Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
When we are young
NafisaSB said:
As one ages, one realizes the need to reach out to family and friends and bond with them - nice to take rest of course, but i feel it\'s great to live it up while you are alive, and able
July 1st, 2024 07:49
NafisaSB said:
As one ages, one realizes the need to reach out to family and friends and bond with them - nice to take rest of course, but i feel it\'s great to live it up while you are alive, and able
July 1st, 2024 07:49
This is the hand, This is the will.
2781 said:
I brick in the head sounds a bit psychopathic.
June 25th, 2024 05:42
2781 said:
I brick in the head sounds a bit psychopathic.
June 25th, 2024 05:42
This is the hand, This is the will.
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - people use their hands to put over their ears, when I begin to sing! lol.
June 25th, 2024 01:20
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - people use their hands to put over their ears, when I begin to sing! lol.
June 25th, 2024 01:20
This is the hand, This is the will.
orchidee said:
Good write David.
There is forgiveness, we know. Yet what about situations like these?
And who could deny punishments for war criminals? They took life, so their life was taken from them.
June 25th, 2024 01:19
orchidee said:
Good write David.
There is forgiveness, we know. Yet what about situations like these?
And who could deny punishments for war criminals? They took life, so their life was taken from them.
June 25th, 2024 01:19
Ther was a time
orchidee said:
Good write David.
I\'ll get me Tardis out and we can go there! lol.
June 23rd, 2024 01:34
orchidee said:
Good write David.
I\'ll get me Tardis out and we can go there! lol.
June 23rd, 2024 01:34
Ther was a time
Goldfinch60 said:
I would love to come with you to that place David.
Andy
June 23rd, 2024 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
I would love to come with you to that place David.
Andy
June 23rd, 2024 00:57
The Past.
2781 said:
The past is written on our face, and by the time we get old, we have the face we deserve!
June 20th, 2024 09:59
2781 said:
The past is written on our face, and by the time we get old, we have the face we deserve!
June 20th, 2024 09:59
The Past.
orchidee said:
I have a Tardis. I travel back and forward through time! lol.
Dr Who has become utterly boring these days on TV, I think.
June 20th, 2024 01:44
orchidee said:
I have a Tardis. I travel back and forward through time! lol.
Dr Who has become utterly boring these days on TV, I think.
June 20th, 2024 01:44
The Past.
Goldfinch60 said:
The past brought us to the place we are now in our lives David and in my life it is a good place as will the future be.
Andy
June 20th, 2024 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
The past brought us to the place we are now in our lives David and in my life it is a good place as will the future be.
Andy
June 20th, 2024 01:39
It’s time to go Grandad.
Goldfinch60 said:
I will not leave my house either until the kids take me out in my wooden box.
Andy
June 20th, 2024 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
I will not leave my house either until the kids take me out in my wooden box.
Andy
June 20th, 2024 01:37
The Saan People of the Kalahari.
orchidee said:
Good write David. yes - last line - something like that surely.
June 18th, 2024 01:21
orchidee said:
Good write David. yes - last line - something like that surely.
June 18th, 2024 01:21
No animals were injured in the making of this poem.
Bobby O said:
Mr. Boss, I guarantee she remembers that seems sad that you never saw again that happenstance of life is something but I think you still carry that bravery with you to this day. It seems you work that I really enjoy reading all the time you’re the man, Mr. Dave, thank you for everything.
June 14th, 2024 22:00
Bobby O said:
Mr. Boss, I guarantee she remembers that seems sad that you never saw again that happenstance of life is something but I think you still carry that bravery with you to this day. It seems you work that I really enjoy reading all the time you’re the man, Mr. Dave, thank you for everything.
June 14th, 2024 22:00
No animals were injured in the making of this poem.
orchidee said:
A fine write David.
June 13th, 2024 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write David.
June 13th, 2024 01:52
No animals were injured in the making of this poem.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words David, maybe she does remember you.
Andy
June 13th, 2024 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words David, maybe she does remember you.
Andy
June 13th, 2024 01:46
For the Love of Judith.
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded and heart wrenching it pulls at the heart of humanity and cries out of darkness. A polished rawness it is powerful and poetic simultaneously.
June 9th, 2024 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded and heart wrenching it pulls at the heart of humanity and cries out of darkness. A polished rawness it is powerful and poetic simultaneously.
June 9th, 2024 08:54
For the Love of Judith.
O. Ella said:
This was such a wonderful read David, I got lost in it at some point. Extremely beautiful!
June 9th, 2024 02:54
O. Ella said:
This was such a wonderful read David, I got lost in it at some point. Extremely beautiful!
June 9th, 2024 02:54
What Game is this?
Bobby O said:
Where saviors try- how perfect was that
I always enjoy how you free up words.
June 7th, 2024 04:09
Bobby O said:
Where saviors try- how perfect was that
I always enjoy how you free up words.
June 7th, 2024 04:09
A gentle lady.
Goldfinch60 said:
May ghat happiness and kindness be forever with you David,
Andy
June 6th, 2024 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
May ghat happiness and kindness be forever with you David,
Andy
June 6th, 2024 01:54
A gentle lady.
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful poem. Gentleness is a fine quality. This is a poem of gratitude, much enjoyed. Lovely poetic expression in the lines.
June 6th, 2024 00:19
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful poem. Gentleness is a fine quality. This is a poem of gratitude, much enjoyed. Lovely poetic expression in the lines.
June 6th, 2024 00:19
Rose Williams and the fragile heart.
Cassie58 said:
You create an interesting and fascinating dialogue here. Much enjoyed. Happy Tuesday.
June 4th, 2024 11:23
Cassie58 said:
You create an interesting and fascinating dialogue here. Much enjoyed. Happy Tuesday.
June 4th, 2024 11:23
When we are young
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous urgency in this one. Great work.
June 2nd, 2024 06:17
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous urgency in this one. Great work.
June 2nd, 2024 06:17
When we are young
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure there will be much more to enhance your life David.
Andy
June 2nd, 2024 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure there will be much more to enhance your life David.
Andy
June 2nd, 2024 01:53
When we are young
orchidee said:
Madonna should give it up now - she\'s embarrassing - mutton dressed up as lamb. She must be about age 150 now! lol.
June 2nd, 2024 01:14
orchidee said:
Madonna should give it up now - she\'s embarrassing - mutton dressed up as lamb. She must be about age 150 now! lol.
June 2nd, 2024 01:14
When we are young
Cassie58 said:
This beautifully composed poem speaks to me about the importance of strong family bonds as we age. They are our refuge and our comfort. They take a life time of building and nurturing. Such a contrast from the days of our youth where time is invested often in new adventures. Have a lovely day David.
June 2nd, 2024 00:39
Cassie58 said:
This beautifully composed poem speaks to me about the importance of strong family bonds as we age. They are our refuge and our comfort. They take a life time of building and nurturing. Such a contrast from the days of our youth where time is invested often in new adventures. Have a lovely day David.
June 2nd, 2024 00:39
An important Life.
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness is always enough in my world David.
Andy
June 1st, 2024 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness is always enough in my world David.
Andy
June 1st, 2024 01:01
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