Comments received on poems by 2781
The stalker
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, you got me with this one. The playful misdirection keeps things moving, and the football payoff at the end puts a smile on your face. Clever, enjoyable write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, you got me with this one. The playful misdirection keeps things moving, and the football payoff at the end puts a smile on your face. Clever, enjoyable write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:16
The stalker
sorenbarrett said:
Messi not what he used to be but still good enough. The game was a good one as is the write. Now it will be Argentina and Spain. A fun read.
July 16th, 2026 03:28
sorenbarrett said:
Messi not what he used to be but still good enough. The game was a good one as is the write. Now it will be Argentina and Spain. A fun read.
July 16th, 2026 03:28
Edna
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a fun little write, Valiantstar. You lull the reader into expecting a wholesome birthday adventure, then veer straight into absurd comedy. That contrast is exactly what makes the punchline work. Thanks for the laugh, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a fun little write, Valiantstar. You lull the reader into expecting a wholesome birthday adventure, then veer straight into absurd comedy. That contrast is exactly what makes the punchline work. Thanks for the laugh, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:46
Edna
Kevin Hulme said:
Oh Dear. Unlucky Edna. A fun piece, as the other two might have said. 😁
July 14th, 2026 16:15
Kevin Hulme said:
Oh Dear. Unlucky Edna. A fun piece, as the other two might have said. 😁
July 14th, 2026 16:15
Edna
Doggerel Dave said:
This here is a riddle I must solve: Perhaps Edna was faster than the other two and got her penknife open with the aid of her new high tech dentures?
July 14th, 2026 08:20
Doggerel Dave said:
This here is a riddle I must solve: Perhaps Edna was faster than the other two and got her penknife open with the aid of her new high tech dentures?
July 14th, 2026 08:20
Edna
sorenbarrett said:
Poor Edna or maybe not. A fun read with rhyme and rhythm a good beat so to speak.
July 14th, 2026 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Poor Edna or maybe not. A fun read with rhyme and rhythm a good beat so to speak.
July 14th, 2026 08:00
The conduit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this has such a peaceful cadence. I especially enjoyed how the poem moves from receiving blessing to becoming a blessing for others...all held together by that thread of light, love, and grace. It leaves the reader encouraged. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 08:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this has such a peaceful cadence. I especially enjoyed how the poem moves from receiving blessing to becoming a blessing for others...all held together by that thread of light, love, and grace. It leaves the reader encouraged. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 08:38
The conduit
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem that takes its imagery from biblical sources. Well written with a simply wonderful flow
July 12th, 2026 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem that takes its imagery from biblical sources. Well written with a simply wonderful flow
July 12th, 2026 11:23
Fups
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries both humility and resolve. It acknowledges our flaws without surrendering to them, then turns toward perseverance and hope in the face of hardship. That balance made for a meaningful read. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries both humility and resolve. It acknowledges our flaws without surrendering to them, then turns toward perseverance and hope in the face of hardship. That balance made for a meaningful read. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:45
I know
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this spoke to me. The movement from praise, to questioning, to trust feels genuine, and the ending brings it all back to our shared humanity. There\'s a quiet reverence running through the whole piece that I found very moving. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this spoke to me. The movement from praise, to questioning, to trust feels genuine, and the ending brings it all back to our shared humanity. There\'s a quiet reverence running through the whole piece that I found very moving. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:41
Fups
sorenbarrett said:
Must plead my slowness and ignorance as to what a fup is. Well written
July 11th, 2026 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Must plead my slowness and ignorance as to what a fup is. Well written
July 11th, 2026 05:12
I know
sorenbarrett said:
Misunderstandings are the beginning death the end. Well said
July 10th, 2026 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
Misunderstandings are the beginning death the end. Well said
July 10th, 2026 08:58
Who\'s who?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a heartfelt expression of faith. The thread of Hebrews running through the poem gives it a strong sense of purpose, and the steady confidence in Christ carries it all the way to the end. A powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 21:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a heartfelt expression of faith. The thread of Hebrews running through the poem gives it a strong sense of purpose, and the steady confidence in Christ carries it all the way to the end. A powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 21:35
Who\'s who?
orchidee said:
Good write, you flame of fire there! That\'ll be you, among others.
July 9th, 2026 11:47
orchidee said:
Good write, you flame of fire there! That\'ll be you, among others.
July 9th, 2026 11:47
Who\'s who?
arqios said:
It would do us well to be careful of dismissing and undervaluing the many attributes and ascriptions of the Son.
July 9th, 2026 06:48
arqios said:
It would do us well to be careful of dismissing and undervaluing the many attributes and ascriptions of the Son.
July 9th, 2026 06:48
Who\'s who?
sorenbarrett said:
I loved in this poem how the word son used in the place of sun reflects the evolution of the worship of one to the other. Personification works here. Nicely done.
July 9th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
I loved in this poem how the word son used in the place of sun reflects the evolution of the worship of one to the other. Personification works here. Nicely done.
July 9th, 2026 04:45
Modular homes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend, this is one heck of a poem. It’s righteous anger wrapped in plain talk…no fluff, just truth about who profits and who pays. And that final leap into relief is such a strong way to land it. Well written, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend, this is one heck of a poem. It’s righteous anger wrapped in plain talk…no fluff, just truth about who profits and who pays. And that final leap into relief is such a strong way to land it. Well written, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:09
Modular homes
arqios said:
Felt the pinch of that just the other day! And you have articulated it most eloquently 🕊️🙏🏻
July 7th, 2026 14:40
arqios said:
Felt the pinch of that just the other day! And you have articulated it most eloquently 🕊️🙏🏻
July 7th, 2026 14:40
Modular homes
Doggerel Dave said:
Whatever Govt decides to do to \'solve the housing crisis\', what they won\'t do is to build enough houses to reduce demand to the point where housing values and/or rents will reduce to affordable levels. That is the crux of the matter; all else is so much rubbish.
July 7th, 2026 09:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Whatever Govt decides to do to \'solve the housing crisis\', what they won\'t do is to build enough houses to reduce demand to the point where housing values and/or rents will reduce to affordable levels. That is the crux of the matter; all else is so much rubbish.
July 7th, 2026 09:19
Modular homes
sorenbarrett said:
Money rules and this poem speaks to growing population and inflation with poorer buyers. Well done
July 7th, 2026 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
Money rules and this poem speaks to growing population and inflation with poorer buyers. Well done
July 7th, 2026 09:11
Tight
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet struggle here between responsibility and faith, between what the hands must do and what the heart hopes for.
The simplicity gives it weight, like someone standing at the crossroads of worry and trust.
July 7th, 2026 07:51
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet struggle here between responsibility and faith, between what the hands must do and what the heart hopes for.
The simplicity gives it weight, like someone standing at the crossroads of worry and trust.
July 7th, 2026 07:51
Tight
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a thoughtful piece. I love how you let the tension remain instead of forcing an easy answer. The balance between trusting God and navigating everyday responsibilities feels honest and relatable. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 12:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a thoughtful piece. I love how you let the tension remain instead of forcing an easy answer. The balance between trusting God and navigating everyday responsibilities feels honest and relatable. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 12:10
Tight
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that assumes we all have a bill to pay. Nicely worded it speaks of paying the debt.
July 5th, 2026 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that assumes we all have a bill to pay. Nicely worded it speaks of paying the debt.
July 5th, 2026 11:37
Weak
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a thoughtful piece. I love how it moves from honest self-examination to quiet dependence on something greater than oneself. The closing lines don\'t erase the struggle, but they offer hope that we don\'t have to face it alone. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a thoughtful piece. I love how it moves from honest self-examination to quiet dependence on something greater than oneself. The closing lines don\'t erase the struggle, but they offer hope that we don\'t have to face it alone. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:53
Weak
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said a friend whether spiritual of physical to depend on.
July 3rd, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said a friend whether spiritual of physical to depend on.
July 3rd, 2026 08:37
Brainwssh
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this packs a surprising amount into just a handful of lines. The rhythmic repetition, the provocative central idea, and the closing call toward \"a new creation\" make it linger after the last word. It invites reflection without overstaying its welcome. Wonderfully done, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this packs a surprising amount into just a handful of lines. The rhythmic repetition, the provocative central idea, and the closing call toward \"a new creation\" make it linger after the last word. It invites reflection without overstaying its welcome. Wonderfully done, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:14
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