Comments received on poems by 2781



I am...
Doggerel Dave said:

I really can enjoy and admire the tone of acceptance. The car? Well I\'m on public and community transport (trains and big heavy vehicles) now.
Neat write.

September 8th, 2026 17:45

I am...
soheil khodaparasti said:

I wish more people would drive as you doβ€”knowing their own direction, respecting the paths of others, and leaving judgment behind. Perhaps the roads of life would be a little kinder if we all did.

September 8th, 2026 10:56

I am...
Cheeky Missy said:

You don\'t say...

September 8th, 2026 10:36

I am...
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and the way I drive mine too as long as they do not run into me or block my way I am fine.

September 8th, 2026 09:27

I am...
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent piece, Valiantstar! Acceptance, individuality, and humor all fit neatly into four lines. That playful finish makes a deeply humane principle feel entirely your own. Loved it, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 8th, 2026 08:59

3 weeks 3 days
boot said:

Cool

September 7th, 2026 17:31

3 weeks 3 days
arqios said:

Yes, until that changing of the tide.

September 6th, 2026 22:28

3 weeks 3 days
orchidee said:

Good write Jonah. lol.

September 6th, 2026 13:38

3 weeks 3 days
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Valiantstar, this carries such a searching, devotional energy…hesitation, longing, mercy, and trust all moving together. Beautifully heartfelt, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 6th, 2026 13:16

3 weeks 3 days
Friendship said:

Good write

September 6th, 2026 10:04

3 weeks 3 days
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful. Powerful work.

September 6th, 2026 08:02

Life
NafisaSB said:

smoking kills, but it also fills gaps and gives solace to a few.

September 4th, 2026 02:23

Scribbles
coracaodacripta said:

Preaching to the choir! Somehow some things make all the sense in the world the moment of its conception, but you give one last look and it all just falls apart like a make-shift dysfunctional mechanism that just kinda sounds right in the end. Ain\'t that somethin\'?

September 3rd, 2026 22:17

Scribbles
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What an engaging piece, Valiantstar! The thoughts wander, question themselves, and appear to lose their way...yet that very wandering uncovers the trust holding everything together. Wonderful write, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 3rd, 2026 10:43

Scribbles
sorenbarrett said:

All things work out for the best although we may not see it at the time or even ever see it. God or nature has a way of working things out.

September 3rd, 2026 08:07

Redeemed
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this one really wrestles with the mystery of redemption rather than pretending to have it all neatly solved. That questioning gives it real spiritual weight. Strong piece. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 1st, 2026 12:35

Redeemed
arqios said:

A mighty good deal right there.πŸ€©πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

September 1st, 2026 06:46

Redeemed
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of religious reference nicely written where all will be forgiven. Loved the flow with rhyme

September 1st, 2026 04:14

Eye eye
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This really got me thinking, my friend. There is a deep distrust running through it, not just of AI itself, but of the systems, resources, and motives surrounding it...and that makes the warning feel much broader than technology alone. Strong work. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

August 31st, 2026 08:25

Eye eye
orchidee said:

Good write 2. You know those Yin and Yang folks?! lol.

August 30th, 2026 11:11

Eye eye
sorenbarrett said:

With no privacy, everything monitored, freedom no longer even a question, controlled in everything, everything artificial and disposable not a world I want to live in. Well written

August 30th, 2026 08:30

Eye eye
Doggerel Dave said:

The near future is going to be hell - and I haven\'t much of an idea how it will resolve itself - as it must... Perhaps I should ask Copilot??

August 30th, 2026 08:17

YHWH
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Valiantstar, this carries an earnest sense of spiritual discovery. I appreciate how you explore the possibilities without pretending every question has been conclusively settled...allowing mystery, curiosity, and conviction to breathe together. Thought-provoking work, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

August 27th, 2026 16:54

YHWH
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely written with rhyme and good flow. Hebrew is written and read right to left so it must be put in English to be read the other way around. Nicely done.

August 27th, 2026 07:59

Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this carries a quiet sadness. One brief encounter opens onto an entire unseen history...and the physical detail shows that time has already collected its price. This brought several people to mind. Thought-provoking work,Valiantstar. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

August 25th, 2026 18:50

Life
arqios said:

Was a merry old soul was he. Calling for his pipe and such. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

August 25th, 2026 07:16

Life
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that leaves one questioning the issue of paying for what one does. Well done

August 25th, 2026 04:46

Life
Paul Bell said:

Yes, smoking can damage your health and eventually make you gumsy.
In saying that, just going to the shops can kill you these days.

August 25th, 2026 03:17

Dim wit
Doggerel Dave said:

One man\'s happiness could be another\'s horror. Liked this - enjoyed his perspective.

August 24th, 2026 00:53

Dim wit
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, I feel personally attacked by this one! 🀣 A wonderfully affectionate portrait of a lovable oddball whose inner world is far busier than anything happening outside it. Great fun, my Valiantstar. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

August 23rd, 2026 13:00

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