Comments received on poems by 2781
Dillywacker
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, Valiantstar...I wasn\'t expecting devotional dillywackery today, yet here we are. 😂 Strange vocabulary aside, there\'s something genuinely earnest underneath it all. Great job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 00:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, Valiantstar...I wasn\'t expecting devotional dillywackery today, yet here we are. 😂 Strange vocabulary aside, there\'s something genuinely earnest underneath it all. Great job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 00:04
Rags for riches
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, Valiantstar...that certainly went places. 😂 By the time the moths showed up, I figured surrender was probably my safest option. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2026 23:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, Valiantstar...that certainly went places. 😂 By the time the moths showed up, I figured surrender was probably my safest option. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2026 23:30
Dillywacker
sorenbarrett said:
Dillywhacker as I know it has a strange fit here. Must have a meaning I don\'t know. A good read
October 4th, 2026 10:19
sorenbarrett said:
Dillywhacker as I know it has a strange fit here. Must have a meaning I don\'t know. A good read
October 4th, 2026 10:19
Rags for riches
Doggerel Dave said:
As implied in your last line, \'could\' is the operative word.
Penultimate line I thouht, at first glance, read \'Donald of all commotion, in a princely reign?\'
October 3rd, 2026 18:40
Doggerel Dave said:
As implied in your last line, \'could\' is the operative word.
Penultimate line I thouht, at first glance, read \'Donald of all commotion, in a princely reign?\'
October 3rd, 2026 18:40
Rags for riches
Friendship said:
A well-written poem. Your poem serves as a meditation on the ethics of creation and the emotional weight that comes with artistic inspiration. It raises questions about the cost of creativity and the responsibility artists have toward their sources of inspiration. You blow me away with this poem, my friend.
October 3rd, 2026 17:35
Friendship said:
A well-written poem. Your poem serves as a meditation on the ethics of creation and the emotional weight that comes with artistic inspiration. It raises questions about the cost of creativity and the responsibility artists have toward their sources of inspiration. You blow me away with this poem, my friend.
October 3rd, 2026 17:35
Rags for riches
sorenbarrett said:
They say cloths make the man I say the man makes the clothes. Nicely written my friend
October 3rd, 2026 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
They say cloths make the man I say the man makes the clothes. Nicely written my friend
October 3rd, 2026 10:40
The flame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this has a wonderfully hands-on feel to it...the kind of work where you step back at the end and know exactly why the effort was worth it. Great job!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2026 07:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this has a wonderfully hands-on feel to it...the kind of work where you step back at the end and know exactly why the effort was worth it. Great job!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2026 07:00
The flame
sorenbarrett said:
Refinishing whether wood or people it works either way a little abuse makes new look old. Well done as a metaphor.
September 28th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Refinishing whether wood or people it works either way a little abuse makes new look old. Well done as a metaphor.
September 28th, 2026 04:38
I see
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this made me think. The tension between what we say, what we hide, and what God sees is a hard one to escape. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2026 22:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this made me think. The tension between what we say, what we hide, and what God sees is a hard one to escape. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2026 22:59
I see
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely write work in rhyme and of good flow. Well done
September 26th, 2026 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely write work in rhyme and of good flow. Well done
September 26th, 2026 10:51
2026
sorenbarrett said:
A call to faith put in common modern day terms. Nicely done.
September 25th, 2026 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A call to faith put in common modern day terms. Nicely done.
September 25th, 2026 04:49
2026
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I’m with you on this one. There is real comfort in remembering whose hands we are in, especially when the year itself feels uncertain. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 23:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I’m with you on this one. There is real comfort in remembering whose hands we are in, especially when the year itself feels uncertain. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 23:39
Mumbo Jumbo
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a strange, biblical surrealism here, where accusations, hypocrisy, history, illusion, and the forbidden tree all tumble together until the poem starts feeling like a prophecy spoken through static. The final movement into the spotless, succulent meat is wonderfully unsettling—it takes the language of innocence and nourishment and suddenly gives it a darker, almost sacrificial flavor. Powerful work.
September 15th, 2026 07:56
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a strange, biblical surrealism here, where accusations, hypocrisy, history, illusion, and the forbidden tree all tumble together until the poem starts feeling like a prophecy spoken through static. The final movement into the spotless, succulent meat is wonderfully unsettling—it takes the language of innocence and nourishment and suddenly gives it a darker, almost sacrificial flavor. Powerful work.
September 15th, 2026 07:56
Mumbo Jumbo
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a strange and compelling journey, Valiantstar. Social disorder gives way to biblical warning, then ends with innocence made ready for consumption. The whole piece feels like humanity repeating its oldest betrayal under modern disguises. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2026 11:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a strange and compelling journey, Valiantstar. Social disorder gives way to biblical warning, then ends with innocence made ready for consumption. The whole piece feels like humanity repeating its oldest betrayal under modern disguises. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2026 11:25
Mumbo Jumbo
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical it speaks in child\'s words but the story is the same. Nicely crafted
September 14th, 2026 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical it speaks in child\'s words but the story is the same. Nicely crafted
September 14th, 2026 09:16
What was that?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a tender little poem, Valiantstar. The missed exchange becomes a reminder that understanding requires presence, connection, and the willingness to remain near. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2026 18:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a tender little poem, Valiantstar. The missed exchange becomes a reminder that understanding requires presence, connection, and the willingness to remain near. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2026 18:57
What was that?
Doggerel Dave said:
I relate completely. While I understand that the \'dear\' signifies a relationship, I believe the complaint more generalisable than that.
September 13th, 2026 09:28
Doggerel Dave said:
I relate completely. While I understand that the \'dear\' signifies a relationship, I believe the complaint more generalisable than that.
September 13th, 2026 09:28
What was that?
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and fun it sends a message of communication in relationships but sometimes one is so comfortable with another that no words are needed. Well done
September 13th, 2026 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and fun it sends a message of communication in relationships but sometimes one is so comfortable with another that no words are needed. Well done
September 13th, 2026 06:49
I am...
Doggerel Dave said:
I really can enjoy and admire the tone of acceptance. The car? Well I\'m on public and community transport (trains and big heavy vehicles) now.
Neat write.
September 8th, 2026 17:45
Doggerel Dave said:
I really can enjoy and admire the tone of acceptance. The car? Well I\'m on public and community transport (trains and big heavy vehicles) now.
Neat write.
September 8th, 2026 17:45
I am...
soheil khodaparasti said:
I wish more people would drive as you do—knowing their own direction, respecting the paths of others, and leaving judgment behind. Perhaps the roads of life would be a little kinder if we all did.
September 8th, 2026 10:56
soheil khodaparasti said:
I wish more people would drive as you do—knowing their own direction, respecting the paths of others, and leaving judgment behind. Perhaps the roads of life would be a little kinder if we all did.
September 8th, 2026 10:56
I am...
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and the way I drive mine too as long as they do not run into me or block my way I am fine.
September 8th, 2026 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and the way I drive mine too as long as they do not run into me or block my way I am fine.
September 8th, 2026 09:27
I am...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent piece, Valiantstar! Acceptance, individuality, and humor all fit neatly into four lines. That playful finish makes a deeply humane principle feel entirely your own. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent piece, Valiantstar! Acceptance, individuality, and humor all fit neatly into four lines. That playful finish makes a deeply humane principle feel entirely your own. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 08:59
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