Comments received on poems by VenneKing



For those days
L. B. Mek said:

what a reassuring message, thanks for sharing

June 12th, 2023 02:45

Like a pale leaf
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful imagery, and such a relatable theme
thanks for sharing

March 27th, 2023 04:03

Hate
arqios said:

Stronger than hatred would be the other side of the coin that intense love which for the most part possess the same firepower though expressed differently. Thanks for sharing.

January 31st, 2023 05:05

Those Days
arqios said:

Yes! That is a strong first piece. Have my share of them and even go back to them, each being like nails that peg down the lid of a coffin of yesterday. Welcome to MPS, belatedly, and happy new year.

January 31st, 2023 05:03

Nature
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

I do love your poem by the way

January 21st, 2023 11:53

Nature
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Hello. Are you having an issue where you click on your public profile and it say’s critical error? I am. I can see everything else but not public profile

January 21st, 2023 11:52

Is My Love True?
L. B. Mek said:

\'My heart popped up
Like a shooting star\'
(I get this when making
risky choices for dinner
on a workday night...)
lol
please forgive my tasteless humour
I genuinely enjoyed reading these words
imbued with your spirited volition
thanks for sharing

January 20th, 2023 04:45