a watchful eye on the tides
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful flow
and I really liked your print out
it added something I think, a glimpse
to those nuances in your poetic voice
thanks for sharing, dear poet
\'the hidden sands.
Course, jagged, unpolished.

You feel the instability
beneath its surface,
insecurity hidden in the pieces below.\'

\'You know the tide returns
you just dont know
when.

You smell the salt,
you feel the chill,
the goosebumps
on your skin

I send them special - just for you.” she said.\'

April 14th, 2023 03:56