Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Go Nanna Go Nanna
Bragee said:
Great story!
I love that you were only thinking of one’s own sadness but able to encourage someone to reflect on their happiness in the end.
December 12th, 2023 22:51
Bragee said:
Great story!
I love that you were only thinking of one’s own sadness but able to encourage someone to reflect on their happiness in the end.
December 12th, 2023 22:51
Go Nanna Go Nanna
Norman Flagtea said:
Very moving! I like poems that tell a story...
December 12th, 2023 15:38
Norman Flagtea said:
Very moving! I like poems that tell a story...
December 12th, 2023 15:38
The most hated man in America.
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words but I hope it is fiction David and that you have a good life.
Andy
December 9th, 2023 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words but I hope it is fiction David and that you have a good life.
Andy
December 9th, 2023 01:39
Same Sky Different Rain.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, may that fear never come to them.
Andy
December 6th, 2023 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, may that fear never come to them.
Andy
December 6th, 2023 02:25
Same Sky Different Rain.
David Wakeling said:
A Corroboree is a ceremonial meeting of Australian Aboriginals, where people interact with the Dreamtime through music, costume, and dance. It is sacred to them and people from outside the community are not permitted to partake or observe the event. Sorry
December 5th, 2023 18:09
David Wakeling said:
A Corroboree is a ceremonial meeting of Australian Aboriginals, where people interact with the Dreamtime through music, costume, and dance. It is sacred to them and people from outside the community are not permitted to partake or observe the event. Sorry
December 5th, 2023 18:09
Same Sky Different Rain.
Natalie Gladmir said:
Good and merry time spending. May I join your company?
December 5th, 2023 16:41
Natalie Gladmir said:
Good and merry time spending. May I join your company?
December 5th, 2023 16:41
The Long Walk to the Bath.
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.Something for the kids to sing around the fire place art night
December 4th, 2023 14:56
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.Something for the kids to sing around the fire place art night
December 4th, 2023 14:56
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
David Wakeling said:
I can only hope so. Thanks for commenting.Much appreciated
December 2nd, 2023 03:00
David Wakeling said:
I can only hope so. Thanks for commenting.Much appreciated
December 2nd, 2023 03:00
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dance be there for you David and maybe the fire will be in your eyes as well.
Andy
December 2nd, 2023 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dance be there for you David and maybe the fire will be in your eyes as well.
Andy
December 2nd, 2023 02:16
Forever.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much for commenting.It is much appreciated
December 1st, 2023 05:38
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much for commenting.It is much appreciated
December 1st, 2023 05:38
Forever.
Cassie58 said:
Unexpected love comes calling, only to find it could be fleeting. Such a disappointment to believe it isn’t going to last. Beautifully expressed poetry.
December 1st, 2023 02:37
Cassie58 said:
Unexpected love comes calling, only to find it could be fleeting. Such a disappointment to believe it isn’t going to last. Beautifully expressed poetry.
December 1st, 2023 02:37
AVARICE.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you mi amigo. Your comments are always much appreciated.
December 1st, 2023 02:20
David Wakeling said:
Thank you mi amigo. Your comments are always much appreciated.
December 1st, 2023 02:20
AVARICE.
Bobby O said:
It’s speaks different with each read. That in itself is laudable, making me think is cool. The piece has a weariness, a sorta dunkigation lurks like those at work of their fathers and his and his. But there’s more here, I sense a comment about the inevitability of station, and the empathy you drew had a fatalistic tone ie: there but for the grace of God go I.
This is a masterpiece worthy of study and my thought are offered from a humble view. Props sir, Props.
November 30th, 2023 20:58
Bobby O said:
It’s speaks different with each read. That in itself is laudable, making me think is cool. The piece has a weariness, a sorta dunkigation lurks like those at work of their fathers and his and his. But there’s more here, I sense a comment about the inevitability of station, and the empathy you drew had a fatalistic tone ie: there but for the grace of God go I.
This is a masterpiece worthy of study and my thought are offered from a humble view. Props sir, Props.
November 30th, 2023 20:58
The Past.
David Wakeling said:
Good to hear.You seem a happy person.Thanks for reading and commenting
November 30th, 2023 06:20
David Wakeling said:
Good to hear.You seem a happy person.Thanks for reading and commenting
November 30th, 2023 06:20
The Past.
Goldfinch60 said:
Mu past was filled with joy and wonder David and brought me to the wonderful place that I am in now..
Andy
November 30th, 2023 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Mu past was filled with joy and wonder David and brought me to the wonderful place that I am in now..
Andy
November 30th, 2023 02:48
Today I went to the Valley of Erudition.
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
November 22nd, 2023 02:31
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
November 22nd, 2023 02:31
Today I went to the Valley of Erudition.
Goldfinch60 said:
There certainly are things that are joyous in this world David.
Andy
November 22nd, 2023 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
There certainly are things that are joyous in this world David.
Andy
November 22nd, 2023 02:11
Joseph and the last Orange
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, some people will do anything for an orange.
Andy
November 21st, 2023 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, some people will do anything for an orange.
Andy
November 21st, 2023 01:51
Joseph and the last Orange
Kinsley Lee said:
The old poor man\'s story, isn\'t it? Thank you so much.
November 20th, 2023 17:50
Kinsley Lee said:
The old poor man\'s story, isn\'t it? Thank you so much.
November 20th, 2023 17:50
Joseph and the last Orange
David Wakeling said:
Thank you I think I\'ll just go an get an orange.Just kidding
November 20th, 2023 17:25
David Wakeling said:
Thank you I think I\'ll just go an get an orange.Just kidding
November 20th, 2023 17:25
Veronica says goodbye.
Goldfinch60 said:
Hooked on your words David, thank you. Suicide is so awful for others.
Andy
November 20th, 2023 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Hooked on your words David, thank you. Suicide is so awful for others.
Andy
November 20th, 2023 02:22
Veronica says goodbye.
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Yikes - a repercussion of humankind’s free will. Riveting reminiscing before the fatal act … suicide is always tragic.
November 19th, 2023 15:10
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Yikes - a repercussion of humankind’s free will. Riveting reminiscing before the fatal act … suicide is always tragic.
November 19th, 2023 15:10
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