Comments received on poems by -The poet in me
I hate poetry
BlessedbyGod said:
I must apologize if any of my work contributed to this, I tend to write with what is in my heart at the time
March 28th, 2023 21:42
BlessedbyGod said:
I must apologize if any of my work contributed to this, I tend to write with what is in my heart at the time
March 28th, 2023 21:42
I hate poetry
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep on going. You have read 30 here and a way to go yet - but there\'s much more out there than here - you have a lifetime of reding ahead of you - happy times...
Neat write, BTW
March 28th, 2023 20:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep on going. You have read 30 here and a way to go yet - but there\'s much more out there than here - you have a lifetime of reding ahead of you - happy times...
Neat write, BTW
March 28th, 2023 20:58
I need a new home
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
Like Jim Morrison said...
Quoting... \"All poetry has wolves.\"
Like everything in this life...
It can be used for good, right proper reasons.
Or bad terrible reasons.
Like... a Bible, or a Tool, a Hammer, A knife.
Things have the use and intention you give them... as they always did.
A rock... can crush a nut, or crush a skull.
Lies... usually never good.
But some minor lies, can be a lesser evil.
Please do write a book.
Write 2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10...
100
1000
A million...
Write a gazillion books.
You can...
Well... maybe so... can I.
March 24th, 2023 17:42
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
Like Jim Morrison said...
Quoting... \"All poetry has wolves.\"
Like everything in this life...
It can be used for good, right proper reasons.
Or bad terrible reasons.
Like... a Bible, or a Tool, a Hammer, A knife.
Things have the use and intention you give them... as they always did.
A rock... can crush a nut, or crush a skull.
Lies... usually never good.
But some minor lies, can be a lesser evil.
Please do write a book.
Write 2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10...
100
1000
A million...
Write a gazillion books.
You can...
Well... maybe so... can I.
March 24th, 2023 17:42
The poet in me
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
I find all Poetry to be most beautiful...
Well... maybe really not... all poetry...
Let\'s say most...
From E.A. Poe to Jim Morrison, even... Children\'s poetry.
I believe there must be a poet... inside many of us...
People with... Extraordinary skill...
Well... matter of opinion really.
Some may like... even many... doesn\'t mean everyone.
Some people like... Meters in verses... and stanzas or whatever... sonnets...
Fine by me.
Mathematic perfection, any kind of... perfection...
Doesn\'t very much appeal to me.
I enjoy more... sort of free-style poetry and writing.
A bit... like Jim did.
In my humble opinion...
And some may share or not...
One of the greatest poets, ever.
And... yours is a good poem.
I enjoy it. Keep at it.
March 24th, 2023 17:02
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
I find all Poetry to be most beautiful...
Well... maybe really not... all poetry...
Let\'s say most...
From E.A. Poe to Jim Morrison, even... Children\'s poetry.
I believe there must be a poet... inside many of us...
People with... Extraordinary skill...
Well... matter of opinion really.
Some may like... even many... doesn\'t mean everyone.
Some people like... Meters in verses... and stanzas or whatever... sonnets...
Fine by me.
Mathematic perfection, any kind of... perfection...
Doesn\'t very much appeal to me.
I enjoy more... sort of free-style poetry and writing.
A bit... like Jim did.
In my humble opinion...
And some may share or not...
One of the greatest poets, ever.
And... yours is a good poem.
I enjoy it. Keep at it.
March 24th, 2023 17:02
The poet in me
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a great piece, I think that every poet struggles with this my friend.
You are a great one, never give up
March 24th, 2023 15:46
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a great piece, I think that every poet struggles with this my friend.
You are a great one, never give up
March 24th, 2023 15:46
The poet in me
MendedFences27 said:
Good stuff. I like rhyming. Your poem delivers a point cleverly. Otherpoets here will enjoy this. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 12:59
MendedFences27 said:
Good stuff. I like rhyming. Your poem delivers a point cleverly. Otherpoets here will enjoy this. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 12:59
The poet in me
2781 said:
Who gives songs in the night; Who teaches us more then the beasts of the earth, And makes us wiser than the fowls of heaven?
March 24th, 2023 12:14
2781 said:
Who gives songs in the night; Who teaches us more then the beasts of the earth, And makes us wiser than the fowls of heaven?
March 24th, 2023 12:14
The poet in me
HangingbyaHalo said:
I love this! Sometimes when I write a sit back and wonder where the poet in me gets the courage to write such things. Thank you for sharing.
March 24th, 2023 12:02
HangingbyaHalo said:
I love this! Sometimes when I write a sit back and wonder where the poet in me gets the courage to write such things. Thank you for sharing.
March 24th, 2023 12:02
I need a new home
L. B. Mek said:
from Bukowski\'s, cornered:
\'now
they sit talking about
me: “yes, it’s happened, he’s
finished… it’s
sad…”
“he never had a great deal, did
he?”
“well, no, but now…”
now
they are celebrating my demise
in taverns I no longer
frequent.
now
I drink alone
at this malfunctioning
machine
as the shadows assume
shapes
I fight the slow
retreat
now
my once-promise
dwindling
dwindling
now
lighting more cigarettes
pouring new
drinks
it has been a beautiful
fight
still
is\'
(fight strong, dear poet
enjoy the journey, do not be hasty
let it all unfold, naturally
as it was meant to be
whatever your rewards
however bountiful or desperate
invest in a mindset, acknowledging
you gave it your best!
may you find the wisdom to realise
that\'s as good is it gets...)
March 24th, 2023 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
from Bukowski\'s, cornered:
\'now
they sit talking about
me: “yes, it’s happened, he’s
finished… it’s
sad…”
“he never had a great deal, did
he?”
“well, no, but now…”
now
they are celebrating my demise
in taverns I no longer
frequent.
now
I drink alone
at this malfunctioning
machine
as the shadows assume
shapes
I fight the slow
retreat
now
my once-promise
dwindling
dwindling
now
lighting more cigarettes
pouring new
drinks
it has been a beautiful
fight
still
is\'
(fight strong, dear poet
enjoy the journey, do not be hasty
let it all unfold, naturally
as it was meant to be
whatever your rewards
however bountiful or desperate
invest in a mindset, acknowledging
you gave it your best!
may you find the wisdom to realise
that\'s as good is it gets...)
March 24th, 2023 06:23
My poetic Side
Doggerel Dave said:
Let\'s see how you go...The \'About me\' on your home page should rightfully be up front here. (Possibly too late now...)
So, I hope you enjoy your stay at MPS. It is an interactive site - feel free to read other\'s work, comment and reply, in detail if necessary, to your own.
March 13th, 2023 19:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Let\'s see how you go...The \'About me\' on your home page should rightfully be up front here. (Possibly too late now...)
So, I hope you enjoy your stay at MPS. It is an interactive site - feel free to read other\'s work, comment and reply, in detail if necessary, to your own.
March 13th, 2023 19:43
My poetic Side
Eugene S. said:
May your intro be a beginning and your words create the path! Welcome!
March 13th, 2023 18:10
Eugene S. said:
May your intro be a beginning and your words create the path! Welcome!
March 13th, 2023 18:10
