Comments received on poems by David Wakeling



The Neglected.
Tony Grannell said:

Good day, David,

A very well written and composed passage of poetry, bringing together both man and beast in the horrors and tribulations of life until the final verse where beauty reigns beneath the yellow sun of joy. A great poem in all. Very well done indeed. I\'m delighted to read your poetry again.

Wishing you all the very best,

Tony.

August 18th, 2025 04:13

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sorenbarrett said:

The contrast of man\'s value of compassion and pity and nature\'s survival clash in this poem where nature is viewed as harsh and uncaring while nature\'s beauty raises questions as to whether man\'s values are better of nature\'s. Deeply philosophical and a fave

August 18th, 2025 03:50

The Neglected.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beauty and peace are always there if you care to look. Good toi see you back David.

Andy

August 18th, 2025 02:00

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Poetic Licence said:

Welcome back and with a wonderful write, in a world where we chose to see only what is in front of our noses, when there are so many around the world who have been abandoned and left out of life, nicely expressed and written

August 18th, 2025 01:48

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arqios said:

Hey there David, good to see you back🕊️🙏🏻

August 17th, 2025 21:38