Comments received on poems by 2781
Mumbo Jumbo
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a strange, biblical surrealism here, where accusations, hypocrisy, history, illusion, and the forbidden tree all tumble together until the poem starts feeling like a prophecy spoken through static. The final movement into the spotless, succulent meat is wonderfully unsettling—it takes the language of innocence and nourishment and suddenly gives it a darker, almost sacrificial flavor. Powerful work.
September 15th, 2026 07:56
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a strange, biblical surrealism here, where accusations, hypocrisy, history, illusion, and the forbidden tree all tumble together until the poem starts feeling like a prophecy spoken through static. The final movement into the spotless, succulent meat is wonderfully unsettling—it takes the language of innocence and nourishment and suddenly gives it a darker, almost sacrificial flavor. Powerful work.
September 15th, 2026 07:56
Mumbo Jumbo
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a strange and compelling journey, Valiantstar. Social disorder gives way to biblical warning, then ends with innocence made ready for consumption. The whole piece feels like humanity repeating its oldest betrayal under modern disguises. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2026 11:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a strange and compelling journey, Valiantstar. Social disorder gives way to biblical warning, then ends with innocence made ready for consumption. The whole piece feels like humanity repeating its oldest betrayal under modern disguises. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2026 11:25
Mumbo Jumbo
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical it speaks in child\'s words but the story is the same. Nicely crafted
September 14th, 2026 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical it speaks in child\'s words but the story is the same. Nicely crafted
September 14th, 2026 09:16
What was that?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a tender little poem, Valiantstar. The missed exchange becomes a reminder that understanding requires presence, connection, and the willingness to remain near. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2026 18:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a tender little poem, Valiantstar. The missed exchange becomes a reminder that understanding requires presence, connection, and the willingness to remain near. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2026 18:57
What was that?
Doggerel Dave said:
I relate completely. While I understand that the \'dear\' signifies a relationship, I believe the complaint more generalisable than that.
September 13th, 2026 09:28
Doggerel Dave said:
I relate completely. While I understand that the \'dear\' signifies a relationship, I believe the complaint more generalisable than that.
September 13th, 2026 09:28
What was that?
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and fun it sends a message of communication in relationships but sometimes one is so comfortable with another that no words are needed. Well done
September 13th, 2026 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and fun it sends a message of communication in relationships but sometimes one is so comfortable with another that no words are needed. Well done
September 13th, 2026 06:49
I am...
Doggerel Dave said:
I really can enjoy and admire the tone of acceptance. The car? Well I\'m on public and community transport (trains and big heavy vehicles) now.
Neat write.
September 8th, 2026 17:45
Doggerel Dave said:
I really can enjoy and admire the tone of acceptance. The car? Well I\'m on public and community transport (trains and big heavy vehicles) now.
Neat write.
September 8th, 2026 17:45
I am...
soheil khodaparasti said:
I wish more people would drive as you do—knowing their own direction, respecting the paths of others, and leaving judgment behind. Perhaps the roads of life would be a little kinder if we all did.
September 8th, 2026 10:56
soheil khodaparasti said:
I wish more people would drive as you do—knowing their own direction, respecting the paths of others, and leaving judgment behind. Perhaps the roads of life would be a little kinder if we all did.
September 8th, 2026 10:56
I am...
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and the way I drive mine too as long as they do not run into me or block my way I am fine.
September 8th, 2026 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and the way I drive mine too as long as they do not run into me or block my way I am fine.
September 8th, 2026 09:27
I am...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent piece, Valiantstar! Acceptance, individuality, and humor all fit neatly into four lines. That playful finish makes a deeply humane principle feel entirely your own. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent piece, Valiantstar! Acceptance, individuality, and humor all fit neatly into four lines. That playful finish makes a deeply humane principle feel entirely your own. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 08:59
3 weeks 3 days
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries such a searching, devotional energy…hesitation, longing, mercy, and trust all moving together. Beautifully heartfelt, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries such a searching, devotional energy…hesitation, longing, mercy, and trust all moving together. Beautifully heartfelt, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:16
Life
NafisaSB said:
smoking kills, but it also fills gaps and gives solace to a few.
September 4th, 2026 02:23
NafisaSB said:
smoking kills, but it also fills gaps and gives solace to a few.
September 4th, 2026 02:23
Scribbles
coracaodacripta said:
Preaching to the choir! Somehow some things make all the sense in the world the moment of its conception, but you give one last look and it all just falls apart like a make-shift dysfunctional mechanism that just kinda sounds right in the end. Ain\'t that somethin\'?
September 3rd, 2026 22:17
coracaodacripta said:
Preaching to the choir! Somehow some things make all the sense in the world the moment of its conception, but you give one last look and it all just falls apart like a make-shift dysfunctional mechanism that just kinda sounds right in the end. Ain\'t that somethin\'?
September 3rd, 2026 22:17
Scribbles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an engaging piece, Valiantstar! The thoughts wander, question themselves, and appear to lose their way...yet that very wandering uncovers the trust holding everything together. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an engaging piece, Valiantstar! The thoughts wander, question themselves, and appear to lose their way...yet that very wandering uncovers the trust holding everything together. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:43
Scribbles
sorenbarrett said:
All things work out for the best although we may not see it at the time or even ever see it. God or nature has a way of working things out.
September 3rd, 2026 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
All things work out for the best although we may not see it at the time or even ever see it. God or nature has a way of working things out.
September 3rd, 2026 08:07
Redeemed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one really wrestles with the mystery of redemption rather than pretending to have it all neatly solved. That questioning gives it real spiritual weight. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one really wrestles with the mystery of redemption rather than pretending to have it all neatly solved. That questioning gives it real spiritual weight. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:35
Redeemed
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious reference nicely written where all will be forgiven. Loved the flow with rhyme
September 1st, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious reference nicely written where all will be forgiven. Loved the flow with rhyme
September 1st, 2026 04:14
Eye eye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This really got me thinking, my friend. There is a deep distrust running through it, not just of AI itself, but of the systems, resources, and motives surrounding it...and that makes the warning feel much broader than technology alone. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2026 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This really got me thinking, my friend. There is a deep distrust running through it, not just of AI itself, but of the systems, resources, and motives surrounding it...and that makes the warning feel much broader than technology alone. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2026 08:25
Eye eye
orchidee said:
Good write 2. You know those Yin and Yang folks?! lol.
August 30th, 2026 11:11
orchidee said:
Good write 2. You know those Yin and Yang folks?! lol.
August 30th, 2026 11:11
Eye eye
sorenbarrett said:
With no privacy, everything monitored, freedom no longer even a question, controlled in everything, everything artificial and disposable not a world I want to live in. Well written
August 30th, 2026 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
With no privacy, everything monitored, freedom no longer even a question, controlled in everything, everything artificial and disposable not a world I want to live in. Well written
August 30th, 2026 08:30
Eye eye
Doggerel Dave said:
The near future is going to be hell - and I haven\'t much of an idea how it will resolve itself - as it must... Perhaps I should ask Copilot??
August 30th, 2026 08:17
Doggerel Dave said:
The near future is going to be hell - and I haven\'t much of an idea how it will resolve itself - as it must... Perhaps I should ask Copilot??
August 30th, 2026 08:17
YHWH
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries an earnest sense of spiritual discovery. I appreciate how you explore the possibilities without pretending every question has been conclusively settled...allowing mystery, curiosity, and conviction to breathe together. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 16:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries an earnest sense of spiritual discovery. I appreciate how you explore the possibilities without pretending every question has been conclusively settled...allowing mystery, curiosity, and conviction to breathe together. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 16:54
YHWH
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with rhyme and good flow. Hebrew is written and read right to left so it must be put in English to be read the other way around. Nicely done.
August 27th, 2026 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with rhyme and good flow. Hebrew is written and read right to left so it must be put in English to be read the other way around. Nicely done.
August 27th, 2026 07:59
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