Comments received on poems by 2781
I love you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels tender and timeless…like a love note caught between simplicity and sincerity. The gentleness in each line lingers. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2025 13:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels tender and timeless…like a love note caught between simplicity and sincerity. The gentleness in each line lingers. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2025 13:24
I love you
Bella Shepard said:
Sweet, gentle, full of love, what could be better.
November 2nd, 2025 10:25
Bella Shepard said:
Sweet, gentle, full of love, what could be better.
November 2nd, 2025 10:25
I love you
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a proclamation of love cries out to all that will hear. Nicely done in rhyme
November 2nd, 2025 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a proclamation of love cries out to all that will hear. Nicely done in rhyme
November 2nd, 2025 08:25
Judgement
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve wrestled with those same questions of justice and timing…the waiting for “in due time” feels all too real. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2025 20:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve wrestled with those same questions of justice and timing…the waiting for “in due time” feels all too real. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2025 20:10
Judgement
sorenbarrett said:
A most religious bent on this poem of Armageddon and destruction and final judgement. Nicely done
November 1st, 2025 10:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most religious bent on this poem of Armageddon and destruction and final judgement. Nicely done
November 1st, 2025 10:00
Halloween
sorenbarrett said:
A reprimand in a poem it seems scriptural yet more hauntingly playful. A great read
October 31st, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
A reprimand in a poem it seems scriptural yet more hauntingly playful. A great read
October 31st, 2025 10:12
Halloween
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friend, this reads like revelation and lament entwined. A scorched prayer for a blind world...brief, cryptic, unforgettable. Love the wordplay! Well done! Happy Halloween! 🎃👻 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friend, this reads like revelation and lament entwined. A scorched prayer for a blind world...brief, cryptic, unforgettable. Love the wordplay! Well done! Happy Halloween! 🎃👻 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 08:28
Halloween
arqios said:
This one feels like a lament straight out of the prophets; its barren fields, blind eyes, and just a remnant left clinging to the word. I like how the language starts strong and then fractures at the end, almost like the voice itself can’t carry the weight of what it’s saying. That unfinished line makes the whole thing feel even more haunted. 🕊️🙏
October 31st, 2025 08:16
arqios said:
This one feels like a lament straight out of the prophets; its barren fields, blind eyes, and just a remnant left clinging to the word. I like how the language starts strong and then fractures at the end, almost like the voice itself can’t carry the weight of what it’s saying. That unfinished line makes the whole thing feel even more haunted. 🕊️🙏
October 31st, 2025 08:16
Careful
rhmn_7 said:
\"Engage brain before putting mouth in gear\" I will make sure to remember this funny but beautiful verse 2781 :)
October 26th, 2025 15:58
rhmn_7 said:
\"Engage brain before putting mouth in gear\" I will make sure to remember this funny but beautiful verse 2781 :)
October 26th, 2025 15:58
Careful
sorenbarrett said:
Adages well known but seldom followed but then people are like that, they always do as they please with no thought of consequences. Nicely written
October 17th, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
Adages well known but seldom followed but then people are like that, they always do as they please with no thought of consequences. Nicely written
October 17th, 2025 08:28
Careful
arqios said:
There is much value as this poem balances advice with self‑doubt. How it starts as a warning about careless words but turns into something more vulnerable, admitting that wisdom is never final. The ending line really lands solidly and sometimes the best we can do is stay watchful and careful. 🕊️🙏
October 17th, 2025 08:15
arqios said:
There is much value as this poem balances advice with self‑doubt. How it starts as a warning about careless words but turns into something more vulnerable, admitting that wisdom is never final. The ending line really lands solidly and sometimes the best we can do is stay watchful and careful. 🕊️🙏
October 17th, 2025 08:15
Critical thinking
Doggerel Dave said:
Satisfying, complete here. Enjoyed.
Critical thinking is a tool utilized with discretion when and where necessary, certainly not an end in itself, though.
October 14th, 2025 15:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Satisfying, complete here. Enjoyed.
Critical thinking is a tool utilized with discretion when and where necessary, certainly not an end in itself, though.
October 14th, 2025 15:43
Critical thinking
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That phrase “algorithmic dilemma” caught me...it perfectly captures our tangled digital consciousness. You’ve turned confusion into commentary, and it works powerfully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2025 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That phrase “algorithmic dilemma” caught me...it perfectly captures our tangled digital consciousness. You’ve turned confusion into commentary, and it works powerfully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2025 08:21
Critical thinking
sorenbarrett said:
They call it critical thinking but to me it is just one more way to look for that illusive never attainable truth. Nicely written
October 14th, 2025 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
They call it critical thinking but to me it is just one more way to look for that illusive never attainable truth. Nicely written
October 14th, 2025 07:26
On the level
sorenbarrett said:
Poems of flowers metaphors of nature. Loved the Spanish and English translations. Well done
October 13th, 2025 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
Poems of flowers metaphors of nature. Loved the Spanish and English translations. Well done
October 13th, 2025 06:28
Forgive me
NafisaSB said:
this one is so profound, and so true - bears thinking about indeed....
October 8th, 2025 00:51
NafisaSB said:
this one is so profound, and so true - bears thinking about indeed....
October 8th, 2025 00:51
High bar low
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t see there\'s anything to excuse at all. The expectations of ourselves, (even if not guided by your Higher Authority) compared with the actuality, made for a read which held my attention.
October 6th, 2025 18:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t see there\'s anything to excuse at all. The expectations of ourselves, (even if not guided by your Higher Authority) compared with the actuality, made for a read which held my attention.
October 6th, 2025 18:52
High bar low
sorenbarrett said:
When the bar is high it is an easy task if limbo is the game. I have the feel that this has another meaning and one that is far more spiritual though. Yes few of us ever get over the bar.
October 6th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
When the bar is high it is an easy task if limbo is the game. I have the feel that this has another meaning and one that is far more spiritual though. Yes few of us ever get over the bar.
October 6th, 2025 14:22
High bar low
Paul Bell said:
The higher you go, the higher you fall.
Sometimes going low allows you to climb to success.
October 6th, 2025 14:05
Paul Bell said:
The higher you go, the higher you fall.
Sometimes going low allows you to climb to success.
October 6th, 2025 14:05
High bar low
orchidee said:
Good write 2. From part of a hymn: \'He/She that is down need fear no fall; He/She that is down [need fear] no pride\'. Though, of course, we have to get up again!
October 6th, 2025 11:31
orchidee said:
Good write 2. From part of a hymn: \'He/She that is down need fear no fall; He/She that is down [need fear] no pride\'. Though, of course, we have to get up again!
October 6th, 2025 11:31
High bar low
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the tension between high expectations and the struggle to meet them. It reflects on the pressures individuals face when trying to live up to societal or personal standards, suggesting that in the pursuit of these high ideals, one may feel compelled to lower themselves or compromise their values.
October 6th, 2025 08:59
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the tension between high expectations and the struggle to meet them. It reflects on the pressures individuals face when trying to live up to societal or personal standards, suggesting that in the pursuit of these high ideals, one may feel compelled to lower themselves or compromise their values.
October 6th, 2025 08:59
Flies to the honey
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one. The message is a favorite of mine for you can not know a man unless you have walked in his shoes. None of us walk in another\'s shoes and can not know what he undergoes, thinks or feels. Judge not is a Jewish and Christian belief by scripture yet so few follow their beliefs. A fave
October 3rd, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one. The message is a favorite of mine for you can not know a man unless you have walked in his shoes. None of us walk in another\'s shoes and can not know what he undergoes, thinks or feels. Judge not is a Jewish and Christian belief by scripture yet so few follow their beliefs. A fave
October 3rd, 2025 08:43
Flies to the honey
Paul Bell said:
Too many perfect people out there.
Well, at least the ones who put their arm round you.
October 3rd, 2025 08:38
Paul Bell said:
Too many perfect people out there.
Well, at least the ones who put their arm round you.
October 3rd, 2025 08:38
Forgive me
Doggerel Dave said:
For the most part you captured a thought process I both recognize and am very familiar with.
Your conclusion? Sorry we will differ there, but that doesn\'t detract from the rest. Thanks.
October 1st, 2025 20:38
Doggerel Dave said:
For the most part you captured a thought process I both recognize and am very familiar with.
Your conclusion? Sorry we will differ there, but that doesn\'t detract from the rest. Thanks.
October 1st, 2025 20:38
Forgive me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really moved me. The wrestling, the questions, the prayer woven through…it all feels so raw and searching. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 20:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really moved me. The wrestling, the questions, the prayer woven through…it all feels so raw and searching. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 20:03
Forgive me
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and thought-provoking with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
October 1st, 2025 12:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and thought-provoking with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
October 1st, 2025 12:52
Forgive me
sorenbarrett said:
I like the doubt shown in the beginning of this poem it reveals open mindedness. A good write
October 1st, 2025 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
I like the doubt shown in the beginning of this poem it reveals open mindedness. A good write
October 1st, 2025 09:29
On the level
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, this is both proclamation and poem. The sickle at harvest, the call to stay on the level, the cadence of warning...very powerful. Urgent, heavy, unforgettable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2025 09:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, this is both proclamation and poem. The sickle at harvest, the call to stay on the level, the cadence of warning...very powerful. Urgent, heavy, unforgettable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2025 09:02
On the level
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s something just slightly.. almost.. there.. but slightly out of reach...
PS Who is this Isaiah bloke anyway..?
September 26th, 2025 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s something just slightly.. almost.. there.. but slightly out of reach...
PS Who is this Isaiah bloke anyway..?
September 26th, 2025 07:20
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