Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
The SLAYING.
Dan Williams said:
Amen. \"Cold seizing hands fondle them, imitating security,\" leads into a well scripted summary of this world. Sad enough to be true. Nice.
November 10th, 2024 01:19
Dan Williams said:
Amen. \"Cold seizing hands fondle them, imitating security,\" leads into a well scripted summary of this world. Sad enough to be true. Nice.
November 10th, 2024 01:19
Crying out load
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful poem David. Loved each of the scenes you painted with your words. Your closing line encapsulates the entire poem. Just great work. - Phil A
November 9th, 2024 21:42
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful poem David. Loved each of the scenes you painted with your words. Your closing line encapsulates the entire poem. Just great work. - Phil A
November 9th, 2024 21:42
Crying out load
sorenbarrett said:
A dark right and commentary on the state of our society. Well expressed and with a deep sense of sadness.
November 9th, 2024 15:35
sorenbarrett said:
A dark right and commentary on the state of our society. Well expressed and with a deep sense of sadness.
November 9th, 2024 15:35
The SLAYING.
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all go there in the end David, some more peacefully than others.
Andy
November 9th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all go there in the end David, some more peacefully than others.
Andy
November 9th, 2024 02:48
The SLAYING.
sorenbarrett said:
Sharp raw and savage it’s sparkles with darkness. My favorite part is the last few lines that send a shiver down your spine.
November 8th, 2024 17:49
sorenbarrett said:
Sharp raw and savage it’s sparkles with darkness. My favorite part is the last few lines that send a shiver down your spine.
November 8th, 2024 17:49
The dark days
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words David and that last verse could be me.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words David and that last verse could be me.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:41
The dark days
Dan Williams said:
This is just wonderful. There are some among us that can hear the violins, I can fortunately can. Thanks for this.
November 8th, 2024 01:31
Dan Williams said:
This is just wonderful. There are some among us that can hear the violins, I can fortunately can. Thanks for this.
November 8th, 2024 01:31
The dark days
arqios said:
Evolutionary poetry and survival of the wittiest, perhaps… and the thoughts begin to randomise… my fault, not yours!
November 7th, 2024 06:50
arqios said:
Evolutionary poetry and survival of the wittiest, perhaps… and the thoughts begin to randomise… my fault, not yours!
November 7th, 2024 06:50
The dark days
sorenbarrett said:
Creationism vs evolution the old science of faith issue. Nicely stated in great verse and clever wording. Nicely done.
November 7th, 2024 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Creationism vs evolution the old science of faith issue. Nicely stated in great verse and clever wording. Nicely done.
November 7th, 2024 03:46
The dark days
orchidee said:
I did see someone doing a chimp impression, but it didn\'t change my mind - I don\'t believe we evolved from apes.
November 7th, 2024 03:15
orchidee said:
I did see someone doing a chimp impression, but it didn\'t change my mind - I don\'t believe we evolved from apes.
November 7th, 2024 03:15
The Cat’s Tale.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, with age our minds still think we can do the things we used to but nowadays it is just wishful thinking David.
Andy
November 7th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, with age our minds still think we can do the things we used to but nowadays it is just wishful thinking David.
Andy
November 7th, 2024 02:25
The Cat’s Tale.
arqios said:
On the human side of things it’s hard to explain but the cat’s tale covered the most salient bases.
November 6th, 2024 06:56
arqios said:
On the human side of things it’s hard to explain but the cat’s tale covered the most salient bases.
November 6th, 2024 06:56
The Cat’s Tale.
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor of age but even as personification alone it holds its own. Lovely
November 6th, 2024 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor of age but even as personification alone it holds its own. Lovely
November 6th, 2024 06:23
Sugar and Salt
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people are just not grateful in life David.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people are just not grateful in life David.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:58
The Battle and the Baby
Goldfinch60 said:
The innocence of new life is so appealing David.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
The innocence of new life is so appealing David.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:48
AVARICE.
NafisaSB said:
a poignant poem with a beautiful and true message - well done
November 5th, 2024 00:44
NafisaSB said:
a poignant poem with a beautiful and true message - well done
November 5th, 2024 00:44
The Battle and the Baby
sorenbarrett said:
Inocense is most aluring and draws a great deal of support. A most lovely write.
November 4th, 2024 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Inocense is most aluring and draws a great deal of support. A most lovely write.
November 4th, 2024 04:32
AVARICE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, the avarice in our world is getting worse each moment in our lives.
Andy
November 4th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, the avarice in our world is getting worse each moment in our lives.
Andy
November 4th, 2024 02:48
AVARICE.
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! This is so beautifully rendered I\'m on the fence over whether it\'s what it seems at first glance or a grand and damning metaphor. With a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, this is too lovely, despite its ghastliness. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 12:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! This is so beautifully rendered I\'m on the fence over whether it\'s what it seems at first glance or a grand and damning metaphor. With a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, this is too lovely, despite its ghastliness. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 12:19
AVARICE.
sorenbarrett said:
A fantastic write of the avarice of men and the callousness toward others in their quest. So well worded and rhymed a masterpiece
November 3rd, 2024 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
A fantastic write of the avarice of men and the callousness toward others in their quest. So well worded and rhymed a masterpiece
November 3rd, 2024 09:18
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