Comments received on poems by 2781



In the dark
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a warm and energizing piece, Valiantstar. It begins in struggle, then another personโ€™s words arrive with clarity, strength, and nourishmentโ€ฆuntil the whole spirit feels ready to move again. Loved this, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

August 19th, 2026 18:28

In the dark
Doggerel Dave said:

Not mystified about this at all....
Should be unambiguous to to whom it will (I hope) concern.
Smooth read. Thanks.

August 19th, 2026 18:20

In the dark
sorenbarrett said:

Bring it on is the message I get. Lovely and so well said in rhyme well placed and rhythm that appeals to the thought.

August 19th, 2026 10:54

Alert!
Syd said:

The UK got a one too. Tell us not to use disposable BBQ\'s because of the wildfire risk.

- Syd ๐Ÿ„

August 18th, 2026 06:51

Here I am
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow, my friend...this is tender, spiritual, and full of gratitude. Thereโ€™s a strong sense of being released from what once held you and finding peace in something truer. Beautifully done. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

August 16th, 2026 06:22

Here I am
sorenbarrett said:

There is a touch of sweetness in this poem tempered by a bit of arrogance. Nicely written it has a good flow and feel

August 15th, 2026 08:49

Going on
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Thereโ€™s a searching quality to this, Valiantstar...question after question stripping away appearances, cleverness, and easy answers in pursuit of something deeper. I like where you ultimately locate what weโ€™re seeking: waiting quietly within the pages for someone willing to look. Thought-provoking, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

August 10th, 2026 10:53

Going on
sorenbarrett said:

Well written this write expounds the need for study through reading. Nicely done

August 10th, 2026 07:21

Attention
arqios said:

Indeed, a blessing in disguise. Attested by one wont to overthink and be overwrought. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

August 10th, 2026 06:20

Attention
sorenbarrett said:

A bit of tongue in cheek humor here that made me smile. Set in good rhyme it shows the good and bad of attentional problems

August 9th, 2026 06:11

Attention
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Hahaha, Valiantstar! ๐Ÿ˜‚ The clarification at the end got me. Thereโ€™s something wonderfully self-aware about admitting that sometimes the mind simply checks out regardless of whatโ€™s being offered. And โ€œendless teaching / like a fartโ€ certainly brought me back to attention! ๐Ÿคฃ Great fun, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

August 9th, 2026 05:51

Dave\'s
Doggerel Dave said:

Suspect all you like - my embarrassment is not going to improve my temper any.....๐Ÿ™ƒ....๐Ÿ˜‚

August 8th, 2026 19:40

Dave\'s
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This put a smile on my face, my friend! ๐Ÿ˜‚ A whole collection of Daves, each remembered for the quirks and qualities that make them lovable. Thereโ€™s plenty of humor here, but underneath it all thereโ€™s genuine affection for these guys. Great job on this! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ

August 8th, 2026 08:41

Dave\'s
sorenbarrett said:

All true I am most sure. A fun read that sends a good message as well. Loved it a fave

August 8th, 2026 04:28

See
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful, Valiantstar...brief, inviting, and quietly joyful. Thereโ€™s something lovely about faith being presented not as forcing anything into being, but simply opening ourselves enough for the Son to enter. Beautifully done, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

August 7th, 2026 08:33

See
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely short that shines itself with its own sun.

August 7th, 2026 04:05

Pool comp
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Valiantsstar, this speaks to me. Iโ€™ve had moments where an unexpected conversation ends up becoming the part of the day I remember most. Your poem captures that beautifullyโ€ฆhow grace often arrives quietly, without fanfare. Wonderful work, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

August 5th, 2026 23:00

Pool comp
Doggerel Dave said:

Straightforward tale simply told, and none the worse for that. Enjoyed the experience.

August 5th, 2026 16:34

Pool comp
peto said:

Wonderful write
And I love a game of pool

August 5th, 2026 11:15

Pool comp
sorenbarrett said:

A spiritual message in a poem of rhyme. Nicely done

August 5th, 2026 09:51

Pool comp
Paul Bell said:

God sure works in mysterious ways, and the guy was only selling love, and free at that.
Sometimes a simple gesture speaks volumes, as two people acknowledge the world together.

August 5th, 2026 09:33

Troubled life
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a moving testimony, Valiantstar. The honesty about former failures gives the spiritual renewal real weight...and I love how completely the speaker entrusts both the present and eternity to God. Powerful work, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

August 2nd, 2026 06:53

Troubled life
sorenbarrett said:

A pledge of religious loyalty in this poem. Nicely written

August 2nd, 2026 04:28

Strategies
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Valiantstar, this carries a strong scriptural cadence from beginning to end. It feels like a call back to enduring truth in the midst of rebellion and wandering. Powerful piece, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

August 1st, 2026 20:36

Strategies
sorenbarrett said:

Poetic values set in this work where Christian values are most evident. Well written

August 1st, 2026 03:39

Not boring
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, what a joyful and uplifting expression of faith! The devotion here is wholehearted and infectious...full of gratitude for a God who transforms lives. Beautiful write, Valiantstar! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 30th, 2026 10:04

Not boring
arqios said:

Nothing like blessed assurance. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

July 30th, 2026 07:21

Not boring
sorenbarrett said:

A prayer in poetic form. Well done

July 30th, 2026 03:41

A violent paradox
NafisaSB said:

So true. Today we live a world of fake lies

July 29th, 2026 05:53

Alert!
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, what an unsettling and thought-provoking piece! You turn a source of public reassurance into an instrument of chaos...then leave us wondering whether remaining beyond its reach might be the safest place of all. Excellent write, Valiantstar! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 27th, 2026 08:58

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