Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
The Battle and the Baby
sorenbarrett said:
Inocense is most aluring and draws a great deal of support. A most lovely write.
November 4th, 2024 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Inocense is most aluring and draws a great deal of support. A most lovely write.
November 4th, 2024 04:32
AVARICE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, the avarice in our world is getting worse each moment in our lives.
Andy
November 4th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, the avarice in our world is getting worse each moment in our lives.
Andy
November 4th, 2024 02:48
AVARICE.
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! This is so beautifully rendered I\'m on the fence over whether it\'s what it seems at first glance or a grand and damning metaphor. With a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, this is too lovely, despite its ghastliness. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 12:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! This is so beautifully rendered I\'m on the fence over whether it\'s what it seems at first glance or a grand and damning metaphor. With a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, this is too lovely, despite its ghastliness. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 12:19
AVARICE.
sorenbarrett said:
A fantastic write of the avarice of men and the callousness toward others in their quest. So well worded and rhymed a masterpiece
November 3rd, 2024 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
A fantastic write of the avarice of men and the callousness toward others in their quest. So well worded and rhymed a masterpiece
November 3rd, 2024 09:18
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things that we can do in life pushes away the darkness David, Good write.
Andy
November 3rd, 2024 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things that we can do in life pushes away the darkness David, Good write.
Andy
November 3rd, 2024 02:28
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
sorenbarrett said:
The sad aspects of aging depicted well in attempts to live one\'s dreams with incapacitation. Well composed in solid verse
November 2nd, 2024 19:47
sorenbarrett said:
The sad aspects of aging depicted well in attempts to live one\'s dreams with incapacitation. Well composed in solid verse
November 2nd, 2024 19:47
Salute
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message that I wish we all could adhere to. The last line is my favorite and I wish all would honor.
November 2nd, 2024 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message that I wish we all could adhere to. The last line is my favorite and I wish all would honor.
November 2nd, 2024 10:05
Salute
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write David and that last line is so meaningful, if only we all could find kindness.
Andy
November 2nd, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write David and that last line is so meaningful, if only we all could find kindness.
Andy
November 2nd, 2024 02:21
The Ghost that saves
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept, the ghost of love, makes one ponder. I love when a new thought comes in a poem. Very creative.
November 1st, 2024 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept, the ghost of love, makes one ponder. I love when a new thought comes in a poem. Very creative.
November 1st, 2024 03:51
The Ghost that saves
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be there for you David.
Andy
November 1st, 2024 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be there for you David.
Andy
November 1st, 2024 02:04
The Days of Rock and Roll.
Bobby O said:
They Day with you and happiness and I imagine especially because of the title soundtrack. It is even adjusted by volume as you move around cause it’s gotta hit you right she comes Kathy’s clown. I like Ray Davis. Will you tell me your name?
October 31st, 2024 02:49
Bobby O said:
They Day with you and happiness and I imagine especially because of the title soundtrack. It is even adjusted by volume as you move around cause it’s gotta hit you right she comes Kathy’s clown. I like Ray Davis. Will you tell me your name?
October 31st, 2024 02:49
The Days of Rock and Roll.
arqios said:
Honest, with it being the Hallowe’en week I was almost expecting a ghoulish twist at the second dance segment! Phew, all this marketing around us is messing with my flow. But the sweet tenderness meanders alongside the days of wine and roses… nothing like pure, simple bliss even if a tad poignant. 👍🏻👍🏻
October 30th, 2024 05:45
arqios said:
Honest, with it being the Hallowe’en week I was almost expecting a ghoulish twist at the second dance segment! Phew, all this marketing around us is messing with my flow. But the sweet tenderness meanders alongside the days of wine and roses… nothing like pure, simple bliss even if a tad poignant. 👍🏻👍🏻
October 30th, 2024 05:45
The Days of Rock and Roll.
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful this poem speaks to all those old memories fondly tucked away. The smoothness of the read made it feel fluid like a dream. Very nice
October 30th, 2024 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful this poem speaks to all those old memories fondly tucked away. The smoothness of the read made it feel fluid like a dream. Very nice
October 30th, 2024 04:45
The Days of Rock and Roll.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, back in those days of Rock and Roll life was magnificent.
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, back in those days of Rock and Roll life was magnificent.
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:55
Melanie disappears.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, sometimes it is strange what happens in life to get back what had gone..
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, sometimes it is strange what happens in life to get back what had gone..
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:19
Melanie disappears.
arqios said:
Fantastic symbolism! We disappear when significant persons disappear from our lives and I could just imagine if this happened physically - like a sci-fi Twilight Zone type of film scenario. Good stuff here!
October 29th, 2024 05:18
arqios said:
Fantastic symbolism! We disappear when significant persons disappear from our lives and I could just imagine if this happened physically - like a sci-fi Twilight Zone type of film scenario. Good stuff here!
October 29th, 2024 05:18
Melanie disappears.
sorenbarrett said:
They say pray for what you need, I say wishful thinking by itself may do little but if you want it bad enough you will find a way. A great message in a surreal story
October 29th, 2024 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
They say pray for what you need, I say wishful thinking by itself may do little but if you want it bad enough you will find a way. A great message in a surreal story
October 29th, 2024 04:54
Flowers and Powers.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words David, flowers can be so meaningful.
Andy
October 29th, 2024 03:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words David, flowers can be so meaningful.
Andy
October 29th, 2024 03:48
Flowers and Powers.
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice David you have captured virtues in each and I love them just for their natural beauty. Always have loved flowers if they are good enough for the bees they are good enough for me. Nicely written, it is not easy to incorporate so many names in one poem
October 28th, 2024 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice David you have captured virtues in each and I love them just for their natural beauty. Always have loved flowers if they are good enough for the bees they are good enough for me. Nicely written, it is not easy to incorporate so many names in one poem
October 28th, 2024 09:45
Flowers and Powers.
arqios said:
These I have yet to properly learn having undergone an impoverished tutelage of bloom and green. My love of gardening the only redeeming thing in this scenario.
October 28th, 2024 07:05
arqios said:
These I have yet to properly learn having undergone an impoverished tutelage of bloom and green. My love of gardening the only redeeming thing in this scenario.
October 28th, 2024 07:05
I have seen, I have heard and I believe.
Goldfinch60 said:
Gentleness in our lives is so wonderful and healing David, fine words.
Andy
October 28th, 2024 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Gentleness in our lives is so wonderful and healing David, fine words.
Andy
October 28th, 2024 02:06
I have seen, I have heard and I believe.
sorenbarrett said:
The last four lines in this poem were my favorite. This poem weeps with tragic sorrow of disillusion. Very powerful
October 27th, 2024 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
The last four lines in this poem were my favorite. This poem weeps with tragic sorrow of disillusion. Very powerful
October 27th, 2024 05:58
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