Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
The Spirit and the Science
ms.divine said:
aware of the spiritual conscious mind and the knowing of life and death
May 7th, 2026 00:25
ms.divine said:
aware of the spiritual conscious mind and the knowing of life and death
May 7th, 2026 00:25
Sometimes the Ambulance comes to Pensive Street.
Katie B. said:
Moving and beautifully written.
May 6th, 2026 08:15
Katie B. said:
Moving and beautifully written.
May 6th, 2026 08:15
Sometimes the Ambulance comes to Pensive Street.
Salvia.S said:
You made candlelight feel like grief and love at the same time. Nicely written!
May 6th, 2026 07:53
Salvia.S said:
You made candlelight feel like grief and love at the same time. Nicely written!
May 6th, 2026 07:53
Sometimes the Ambulance comes to Pensive Street.
sorenbarrett said:
David I am sure that I remember this poem is it a rework? I from time to time take out an older piece and dust it off.
May 6th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
David I am sure that I remember this poem is it a rework? I from time to time take out an older piece and dust it off.
May 6th, 2026 04:43
The ghost that saves.
arqios said:
Albino panther, that\'s a spanner in the works! Locked in the beguiling bit right there. A ghost of love truly catches like a safety net under a highwire act. 🙏🕊️
May 5th, 2026 19:00
arqios said:
Albino panther, that\'s a spanner in the works! Locked in the beguiling bit right there. A ghost of love truly catches like a safety net under a highwire act. 🙏🕊️
May 5th, 2026 19:00
The ghost that saves.
Friendship said:
Your poem focuses on the experience of love, from the joy it brings to the pain of its absence. Nicely written
May 5th, 2026 05:18
Friendship said:
Your poem focuses on the experience of love, from the joy it brings to the pain of its absence. Nicely written
May 5th, 2026 05:18
The ghost that saves.
sorenbarrett said:
A ghost of love sounds haunting and so it should be. Well written
May 5th, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A ghost of love sounds haunting and so it should be. Well written
May 5th, 2026 03:47
The ghost that saves.
orchidee said:
This reminds me of a story, of a little girl who didn\'t want to go to church with her mum and dad, as she said she didn\'t want to meet the (Holy) Ghost! More often called the Holy Spirit now.
May 5th, 2026 02:28
orchidee said:
This reminds me of a story, of a little girl who didn\'t want to go to church with her mum and dad, as she said she didn\'t want to meet the (Holy) Ghost! More often called the Holy Spirit now.
May 5th, 2026 02:28
Fearful and Terrified.
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting story and picture David metaphoric it tells its tale well.
May 4th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting story and picture David metaphoric it tells its tale well.
May 4th, 2026 03:52
Faith
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem revolves around faith and the human experience of despair and hope. It explores the theme of divine presence and the power of prayer in times of darkness.
May 3rd, 2026 05:27
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem revolves around faith and the human experience of despair and hope. It explores the theme of divine presence and the power of prayer in times of darkness.
May 3rd, 2026 05:27
Faith
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed poem that tells its story in glory and wonderful images. Nicely done
May 3rd, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed poem that tells its story in glory and wonderful images. Nicely done
May 3rd, 2026 04:16
Faith
arqios said:
At first; it felt like it was about the he rapture but this is close enough🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 01:07
arqios said:
At first; it felt like it was about the he rapture but this is close enough🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 01:07
Faith
Poetic Dan said:
I do not follow your religion but that was one beautiful rhyme. Perfect for to the end, really felt the shine. Thank you for your time
May 3rd, 2026 01:07
Poetic Dan said:
I do not follow your religion but that was one beautiful rhyme. Perfect for to the end, really felt the shine. Thank you for your time
May 3rd, 2026 01:07
The Guillotine Must Fall.
arqios said:
Emma would\'ve been twice depressed. Couldn\'t help thinking how what he did solve any of their problems. Too sad for tears. Gripping read amigo.🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 07:59
arqios said:
Emma would\'ve been twice depressed. Couldn\'t help thinking how what he did solve any of their problems. Too sad for tears. Gripping read amigo.🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 07:59
The Guillotine Must Fall.
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of guilt, innocence, and the tragic consequences of a misunderstood situation. It reflects on the struggles of a father caught in a web of circumstances that lead to his wrongful conviction and impending execution. Well written.
May 2nd, 2026 06:38
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of guilt, innocence, and the tragic consequences of a misunderstood situation. It reflects on the struggles of a father caught in a web of circumstances that lead to his wrongful conviction and impending execution. Well written.
May 2nd, 2026 06:38
The Guillotine Must Fall.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of tragedy and confused human motives all of which seem to have no malice just tragedy. Well written
May 2nd, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of tragedy and confused human motives all of which seem to have no malice just tragedy. Well written
May 2nd, 2026 04:28
Salute
arqios said:
Reminded me of Teddy Roosevelt charging up that hill (in Cuba, if memory serves) but hoping all journeys arrive at Kindness. Made me mull about life stuff🕊️🙏🏻
May 1st, 2026 18:19
arqios said:
Reminded me of Teddy Roosevelt charging up that hill (in Cuba, if memory serves) but hoping all journeys arrive at Kindness. Made me mull about life stuff🕊️🙏🏻
May 1st, 2026 18:19
Salute
Friendship said:
Nicely worded; Your poem reflects on the journey of life, emphasizing the beauty and challenges faced along the way.
May 1st, 2026 04:22
Friendship said:
Nicely worded; Your poem reflects on the journey of life, emphasizing the beauty and challenges faced along the way.
May 1st, 2026 04:22
Salute
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic blessing in this write. Well imaged and worded.
May 1st, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic blessing in this write. Well imaged and worded.
May 1st, 2026 03:47
For Crying Out Loud
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and loaded with not only emotion but the sadness of the human condition. Well worded my friend and a fave
April 30th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and loaded with not only emotion but the sadness of the human condition. Well worded my friend and a fave
April 30th, 2026 04:33
Down this dark street.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes somewhat surreal in wording as it proceeds. The message is also cryptic lending to its intrigue well done
April 29th, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes somewhat surreal in wording as it proceeds. The message is also cryptic lending to its intrigue well done
April 29th, 2026 04:46
Toby and the Monarch Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem is the contrast between the stark reality of brutality and nature\'s peaceful beauty. A nicely done piece David
April 28th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem is the contrast between the stark reality of brutality and nature\'s peaceful beauty. A nicely done piece David
April 28th, 2026 04:34
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