Comments received on poems by 2781
Conflicted
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds scriptural in its wording and prophetic in nature. Nicely done
June 7th, 2026 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds scriptural in its wording and prophetic in nature. Nicely done
June 7th, 2026 10:56
Conflicted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really moved me. There is a deep sense of spiritual wrestling throughout the poem...questions, doubts, hopes, and convictions all sharing the same space. It feels honest precisely because it does not pretend the journey is simple. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really moved me. There is a deep sense of spiritual wrestling throughout the poem...questions, doubts, hopes, and convictions all sharing the same space. It feels honest precisely because it does not pretend the journey is simple. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:16
What\'s seen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really moved me. There is a sense of conviction running through this piece from beginning to end...a confidence that light ultimately reveals what darkness tries to conceal. The spiritual energy here is unmistakable. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 07:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really moved me. There is a sense of conviction running through this piece from beginning to end...a confidence that light ultimately reveals what darkness tries to conceal. The spiritual energy here is unmistakable. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 07:28
What\'s seen
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and light perceptions cast in this poem nicely done
June 6th, 2026 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and light perceptions cast in this poem nicely done
June 6th, 2026 11:04
Qualities
sorenbarrett said:
There is a belief and faith in this poem of a greater power that comes to enact its will on the people. Well penned
June 5th, 2026 03:37
sorenbarrett said:
There is a belief and faith in this poem of a greater power that comes to enact its will on the people. Well penned
June 5th, 2026 03:37
Wasted talents
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, “past the guards where no man goes” is one of the linearly that grabbed me. It transforms the search for talent and purpose into a treasure hunt through forbidden territory. That image gives the poem a real sense of mystery. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, “past the guards where no man goes” is one of the linearly that grabbed me. It transforms the search for talent and purpose into a treasure hunt through forbidden territory. That image gives the poem a real sense of mystery. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:17
Wasted talents
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for buried treasure is seldom successful a great write
June 4th, 2026 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for buried treasure is seldom successful a great write
June 4th, 2026 12:40
Switch over
arqios said:
Goads are interesting travelling equipment, specifically propulsion-wise.
May 31st, 2026 01:07
arqios said:
Goads are interesting travelling equipment, specifically propulsion-wise.
May 31st, 2026 01:07
Switch over
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts of in a most playful manner it seems to be joking with the reader but the last line brings us back to earth literally to the dust. Well done
May 30th, 2026 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts of in a most playful manner it seems to be joking with the reader but the last line brings us back to earth literally to the dust. Well done
May 30th, 2026 11:23
Switch over
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I enjoyed the way the poem keeps changing direction. One moment it feels playful, the next philosophical, then spiritual. It mirrors the way thoughts can leap from one realization to another. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I enjoyed the way the poem keeps changing direction. One moment it feels playful, the next philosophical, then spiritual. It mirrors the way thoughts can leap from one realization to another. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:29
A better man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I like how this feels unfinished in the best possible way. The poem asks questions without rushing toward answers, leaving the reader to sit with them. There is a quiet humility in that approach. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I like how this feels unfinished in the best possible way. The poem asks questions without rushing toward answers, leaving the reader to sit with them. There is a quiet humility in that approach. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:16
Switch over
Friendship said:
Well written, your closing lines about the heart and dust evoke existential reflections on mortality and the cyclical nature of life.
May 30th, 2026 09:12
Friendship said:
Well written, your closing lines about the heart and dust evoke existential reflections on mortality and the cyclical nature of life.
May 30th, 2026 09:12
A better man
arqios said:
The man who has not yet arrived, well aware of his corruptibility, dying daily to self, and daily aiming for his Goal.
May 29th, 2026 19:23
arqios said:
The man who has not yet arrived, well aware of his corruptibility, dying daily to self, and daily aiming for his Goal.
May 29th, 2026 19:23
Circles two
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I love the paradox here. It reads almost like a proverb or a Zen koan…simple on the surface, but the longer I sit with it, the larger it becomes. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏
May 28th, 2026 20:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I love the paradox here. It reads almost like a proverb or a Zen koan…simple on the surface, but the longer I sit with it, the larger it becomes. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏
May 28th, 2026 20:45
Circles two
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I love the paradox here. It reads almost like a proverb or a Zen koan…simple on the surface, but the longer I sit with it, the larger it becomes. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I love the paradox here. It reads almost like a proverb or a Zen koan…simple on the surface, but the longer I sit with it, the larger it becomes. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:43
Circles two
sorenbarrett said:
What a metaphor and within it deep meaning. Often the smallest is the biggest (for the want of a nail...) Well penned
May 28th, 2026 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
What a metaphor and within it deep meaning. Often the smallest is the biggest (for the want of a nail...) Well penned
May 28th, 2026 07:05
Don\'t push
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, “The Spirit does the brawling” is the line that absolutely grabbed me. It’s unexpected, rough-edged, and strangely powerful all at once. And...more importantly...profoundly true. Reminds me of the passage in Romans 8 about how the Spirit prays on our behalf when we are out of the words. The phrasing gives the spiritual struggle a physical immediacy that really lands. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 21:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, “The Spirit does the brawling” is the line that absolutely grabbed me. It’s unexpected, rough-edged, and strangely powerful all at once. And...more importantly...profoundly true. Reminds me of the passage in Romans 8 about how the Spirit prays on our behalf when we are out of the words. The phrasing gives the spiritual struggle a physical immediacy that really lands. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 21:56
Don\'t push
arqios said:
Sometimes I hear, \"just shove\" or \"cut the cr*p\" \'demolish arguments, tear down every pretension that lifts itself up\'....
May 27th, 2026 19:04
arqios said:
Sometimes I hear, \"just shove\" or \"cut the cr*p\" \'demolish arguments, tear down every pretension that lifts itself up\'....
May 27th, 2026 19:04
Myday2626
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this gave me a genuine grin while still carrying real grit beneath it. The frustration, the mud, the aching feet, the stubborn persistence of just keeping at it anyway...it all feels vividly alive and human. And somehow by the end it turns quietly hopeful without losing the rough honesty. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this gave me a genuine grin while still carrying real grit beneath it. The frustration, the mud, the aching feet, the stubborn persistence of just keeping at it anyway...it all feels vividly alive and human. And somehow by the end it turns quietly hopeful without losing the rough honesty. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:12
Don\'t push
sorenbarrett said:
A great dwelling upon the meaning in a phrase that can be taken two ways. Well done
May 27th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
A great dwelling upon the meaning in a phrase that can be taken two ways. Well done
May 27th, 2026 07:40
Myday2626
sorenbarrett said:
Feel that I have been there before stuck in the mud or sand or snow. The flipflops and bad toe were also mine. Very identifiable. Well done
May 26th, 2026 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
Feel that I have been there before stuck in the mud or sand or snow. The flipflops and bad toe were also mine. Very identifiable. Well done
May 26th, 2026 08:07
The beat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong pulpit rhythm to it, my friend. It feels meant to be spoken aloud…part sermon cadence, part call-and-response, part warning cry. There’s real urgency and conviction moving through the whole piece. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong pulpit rhythm to it, my friend. It feels meant to be spoken aloud…part sermon cadence, part call-and-response, part warning cry. There’s real urgency and conviction moving through the whole piece. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:16
The beat
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with great rhyme that gives images reminiscent of old gods of the hunt and harvest. Well dome
May 25th, 2026 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with great rhyme that gives images reminiscent of old gods of the hunt and harvest. Well dome
May 25th, 2026 13:21
Peculiar
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminded me of the tension many spiritual people wrestle with between warning and invitation…between the thunderous prophetic voice and the quieter reassurance underneath it all. The poem carries both. It feels concerned with accountability, yes, but also with relationship and devotion. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminded me of the tension many spiritual people wrestle with between warning and invitation…between the thunderous prophetic voice and the quieter reassurance underneath it all. The poem carries both. It feels concerned with accountability, yes, but also with relationship and devotion. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:24
Peculiar
sorenbarrett said:
Spiritual? Religious? it speaks to me of a greater power maybe even a father or mother. Well written
May 24th, 2026 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
Spiritual? Religious? it speaks to me of a greater power maybe even a father or mother. Well written
May 24th, 2026 10:43
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