Comments received on poems by Minki
interruption
Zain Khalid said:
Sorrowful but Good!
\"What lies within, lies ahead.\"
January 24th, 2023 19:13
Zain Khalid said:
Sorrowful but Good!
\"What lies within, lies ahead.\"
January 24th, 2023 19:13
not capable of loving
Zain Khalid said:
Blessed one, Longing is such a blissful feeling.
January 22nd, 2023 17:13
Zain Khalid said:
Blessed one, Longing is such a blissful feeling.
January 22nd, 2023 17:13
last wish
Kinsey Peterson said:
When human arms fail we fall into the embrace of poetry.
January 20th, 2023 09:46
Kinsey Peterson said:
When human arms fail we fall into the embrace of poetry.
January 20th, 2023 09:46
blood trail
jarcher54 said:
I think most of us know this feeling... very intense and compelling poem. Thanks for creating it. I like it very much... and I am pretty picky!
January 14th, 2023 13:52
jarcher54 said:
I think most of us know this feeling... very intense and compelling poem. Thanks for creating it. I like it very much... and I am pretty picky!
January 14th, 2023 13:52
broken
Kinsey Peterson said:
rage fueled words are rarely looked back upon with fondness my dear, I hope you can love yourself despite the anger. From one \"parasite\" to another- much love.
January 13th, 2023 11:36
Kinsey Peterson said:
rage fueled words are rarely looked back upon with fondness my dear, I hope you can love yourself despite the anger. From one \"parasite\" to another- much love.
January 13th, 2023 11:36
FALL
mvvenkataraman said:
Prayer is a sure cushion for depression,
Through deep sleep, a cure we can reap,
Let hear melodious songs ear,
Ban tear, add cheer, hope dear,
Prayer, joy and laughter be had hereafter,
Then depression will be dead by leaving the head!
January 12th, 2023 01:01
mvvenkataraman said:
Prayer is a sure cushion for depression,
Through deep sleep, a cure we can reap,
Let hear melodious songs ear,
Ban tear, add cheer, hope dear,
Prayer, joy and laughter be had hereafter,
Then depression will be dead by leaving the head!
January 12th, 2023 01:01
sign
L. B. Mek said:
I know these words
and that thundering, yearning
in those impatiently prickling veins
that give life to such desperation
(running, is a utility of survival
and often
a prerequisite precursor to new beginnings
and so, its not always the wrong choice
but, dear youthful soul
be careful, of those choices made
in the heat of rage or while drowning
in our laments..
for there is always one thing, we can\'t outrun
and that\'s ourselves, always!
so if you have the time, Prepare
think out your plan and path
then question yourself
if truly being a few miles removed
from the strife, ruining your life
will insure, it won\'t just manifest again
in a different guise or face, be sure
you\'re leaping to that future
you yearn for, and are not being pushed
out of a now, you may yet salvage
and grow far stronger
for doing so...)
either way, I laud the empowering tone
and message in your words
and wish you the every best of luck with either choice
thanks for sharing, stay strong!
January 9th, 2023 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
I know these words
and that thundering, yearning
in those impatiently prickling veins
that give life to such desperation
(running, is a utility of survival
and often
a prerequisite precursor to new beginnings
and so, its not always the wrong choice
but, dear youthful soul
be careful, of those choices made
in the heat of rage or while drowning
in our laments..
for there is always one thing, we can\'t outrun
and that\'s ourselves, always!
so if you have the time, Prepare
think out your plan and path
then question yourself
if truly being a few miles removed
from the strife, ruining your life
will insure, it won\'t just manifest again
in a different guise or face, be sure
you\'re leaping to that future
you yearn for, and are not being pushed
out of a now, you may yet salvage
and grow far stronger
for doing so...)
either way, I laud the empowering tone
and message in your words
and wish you the every best of luck with either choice
thanks for sharing, stay strong!
January 9th, 2023 04:33
