Comments received on poems by 2781
A tribute
orchidee said:
Good write 2. I can\'t see that\'s been either \'the good old days\' nor \'the bad old days\'. It\'s probably \'the same old days\'.
February 4th, 2026 11:17
orchidee said:
Good write 2. I can\'t see that\'s been either \'the good old days\' nor \'the bad old days\'. It\'s probably \'the same old days\'.
February 4th, 2026 11:17
A tribute
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this poem moves like a pilgrimage of questions. Ancient stories, modern confusion, and a longing to understand all braided together. It doesn’t force answers, but it keeps asking, and that persistence gives it power. Wonderful job, my friend 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 4th, 2026 10:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this poem moves like a pilgrimage of questions. Ancient stories, modern confusion, and a longing to understand all braided together. It doesn’t force answers, but it keeps asking, and that persistence gives it power. Wonderful job, my friend 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 4th, 2026 10:36
A tribute
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely woven poem of belief and faith that takes the reader to a different level. Well done
February 4th, 2026 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely woven poem of belief and faith that takes the reader to a different level. Well done
February 4th, 2026 09:48
Creation groans
arqios said:
That’s in the epistle to Corinth, correct? Superb rendering 🕊️🙏🏻
February 3rd, 2026 00:47
arqios said:
That’s in the epistle to Corinth, correct? Superb rendering 🕊️🙏🏻
February 3rd, 2026 00:47
Creation groans
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this poem moves between Scripture and soul with intention. Humanity’s confusion, creation’s groaning, and divine love all converge in the question of who comes first. A sincere, devotional piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 14:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this poem moves between Scripture and soul with intention. Humanity’s confusion, creation’s groaning, and divine love all converge in the question of who comes first. A sincere, devotional piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 14:21
Creation groans
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely composed the words of a father to a son. Well done
February 2nd, 2026 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely composed the words of a father to a son. Well done
February 2nd, 2026 10:28
Rant
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope you feel better now. When someone with troubles lives in the neighbourhood I do worry.. yer never know....
Some good \'uns in there - thanks for putting them up.
January 29th, 2026 18:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope you feel better now. When someone with troubles lives in the neighbourhood I do worry.. yer never know....
Some good \'uns in there - thanks for putting them up.
January 29th, 2026 18:32
Rant
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a raw moral urgency. It feels restless, questioning, unwilling to accept easy narratives…and that tension gives the poem its force. It doesn’t comfort, it confronts. Powerful, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 29th, 2026 11:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a raw moral urgency. It feels restless, questioning, unwilling to accept easy narratives…and that tension gives the poem its force. It doesn’t comfort, it confronts. Powerful, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 29th, 2026 11:07
Rant
sorenbarrett said:
This collage of sayings some altered for effect cast a mood of suspect and suspicion leading one to be warry. A lovely write
January 29th, 2026 10:19
sorenbarrett said:
This collage of sayings some altered for effect cast a mood of suspect and suspicion leading one to be warry. A lovely write
January 29th, 2026 10:19
Pincers
Thomas W Case said:
A grim, relentless vision, raw and unflinching—each line strikes like a blade through sorrow and witness.
You weave fury and mercy together, gritty and heartfelt, leaving the reader both haunted and awed.
January 20th, 2026 08:53
Thomas W Case said:
A grim, relentless vision, raw and unflinching—each line strikes like a blade through sorrow and witness.
You weave fury and mercy together, gritty and heartfelt, leaving the reader both haunted and awed.
January 20th, 2026 08:53
Pincers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, reading this stirred that familiar unease of watching belief, power, and fear collide in real time. The way you layer warning and grief feels honest, not theatrical. I felt the weight of that. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 18th, 2026 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, reading this stirred that familiar unease of watching belief, power, and fear collide in real time. The way you layer warning and grief feels honest, not theatrical. I felt the weight of that. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 18th, 2026 10:16
Pincers
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor after metaphor this poem delivers its message. With rhyme and good flow it makes its point in the last line
January 18th, 2026 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor after metaphor this poem delivers its message. With rhyme and good flow it makes its point in the last line
January 18th, 2026 08:39
Smooth things
arqios said:
Strange how interface can be in your face with all the technology that’s available these days🕊️🙏🏻
January 14th, 2026 08:25
arqios said:
Strange how interface can be in your face with all the technology that’s available these days🕊️🙏🏻
January 14th, 2026 08:25
Smooth things
sorenbarrett said:
Deceit is a cancer that is hard to remove and sometime is inoperable. A good write
January 14th, 2026 07:45
sorenbarrett said:
Deceit is a cancer that is hard to remove and sometime is inoperable. A good write
January 14th, 2026 07:45
Smooth things
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is searching and uncompromising. Gentle words, hard testing, and the cost of reckoning all move together without easy resolution. The poem asks questions it doesn’t rush to answer. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 14th, 2026 07:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is searching and uncompromising. Gentle words, hard testing, and the cost of reckoning all move together without easy resolution. The poem asks questions it doesn’t rush to answer. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 14th, 2026 07:13
Tap it out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a restless urgency. The thoughts don’t settle…and that feels intentional, like faith thinking out loud in real time. There’s a searching honesty here that stayed with me. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 13th, 2026 19:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a restless urgency. The thoughts don’t settle…and that feels intentional, like faith thinking out loud in real time. There’s a searching honesty here that stayed with me. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 13th, 2026 19:20
Tap it out
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a poem of prophesy and prediction giving a warning. Well written
January 12th, 2026 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a poem of prophesy and prediction giving a warning. Well written
January 12th, 2026 09:57
Rich
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this reads like a hymn of reversal. You confront power, reclaim righteousness, and redefine abundance without losing warmth or wonder. It’s confident, compassionate, and, yes…just divine. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 10:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this reads like a hymn of reversal. You confront power, reclaim righteousness, and redefine abundance without losing warmth or wonder. It’s confident, compassionate, and, yes…just divine. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 10:33
Rich
sorenbarrett said:
There are different types of riches some recognized some not. Money, power, fame, beauty, health, kindness, charity, love, hope, faith. Everyone has one or another not always the one they wish. A lovely write
January 11th, 2026 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
There are different types of riches some recognized some not. Money, power, fame, beauty, health, kindness, charity, love, hope, faith. Everyone has one or another not always the one they wish. A lovely write
January 11th, 2026 09:01
Help
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this reads like a soul wrestling and refusing to give up. Humility, longing, and trust move together without shortcuts. It’s earnest, grounded, and powerfully human. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 9th, 2026 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this reads like a soul wrestling and refusing to give up. Humility, longing, and trust move together without shortcuts. It’s earnest, grounded, and powerfully human. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 9th, 2026 10:53
Help
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of submission and a plea for subservience in a relationship. Bound by passion, enamored and chained by a love unrequited one turns to the master with a plea for mercy. Heart felt a good write
January 9th, 2026 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of submission and a plea for subservience in a relationship. Bound by passion, enamored and chained by a love unrequited one turns to the master with a plea for mercy. Heart felt a good write
January 9th, 2026 07:41
Different this time?
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone wants to get rich quick and with as little labor as possible and so gamble we do on lottery, back street games , Vegas or as most legalized gambling in the stock market. A good write
January 4th, 2026 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone wants to get rich quick and with as little labor as possible and so gamble we do on lottery, back street games , Vegas or as most legalized gambling in the stock market. A good write
January 4th, 2026 12:44
Different this time?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is sharp-eyed and restrained in the right way. Observation and memory doing their work. The questions you leave hanging are the most honest part, because nobody really knows when the snap comes, only that it always does. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 4th, 2026 09:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is sharp-eyed and restrained in the right way. Observation and memory doing their work. The questions you leave hanging are the most honest part, because nobody really knows when the snap comes, only that it always does. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 4th, 2026 09:53
What
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is concise and purposeful. You frame time’s urgency, then answer it with gratitude and shared work. By the end, savoring becomes an ethic, not an escape. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 1st, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is concise and purposeful. You frame time’s urgency, then answer it with gratitude and shared work. By the end, savoring becomes an ethic, not an escape. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 1st, 2026 09:39
What
Thomas W Case said:
Simple, meditative, and grounded. The final lines about savoring life’s fruits feel quietly powerful.
January 1st, 2026 09:35
Thomas W Case said:
Simple, meditative, and grounded. The final lines about savoring life’s fruits feel quietly powerful.
January 1st, 2026 09:35
What
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point with clever rhyme it makes its point. Nicely done. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point with clever rhyme it makes its point. Nicely done. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 09:31
What
Friendship said:
Nicely worded. The poem explores the fleeting nature of time and the importance of embracing life\'s pleasures while they last. It emphasizes the idea that one can find solace and joy in simple pleasures when they have a supportive presence in their life.
January 1st, 2026 08:55
Friendship said:
Nicely worded. The poem explores the fleeting nature of time and the importance of embracing life\'s pleasures while they last. It emphasizes the idea that one can find solace and joy in simple pleasures when they have a supportive presence in their life.
January 1st, 2026 08:55
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