Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
God helps with the Washing.
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and fun a read that I can identify with having been through the hanging out wash only to have it start to rain, gathering it only to have the sun come back. I would never want a God that did not have a sense of humor someone capable of cosmic jokes how would it be to spend an eternity without a laugh. Good write
February 16th, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and fun a read that I can identify with having been through the hanging out wash only to have it start to rain, gathering it only to have the sun come back. I would never want a God that did not have a sense of humor someone capable of cosmic jokes how would it be to spend an eternity without a laugh. Good write
February 16th, 2026 03:51
The funeral of Robert Witsend.
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe it is the rhyme, maybe the story, maybe it is that I have worked with people like this for so many years and have felt their spirits of sadness, joy and confusion in a world that they see differently that most but this is a fave I could feel the mixed emotions and confusion of all. We spend billions on the moon, satellites and cell phones to talk to each other mor billions on defense but so little to defend against such illnesses and so little to communicate with them a fave
February 15th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe it is the rhyme, maybe the story, maybe it is that I have worked with people like this for so many years and have felt their spirits of sadness, joy and confusion in a world that they see differently that most but this is a fave I could feel the mixed emotions and confusion of all. We spend billions on the moon, satellites and cell phones to talk to each other mor billions on defense but so little to defend against such illnesses and so little to communicate with them a fave
February 15th, 2026 04:30
The funeral of Robert Witsend.
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A sad but familiar story well written message
February 15th, 2026 01:45
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A sad but familiar story well written message
February 15th, 2026 01:45
Miss Emma
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write my friend it is an important lesson that to show passion one must feel it whether love or pain a true piece of music or poem can only be written and performed by one that has lived it. A fave
February 14th, 2026 17:57
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write my friend it is an important lesson that to show passion one must feel it whether love or pain a true piece of music or poem can only be written and performed by one that has lived it. A fave
February 14th, 2026 17:57
Baby Hope.
sorenbarrett said:
A story all too real and sadly too common unfortunately most don\'t end that happily. Nicely said
February 13th, 2026 21:40
sorenbarrett said:
A story all too real and sadly too common unfortunately most don\'t end that happily. Nicely said
February 13th, 2026 21:40
The Neglected.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome moving poem and to me it reminds of Gazan\'s plight and genocide. Well written and rhymed superly!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 10:00
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome moving poem and to me it reminds of Gazan\'s plight and genocide. Well written and rhymed superly!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 10:00
The Neglected.
Tony Grannell said:
Good day, David,
A very well written and composed passage of poetry, bringing together both man and beast in the horrors and tribulations of life until the final verse where beauty reigns beneath the yellow sun of joy. A great poem in all. Very well done indeed. I\'m delighted to read your poetry again.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 18th, 2025 04:13
Tony Grannell said:
Good day, David,
A very well written and composed passage of poetry, bringing together both man and beast in the horrors and tribulations of life until the final verse where beauty reigns beneath the yellow sun of joy. A great poem in all. Very well done indeed. I\'m delighted to read your poetry again.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 18th, 2025 04:13
The Neglected.
sorenbarrett said:
The contrast of man\'s value of compassion and pity and nature\'s survival clash in this poem where nature is viewed as harsh and uncaring while nature\'s beauty raises questions as to whether man\'s values are better of nature\'s. Deeply philosophical and a fave
August 18th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
The contrast of man\'s value of compassion and pity and nature\'s survival clash in this poem where nature is viewed as harsh and uncaring while nature\'s beauty raises questions as to whether man\'s values are better of nature\'s. Deeply philosophical and a fave
August 18th, 2025 03:50
The Neglected.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty and peace are always there if you care to look. Good toi see you back David.
Andy
August 18th, 2025 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty and peace are always there if you care to look. Good toi see you back David.
Andy
August 18th, 2025 02:00
The Neglected.
Poetic Licence said:
Welcome back and with a wonderful write, in a world where we chose to see only what is in front of our noses, when there are so many around the world who have been abandoned and left out of life, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 01:48
Poetic Licence said:
Welcome back and with a wonderful write, in a world where we chose to see only what is in front of our noses, when there are so many around the world who have been abandoned and left out of life, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 01:48
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