Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
WHEN THE INK HAS DRIED
Sealgair said:
The play is over, so the roles no longer matter.
August 16th, 2026 13:40
Sealgair said:
The play is over, so the roles no longer matter.
August 16th, 2026 13:40
WHEN THE INK HAS DRIED
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes, the ink has had plenty of time to dry while you wrote this poem waiting for that bus! lol.
August 16th, 2026 11:07
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes, the ink has had plenty of time to dry while you wrote this poem waiting for that bus! lol.
August 16th, 2026 11:07
WHEN THE INK HAS DRIED
Lorenz said:
when the ink has dried the echo of past sin fades away...
August 16th, 2026 09:51
Lorenz said:
when the ink has dried the echo of past sin fades away...
August 16th, 2026 09:51
WHEN THE INK HAS DRIED
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Norman...this is dark, thoughtful, and deeply human. There’s fear in it, but also a stripping away of all the old accounting...success, failure, pride, regret. By the end, what remains feels stark and honest. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Norman...this is dark, thoughtful, and deeply human. There’s fear in it, but also a stripping away of all the old accounting...success, failure, pride, regret. By the end, what remains feels stark and honest. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:35
WHEN THE INK HAS DRIED
sorenbarrett said:
It seems in this poem of good rhyme that dualities are compared and in the end it really does not matter all is to be forgotten. Very nicely done the message most subtly sent. Death is the great leveler
August 16th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
It seems in this poem of good rhyme that dualities are compared and in the end it really does not matter all is to be forgotten. Very nicely done the message most subtly sent. Death is the great leveler
August 16th, 2026 04:22
DISTANT STRANGERS
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, so many waiting for that bus, they say to one another \'Hello stranger, not seen ya for 10, 20, ..... years!\' lol.
August 15th, 2026 11:23
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, so many waiting for that bus, they say to one another \'Hello stranger, not seen ya for 10, 20, ..... years!\' lol.
August 15th, 2026 11:23
DISTANT STRANGERS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Norman...this is restrained and deeply sad. The routine is still there, the shared history is still there, but the warmth between them has almost completely drained away. You captured that distance beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Norman...this is restrained and deeply sad. The routine is still there, the shared history is still there, but the warmth between them has almost completely drained away. You captured that distance beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 08:10
DISTANT STRANGERS
sorenbarrett said:
Time wears many things thin and leaves little incentive for change. Well written my friend
August 15th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
Time wears many things thin and leaves little incentive for change. Well written my friend
August 15th, 2026 03:48
A BURNING PAGE
Goldfinch60 said:
But the words will aways live on Norman.
Andy
August 15th, 2026 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
But the words will aways live on Norman.
Andy
August 15th, 2026 01:44
THE RELUCTANT SOLDIER
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Our hearts are with those who sacrifice their very lives for what they believe in! This is a beautifully written piece!
August 14th, 2026 14:09
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Our hearts are with those who sacrifice their very lives for what they believe in! This is a beautifully written piece!
August 14th, 2026 14:09
A BURNING PAGE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Norman...this is heavy and deeply reflective. The sense of old pain finally being brought to an end gives the whole piece a real finality. There’s sorrow in it, but also release. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Norman...this is heavy and deeply reflective. The sense of old pain finally being brought to an end gives the whole piece a real finality. There’s sorrow in it, but also release. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:50
A BURNING PAGE
Lorenz said:
I looked at the endless list of poets who ended up committing suicide - because just once they forgot to burn their words and believed them...Let\'s be careful and keep lying !
August 14th, 2026 09:48
Lorenz said:
I looked at the endless list of poets who ended up committing suicide - because just once they forgot to burn their words and believed them...Let\'s be careful and keep lying !
August 14th, 2026 09:48
A BURNING PAGE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem could have many interpretations but the first that came to my mind was something written that left a burning impression, whether misinterpreted or whether the message was meant it burned. Nicely written
August 14th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem could have many interpretations but the first that came to my mind was something written that left a burning impression, whether misinterpreted or whether the message was meant it burned. Nicely written
August 14th, 2026 04:29
THE DAWN OF DAY
Goldfinch60 said:
May those wonderful dawns keep coming Norman.
Andy
August 14th, 2026 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May those wonderful dawns keep coming Norman.
Andy
August 14th, 2026 01:05
THE DAWN OF DAY
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, what a beautiful poem, Norman. This carries such an easy sense of peace, renewal, and wonder…the whole natural world feels alive and welcoming. It brought me right into that quiet magic of a fresh morning. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, what a beautiful poem, Norman. This carries such an easy sense of peace, renewal, and wonder…the whole natural world feels alive and welcoming. It brought me right into that quiet magic of a fresh morning. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:41
THE DAWN OF DAY
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome poem wow! Muse expressed masterfully! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
August 13th, 2026 09:09
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome poem wow! Muse expressed masterfully! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
August 13th, 2026 09:09
THE DAWN OF DAY
sorenbarrett said:
Simply lovely this poem literal and metaphorical dazzles the ear and imagination. The breaking dawn and the promise that it holds of a new day a new beginning. Very nicely imaged with rhyme as well. A lovely write and a fave
August 13th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Simply lovely this poem literal and metaphorical dazzles the ear and imagination. The breaking dawn and the promise that it holds of a new day a new beginning. Very nicely imaged with rhyme as well. A lovely write and a fave
August 13th, 2026 04:21
THE DAWN OF DAY
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Dawn, daylight, dusk, night - we been waiting at all times for a non-bus! lol.
August 13th, 2026 02:37
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Dawn, daylight, dusk, night - we been waiting at all times for a non-bus! lol.
August 13th, 2026 02:37
SOMETIMES
Goldfinch60 said:
Those autumn days are magnificen Norman, as are your words.
Andy
August 13th, 2026 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Those autumn days are magnificen Norman, as are your words.
Andy
August 13th, 2026 01:11
SOMETIMES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a beautifully nostalgic piece. There are memories that time simply cannot erase…they may retreat for years, but when they return, they bring an entire moment of our lives back with them. Really loved this, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a beautifully nostalgic piece. There are memories that time simply cannot erase…they may retreat for years, but when they return, they bring an entire moment of our lives back with them. Really loved this, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:22
SOMETIMES
sorenbarrett said:
This poem drifts through reveries and dreams. Memories of a drunken past cast in fondness. Well written Norman
August 12th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
This poem drifts through reveries and dreams. Memories of a drunken past cast in fondness. Well written Norman
August 12th, 2026 03:54
THE WATCHER
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. Two figures carrying the same sorrow while neither recognizes themselves in the other…that’s beautifully tragic, my friend. Powerful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. Two figures carrying the same sorrow while neither recognizes themselves in the other…that’s beautifully tragic, my friend. Powerful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:31
THE WATCHER
Thomas W Case said:
The angel and the poet mirror each other beautifully here—two wounded souls carrying isolation without realizing they’re sharing the same damn pain. The golden tears and broken white wings give it a haunting visual weight, while the ending quietly brings the whole thing home.
August 11th, 2026 06:41
Thomas W Case said:
The angel and the poet mirror each other beautifully here—two wounded souls carrying isolation without realizing they’re sharing the same damn pain. The golden tears and broken white wings give it a haunting visual weight, while the ending quietly brings the whole thing home.
August 11th, 2026 06:41
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