Comments received on poems by 2781



Still I...
sorenbarrett said:

This poem has an religious and Christian feel to it although I could be wrong. Nicely done

October 19th, 2026 04:18

Myhem
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ha! Valiantstar, Job himself might have appreciated a decent bowl of porridge before answering any more questions! Personally, I\'d add some brown sugar and let the theologians argue! πŸ˜‚ πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 19th, 2026 00:59

Myhem
orchidee said:

Good write porridge-eater! lol.

October 18th, 2026 09:54

Myhem
sorenbarrett said:

This could easily come from the Hobbit or Lord of the rings, maybe an old fairy tale. Nicely written the meaning seems hidden.

October 18th, 2026 07:42

Friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ah, Valiantstar, isn\'t it remarkable how some of the most wounded people become the most compassionate? Meanwhile, others spend their entire lives preaching about love without ever quite figuring out how to practice it. Funny old world, isn\'t it? πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 14th, 2026 21:51

Friend
sorenbarrett said:

Nice word work in this short write about the virtue of bearing another\'s burden.

October 14th, 2026 04:34

The reaper
Tristan Robert Lange said:

HAHA! Valiantstar, I was expecting something considerably more sinister! πŸ˜‚ Although I\'ve encountered a few hot peppers that made me seriously reconsider my life choices. Loved the mischief in this one! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 13th, 2026 23:30

The reaper
orchidee said:

I\'ve not planted anything yet, let alone reaping it! lol.

October 13th, 2026 09:38

The reaper
sorenbarrett said:

I\'ve tried a small taste too strong for me, I\'ll stick to habaneros and jalapenos thank you very much they have enough flavor for my taste

October 13th, 2026 09:05

To good
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Interesting questions, Valiantstar! I tend to be skeptical whenever someone presents a human leader as the answer to society\'s problems. We\'ve seen where that can lead, haven\'t we? Faith and political power make for a complicated relationship indeed. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›


October 11th, 2026 23:20

To good
NafisaSB said:

The last line gives the answer βœŒοΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

October 11th, 2026 13:01

To good
NafisaSB said:



October 11th, 2026 13:00

To good
Friendship said:

nicely written

October 11th, 2026 12:05

To good
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful

October 11th, 2026 08:42

To good
sorenbarrett said:

Clever build up to this poem that reveals the answer in the last line. Not religious myself I still find the poem amazing and well done a fave

October 11th, 2026 08:00

The theme
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I’m still wondering about that burnt staff, Valiantstar…I’d gladly hear more if you ever return to it. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 10th, 2026 22:31

The theme
🐀s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A superb poem rhyming fab and flowing smoothly. Metaphoric a bit. Kudos!!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

October 10th, 2026 14:52

The theme
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

October 10th, 2026 14:01

The theme
sorenbarrett said:

Visions in dreams as they used to come to many in this poem nicely written.

October 10th, 2026 12:17

The Doves
Doggerel Dave said:

Do not enter into conversation with big brown doves . Your most rational options are four: move swiftly to the left, right, forward or back.
This one provoked a memory I\'d rather forget...

October 9th, 2026 20:42

The Doves
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Hahaha, Valiantstar...I was ready for a tender nature moment. Now I’m checking my hat. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 9th, 2026 11:44

Say nothing
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Well, Valiantstar...I’d like to laugh at a safe distance, preferably on dry land. Unfortunately, I think I’ve already paid for the bloody ticket. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 9th, 2026 11:34

The Doves
Syd said:

That would be my thoughts exactly!

- Syd πŸ„

October 9th, 2026 04:23

The Doves
sorenbarrett said:

It is the unexpected that turns this poem into a joke and interest into a laugh. Nicely said it made me smile

October 9th, 2026 04:09

Say nothing
Doggerel Dave said:

If he\'s steering, he lost the course way back when...

October 8th, 2026 16:18

Say nothing
sorenbarrett said:

This poem took some time for me to figure out but then I\'m just a bit slow. Nicely done with rhyme and good meter

October 8th, 2026 15:59

A bold confusion
orchidee said:

Good write 2. Yes - prosely-wotsit! lol. I can\'t say it after a gin or two. lol. Proshy-lie-iesh-sation is it?

October 7th, 2026 02:49

A bold confusion
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Valiantstar, I like the openness here. Faith doesn’t always hand us tidy answers, but it can certainly change how we look at one another. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 6th, 2026 23:11

A bold confusion
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely written this one asks whose side you are on and confuses with a few images. Well done

October 6th, 2026 12:16

I am...
Sula Mula said:

Really nice poem. Love it

October 5th, 2026 06:49

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