Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Maysie Hayseed.
orchidee said:
Good write D.
Apart from the real difficulties speech impediments can have, I can\'t shay \'Shee shellsh sheea shellsh....\'. after a gin or three! lol. Good acting there from me, yes?!
March 24th, 2024 03:10
orchidee said:
Good write D.
Apart from the real difficulties speech impediments can have, I can\'t shay \'Shee shellsh sheea shellsh....\'. after a gin or three! lol. Good acting there from me, yes?!
March 24th, 2024 03:10
The Money Girls.
Bobby O said:
Really nice. And I absorbed a metaphor that speaks and squeaks life w keen observance. Merkel is to Churchill as Gun Girls are to Dillinger
And as Caitlin is to Wemby.
Really nice piece
March 21st, 2024 07:00
Bobby O said:
Really nice. And I absorbed a metaphor that speaks and squeaks life w keen observance. Merkel is to Churchill as Gun Girls are to Dillinger
And as Caitlin is to Wemby.
Really nice piece
March 21st, 2024 07:00
The Money Girls.
Bobby O said:
Really nice. And I absorbed a metaphor that speaks and squeaks life w keen observance. Merkel is to Churchill as Gun Girls are to Dillinger
And as Caitlin is to Wemby.
Really nice piece
March 21st, 2024 07:00
Bobby O said:
Really nice. And I absorbed a metaphor that speaks and squeaks life w keen observance. Merkel is to Churchill as Gun Girls are to Dillinger
And as Caitlin is to Wemby.
Really nice piece
March 21st, 2024 07:00
The Lady Who Liked Mangos.
Goldfinch60 said:
May she never stop dancing for you David.
Andy
March 20th, 2024 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
May she never stop dancing for you David.
Andy
March 20th, 2024 02:27
Who Gains?
MendedFences27 said:
If it\'s \"work,\" it is pointless. If it\'s an obsession you must do it. If it\'s something you love and it\'s profitable you are a lucky S.O.B.. Sorry for my abbreviated language, but your poem struck a chord with me.
I agree life is a comedy. It takes an immense sense of humor to survive.
A very poignant poem. - Phil A.
March 17th, 2024 11:01
MendedFences27 said:
If it\'s \"work,\" it is pointless. If it\'s an obsession you must do it. If it\'s something you love and it\'s profitable you are a lucky S.O.B.. Sorry for my abbreviated language, but your poem struck a chord with me.
I agree life is a comedy. It takes an immense sense of humor to survive.
A very poignant poem. - Phil A.
March 17th, 2024 11:01
Who Gains?
orchidee said:
Me, me, me, give it all to me! I must gain, trample over everyone else, etc.
Me being selfish there. lol.
March 17th, 2024 02:33
orchidee said:
Me, me, me, give it all to me! I must gain, trample over everyone else, etc.
Me being selfish there. lol.
March 17th, 2024 02:33
Rosa Louise McCauley Parks.
orchidee said:
Yes, I covered her in a short course on blacks. We mustn\'t say \'coloureds\' it seems.
March 16th, 2024 03:08
orchidee said:
Yes, I covered her in a short course on blacks. We mustn\'t say \'coloureds\' it seems.
March 16th, 2024 03:08
Today I went to the Valley of Erudition.
orchidee said:
Good write D.
Nothing wrong with a bit of erudition!
March 14th, 2024 03:07
orchidee said:
Good write D.
Nothing wrong with a bit of erudition!
March 14th, 2024 03:07
Do I make you Nervous?
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David and I hope that soon you will be able to help.
Andy
March 14th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David and I hope that soon you will be able to help.
Andy
March 14th, 2024 01:41
Will you be ready.
Bobby O said:
That line “embrace the gypsy” is do exact , it’s NOW and true and also perfect counterpoint. How cool is that!$
March 13th, 2024 04:09
Bobby O said:
That line “embrace the gypsy” is do exact , it’s NOW and true and also perfect counterpoint. How cool is that!$
March 13th, 2024 04:09
Do I make you Nervous?
Bobby O said:
Check and double check and the inquisition itself w repeated refrain suggests the dory of a guess that makes a statement
March 13th, 2024 03:56
Bobby O said:
Check and double check and the inquisition itself w repeated refrain suggests the dory of a guess that makes a statement
March 13th, 2024 03:56
Do I make you Nervous?
Cassie58 said:
Song lyrics and I like the message and the repetition. Meeting new people can make you nervous, particularly if a recent relationship has left you suffering. Takes time and courage, one step at a time. Have a good Wednesday David.
March 13th, 2024 02:45
Cassie58 said:
Song lyrics and I like the message and the repetition. Meeting new people can make you nervous, particularly if a recent relationship has left you suffering. Takes time and courage, one step at a time. Have a good Wednesday David.
March 13th, 2024 02:45
Will you be ready.
Saxon Crow said:
A lovely, passionate poem David. Those noisy Arch angels!
March 12th, 2024 05:32
Saxon Crow said:
A lovely, passionate poem David. Those noisy Arch angels!
March 12th, 2024 05:32
Will you be ready.
Goldfinch60 said:
I am awake David and that love is already with me.
Andy
March 12th, 2024 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
I am awake David and that love is already with me.
Andy
March 12th, 2024 02:51
Agile Lads and Resolute Ladies.
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, as we get older we appreciate things in a more positive way.
Andy
March 12th, 2024 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, as we get older we appreciate things in a more positive way.
Andy
March 12th, 2024 02:46
On The Road to Vexation.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, you just never know what is about to happen in life.
Andy
March 11th, 2024 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, you just never know what is about to happen in life.
Andy
March 11th, 2024 02:26
On The Road to Vexation.
Doggerel Dave said:
Great poem - I can relate to that unease - I\'ve felt it too. After dark deserted road with some moon shine and low street lighting. Stranger bulky with, as he got closer, rings and tats... silently passed me by...
March 10th, 2024 23:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Great poem - I can relate to that unease - I\'ve felt it too. After dark deserted road with some moon shine and low street lighting. Stranger bulky with, as he got closer, rings and tats... silently passed me by...
March 10th, 2024 23:59
The Pearl Necklace.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words David showing a love so strong.
Andy
March 10th, 2024 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words David showing a love so strong.
Andy
March 10th, 2024 02:07
The Pearl Necklace.
JulesBurnsit said:
Made me weep a bit, so early in the morning. Fun fact - \"The Great Banyan of Kolkata, which has been tracked carefully for many years, currently has 2880 supplementary trunks.\" (Wikipedia). So much room to meet our many loves beneath! High hopes that we might greet them under its warm shadows in our dreams.
March 9th, 2024 07:48
JulesBurnsit said:
Made me weep a bit, so early in the morning. Fun fact - \"The Great Banyan of Kolkata, which has been tracked carefully for many years, currently has 2880 supplementary trunks.\" (Wikipedia). So much room to meet our many loves beneath! High hopes that we might greet them under its warm shadows in our dreams.
March 9th, 2024 07:48
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure those dances will always be with her David.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure those dances will always be with her David.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:23
Joseph’s speech at the funeral of his wife of 25 years.
Goldfinch60 said:
~Wonderful homage to one you love David.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
~Wonderful homage to one you love David.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:22
Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, I care as well.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, I care as well.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:06
Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice.
Bobby O said:
I love this. It means several things all at once with recognition of worth amongst the attribute. Real nice MR W.
March 6th, 2024 01:49
Bobby O said:
I love this. It means several things all at once with recognition of worth amongst the attribute. Real nice MR W.
March 6th, 2024 01:49
Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice.
Cassie58 said:
I read your stanzas several times David. They had a calming effect on me. We all need a caretaker in our lives, especially when the going gets tough. Have s happy Tuesday.
March 5th, 2024 02:40
Cassie58 said:
I read your stanzas several times David. They had a calming effect on me. We all need a caretaker in our lives, especially when the going gets tough. Have s happy Tuesday.
March 5th, 2024 02:40
Hair Today....
Doggerel Dave said:
Felt like notes from an old case file - if so, none the worse for that.
March 4th, 2024 06:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Felt like notes from an old case file - if so, none the worse for that.
March 4th, 2024 06:55
Hair Today....
Michael Edwards said:
Captured me and few do - I skip past most - great pieceof writing.
March 4th, 2024 03:26
Michael Edwards said:
Captured me and few do - I skip past most - great pieceof writing.
March 4th, 2024 03:26
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