Comments received on poems by 2781
His place
sorenbarrett said:
I love the mix in this poem so nicely worded and metered
April 12th, 2026 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
I love the mix in this poem so nicely worded and metered
April 12th, 2026 05:53
His place
arqios said:
Love the humility and grace found in the grit of life🙏🏻🕊️
April 12th, 2026 02:35
arqios said:
Love the humility and grace found in the grit of life🙏🏻🕊️
April 12th, 2026 02:35
The reaper
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this feels honest in a way that doesn’t try to hide anything…mistakes, trust, all of it sitting side by side. That tension is what makes it work. It’s steady, grounded, and real. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this feels honest in a way that doesn’t try to hide anything…mistakes, trust, all of it sitting side by side. That tension is what makes it work. It’s steady, grounded, and real. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:25
The reaper
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure of the quoted references but do think I grasp the general gist. I think there may be a case for ploughing this crop in to start again. But where the right machinery is found to achieves this is an open question.
April 10th, 2026 18:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure of the quoted references but do think I grasp the general gist. I think there may be a case for ploughing this crop in to start again. But where the right machinery is found to achieves this is an open question.
April 10th, 2026 18:01
The reaper
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poetic questioning of reason. Nicely worded in good rhyme
April 10th, 2026 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poetic questioning of reason. Nicely worded in good rhyme
April 10th, 2026 15:55
Who are you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a searching weight…question after question, and it doesn’t rush to answer them. It just sits in that tension. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 07:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a searching weight…question after question, and it doesn’t rush to answer them. It just sits in that tension. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 07:43
Who are you
sorenbarrett said:
We are sheep in search of a shepherd and we latch onto who seems the strongest
April 7th, 2026 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
We are sheep in search of a shepherd and we latch onto who seems the strongest
April 7th, 2026 09:11
Easter
sorenbarrett said:
I always liked those fairy tales you mention and it make for a great rhyme and a good poem. Loved it
April 4th, 2026 09:47
sorenbarrett said:
I always liked those fairy tales you mention and it make for a great rhyme and a good poem. Loved it
April 4th, 2026 09:47
Obedience
Doggerel Dave said:
Obscurely interesting............................... dunno what else to write....
April 2nd, 2026 16:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Obscurely interesting............................... dunno what else to write....
April 2nd, 2026 16:07
Obedience
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of the dilema of obedience and freedom. Nicely composed it presents its material well and is strong in its wording
April 2nd, 2026 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of the dilema of obedience and freedom. Nicely composed it presents its material well and is strong in its wording
April 2nd, 2026 09:31
Obedience
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries real conviction… it doesn’t hesitate, it just speaks. There’s a boldness in it that holds steady all the way through, even when it turns inward at the end. It feels lived, not just said. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries real conviction… it doesn’t hesitate, it just speaks. There’s a boldness in it that holds steady all the way through, even when it turns inward at the end. It feels lived, not just said. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 09:03
Seasons
sorenbarrett said:
Anthropomorphizing this poem was genius. It works so much better this way. Very nice
March 30th, 2026 15:27
sorenbarrett said:
Anthropomorphizing this poem was genius. It works so much better this way. Very nice
March 30th, 2026 15:27
It\'s you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong sense of devotion…there’s a confidence in it that feels rooted and assured. It speaks with conviction. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong sense of devotion…there’s a confidence in it that feels rooted and assured. It speaks with conviction. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:47
It\'s you
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sacred weight in this, a lineage of light threading through time—like blood and breath carried in invisible hands.
It hums with devotion, a quiet insistence that love and knowing are inseparable, like roots entwined beneath the earth.
March 29th, 2026 08:31
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sacred weight in this, a lineage of light threading through time—like blood and breath carried in invisible hands.
It hums with devotion, a quiet insistence that love and knowing are inseparable, like roots entwined beneath the earth.
March 29th, 2026 08:31
It\'s you
sorenbarrett said:
This poem weaves its way between a Frankie Paul song and the bible knitting a sense of meaning to be between loves. Nicely done
March 29th, 2026 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
This poem weaves its way between a Frankie Paul song and the bible knitting a sense of meaning to be between loves. Nicely done
March 29th, 2026 07:27
Losing it
orchidee said:
Aww, why they say to me - Why you looking for summat you never had in the first place? - a mind! or, a brain! lol.
March 28th, 2026 11:53
orchidee said:
Aww, why they say to me - Why you looking for summat you never had in the first place? - a mind! or, a brain! lol.
March 28th, 2026 11:53
Losing it
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this has a sharp, almost playful edge to it…like it’s dancing right on the line between instability and control. There’s something defiant in the tone, especially in that opening question. It lands with a kind of crooked confidence. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this has a sharp, almost playful edge to it…like it’s dancing right on the line between instability and control. There’s something defiant in the tone, especially in that opening question. It lands with a kind of crooked confidence. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:37
Losing it
sorenbarrett said:
The ravages of time in this poem of aging with or without grace. Lovely
March 28th, 2026 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
The ravages of time in this poem of aging with or without grace. Lovely
March 28th, 2026 07:55
Fishy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this comes in hot…there’s a prophetic urgency here that doesn’t hold back. It feels like a warning shouted into the noise…raw, unfiltered, and meant to shake something loose. The ending lands with weight. Well done, Valiantstar.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this comes in hot…there’s a prophetic urgency here that doesn’t hold back. It feels like a warning shouted into the noise…raw, unfiltered, and meant to shake something loose. The ending lands with weight. Well done, Valiantstar.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:58
Fishy
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a talking to or about God and the things that he is known for and can be relied upon for. Well written
March 25th, 2026 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a talking to or about God and the things that he is known for and can be relied upon for. Well written
March 25th, 2026 10:40
Shred
Doggerel Dave said:
Terrified of digging deeper than the toaster, this is my thought of the month for what it\'s worth:
Only utilise toaster for breakfast, then in the event of malfunction you have all day to fix or replace.
March 24th, 2026 23:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Terrified of digging deeper than the toaster, this is my thought of the month for what it\'s worth:
Only utilise toaster for breakfast, then in the event of malfunction you have all day to fix or replace.
March 24th, 2026 23:29
Shred
arqios said:
The newer toasters are not much better and they break down sooner as well.🕊️🙏🏻🍞
March 24th, 2026 15:58
arqios said:
The newer toasters are not much better and they break down sooner as well.🕊️🙏🏻🍞
March 24th, 2026 15:58
Shred
sorenbarrett said:
I have to agree this is such a common occurrence built into product production in order to increase sales and cut production costs. All a bottom line issue for the shareholder and short term profits. Acceptable to the buyers because it gives good excuse to replace old with new every year or so for remodeling and keeping up with the neighbors. Good write
March 24th, 2026 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
I have to agree this is such a common occurrence built into product production in order to increase sales and cut production costs. All a bottom line issue for the shareholder and short term profits. Acceptable to the buyers because it gives good excuse to replace old with new every year or so for remodeling and keeping up with the neighbors. Good write
March 24th, 2026 09:49
Shred
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this got me…what starts as a toaster rant turns into something way bigger. It’s chaotic in a good way, like your thoughts just running and not holding back. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this got me…what starts as a toaster rant turns into something way bigger. It’s chaotic in a good way, like your thoughts just running and not holding back. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 09:34
Dive in
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for a way out this poem speaks of a few. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 13:27
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for a way out this poem speaks of a few. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 13:27
Dive in
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this comes in with real fire…there’s urgency here, like you’re trying to shake something loose. It doesn’t sit quietly…it pushes and presses the whole way through. Well done and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this comes in with real fire…there’s urgency here, like you’re trying to shake something loose. It doesn’t sit quietly…it pushes and presses the whole way through. Well done and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:33
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