Off to the races?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this is warm and witty…the saved coins, the thousand-percent dream, the quiet gratitude tucked at the end. You balanced hope and humor just right. Love this, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

November 30th, 2025 08:49

Off to the races?
arqios said:

“Chances are are you’re going to lose…” That there’s for the gambling part. As for the bit about rest… was meditating on that sometime in the week just passed. 🙏🏻🕊️

November 30th, 2025 08:00

The deal
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this hits hard…a bitter truth wrapped in a clean rhythm. The whole piece feels like watching the scales tip while everyone pretends nothing is happening. That final bite lands. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

November 28th, 2025 10:25

The deal
Doggerel Dave said:

Not quite sure where you are going with this one, but I\'d say corporate power and wealth win the day - hopefully only for this moment - but quite possibly this is a pipe dream of mine (the momentary state of things right now)

November 27th, 2025 17:22

Ambiguous
Doggerel Dave said:

Please make it clear that this is not the Dave to whom you refer; I\'m a miserable old bugger who never goes to parties.

November 26th, 2025 18:44

Ambiguous
sorenbarrett said:

I was always advised to eat before a party or even going out to eat so as not to appear a glutton or go hungry. Well done

November 26th, 2025 06:17

Am I what if
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, there’s a tenderness in this…a heart reaching through doubt and still choosing the light. That mix of ache and devotion stays with me. Beautiful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

November 23rd, 2025 16:15

Am I what if
sorenbarrett said:

A love letter to God in a poem pledging fidelity and allegiance. Nicely done

November 23rd, 2025 12:35

Cop that
Doggerel Dave said:

I think you may be a wee bit upset...... I can relate to much of it.

I fall on the side of those who believe our Govt is pleased to be free of COP31, not just the cost, but too much embarrassment re coalmines, gas and so on...

Don\'t let your blood pressure......

November 20th, 2025 23:14

Cop that
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Valiantstar, reading this felt like listening to someone finally say what’s been simmering for years…calling out greed, empty showmanship, the whole theatrical mess. You captured that disillusionment well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

November 20th, 2025 12:16

Cop that
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that angers over the apparent audacity and arrogance of the situation. Well done

November 20th, 2025 11:16

It\'s you
sorenbarrett said:

A good poem with an ending question of what has he done. This makes one think with the asking. Well done

November 19th, 2025 12:07

I love you
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This feels tender and timeless…like a love note caught between simplicity and sincerity. The gentleness in each line lingers. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

November 2nd, 2025 13:24

I love you
sorenbarrett said:

This poem a proclamation of love cries out to all that will hear. Nicely done in rhyme

November 2nd, 2025 08:25

Judgement
sorenbarrett said:

A most religious bent on this poem of Armageddon and destruction and final judgement. Nicely done

November 1st, 2025 10:00