Comments received on poems by nephilim56
ASHAMED
Poetic Licence said:
I echo every sentiment expressed in this write, nicely done
March 27th, 2025 07:34
Poetic Licence said:
I echo every sentiment expressed in this write, nicely done
March 27th, 2025 07:34
ASHAMED
sorenbarrett said:
Increasing population stokes the fires of a Dachau of the present where it is not religion or ethnicity but monetary value that designates who will be burned.
March 27th, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
Increasing population stokes the fires of a Dachau of the present where it is not religion or ethnicity but monetary value that designates who will be burned.
March 27th, 2025 06:20
THE ORNATE BOWL
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of connecting with someone in the peace of the night to someone there missing, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 07:17
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of connecting with someone in the peace of the night to someone there missing, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 07:17
THE ORNATE BOWL
sorenbarrett said:
Missing someone is what comes through to me from this poem. Very well painted with images
March 26th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Missing someone is what comes through to me from this poem. Very well painted with images
March 26th, 2025 04:38
FIT FOR WORK
Poetic Licence said:
Very valid points and issues raised at what is to come from labour and no doubt many will suffer the effects of the cuts, but if we are honest there are many many people taking out of the system that should not be, and just maybe if they had not being that for many years, there would be enough money for those who genuinely need it, well written write that makes it point
March 25th, 2025 05:51
Poetic Licence said:
Very valid points and issues raised at what is to come from labour and no doubt many will suffer the effects of the cuts, but if we are honest there are many many people taking out of the system that should not be, and just maybe if they had not being that for many years, there would be enough money for those who genuinely need it, well written write that makes it point
March 25th, 2025 05:51
FIT FOR WORK
sorenbarrett said:
We look for the easy way but find that it is not what we thought as it all comes down to money and there isn\'t enough to go around. A poem that drives its point home. Nicely done
March 25th, 2025 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
We look for the easy way but find that it is not what we thought as it all comes down to money and there isn\'t enough to go around. A poem that drives its point home. Nicely done
March 25th, 2025 05:37
DREAM RETURNING
RSM0812 said:
Dreams are our unconscious trying to teach us something. Maybe this dream says there is always hope.
March 25th, 2025 04:55
RSM0812 said:
Dreams are our unconscious trying to teach us something. Maybe this dream says there is always hope.
March 25th, 2025 04:55
DAMAGED
RSM0812 said:
To me it reads like betrayel and a broken heart. I really enjoyed this. Nice write.
March 25th, 2025 04:47
RSM0812 said:
To me it reads like betrayel and a broken heart. I really enjoyed this. Nice write.
March 25th, 2025 04:47
DAMAGED
Poetic Licence said:
A well crafted write that is a bit of a thinker, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 05:52
Poetic Licence said:
A well crafted write that is a bit of a thinker, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 05:52
DAMAGED
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the concept contained in this poem empowers people more than I imagined. A most thought provoking poem. Lovely
March 24th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the concept contained in this poem empowers people more than I imagined. A most thought provoking poem. Lovely
March 24th, 2025 04:31
DAUGHTER ( TO EMMA )
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written dedication to their daughter, really nice
March 23rd, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written dedication to their daughter, really nice
March 23rd, 2025 05:44
DAUGHTER ( TO EMMA )
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded and built this poem expresses how I feel about my daughters and with rhyme as well. Nicely done
March 23rd, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded and built this poem expresses how I feel about my daughters and with rhyme as well. Nicely done
March 23rd, 2025 04:34
BIRTHDAY CARD
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and a sad one at that. Symbols well used of a dried rose. Nicely written
March 21st, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and a sad one at that. Symbols well used of a dried rose. Nicely written
March 21st, 2025 04:10
UPON THE SHORE
Poetic Licence said:
The people\'s fate is held in the captains hands, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 05:11
Poetic Licence said:
The people\'s fate is held in the captains hands, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 05:11
UPON THE SHORE
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor for life sailing the seas and fate is in our the captain\'s hands. Great imagery
March 20th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor for life sailing the seas and fate is in our the captain\'s hands. Great imagery
March 20th, 2025 04:03
INNER EYE
Poetic Licence said:
And for some that is a scary place, the makings of nightmares, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 06:59
Poetic Licence said:
And for some that is a scary place, the makings of nightmares, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 06:59
INNER EYE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves feelings of the core of fear where nightmares begin. An unknown realm of one\'s anxieties. Well drawn in words. Brilliant!
March 19th, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves feelings of the core of fear where nightmares begin. An unknown realm of one\'s anxieties. Well drawn in words. Brilliant!
March 19th, 2025 05:49
SURRENDED ARMY
Poetic Licence said:
The long walk of defeat probably brings a lot of thoughts and emotions to those who done that walk, but I imagine the worst being fear of not knowing what their future holds, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 05:37
Poetic Licence said:
The long walk of defeat probably brings a lot of thoughts and emotions to those who done that walk, but I imagine the worst being fear of not knowing what their future holds, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 05:37
SURRENDED ARMY
sorenbarrett said:
A vision of defeat and possibly a metaphor as well most wars take prisoners and then what is the fate of a POW. Very well imaged and full of possibilities for further metaphors
March 18th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A vision of defeat and possibly a metaphor as well most wars take prisoners and then what is the fate of a POW. Very well imaged and full of possibilities for further metaphors
March 18th, 2025 04:18
RADIO CRACKLES
Poetic Licence said:
A stark write representing how many people are forced to and struggle to live in this world, nicely expressed
March 17th, 2025 07:16
Poetic Licence said:
A stark write representing how many people are forced to and struggle to live in this world, nicely expressed
March 17th, 2025 07:16
RADIO CRACKLES
sorenbarrett said:
A great representation of the toughness of life in the present economy and how stark the conditions that we live under. Nicely written
March 17th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
A great representation of the toughness of life in the present economy and how stark the conditions that we live under. Nicely written
March 17th, 2025 07:05
AN EMPTY SHELL
sorenbarrett said:
A picture too often seen. A story too often told. A broken person than no one wants to mend. Sad and well said.
March 16th, 2025 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
A picture too often seen. A story too often told. A broken person than no one wants to mend. Sad and well said.
March 16th, 2025 07:07
AN EMPTY SHELL
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of something that is all to common these days and it should never be homelessness, well expressed
March 16th, 2025 06:47
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of something that is all to common these days and it should never be homelessness, well expressed
March 16th, 2025 06:47
AN EMPTY SHELL
arqios said:
Sadly where our society is at. A truthful image and depiction 🙏🏻🕊
March 16th, 2025 04:45
arqios said:
Sadly where our society is at. A truthful image and depiction 🙏🏻🕊
March 16th, 2025 04:45
AN ANGELS NOTE
arqios said:
Oh what a good thing that the note was finally read🙏🏻🕊hope that it wasn’t too late🕊🙏🏻
March 15th, 2025 07:37
arqios said:
Oh what a good thing that the note was finally read🙏🏻🕊hope that it wasn’t too late🕊🙏🏻
March 15th, 2025 07:37
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