Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Mrs Karminski’s Ornaments.
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting method of tying together of several unrelated events through items on a shelf. This poem has become a tapestry
November 15th, 2024 21:46
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting method of tying together of several unrelated events through items on a shelf. This poem has become a tapestry
November 15th, 2024 21:46
Deirdre
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and written with such soft reverence. It rings with humanity and the truth of relationships that are what they are
November 15th, 2024 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and written with such soft reverence. It rings with humanity and the truth of relationships that are what they are
November 15th, 2024 05:33
Deirdre
Bobby O said:
Mr Wakeling , I really liked everything about this. I didn’t expect the end but the content held my attention such that yiu were kind of thinking for me. How perfect is that cuz what better way to deliver a heartfelt ending.
November 15th, 2024 02:19
Bobby O said:
Mr Wakeling , I really liked everything about this. I didn’t expect the end but the content held my attention such that yiu were kind of thinking for me. How perfect is that cuz what better way to deliver a heartfelt ending.
November 15th, 2024 02:19
Deirdre
FrasMac said:
Pathos. Aching, personal truth, right there. thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 16:45
FrasMac said:
Pathos. Aching, personal truth, right there. thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 16:45
Deirdre
Cassie58 said:
Oh my. This is such a touching write David. I’ve got a tear in my eye. Life can be so cruel and I know all about cancer. Such a deep sense of loss here and sadness too. Poignant poetry. Touched the core.
November 14th, 2024 16:43
Cassie58 said:
Oh my. This is such a touching write David. I’ve got a tear in my eye. Life can be so cruel and I know all about cancer. Such a deep sense of loss here and sadness too. Poignant poetry. Touched the core.
November 14th, 2024 16:43
The House of Tears.
Dan Williams said:
This is just wonderful. Pondering these last years also drives me to cry, to write. Nice work.
November 14th, 2024 00:26
Dan Williams said:
This is just wonderful. Pondering these last years also drives me to cry, to write. Nice work.
November 14th, 2024 00:26
Sharlene\'s Weekend
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like someone I once knew. A fun read set in great dialect.
November 13th, 2024 20:57
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like someone I once knew. A fun read set in great dialect.
November 13th, 2024 20:57
The House of Tears.
sorenbarrett said:
At first, I thought you were riding about an old folks home which might be the case. Nonetheless, it sounds even more grim and maybe a morgue or mortuary. Then again this may be a metaphor for how we see ourselves and others nicely written.
November 12th, 2024 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
At first, I thought you were riding about an old folks home which might be the case. Nonetheless, it sounds even more grim and maybe a morgue or mortuary. Then again this may be a metaphor for how we see ourselves and others nicely written.
November 12th, 2024 14:44
The House of Tears.
Cassie58 said:
A most poignant read David. Your stanzas beautifully conveyed. All best wishes.
November 12th, 2024 10:46
Cassie58 said:
A most poignant read David. Your stanzas beautifully conveyed. All best wishes.
November 12th, 2024 10:46
The House of Tears.
2781 said:
For that is the end of all men; and the living will lay it to his heart.
November 12th, 2024 09:22
2781 said:
For that is the end of all men; and the living will lay it to his heart.
November 12th, 2024 09:22
The House of Tears.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Excellent! Rings beautifully and has an air of truth about it. Welcome to the house of tears indeed! Bravo! 🌹👏
November 12th, 2024 07:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Excellent! Rings beautifully and has an air of truth about it. Welcome to the house of tears indeed! Bravo! 🌹👏
November 12th, 2024 07:05
The Harsh Light of Day.
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all go somehow, sometime David.
Andy
November 11th, 2024 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all go somehow, sometime David.
Andy
November 11th, 2024 02:28
The Harsh Light of Day.
arqios said:
That’s quite a way to word the feelings and notions on the subject! 👍🏻
November 10th, 2024 17:03
arqios said:
That’s quite a way to word the feelings and notions on the subject! 👍🏻
November 10th, 2024 17:03
The Harsh Light of Day.
sorenbarrett said:
The most interesting poem and the point made is that it is better to fight for what one has and to give up and die. Wonderfully stated.
November 10th, 2024 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
The most interesting poem and the point made is that it is better to fight for what one has and to give up and die. Wonderfully stated.
November 10th, 2024 12:02
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Lorenz said:
Kolo is a traditional serbian dance !
November 10th, 2024 09:26
Lorenz said:
Kolo is a traditional serbian dance !
November 10th, 2024 09:26
The SLAYING.
Dan Williams said:
Amen. \"Cold seizing hands fondle them, imitating security,\" leads into a well scripted summary of this world. Sad enough to be true. Nice.
November 10th, 2024 01:19
Dan Williams said:
Amen. \"Cold seizing hands fondle them, imitating security,\" leads into a well scripted summary of this world. Sad enough to be true. Nice.
November 10th, 2024 01:19
Crying out load
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful poem David. Loved each of the scenes you painted with your words. Your closing line encapsulates the entire poem. Just great work. - Phil A
November 9th, 2024 21:42
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful poem David. Loved each of the scenes you painted with your words. Your closing line encapsulates the entire poem. Just great work. - Phil A
November 9th, 2024 21:42
Crying out load
sorenbarrett said:
A dark right and commentary on the state of our society. Well expressed and with a deep sense of sadness.
November 9th, 2024 15:35
sorenbarrett said:
A dark right and commentary on the state of our society. Well expressed and with a deep sense of sadness.
November 9th, 2024 15:35
The SLAYING.
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all go there in the end David, some more peacefully than others.
Andy
November 9th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all go there in the end David, some more peacefully than others.
Andy
November 9th, 2024 02:48
The SLAYING.
sorenbarrett said:
Sharp raw and savage it’s sparkles with darkness. My favorite part is the last few lines that send a shiver down your spine.
November 8th, 2024 17:49
sorenbarrett said:
Sharp raw and savage it’s sparkles with darkness. My favorite part is the last few lines that send a shiver down your spine.
November 8th, 2024 17:49
The dark days
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words David and that last verse could be me.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words David and that last verse could be me.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:41
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