Comments received on poems by 2781



Trying to kill
2781 said:

Thank you Ok. Just doing what I am told, can\'t take the credit. Cheers brother.

March 24th, 2023 12:06

Trying to kill
Ok Waleed said:

You’re really one of my favorite poets on this site and this poem once again proves your greatness thank you

March 24th, 2023 11:56

Trying to kill
Kaidon said:

this is very powerful, keep trying your best.

March 24th, 2023 09:09

Problems
MendedFences27 said:

Amen! They say a gift from caring comes back two-fold, and you seem to have proven that today. A very generous write full of truth.

March 23rd, 2023 10:44

Confidence
E.J. Waling said:

Great ✍️

March 23rd, 2023 10:07

Problems
2781 said:

Your right, again.

March 23rd, 2023 07:54

Problems
arqios said:

The challenge in a problem is the testing that proves. Good stuff here.

March 23rd, 2023 06:43

Problems
orchidee said:

Erm, it\'s no problem for me to say this is a good write! Did you know I would say that? lol.

March 23rd, 2023 03:00

Confidence
Samprikta Paul said:

the rhyming is so good hear

March 23rd, 2023 01:30

Confidence
orchidee said:

I\'m confident that this is a good poem!

March 22nd, 2023 03:09

Everyone
arqios said:

That is what poetry and life is all about! And clues are all about... reminds me of that famous one liner: \"get a clue!\" in a good way. Well, that my little \'take-away\' from this wonderful poem.

March 21st, 2023 09:43

Everyone
L. B. Mek said:

all as one, inclusive of everyone
a beautiful ideal
a dream to believe in
no entry fees, a heaven for all
where fallible flesh
doesn\'t dare to dictate, what a deity
may or may not want
a humanity, where all are equal
devoid of differences
anchored within that banner of hope

March 21st, 2023 04:44

Indian summer
Doggerel Dave said:

You sure? Two days ago we had February heat in mid March....Now you might fantasise this as an Indian Summer - I call it a bloody inconvenience...😇!!!
(Apologies to other readers for this very localised debate.....)

March 20th, 2023 07:11

Indian summer
arqios said:

Getting colder down south according to mates in Melbourne. There is something about the changing of the seasons that truly excites.

March 20th, 2023 05:22

Brothers
Ok Waleed said:

They say war and violence is apart of the human nature… I’ve come to the point where it isn’t, it’s a choice

March 19th, 2023 10:30

Divided
2781 said:

Thank you. It not hard to see who profits and who the looser are.

March 18th, 2023 08:47

Divided
Doggerel Dave said:

Each State\'s (country\'s) military machine is self perpetuating......
Well penned.

March 18th, 2023 04:52

The con
orchidee said:

It\'s nothing new, is it - whether we refer to \'bad old days\' or \'good old days\'.

March 17th, 2023 03:31

The con
Doggerel Dave said:

I quite like it..........but I\'d be keen to know to which \"big one\" you are referring....

March 17th, 2023 01:48

The track
orchidee said:

Good write 2781.

March 16th, 2023 02:57

It\'s spiritual
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:

Great work, loved it.

March 15th, 2023 08:39

It\'s spiritual
sorenbarrett said:

A greater power than we surely there must be.

March 15th, 2023 06:20

It\'s spiritual
orchidee said:

We don\'t always see the spiritual battle aspect of this. We are just cosy in churches, as a social club maybe.

March 15th, 2023 03:14

Cruel masters
Goldfinch60 said:

That righteousness will return sometime but I don\'t think it will be in my lifetime. Good words 2781.

Andy

March 14th, 2023 02:07

Surrender
L. B. Mek said:

really well written!
thanks for sharing dear poet

March 13th, 2023 03:33

Surrender
2781 said:

I get that, thanks.

March 12th, 2023 08:35

Surrender
Syd said:

\"Don\'t worry if it ever gets read\" I can very much relate to this line. I suppose it is what has kept me writing over the years.

- Syd

March 12th, 2023 08:00

Attraction
hzugman said:

I think the voice inside is our ego that is both indispensable and a pain in the ass simultaneously. Like your poem.

March 11th, 2023 17:35

Attraction
Syd said:

Wow! An awesome poem and very relatable to me.

- Syd

March 11th, 2023 06:02

Old school
2781 said:

Peace is my middle name! I have no bitterness, just a longing for righteousness. Thanks for reading.

March 10th, 2023 05:41



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