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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is intense and disorienting in a way that feels intentional. The collision of faith, violence, media, and grief comes through as fractured and urgent. It’s a hard read, but a compelling one. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
December 14th, 2025 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is intense and disorienting in a way that feels intentional. The collision of faith, violence, media, and grief comes through as fractured and urgent. It’s a hard read, but a compelling one. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
December 14th, 2025 09:16
Revelation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Money rules everything, doesn\'t it? The ending also reminds of Jesus warning to not cast one\'s pearls (or gold...for metal) before swine. All the same, great write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 21:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Money rules everything, doesn\'t it? The ending also reminds of Jesus warning to not cast one\'s pearls (or gold...for metal) before swine. All the same, great write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 21:06
Revelation
Paul Bell said:
Fools gold comes to mind here, and with the price of gold going through the roof, even the fools gold probably has a price.
December 8th, 2025 15:06
Paul Bell said:
Fools gold comes to mind here, and with the price of gold going through the roof, even the fools gold probably has a price.
December 8th, 2025 15:06
A glitch
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully fun read, my friend. And true! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 13:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully fun read, my friend. And true! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 13:02
Revelation
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one takes a little thinking. Is it metal of song that rules the swine or the sword? a thought provoking read
December 8th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one takes a little thinking. Is it metal of song that rules the swine or the sword? a thought provoking read
December 8th, 2025 09:13
A glitch
sorenbarrett said:
Shortages determine price in a market economy. Price is power and power rules. Nicely done
December 8th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Shortages determine price in a market economy. Price is power and power rules. Nicely done
December 8th, 2025 04:18
Mindful
orchidee said:
Oooh, I can\'t have fig trees - give me the runs! lol. Can I have an apple tree or summat instead? lol.
December 6th, 2025 12:47
orchidee said:
Oooh, I can\'t have fig trees - give me the runs! lol. Can I have an apple tree or summat instead? lol.
December 6th, 2025 12:47
Mindful
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this piece moves like someone thinking out loud… layered, searching, a little playful, a little haunted. I felt that shift between mystery and meaning. Really well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 6th, 2025 11:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this piece moves like someone thinking out loud… layered, searching, a little playful, a little haunted. I felt that shift between mystery and meaning. Really well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 6th, 2025 11:01
Mindful
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! full of metaphor indeed. I have often wondered about the issue of eating. We only eat other life does that make us bad. I would say no as all is a cycle and some day something will eat us where bacteria or a plant taking nourishment from our dust. It all goes round and round. A good write
December 6th, 2025 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! full of metaphor indeed. I have often wondered about the issue of eating. We only eat other life does that make us bad. I would say no as all is a cycle and some day something will eat us where bacteria or a plant taking nourishment from our dust. It all goes round and round. A good write
December 6th, 2025 08:23
Off to the races?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is warm and witty…the saved coins, the thousand-percent dream, the quiet gratitude tucked at the end. You balanced hope and humor just right. Love this, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 30th, 2025 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is warm and witty…the saved coins, the thousand-percent dream, the quiet gratitude tucked at the end. You balanced hope and humor just right. Love this, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 30th, 2025 08:49
Off to the races?
sorenbarrett said:
The poem starts at the races and ends in rest. Well done a journey well run
November 30th, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
The poem starts at the races and ends in rest. Well done a journey well run
November 30th, 2025 08:42
Off to the races?
arqios said:
“Chances are are you’re going to lose…” That there’s for the gambling part. As for the bit about rest… was meditating on that sometime in the week just passed. 🙏🏻🕊️
November 30th, 2025 08:00
arqios said:
“Chances are are you’re going to lose…” That there’s for the gambling part. As for the bit about rest… was meditating on that sometime in the week just passed. 🙏🏻🕊️
November 30th, 2025 08:00
Off to the races?
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Thank Yah for the Sabbath.
November 30th, 2025 07:59
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Thank Yah for the Sabbath.
November 30th, 2025 07:59
The deal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits hard…a bitter truth wrapped in a clean rhythm. The whole piece feels like watching the scales tip while everyone pretends nothing is happening. That final bite lands. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 28th, 2025 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits hard…a bitter truth wrapped in a clean rhythm. The whole piece feels like watching the scales tip while everyone pretends nothing is happening. That final bite lands. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 28th, 2025 10:25
The deal
arqios said:
mmm... which sharks, though 🤔 can\'t wait for the frenzy! 🕊️🙏
November 27th, 2025 19:05
arqios said:
mmm... which sharks, though 🤔 can\'t wait for the frenzy! 🕊️🙏
November 27th, 2025 19:05
The deal
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure where you are going with this one, but I\'d say corporate power and wealth win the day - hopefully only for this moment - but quite possibly this is a pipe dream of mine (the momentary state of things right now)
November 27th, 2025 17:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure where you are going with this one, but I\'d say corporate power and wealth win the day - hopefully only for this moment - but quite possibly this is a pipe dream of mine (the momentary state of things right now)
November 27th, 2025 17:22
The deal
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of working with one\'s guile rather than one\'s back. A good read
November 27th, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of working with one\'s guile rather than one\'s back. A good read
November 27th, 2025 11:23
Ambiguous
Doggerel Dave said:
Please make it clear that this is not the Dave to whom you refer; I\'m a miserable old bugger who never goes to parties.
November 26th, 2025 18:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Please make it clear that this is not the Dave to whom you refer; I\'m a miserable old bugger who never goes to parties.
November 26th, 2025 18:44
Ambiguous
sorenbarrett said:
I was always advised to eat before a party or even going out to eat so as not to appear a glutton or go hungry. Well done
November 26th, 2025 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
I was always advised to eat before a party or even going out to eat so as not to appear a glutton or go hungry. Well done
November 26th, 2025 06:17
Am I what if
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab superb romantic love poem in great rhyming wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 09:57
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab superb romantic love poem in great rhyming wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 09:57
Am I what if
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a tenderness in this…a heart reaching through doubt and still choosing the light. That mix of ache and devotion stays with me. Beautiful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 23rd, 2025 16:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a tenderness in this…a heart reaching through doubt and still choosing the light. That mix of ache and devotion stays with me. Beautiful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 23rd, 2025 16:15
Bats in the belfry
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bats out of hell friggin\' yes!!! Excellent, my friend! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 23rd, 2025 15:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bats out of hell friggin\' yes!!! Excellent, my friend! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 23rd, 2025 15:45
Am I what if
sorenbarrett said:
A love letter to God in a poem pledging fidelity and allegiance. Nicely done
November 23rd, 2025 12:35
sorenbarrett said:
A love letter to God in a poem pledging fidelity and allegiance. Nicely done
November 23rd, 2025 12:35
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