Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
My name is Mary Judith MaCallister.
TobaniNataiella said:
A very touching and emotional piece, showing that what ever barricades you have in life, with the courage and the right approach you can achieve what you want to. Lovely piece of poetry.
January 9th, 2025 02:48
TobaniNataiella said:
A very touching and emotional piece, showing that what ever barricades you have in life, with the courage and the right approach you can achieve what you want to. Lovely piece of poetry.
January 9th, 2025 02:48
Mary’s boy child Jesus Rodriguez
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words David. Many years ago this happened to one of our friends and she had to give birth to a dead baby. There is nothing quite so sad as going to a babies funeral with the baby in a tiny coffin.
Andy
January 9th, 2025 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words David. Many years ago this happened to one of our friends and she had to give birth to a dead baby. There is nothing quite so sad as going to a babies funeral with the baby in a tiny coffin.
Andy
January 9th, 2025 02:24
My name is Mary Judith MaCallister.
arqios said:
An excellent poem that resonates with authenticity and courage, providing a profound reflection on living with blindness and the ways in which they adapt and thrive. Thank you for sharing this deeply moving and insightful piece. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 9th, 2025 02:12
arqios said:
An excellent poem that resonates with authenticity and courage, providing a profound reflection on living with blindness and the ways in which they adapt and thrive. Thank you for sharing this deeply moving and insightful piece. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 9th, 2025 02:12
Mary’s boy child Jesus Rodriguez
TobaniNataiella said:
Just full of hurt sorrow despair and tragedy, a haunting and emotional piece
January 8th, 2025 10:02
TobaniNataiella said:
Just full of hurt sorrow despair and tragedy, a haunting and emotional piece
January 8th, 2025 10:02
Mary’s boy child Jesus Rodriguez
arqios said:
Such despair and tragedy. Such harrowing loss.
January 8th, 2025 07:12
arqios said:
Such despair and tragedy. Such harrowing loss.
January 8th, 2025 07:12
Mary’s boy child Jesus Rodriguez
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad. To any mother their child is a baby Jesus and as a metaphor a dead God is held by many. A most interesting write
January 8th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad. To any mother their child is a baby Jesus and as a metaphor a dead God is held by many. A most interesting write
January 8th, 2025 04:28
My Uncle Veritas
TobaniNataiella said:
A very entertaining alternative view of how to get on in life, very enjoyable
January 7th, 2025 08:19
TobaniNataiella said:
A very entertaining alternative view of how to get on in life, very enjoyable
January 7th, 2025 08:19
My Uncle Veritas
arqios said:
Are you sure we don’t have the same uncle!? 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 7th, 2025 06:43
arqios said:
Are you sure we don’t have the same uncle!? 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 7th, 2025 06:43
My Uncle Veritas
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words from experience are better than holy words from scripture I always say. A great write that cuts to the core of life.
January 7th, 2025 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words from experience are better than holy words from scripture I always say. A great write that cuts to the core of life.
January 7th, 2025 06:00
Please let me arrange the flowers for you my love.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a beautiful loving poem David.
Andy
January 7th, 2025 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a beautiful loving poem David.
Andy
January 7th, 2025 02:05
Please let me arrange the flowers for you my love.
Tony36 said:
Excellent write David
January 6th, 2025 09:36
Tony36 said:
Excellent write David
January 6th, 2025 09:36
Please let me arrange the flowers for you my love.
arqios said:
Can’t help but notice and mull about tended and untended graves; and yet here we are with a tender poem that brings it all to life from your wonderful perspective! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 6th, 2025 07:36
arqios said:
Can’t help but notice and mull about tended and untended graves; and yet here we are with a tender poem that brings it all to life from your wonderful perspective! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 6th, 2025 07:36
Please let me arrange the flowers for you my love.
TobaniNataiella said:
A sad and emotional piece of the longing for and the missing of a loved one, the clearing off the leaves is clearing the way. Very well written as always
January 6th, 2025 04:44
TobaniNataiella said:
A sad and emotional piece of the longing for and the missing of a loved one, the clearing off the leaves is clearing the way. Very well written as always
January 6th, 2025 04:44
Please let me arrange the flowers for you my love.
sorenbarrett said:
A melancholic and sad poem written in such a way that the reveal comes at the end and turns the emotion from one of love to one of missing. Tender it leaves with it as sense of loss
January 6th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
A melancholic and sad poem written in such a way that the reveal comes at the end and turns the emotion from one of love to one of missing. Tender it leaves with it as sense of loss
January 6th, 2025 04:10
Please let me arrange the flowers for you my love.
orchidee said:
I admit it can be sometimes \'out of sight, out of mind\'. When visiting, or re-visiting a grave, it may be that weeks or months have passed - time flies?
January 6th, 2025 03:22
orchidee said:
I admit it can be sometimes \'out of sight, out of mind\'. When visiting, or re-visiting a grave, it may be that weeks or months have passed - time flies?
January 6th, 2025 03:22
The dog that climbed trees.
arqios said:
Hurray for the pursuit of one\'s true nature despite external pressures. And regardless of external recognition or validation the dog looking up at the moon but not barking, evokes a sense of quiet pride and fulfilment. With that we are all set to embrace our unique journeys and stand tall against adversity.
January 5th, 2025 05:14
arqios said:
Hurray for the pursuit of one\'s true nature despite external pressures. And regardless of external recognition or validation the dog looking up at the moon but not barking, evokes a sense of quiet pride and fulfilment. With that we are all set to embrace our unique journeys and stand tall against adversity.
January 5th, 2025 05:14
The dog that climbed trees.
TobaniNataiella said:
I feel it is about not being beaten into submission by what others are wanting and telling you to do, and having the strength to do what you want and stand on your own 2 feet, that`s just my thought. It probably has a 100 interpretations, beautifully written complex poem, that for certain makes you think, really enjoyed the read.
January 5th, 2025 04:54
TobaniNataiella said:
I feel it is about not being beaten into submission by what others are wanting and telling you to do, and having the strength to do what you want and stand on your own 2 feet, that`s just my thought. It probably has a 100 interpretations, beautifully written complex poem, that for certain makes you think, really enjoyed the read.
January 5th, 2025 04:54
The dog that climbed trees.
sorenbarrett said:
Let me go out on a limb. Some are destined to be different and as such are not well accepted and not wished well. And as for barking at the moon such people know their limits if wise. What a metaphoric piece David that certainly may contain various interpretations
January 5th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Let me go out on a limb. Some are destined to be different and as such are not well accepted and not wished well. And as for barking at the moon such people know their limits if wise. What a metaphoric piece David that certainly may contain various interpretations
January 5th, 2025 04:48
The Answer
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words David, we must all learn \"to dance in the rain\".
Andy
January 5th, 2025 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words David, we must all learn \"to dance in the rain\".
Andy
January 5th, 2025 02:10
The Answer
TobaniNataiella said:
A thought provoking read which makes us have a good internal thought inspection, very well written
January 4th, 2025 10:36
TobaniNataiella said:
A thought provoking read which makes us have a good internal thought inspection, very well written
January 4th, 2025 10:36
The Answer
arqios said:
A powerful and raw exploration DWa. One to be returned to several times. Potent stuff 🙏🏻🕊
January 4th, 2025 07:53
arqios said:
A powerful and raw exploration DWa. One to be returned to several times. Potent stuff 🙏🏻🕊
January 4th, 2025 07:53
The Flight of the Bird boy.
arqios said:
A profound theme and intriguing manner that this poem resonates with a universal longing for escape and the desire to rise above life\'s challenges. Its lyrical quality and emotional depth of your wording make it a poignant and memorable piece.
January 3rd, 2025 07:46
arqios said:
A profound theme and intriguing manner that this poem resonates with a universal longing for escape and the desire to rise above life\'s challenges. Its lyrical quality and emotional depth of your wording make it a poignant and memorable piece.
January 3rd, 2025 07:46
The Flight of the Bird boy.
TobaniNataiella said:
A sense of the freedom to roam, to do what and be who you like, a lovely read, enjoyed
January 3rd, 2025 05:41
TobaniNataiella said:
A sense of the freedom to roam, to do what and be who you like, a lovely read, enjoyed
January 3rd, 2025 05:41
The Flight of the Bird boy.
sorenbarrett said:
Used to as a child dream of flying in lucid dreams. Haven\'t had one of those in a long time but this poem reminded me of that. Liberating was the feeling I got from this poem. Most lovely
January 3rd, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Used to as a child dream of flying in lucid dreams. Haven\'t had one of those in a long time but this poem reminded me of that. Liberating was the feeling I got from this poem. Most lovely
January 3rd, 2025 03:57
The Day I became My Mother.
Goldfinch60 said:
No matter what we need to move on in life David.
Andy
January 3rd, 2025 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
No matter what we need to move on in life David.
Andy
January 3rd, 2025 02:28
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