Comments received on poems by 2781
Smooth things
arqios said:
Strange how interface can be in your face with all the technology that’s available these days🕊️🙏🏻
January 14th, 2026 08:25
arqios said:
Strange how interface can be in your face with all the technology that’s available these days🕊️🙏🏻
January 14th, 2026 08:25
Smooth things
sorenbarrett said:
Deceit is a cancer that is hard to remove and sometime is inoperable. A good write
January 14th, 2026 07:45
sorenbarrett said:
Deceit is a cancer that is hard to remove and sometime is inoperable. A good write
January 14th, 2026 07:45
Smooth things
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is searching and uncompromising. Gentle words, hard testing, and the cost of reckoning all move together without easy resolution. The poem asks questions it doesn’t rush to answer. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 14th, 2026 07:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is searching and uncompromising. Gentle words, hard testing, and the cost of reckoning all move together without easy resolution. The poem asks questions it doesn’t rush to answer. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 14th, 2026 07:13
Tap it out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a restless urgency. The thoughts don’t settle…and that feels intentional, like faith thinking out loud in real time. There’s a searching honesty here that stayed with me. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 13th, 2026 19:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a restless urgency. The thoughts don’t settle…and that feels intentional, like faith thinking out loud in real time. There’s a searching honesty here that stayed with me. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 13th, 2026 19:20
Tap it out
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a poem of prophesy and prediction giving a warning. Well written
January 12th, 2026 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a poem of prophesy and prediction giving a warning. Well written
January 12th, 2026 09:57
Rich
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this reads like a hymn of reversal. You confront power, reclaim righteousness, and redefine abundance without losing warmth or wonder. It’s confident, compassionate, and, yes…just divine. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 10:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this reads like a hymn of reversal. You confront power, reclaim righteousness, and redefine abundance without losing warmth or wonder. It’s confident, compassionate, and, yes…just divine. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 10:33
Rich
sorenbarrett said:
There are different types of riches some recognized some not. Money, power, fame, beauty, health, kindness, charity, love, hope, faith. Everyone has one or another not always the one they wish. A lovely write
January 11th, 2026 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
There are different types of riches some recognized some not. Money, power, fame, beauty, health, kindness, charity, love, hope, faith. Everyone has one or another not always the one they wish. A lovely write
January 11th, 2026 09:01
Help
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this reads like a soul wrestling and refusing to give up. Humility, longing, and trust move together without shortcuts. It’s earnest, grounded, and powerfully human. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 9th, 2026 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this reads like a soul wrestling and refusing to give up. Humility, longing, and trust move together without shortcuts. It’s earnest, grounded, and powerfully human. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 9th, 2026 10:53
Help
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of submission and a plea for subservience in a relationship. Bound by passion, enamored and chained by a love unrequited one turns to the master with a plea for mercy. Heart felt a good write
January 9th, 2026 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of submission and a plea for subservience in a relationship. Bound by passion, enamored and chained by a love unrequited one turns to the master with a plea for mercy. Heart felt a good write
January 9th, 2026 07:41
Different this time?
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone wants to get rich quick and with as little labor as possible and so gamble we do on lottery, back street games , Vegas or as most legalized gambling in the stock market. A good write
January 4th, 2026 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone wants to get rich quick and with as little labor as possible and so gamble we do on lottery, back street games , Vegas or as most legalized gambling in the stock market. A good write
January 4th, 2026 12:44
Different this time?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is sharp-eyed and restrained in the right way. Observation and memory doing their work. The questions you leave hanging are the most honest part, because nobody really knows when the snap comes, only that it always does. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 4th, 2026 09:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is sharp-eyed and restrained in the right way. Observation and memory doing their work. The questions you leave hanging are the most honest part, because nobody really knows when the snap comes, only that it always does. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 4th, 2026 09:53
What
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is concise and purposeful. You frame time’s urgency, then answer it with gratitude and shared work. By the end, savoring becomes an ethic, not an escape. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 1st, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is concise and purposeful. You frame time’s urgency, then answer it with gratitude and shared work. By the end, savoring becomes an ethic, not an escape. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 1st, 2026 09:39
What
Thomas W Case said:
Simple, meditative, and grounded. The final lines about savoring life’s fruits feel quietly powerful.
January 1st, 2026 09:35
Thomas W Case said:
Simple, meditative, and grounded. The final lines about savoring life’s fruits feel quietly powerful.
January 1st, 2026 09:35
What
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point with clever rhyme it makes its point. Nicely done. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point with clever rhyme it makes its point. Nicely done. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 09:31
What
Friendship said:
Nicely worded. The poem explores the fleeting nature of time and the importance of embracing life\'s pleasures while they last. It emphasizes the idea that one can find solace and joy in simple pleasures when they have a supportive presence in their life.
January 1st, 2026 08:55
Friendship said:
Nicely worded. The poem explores the fleeting nature of time and the importance of embracing life\'s pleasures while they last. It emphasizes the idea that one can find solace and joy in simple pleasures when they have a supportive presence in their life.
January 1st, 2026 08:55
What
orchidee said:
Good write 2. Now my rather \'common\', uncouth, rough poem, entitled \'Wot?!\' lol.
January 1st, 2026 08:31
orchidee said:
Good write 2. Now my rather \'common\', uncouth, rough poem, entitled \'Wot?!\' lol.
January 1st, 2026 08:31
Trade
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a warning spoken calmly while everything shakes. The tone is measured, but the tension underneath is real. It feels less like market talk and more like moral pressure building. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 29th, 2025 15:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a warning spoken calmly while everything shakes. The tone is measured, but the tension underneath is real. It feels less like market talk and more like moral pressure building. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 29th, 2025 15:02
Trade
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of trading, greed, and the eventual consequences of a market driven by short-term gains. It suggests that in the face of financial desperation, patience and the ability to hold onto valuable assets will ultimately lead to success.
December 29th, 2025 09:09
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of trading, greed, and the eventual consequences of a market driven by short-term gains. It suggests that in the face of financial desperation, patience and the ability to hold onto valuable assets will ultimately lead to success.
December 29th, 2025 09:09
Trade
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message in this poem subtle although clearly stated. A fave
December 29th, 2025 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message in this poem subtle although clearly stated. A fave
December 29th, 2025 08:17
The third seal
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and haunting a poem of the blackness. Well done
December 27th, 2025 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and haunting a poem of the blackness. Well done
December 27th, 2025 10:17
The third seal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this is a concise, scripturally grounded meditation that trusts the power of its source material. You balance prophetic warning with assurance, letting both speak without dilution. Strong, disciplined work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 27th, 2025 10:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this is a concise, scripturally grounded meditation that trusts the power of its source material. You balance prophetic warning with assurance, letting both speak without dilution. Strong, disciplined work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 27th, 2025 10:14
Interflation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this is a thoughtful blend of social awareness and spiritual anchoring. You don’t deny the brokenness of the system, but you refuse to let it define the heart’s center. That quiet confidence gives the poem its strength. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 23rd, 2025 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this is a thoughtful blend of social awareness and spiritual anchoring. You don’t deny the brokenness of the system, but you refuse to let it define the heart’s center. That quiet confidence gives the poem its strength. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 23rd, 2025 09:51
Interflation
orchidee said:
Aww, why fat cats? Any fat dogs, fat elephants, fat whatever?!
December 23rd, 2025 08:34
orchidee said:
Aww, why fat cats? Any fat dogs, fat elephants, fat whatever?!
December 23rd, 2025 08:34
Interflation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief a well written poem
December 23rd, 2025 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief a well written poem
December 23rd, 2025 07:27
Interflation
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem aims to critique the current economic system and remind readers of the importance of faith and spiritual wealth over material possessions. It serves as a call to recognize divine providence amidst economic challenges.
December 23rd, 2025 06:52
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem aims to critique the current economic system and remind readers of the importance of faith and spiritual wealth over material possessions. It serves as a call to recognize divine providence amidst economic challenges.
December 23rd, 2025 06:52
Deep love
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that teases with myth of either folk or religious sort and words it so well in poetic form. Loved it
December 21st, 2025 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that teases with myth of either folk or religious sort and words it so well in poetic form. Loved it
December 21st, 2025 14:11
Deep love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this reads as a meditation on discernment. Faith, performance, doubt, and longing all intersect, and the poem refuses to declare winners or losers. It leaves truth open…not absent, but waiting. Great job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 12:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this reads as a meditation on discernment. Faith, performance, doubt, and longing all intersect, and the poem refuses to declare winners or losers. It leaves truth open…not absent, but waiting. Great job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 12:52
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