza leaving the reader with the feeling of the relationship washed away with the incoming tide. Loved the imagery in this poem as well
August 5th, 2025 05:07
HAUNTED LIGHTHOUSE
Ellen Marsell said:
An atmospheric poem that carries the breath of old sea folklore. Really loved it!
August 3rd, 2025 13:38
Ellen Marsell said:
An atmospheric poem that carries the breath of old sea folklore. Really loved it!
August 3rd, 2025 13:38
HAUNTED LIGHTHOUSE
sorenbarrett said:
A great ghost tale in verse and rhyme. Very nicely done
August 3rd, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A great ghost tale in verse and rhyme. Very nicely done
August 3rd, 2025 04:32
JAIL THE SINGLE MOTHER
sorenbarrett said:
Why must we rely on government to take care of the poor when it should come from each individual that sees it? Everyone is responsible for taking care of their fellow man. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Why must we rely on government to take care of the poor when it should come from each individual that sees it? Everyone is responsible for taking care of their fellow man. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2025 05:01
JAIL THE SINGLE MOTHER
2781 said:
They used to say that charity starts at home.
I doubt there would be as much poverty it we understand what that meant.
August 2nd, 2025 04:08
2781 said:
They used to say that charity starts at home.
I doubt there would be as much poverty it we understand what that meant.
August 2nd, 2025 04:08
ANCIENT WINGS
sorenbarrett said:
The images presented in this poem haunt the mind and in its darkness from the shadows emerges phantoms of thought. Nicely crafted with rhyme
August 1st, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
The images presented in this poem haunt the mind and in its darkness from the shadows emerges phantoms of thought. Nicely crafted with rhyme
August 1st, 2025 05:07
THE MEN LEFT BEHIND
sorenbarrett said:
A chilly and haunting poem of death, war, separation, loss. Nicely done
July 31st, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A chilly and haunting poem of death, war, separation, loss. Nicely done
July 31st, 2025 03:56
THE OLD STREET
sorenbarrett said:
The neighborhood a metaphor for the people that lived there, all rusted and broken with time. A lovely write
July 30th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
The neighborhood a metaphor for the people that lived there, all rusted and broken with time. A lovely write
July 30th, 2025 04:11
GODS ONCE WALKED
sorenbarrett said:
A rocking rhythm flows through this poem with a flow felt as it is read. Nicely done
July 29th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A rocking rhythm flows through this poem with a flow felt as it is read. Nicely done
July 29th, 2025 04:38
AS DAYLIGHT FADES
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of remorse at the end of one\'s days and the coming final hour. Well written
July 28th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of remorse at the end of one\'s days and the coming final hour. Well written
July 28th, 2025 04:51
AS DAYLIGHT FADES
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of remorse at the end of one\'s days and the coming final hour. Well written
July 28th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of remorse at the end of one\'s days and the coming final hour. Well written
July 28th, 2025 04:51
TOMORROWS DICTATOR
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning about a topic everyone knows but are afraid to address because the answer affects them personally. Greed and neglect have gotten us hear and are the same reason that keeps us here. A sad but all to true tale. Nicely done
July 27th, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning about a topic everyone knows but are afraid to address because the answer affects them personally. Greed and neglect have gotten us hear and are the same reason that keeps us here. A sad but all to true tale. Nicely done
July 27th, 2025 05:28
FLYING HIGH
rrodriguez said:
Bring me to the many silent heroes fading away quietly... Thanks you for sharing!
July 26th, 2025 06:41
rrodriguez said:
Bring me to the many silent heroes fading away quietly... Thanks you for sharing!
July 26th, 2025 06:41
A TOAST TO BARBARA
arqios said:
A full lived set of days bring the closing ones much memory, reminiscences and fondness. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 26th, 2025 05:44
arqios said:
A full lived set of days bring the closing ones much memory, reminiscences and fondness. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 26th, 2025 05:44
A TOAST TO BARBARA
sorenbarrett said:
Love and its course in old age, separation by death but not memories. Nicely crafted
July 26th, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Love and its course in old age, separation by death but not memories. Nicely crafted
July 26th, 2025 05:30
FLYING HIGH
arqios said:
reminds me of my grandfather, whom I still haven\'t been able to write a proper tributary poem. Very moving.
July 25th, 2025 06:50
arqios said:
reminds me of my grandfather, whom I still haven\'t been able to write a proper tributary poem. Very moving.
July 25th, 2025 06:50
FLYING HIGH
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching write of a man who gave much to so many, passing away alone, nicely done
July 25th, 2025 05:02
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching write of a man who gave much to so many, passing away alone, nicely done
July 25th, 2025 05:02
FLYING HIGH
sorenbarrett said:
Had to give this one a fave. My father a navigator for B-17s during WWII and many a tale he had of battle in the air and he too died in bed old but not forgotten. A lovely write
July 25th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Had to give this one a fave. My father a navigator for B-17s during WWII and many a tale he had of battle in the air and he too died in bed old but not forgotten. A lovely write
July 25th, 2025 04:39
REFLECTION
Keeter C said:
I have gone to sleep listening to crashing waves. It’s a pleasant thing.
July 24th, 2025 20:43
Keeter C said:
I have gone to sleep listening to crashing waves. It’s a pleasant thing.
July 24th, 2025 20:43
A LONE COAT ON A HOOK
ElizabethMoroz said:
I love how you use minimalism to convey such depth of meaning. It’s very effective and potent in your technique. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:55
ElizabethMoroz said:
I love how you use minimalism to convey such depth of meaning. It’s very effective and potent in your technique. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:55
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