Comments received on poems by 2781
Trade
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a warning spoken calmly while everything shakes. The tone is measured, but the tension underneath is real. It feels less like market talk and more like moral pressure building. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 29th, 2025 15:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a warning spoken calmly while everything shakes. The tone is measured, but the tension underneath is real. It feels less like market talk and more like moral pressure building. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 29th, 2025 15:02
Trade
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of trading, greed, and the eventual consequences of a market driven by short-term gains. It suggests that in the face of financial desperation, patience and the ability to hold onto valuable assets will ultimately lead to success.
December 29th, 2025 09:09
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of trading, greed, and the eventual consequences of a market driven by short-term gains. It suggests that in the face of financial desperation, patience and the ability to hold onto valuable assets will ultimately lead to success.
December 29th, 2025 09:09
Trade
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message in this poem subtle although clearly stated. A fave
December 29th, 2025 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message in this poem subtle although clearly stated. A fave
December 29th, 2025 08:17
The third seal
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and haunting a poem of the blackness. Well done
December 27th, 2025 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and haunting a poem of the blackness. Well done
December 27th, 2025 10:17
The third seal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this is a concise, scripturally grounded meditation that trusts the power of its source material. You balance prophetic warning with assurance, letting both speak without dilution. Strong, disciplined work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 27th, 2025 10:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this is a concise, scripturally grounded meditation that trusts the power of its source material. You balance prophetic warning with assurance, letting both speak without dilution. Strong, disciplined work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 27th, 2025 10:14
Interflation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this is a thoughtful blend of social awareness and spiritual anchoring. You don’t deny the brokenness of the system, but you refuse to let it define the heart’s center. That quiet confidence gives the poem its strength. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 23rd, 2025 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this is a thoughtful blend of social awareness and spiritual anchoring. You don’t deny the brokenness of the system, but you refuse to let it define the heart’s center. That quiet confidence gives the poem its strength. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 23rd, 2025 09:51
Interflation
orchidee said:
Aww, why fat cats? Any fat dogs, fat elephants, fat whatever?!
December 23rd, 2025 08:34
orchidee said:
Aww, why fat cats? Any fat dogs, fat elephants, fat whatever?!
December 23rd, 2025 08:34
Interflation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief a well written poem
December 23rd, 2025 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief a well written poem
December 23rd, 2025 07:27
Interflation
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem aims to critique the current economic system and remind readers of the importance of faith and spiritual wealth over material possessions. It serves as a call to recognize divine providence amidst economic challenges.
December 23rd, 2025 06:52
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem aims to critique the current economic system and remind readers of the importance of faith and spiritual wealth over material possessions. It serves as a call to recognize divine providence amidst economic challenges.
December 23rd, 2025 06:52
Deep love
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that teases with myth of either folk or religious sort and words it so well in poetic form. Loved it
December 21st, 2025 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that teases with myth of either folk or religious sort and words it so well in poetic form. Loved it
December 21st, 2025 14:11
Deep love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this reads as a meditation on discernment. Faith, performance, doubt, and longing all intersect, and the poem refuses to declare winners or losers. It leaves truth open…not absent, but waiting. Great job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 12:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this reads as a meditation on discernment. Faith, performance, doubt, and longing all intersect, and the poem refuses to declare winners or losers. It leaves truth open…not absent, but waiting. Great job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 12:52
Report
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is intense and disorienting in a way that feels intentional. The collision of faith, violence, media, and grief comes through as fractured and urgent. It’s a hard read, but a compelling one. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
December 14th, 2025 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is intense and disorienting in a way that feels intentional. The collision of faith, violence, media, and grief comes through as fractured and urgent. It’s a hard read, but a compelling one. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
December 14th, 2025 09:16
Revelation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Money rules everything, doesn\'t it? The ending also reminds of Jesus warning to not cast one\'s pearls (or gold...for metal) before swine. All the same, great write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 21:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Money rules everything, doesn\'t it? The ending also reminds of Jesus warning to not cast one\'s pearls (or gold...for metal) before swine. All the same, great write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 21:06
Revelation
Paul Bell said:
Fools gold comes to mind here, and with the price of gold going through the roof, even the fools gold probably has a price.
December 8th, 2025 15:06
Paul Bell said:
Fools gold comes to mind here, and with the price of gold going through the roof, even the fools gold probably has a price.
December 8th, 2025 15:06
A glitch
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully fun read, my friend. And true! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 13:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully fun read, my friend. And true! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 13:02
Revelation
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one takes a little thinking. Is it metal of song that rules the swine or the sword? a thought provoking read
December 8th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one takes a little thinking. Is it metal of song that rules the swine or the sword? a thought provoking read
December 8th, 2025 09:13
A glitch
sorenbarrett said:
Shortages determine price in a market economy. Price is power and power rules. Nicely done
December 8th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Shortages determine price in a market economy. Price is power and power rules. Nicely done
December 8th, 2025 04:18
Mindful
orchidee said:
Oooh, I can\'t have fig trees - give me the runs! lol. Can I have an apple tree or summat instead? lol.
December 6th, 2025 12:47
orchidee said:
Oooh, I can\'t have fig trees - give me the runs! lol. Can I have an apple tree or summat instead? lol.
December 6th, 2025 12:47
Mindful
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this piece moves like someone thinking out loud… layered, searching, a little playful, a little haunted. I felt that shift between mystery and meaning. Really well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 6th, 2025 11:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this piece moves like someone thinking out loud… layered, searching, a little playful, a little haunted. I felt that shift between mystery and meaning. Really well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 6th, 2025 11:01
Mindful
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! full of metaphor indeed. I have often wondered about the issue of eating. We only eat other life does that make us bad. I would say no as all is a cycle and some day something will eat us where bacteria or a plant taking nourishment from our dust. It all goes round and round. A good write
December 6th, 2025 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! full of metaphor indeed. I have often wondered about the issue of eating. We only eat other life does that make us bad. I would say no as all is a cycle and some day something will eat us where bacteria or a plant taking nourishment from our dust. It all goes round and round. A good write
December 6th, 2025 08:23
Off to the races?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is warm and witty…the saved coins, the thousand-percent dream, the quiet gratitude tucked at the end. You balanced hope and humor just right. Love this, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 30th, 2025 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is warm and witty…the saved coins, the thousand-percent dream, the quiet gratitude tucked at the end. You balanced hope and humor just right. Love this, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 30th, 2025 08:49
Off to the races?
sorenbarrett said:
The poem starts at the races and ends in rest. Well done a journey well run
November 30th, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
The poem starts at the races and ends in rest. Well done a journey well run
November 30th, 2025 08:42
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