Comments received on poems by 2781
R&R
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like wrestling with belief and meaning…asking questions while still holding onto something at the center. I’ve sat in that space before...where certainty and curiosity meet. Well done in capturing it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like wrestling with belief and meaning…asking questions while still holding onto something at the center. I’ve sat in that space before...where certainty and curiosity meet. Well done in capturing it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:40
R&R
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor in a religious riddle that is as amusing as the answer. A fun read that teases the mind
March 22nd, 2026 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor in a religious riddle that is as amusing as the answer. A fun read that teases the mind
March 22nd, 2026 07:17
Weak
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this moves with a prophetic force…imagery, warning, and lament all woven together. Lines like “I sought a man among them who would make a wall… / But I found none.” anchor it in something stark and unresolved. It feels urgent and unrelenting. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this moves with a prophetic force…imagery, warning, and lament all woven together. Lines like “I sought a man among them who would make a wall… / But I found none.” anchor it in something stark and unresolved. It feels urgent and unrelenting. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:41
Weak
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem of belief and faith that speaks of the division between good and evil and believers and non believers well done
March 19th, 2026 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem of belief and faith that speaks of the division between good and evil and believers and non believers well done
March 19th, 2026 09:53
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Doggerel Dave said:
Gotta have Word or similar. I even bang out many of my comments there first before a copy and paste here, where all too often my comment gets lost or sunk before I can post.. Most folks here will relate, I bet.
March 18th, 2026 16:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Gotta have Word or similar. I even bang out many of my comments there first before a copy and paste here, where all too often my comment gets lost or sunk before I can post.. Most folks here will relate, I bet.
March 18th, 2026 16:17
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this made me smile…there’s a playful frustration here that feels real and immediate. It stumbles on purpose, then leans into it. The shifting form mirrors that searching energy…like the poem is figuring itself out as it goes. Loved this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this made me smile…there’s a playful frustration here that feels real and immediate. It stumbles on purpose, then leans into it. The shifting form mirrors that searching energy…like the poem is figuring itself out as it goes. Loved this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:34
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sorenbarrett said:
Isn\'t that the most vexing thing. I too have lost pieces in that way out of a careless touch of the keyboard. This is a piece that many can identify with.
March 18th, 2026 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
Isn\'t that the most vexing thing. I too have lost pieces in that way out of a careless touch of the keyboard. This is a piece that many can identify with.
March 18th, 2026 07:20
hotHotHOT
Doggerel Dave said:
My throat shrivelled and my fillings began to jangle just reading this. Think of your audience - I\'ve got to find a way to keep breathing now....
March 16th, 2026 18:08
Doggerel Dave said:
My throat shrivelled and my fillings began to jangle just reading this. Think of your audience - I\'ve got to find a way to keep breathing now....
March 16th, 2026 18:08
hotHotHOT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a fun one…starting with chili and heat, then slowly slipping into playful double meaning. The nitrate gloves line really sells the joke, and the habanero ending ties it all together with a grin. Clever, cheeky, and very entertaining. And...oooh do I love to cook and eat chili! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a fun one…starting with chili and heat, then slowly slipping into playful double meaning. The nitrate gloves line really sells the joke, and the habanero ending ties it all together with a grin. Clever, cheeky, and very entertaining. And...oooh do I love to cook and eat chili! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:52
hotHotHOT
sorenbarrett said:
Woh now that sounds good. I have a jar of tequila soaked peppers that I use from time to time to spice up a dish. This poem is nicely written with a bit of humor to sweeten it and the peppers to give it flavor. Very nicely done
March 16th, 2026 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Woh now that sounds good. I have a jar of tequila soaked peppers that I use from time to time to spice up a dish. This poem is nicely written with a bit of humor to sweeten it and the peppers to give it flavor. Very nicely done
March 16th, 2026 07:33
The horns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this unfolds as a prophetic spiritual call to discernment…horns, false teachers, and voices competing for power, all contrasted with the reminder that truth does not need to boast. The prophetic tone and scriptural imagery give the poem the feeling of a warning spoken across generations. Strong message here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 15th, 2026 18:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this unfolds as a prophetic spiritual call to discernment…horns, false teachers, and voices competing for power, all contrasted with the reminder that truth does not need to boast. The prophetic tone and scriptural imagery give the poem the feeling of a warning spoken across generations. Strong message here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 15th, 2026 18:44
The horns
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded in rhyme and flow it gives its message to all
March 15th, 2026 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded in rhyme and flow it gives its message to all
March 15th, 2026 09:04
Stories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, there’s a quiet searching spirit in this piece… it moves from doubt toward something deeper and steadier. That sense of a story behind all the other stories gives the poem a thoughtful, reflective feel. I really enjoyed the journey through it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 13th, 2026 09:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, there’s a quiet searching spirit in this piece… it moves from doubt toward something deeper and steadier. That sense of a story behind all the other stories gives the poem a thoughtful, reflective feel. I really enjoyed the journey through it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 13th, 2026 09:10
Stories
sorenbarrett said:
Such a puzzle how much of myths began with truth how much of history is a myth. Things I learned as truth in school found to be nothing more that folk tales things that I always thought a fairy tale having more truth than I ever believed. A good write
March 13th, 2026 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
Such a puzzle how much of myths began with truth how much of history is a myth. Things I learned as truth in school found to be nothing more that folk tales things that I always thought a fairy tale having more truth than I ever believed. A good write
March 13th, 2026 08:28
Alright
arqios said:
Happy holidays! And may the opening night of new tomorrows be promising 🙏🏻🕊️
March 11th, 2026 20:43
arqios said:
Happy holidays! And may the opening night of new tomorrows be promising 🙏🏻🕊️
March 11th, 2026 20:43
Alright
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, the poem nicely balances excitement with the chaos that comes with preparation… shoes, dresses, lost jewelry, and all the small stresses that build before a big moment. The repeated reminder that “it will be alright on the night” ties it all together with a light touch of humor. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 11th, 2026 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, the poem nicely balances excitement with the chaos that comes with preparation… shoes, dresses, lost jewelry, and all the small stresses that build before a big moment. The repeated reminder that “it will be alright on the night” ties it all together with a light touch of humor. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 11th, 2026 08:09
Alright
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and reminiscent of such occasions. Nicely written it brings nostalgia
March 11th, 2026 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and reminiscent of such occasions. Nicely written it brings nostalgia
March 11th, 2026 07:58
Seven heads
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, the repeated return to “the beast has seven heads” really anchors the poem. Each time it appears the surrounding questions about hero, villain, and loyalty gain more weight. That structure reinforces the sense that appearances and claims can easily mislead people. Strong motif, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 10th, 2026 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, the repeated return to “the beast has seven heads” really anchors the poem. Each time it appears the surrounding questions about hero, villain, and loyalty gain more weight. That structure reinforces the sense that appearances and claims can easily mislead people. Strong motif, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 10th, 2026 09:35
Seven heads
sorenbarrett said:
Religious, prophetic, apocalyptic, reminiscent of the book of Revelations it speaks in symbols. Well done
March 10th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Religious, prophetic, apocalyptic, reminiscent of the book of Revelations it speaks in symbols. Well done
March 10th, 2026 04:08
Heads
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is fierce…almost prophetic in tone. The imagery feels like a storm rolling in, full of warning and reckoning. There’s a raw urgency here that gives the whole piece real bite. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is fierce…almost prophetic in tone. The imagery feels like a storm rolling in, full of warning and reckoning. There’s a raw urgency here that gives the whole piece real bite. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:47
Heads
sorenbarrett said:
A religious view of the deterioration and corruption seen in the world. Nicely written
March 6th, 2026 19:03
sorenbarrett said:
A religious view of the deterioration and corruption seen in the world. Nicely written
March 6th, 2026 19:03
Unreal
Doggerel Dave said:
Are you sure it is \'real is unreal\' and not \'unreal is real\'?
March 5th, 2026 16:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Are you sure it is \'real is unreal\' and not \'unreal is real\'?
March 5th, 2026 16:41
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