Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Little Esther aged 3 brushes Nanna’s hair.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving words David.
Andy
May 15th, 2023 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving words David.
Andy
May 15th, 2023 01:08
Carol goes to a bar.
David Wakeling said:
Yes and thank you for your enlightened comments.Some lives are broken by mommy dearest
May 11th, 2023 03:17
David Wakeling said:
Yes and thank you for your enlightened comments.Some lives are broken by mommy dearest
May 11th, 2023 03:17
Carol goes to a bar.
Bobby O said:
Wow! I trust your truth and respect your right to share. It does stir up and remind a blind spot that may or may not be purposely nurtured is certain to reveal a naïveté I’m certainly wont to deny . an imaginary refuge where I’m happy to tell myself lies. In My never never land , I’m unjustifiably deceived as all kids are forever safe and all adults protect them with their lives. My heart to you and my best thoughts , all that you said was deeply regrettably unimaginably unfair.
May 11th, 2023 02:44
Bobby O said:
Wow! I trust your truth and respect your right to share. It does stir up and remind a blind spot that may or may not be purposely nurtured is certain to reveal a naïveté I’m certainly wont to deny . an imaginary refuge where I’m happy to tell myself lies. In My never never land , I’m unjustifiably deceived as all kids are forever safe and all adults protect them with their lives. My heart to you and my best thoughts , all that you said was deeply regrettably unimaginably unfair.
May 11th, 2023 02:44
Giving up the Fight
Bobby O said:
Like a salve o open wounds the parrot eased a fear , not alone , and reminded perhaps of what was dear?
May 10th, 2023 01:31
Bobby O said:
Like a salve o open wounds the parrot eased a fear , not alone , and reminded perhaps of what was dear?
May 10th, 2023 01:31
The Tide has gone out.
MendedFences27 said:
A look at the not-too-distant future. Your poem shows the end result of today\'s trends. The future will be bleak indeed if we do not work together to save it. Some well crafted images show us the darkness ahead. -Phil A.
May 9th, 2023 12:24
MendedFences27 said:
A look at the not-too-distant future. Your poem shows the end result of today\'s trends. The future will be bleak indeed if we do not work together to save it. Some well crafted images show us the darkness ahead. -Phil A.
May 9th, 2023 12:24
The Days of Rock and Roll.
Goldfinch60 said:
That first kiss is always remembered David.
Andy
April 30th, 2023 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
That first kiss is always remembered David.
Andy
April 30th, 2023 01:54
The Days of Rock and Roll.
Bobby O said:
The awkward flight of teenage romance
A cool line that allows us all to visit moments indelibly alive and indescribably important. I took the trip w you and enjoyed it.
April 30th, 2023 01:13
Bobby O said:
The awkward flight of teenage romance
A cool line that allows us all to visit moments indelibly alive and indescribably important. I took the trip w you and enjoyed it.
April 30th, 2023 01:13
The branches are bare.
Iva Hotko said:
Beautiful in its pain.
Thank you for sharing :-)
April 30th, 2023 01:06
Iva Hotko said:
Beautiful in its pain.
Thank you for sharing :-)
April 30th, 2023 01:06
The last words of Amber Watson
Bobby O said:
Love it. Especially because you moved the story w symbolic elements while still delivering facts that artistically convey the story.
April 25th, 2023 00:57
Bobby O said:
Love it. Especially because you moved the story w symbolic elements while still delivering facts that artistically convey the story.
April 25th, 2023 00:57
Emily goes for a walk.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much.I\'m not looking forward to dementia. My father had it.They say writing poems can help.
April 24th, 2023 03:21
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much.I\'m not looking forward to dementia. My father had it.They say writing poems can help.
April 24th, 2023 03:21
Emily goes for a walk.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words David. I can relate to this.
Andy
April 24th, 2023 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words David. I can relate to this.
Andy
April 24th, 2023 01:59
A nice couple. The Tale of Jean and William.
David Wakeling said:
I can\'t tell if this is even a comment
April 22nd, 2023 23:03
David Wakeling said:
I can\'t tell if this is even a comment
April 22nd, 2023 23:03
A nice couple. The Tale of Jean and William.
???. said:
I can\'t tell if this is even poetry
April 22nd, 2023 18:26
???. said:
I can\'t tell if this is even poetry
April 22nd, 2023 18:26
Laurence comes out of the closet aged 15.
David Wakeling said:
Yes and how sad when those people are your parents.Thanks for commenting
April 20th, 2023 04:15
David Wakeling said:
Yes and how sad when those people are your parents.Thanks for commenting
April 20th, 2023 04:15
Laurence comes out of the closet aged 15.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write David, some people just do not understand.
Andy
April 20th, 2023 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write David, some people just do not understand.
Andy
April 20th, 2023 01:25
Karen Anne Carpenter (March 2 1950-February 4 1983)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful voice, we are going to see a show about her next month.
Andy
April 19th, 2023 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful voice, we are going to see a show about her next month.
Andy
April 19th, 2023 00:53
Karen Anne Carpenter (March 2 1950-February 4 1983)
Bobby O said:
Such an angelic voice
April 19th, 2023 00:40
Bobby O said:
Such an angelic voice
April 19th, 2023 00:40
Who Gains?
MendedFences27 said:
So much truth in this poem. Workaholics or Billionaires are all lashed to their \"chariots,\" racing to the call of the \"crow.\" Well spoken. - Phil A.
April 18th, 2023 10:09
MendedFences27 said:
So much truth in this poem. Workaholics or Billionaires are all lashed to their \"chariots,\" racing to the call of the \"crow.\" Well spoken. - Phil A.
April 18th, 2023 10:09
The Bus Stop on Grace Avenue.
Goldfinch60 said:
What wonderful words David, I am sure your mother is always with you.
Andy
April 17th, 2023 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
What wonderful words David, I am sure your mother is always with you.
Andy
April 17th, 2023 00:33
The Last Iceberg.
2781 said:
I suspect we would be in serious trouble before then.
April 15th, 2023 03:42
2781 said:
I suspect we would be in serious trouble before then.
April 15th, 2023 03:42
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