Comments received on poems by 2781
Creatures of habit
Demar Desu said:
does this mean we can choose how to build our habits in turn choosing to restructure ourselves? Still I love the warning at the end… not all habits can be good
August 1st, 2025 02:01
Demar Desu said:
does this mean we can choose how to build our habits in turn choosing to restructure ourselves? Still I love the warning at the end… not all habits can be good
August 1st, 2025 02:01
Creatures of habit
sorenbarrett said:
A habit may be good to keep a ritual but gives little room for reflection. A poem well written with good rhyme and an excellent point. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
A habit may be good to keep a ritual but gives little room for reflection. A poem well written with good rhyme and an excellent point. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 13:30
Creatures of habit
Cheeky Missy said:
Drove my late father bonkers. He knew what pitfalls awaited my determinated routines. Guess, well, what\'s left to say? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a hauntingly pointed poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 13th, 2025 09:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Drove my late father bonkers. He knew what pitfalls awaited my determinated routines. Guess, well, what\'s left to say? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a hauntingly pointed poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 13th, 2025 09:26
Chilling out
Damaso said:
Beautiful sir, thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 11:57
Damaso said:
Beautiful sir, thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 11:57
Chilling out
arqios said:
Seems like Cloudflare is miffed at not having a poem written about them. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 10th, 2025 10:07
arqios said:
Seems like Cloudflare is miffed at not having a poem written about them. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 10th, 2025 10:07
Chilling out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yikes! 30 minutes. Yesterday I tried to edit a poem and kept getting blocked, but the poem remained, trended, got commented on. Not sure what that was all about. LOL! Sigh. As for your poem, I am glad that you were able to post it finally. Powerful, my friend. Well done. 🌹
July 10th, 2025 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yikes! 30 minutes. Yesterday I tried to edit a poem and kept getting blocked, but the poem remained, trended, got commented on. Not sure what that was all about. LOL! Sigh. As for your poem, I am glad that you were able to post it finally. Powerful, my friend. Well done. 🌹
July 10th, 2025 08:51
Chilling out
Doggerel Dave said:
Can confirm chilly and cold, that\'s for sure
Logging on can be a bugger. Next time round (when it is fresh in me mind) I\'ll let ya kno me system - it works about eight times out of ten - mostly.....
July 10th, 2025 08:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Can confirm chilly and cold, that\'s for sure
Logging on can be a bugger. Next time round (when it is fresh in me mind) I\'ll let ya kno me system - it works about eight times out of ten - mostly.....
July 10th, 2025 08:34
Chilling out
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the cold and to me cold conveys the feeling of being shut out. A metaphor seems in the air. Well done
July 10th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the cold and to me cold conveys the feeling of being shut out. A metaphor seems in the air. Well done
July 10th, 2025 04:07
Doctor Doctor
arqios said:
That punchline lands with delight: classic setup, sharp twist. \"Doctor, Doctor\" delivers brisk, cheeky mischief: end-of-shift fatigue meets unfortunate mix-up. Its pacing mirrors exhaustion, while the closing gag flips decorum with a grin. It’s medical slapstick with a rimshot; proof that even professionals aren\'t immune to absurdity.
July 7th, 2025 20:49
arqios said:
That punchline lands with delight: classic setup, sharp twist. \"Doctor, Doctor\" delivers brisk, cheeky mischief: end-of-shift fatigue meets unfortunate mix-up. Its pacing mirrors exhaustion, while the closing gag flips decorum with a grin. It’s medical slapstick with a rimshot; proof that even professionals aren\'t immune to absurdity.
July 7th, 2025 20:49
Doctor Doctor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh this was cheeky in the best way! 😆 That punchline? Totally earned. You paced the setup just right—and I was not ready for that closer. Well delivered, my friend. That was great. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh this was cheeky in the best way! 😆 That punchline? Totally earned. You paced the setup just right—and I was not ready for that closer. Well delivered, my friend. That was great. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:54
Doctor Doctor
Poetic Licence said:
I would not be suprised if this has happened, very entertaining read
July 7th, 2025 05:09
Poetic Licence said:
I would not be suprised if this has happened, very entertaining read
July 7th, 2025 05:09
Doctor Doctor
sorenbarrett said:
I hope that that asshole is not a poet or he will be writing internal rhymes. Good one made me smile
July 7th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
I hope that that asshole is not a poet or he will be writing internal rhymes. Good one made me smile
July 7th, 2025 04:26
Doctor Doctor
Doggerel Dave said:
😂Could well happen to an overworked Registrar.
July 7th, 2025 01:48
Doggerel Dave said:
😂Could well happen to an overworked Registrar.
July 7th, 2025 01:48
Free
arqios said:
Your poem walks the tightrope between spiritual yearning and everyday truth, pairing scripture with smoke and beer. It’s a raw meditation on mortality and deliverance, where praise is still possible in flawed, earthly moments. The speaker doesn’t claim certainty, only the urgency of choosing light while breath remains. In its closing lines, the sacred meets the secular; grace spoken from a barstool.
July 5th, 2025 07:20
arqios said:
Your poem walks the tightrope between spiritual yearning and everyday truth, pairing scripture with smoke and beer. It’s a raw meditation on mortality and deliverance, where praise is still possible in flawed, earthly moments. The speaker doesn’t claim certainty, only the urgency of choosing light while breath remains. In its closing lines, the sacred meets the secular; grace spoken from a barstool.
July 5th, 2025 07:20
Free
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem of faith. Well rhymed and written. Nicely done
July 5th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem of faith. Well rhymed and written. Nicely done
July 5th, 2025 04:18
A nuisent
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh dang! I am so glad I came across this! Truth! 💯🌹👏 Well done, friend. Actually, no. You deserve a bravo on this! Seriously! The truth sings and sometimes it screams. Either way, it sets one free! Brilliant numerology in a brilliant poem!
July 2nd, 2025 12:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh dang! I am so glad I came across this! Truth! 💯🌹👏 Well done, friend. Actually, no. You deserve a bravo on this! Seriously! The truth sings and sometimes it screams. Either way, it sets one free! Brilliant numerology in a brilliant poem!
July 2nd, 2025 12:31
A nuisent
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and with the help of numerology it works. If followed it goes much deeper an issue of correlation vs causation. Well written and loved it.
July 2nd, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and with the help of numerology it works. If followed it goes much deeper an issue of correlation vs causation. Well written and loved it.
July 2nd, 2025 04:53
Nauseous and funny
Doggerel Dave said:
Jokerman Huh? Got a swing to it that\'s easy to tune into.
June 28th, 2025 09:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Jokerman Huh? Got a swing to it that\'s easy to tune into.
June 28th, 2025 09:03
Nauseous and funny
arqios said:
This poem skips along with a unique charm; equal parts punchline and parable. There’s something beautifully self-aware in its humour, like a clown taking a bow mid-tears. It leaves the reader smiling but slightly off-kilter, which may be exactly the point.
June 28th, 2025 05:38
arqios said:
This poem skips along with a unique charm; equal parts punchline and parable. There’s something beautifully self-aware in its humour, like a clown taking a bow mid-tears. It leaves the reader smiling but slightly off-kilter, which may be exactly the point.
June 28th, 2025 05:38
Nauseous and funny
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this read,has a great vibe to it, nicely done
June 28th, 2025 04:39
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this read,has a great vibe to it, nicely done
June 28th, 2025 04:39
Nauseous and funny
sorenbarrett said:
A Bob Dylan influence with a twist in the words they drip with music. A lovely write that almost dances in the eyes of the reader. Loved it
June 28th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
A Bob Dylan influence with a twist in the words they drip with music. A lovely write that almost dances in the eyes of the reader. Loved it
June 28th, 2025 04:13
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