Comments received on poems by David Wakeling



Vera and Harold.
orchidee said:

Good write D.
Similar to me - by the time I\'d finished finding out what \'Carpe Diem\' meant, there was no day left to seize - it was midnight! lol.

April 10th, 2024 02:02

Vera and Harold.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words David and so true at the end.

Andy

April 10th, 2024 01:17

I fell deep into the dark well.
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope the neighbour had a rope long enough to pull you out David. LOL

Andy

April 9th, 2024 01:09

I fell deep into the dark well.
orchidee said:

Ain\'t no chance of a dry well \'ere. You\'d probably drown, with all the rain in that well. Doh!

April 8th, 2024 11:06

Time Space
Goldfinch60 said:

Time can be an imaginary scenario in many lives David.

Andy

April 8th, 2024 01:13

Time Space
orchidee said:

Good write D.

April 7th, 2024 10:44

Time Space
Alan R said:

Very well put

April 7th, 2024 06:39

Let me teach you how to Pray.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one David.

Andy

April 7th, 2024 01:47

Let me teach you how to Pray.
orchidee said:

Good write D.
For some, it\'s the process of actually dying that\'s the fear, e.g. some chronic, drawn-out illness.
I could possibly set this to a hymn-tune, with your permission. I won\'t quote you verbatim.

April 7th, 2024 01:23

Melanie disappears.
Goldfinch60 said:

Powerful words David, I hope all is well now.

Andy

April 6th, 2024 00:41

Goodbye ­Winter.
orchidee said:

We hope so for now!
I was about to sing a song with the line \'...The winter is over and gone.....\', then thought \'Ahh, a storm is forecast\'. Doh!

April 5th, 2024 02:08

Goodbye ­Winter.
Goldfinch60 said:

Winter has passed but it is still sending us reminders of its existence David.

Andy

April 5th, 2024 01:12

AWE.
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. Powerful.

April 4th, 2024 10:49

AWE.
Goldfinch60 said:

Silence can be filled with wonder David, but never stop listening.

Andy

April 4th, 2024 01:10

No animals were injured in the making of this poem.
Goldfinch60 said:

Great words David, I wonder what happened to her as you probably do.

Andy

April 3rd, 2024 01:06

No animals were injured in the making of this poem.
orchidee said:

Good write D.

April 2nd, 2024 02:14

No animals were injured in the making of this poem.
Koshish said:

Wonderful!

April 2nd, 2024 02:10

There is a Kindness
orchidee said:

Good write D.

April 1st, 2024 01:43

There is a Kindness
Goldfinch60 said:

So true David \"There is Kindness\" and \" There is Love\" and it is there so much more than people realise.

Andy

April 1st, 2024 01:27

There is a Kindness
Thomas W Case said:

You paint a beautiful picture here.

March 31st, 2024 20:57

Deirdre
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful and tender. Love it.

March 30th, 2024 19:15

Deirdre
orchidee said:

A separate daft comment - I thought this was gonna ne about Deirdre in Corrie! heeee.

March 30th, 2024 03:19

Deirdre
orchidee said:

A sensitive write David.

March 30th, 2024 03:19

The Truth
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong words David, all we can do is try to enjoy each moment we are here.

Andy

March 29th, 2024 02:57

Please let me arrange the flowers for you my love.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving words David.

Andy

March 29th, 2024 02:44

The Truth
Doggerel Dave said:

There\'s a chance that you might be at least partially right there........

March 29th, 2024 00:28

Please let me arrange the flowers for you my love.
orchidee said:

Are you very old, like Goldfinch and I? Did you see these things when they were originally made/built/formed, etc - as we both did?! lol.

March 28th, 2024 03:06

The dog that climbed trees.
orchidee said:

That\'ll be my (imaginary) dog, Fido, who barks at anyone \'forgetting\' to mark certain poems 18+. lol. They never forget again, though his bark is worse than his bite.

March 27th, 2024 03:10

The Lion and The Lily.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words David.

Andy

March 27th, 2024 02:42

Chris The haunted husband.
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words David.

Andy

March 26th, 2024 02:42

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