Comments received on poems by 2781
In the dark
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a warm and energizing piece, Valiantstar. It begins in struggle, then another personโs words arrive with clarity, strength, and nourishmentโฆuntil the whole spirit feels ready to move again. Loved this, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 19th, 2026 18:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a warm and energizing piece, Valiantstar. It begins in struggle, then another personโs words arrive with clarity, strength, and nourishmentโฆuntil the whole spirit feels ready to move again. Loved this, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 19th, 2026 18:28
In the dark
Doggerel Dave said:
Not mystified about this at all....
Should be unambiguous to to whom it will (I hope) concern.
Smooth read. Thanks.
August 19th, 2026 18:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Not mystified about this at all....
Should be unambiguous to to whom it will (I hope) concern.
Smooth read. Thanks.
August 19th, 2026 18:20
In the dark
sorenbarrett said:
Bring it on is the message I get. Lovely and so well said in rhyme well placed and rhythm that appeals to the thought.
August 19th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Bring it on is the message I get. Lovely and so well said in rhyme well placed and rhythm that appeals to the thought.
August 19th, 2026 10:54
Alert!
Syd said:
The UK got a one too. Tell us not to use disposable BBQ\'s because of the wildfire risk.
- Syd ๐
August 18th, 2026 06:51
Syd said:
The UK got a one too. Tell us not to use disposable BBQ\'s because of the wildfire risk.
- Syd ๐
August 18th, 2026 06:51
Here I am
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is tender, spiritual, and full of gratitude. Thereโs a strong sense of being released from what once held you and finding peace in something truer. Beautifully done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 16th, 2026 06:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is tender, spiritual, and full of gratitude. Thereโs a strong sense of being released from what once held you and finding peace in something truer. Beautifully done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 16th, 2026 06:22
Here I am
sorenbarrett said:
There is a touch of sweetness in this poem tempered by a bit of arrogance. Nicely written it has a good flow and feel
August 15th, 2026 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
There is a touch of sweetness in this poem tempered by a bit of arrogance. Nicely written it has a good flow and feel
August 15th, 2026 08:49
Going on
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thereโs a searching quality to this, Valiantstar...question after question stripping away appearances, cleverness, and easy answers in pursuit of something deeper. I like where you ultimately locate what weโre seeking: waiting quietly within the pages for someone willing to look. Thought-provoking, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 10th, 2026 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thereโs a searching quality to this, Valiantstar...question after question stripping away appearances, cleverness, and easy answers in pursuit of something deeper. I like where you ultimately locate what weโre seeking: waiting quietly within the pages for someone willing to look. Thought-provoking, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 10th, 2026 10:53
Going on
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this write expounds the need for study through reading. Nicely done
August 10th, 2026 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this write expounds the need for study through reading. Nicely done
August 10th, 2026 07:21
Attention
arqios said:
Indeed, a blessing in disguise. Attested by one wont to overthink and be overwrought. ๐๐ป๐๐๏ธ
August 10th, 2026 06:20
arqios said:
Indeed, a blessing in disguise. Attested by one wont to overthink and be overwrought. ๐๐ป๐๐๏ธ
August 10th, 2026 06:20
Attention
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of tongue in cheek humor here that made me smile. Set in good rhyme it shows the good and bad of attentional problems
August 9th, 2026 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of tongue in cheek humor here that made me smile. Set in good rhyme it shows the good and bad of attentional problems
August 9th, 2026 06:11
Attention
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Valiantstar! ๐ The clarification at the end got me. Thereโs something wonderfully self-aware about admitting that sometimes the mind simply checks out regardless of whatโs being offered. And โendless teaching / like a fartโ certainly brought me back to attention! ๐คฃ Great fun, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 9th, 2026 05:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Valiantstar! ๐ The clarification at the end got me. Thereโs something wonderfully self-aware about admitting that sometimes the mind simply checks out regardless of whatโs being offered. And โendless teaching / like a fartโ certainly brought me back to attention! ๐คฃ Great fun, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 9th, 2026 05:51
Dave\'s
Doggerel Dave said:
Suspect all you like - my embarrassment is not going to improve my temper any.....๐....๐
August 8th, 2026 19:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Suspect all you like - my embarrassment is not going to improve my temper any.....๐....๐
August 8th, 2026 19:40
Dave\'s
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This put a smile on my face, my friend! ๐ A whole collection of Daves, each remembered for the quirks and qualities that make them lovable. Thereโs plenty of humor here, but underneath it all thereโs genuine affection for these guys. Great job on this! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
August 8th, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This put a smile on my face, my friend! ๐ A whole collection of Daves, each remembered for the quirks and qualities that make them lovable. Thereโs plenty of humor here, but underneath it all thereโs genuine affection for these guys. Great job on this! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
August 8th, 2026 08:41
Dave\'s
sorenbarrett said:
All true I am most sure. A fun read that sends a good message as well. Loved it a fave
August 8th, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
All true I am most sure. A fun read that sends a good message as well. Loved it a fave
August 8th, 2026 04:28
See
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, Valiantstar...brief, inviting, and quietly joyful. Thereโs something lovely about faith being presented not as forcing anything into being, but simply opening ourselves enough for the Son to enter. Beautifully done, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 7th, 2026 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, Valiantstar...brief, inviting, and quietly joyful. Thereโs something lovely about faith being presented not as forcing anything into being, but simply opening ourselves enough for the Son to enter. Beautifully done, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 7th, 2026 08:33
Pool comp
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantsstar, this speaks to me. Iโve had moments where an unexpected conversation ends up becoming the part of the day I remember most. Your poem captures that beautifullyโฆhow grace often arrives quietly, without fanfare. Wonderful work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 5th, 2026 23:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantsstar, this speaks to me. Iโve had moments where an unexpected conversation ends up becoming the part of the day I remember most. Your poem captures that beautifullyโฆhow grace often arrives quietly, without fanfare. Wonderful work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 5th, 2026 23:00
Pool comp
Doggerel Dave said:
Straightforward tale simply told, and none the worse for that. Enjoyed the experience.
August 5th, 2026 16:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Straightforward tale simply told, and none the worse for that. Enjoyed the experience.
August 5th, 2026 16:34
Pool comp
sorenbarrett said:
A spiritual message in a poem of rhyme. Nicely done
August 5th, 2026 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
A spiritual message in a poem of rhyme. Nicely done
August 5th, 2026 09:51
Pool comp
Paul Bell said:
God sure works in mysterious ways, and the guy was only selling love, and free at that.
Sometimes a simple gesture speaks volumes, as two people acknowledge the world together.
August 5th, 2026 09:33
Paul Bell said:
God sure works in mysterious ways, and the guy was only selling love, and free at that.
Sometimes a simple gesture speaks volumes, as two people acknowledge the world together.
August 5th, 2026 09:33
Troubled life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a moving testimony, Valiantstar. The honesty about former failures gives the spiritual renewal real weight...and I love how completely the speaker entrusts both the present and eternity to God. Powerful work, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 2nd, 2026 06:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a moving testimony, Valiantstar. The honesty about former failures gives the spiritual renewal real weight...and I love how completely the speaker entrusts both the present and eternity to God. Powerful work, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 2nd, 2026 06:53
Troubled life
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of religious loyalty in this poem. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of religious loyalty in this poem. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2026 04:28
Strategies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong scriptural cadence from beginning to end. It feels like a call back to enduring truth in the midst of rebellion and wandering. Powerful piece, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 1st, 2026 20:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong scriptural cadence from beginning to end. It feels like a call back to enduring truth in the midst of rebellion and wandering. Powerful piece, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 1st, 2026 20:36
Strategies
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic values set in this work where Christian values are most evident. Well written
August 1st, 2026 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic values set in this work where Christian values are most evident. Well written
August 1st, 2026 03:39
Not boring
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a joyful and uplifting expression of faith! The devotion here is wholehearted and infectious...full of gratitude for a God who transforms lives. Beautiful write, Valiantstar! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
July 30th, 2026 10:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a joyful and uplifting expression of faith! The devotion here is wholehearted and infectious...full of gratitude for a God who transforms lives. Beautiful write, Valiantstar! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
July 30th, 2026 10:04
Alert!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what an unsettling and thought-provoking piece! You turn a source of public reassurance into an instrument of chaos...then leave us wondering whether remaining beyond its reach might be the safest place of all. Excellent write, Valiantstar! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
July 27th, 2026 08:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what an unsettling and thought-provoking piece! You turn a source of public reassurance into an instrument of chaos...then leave us wondering whether remaining beyond its reach might be the safest place of all. Excellent write, Valiantstar! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
July 27th, 2026 08:58
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