Comments received on poems by CreativelyUninspired
Malpractice
jarcher54 said:
This little soliloquy is near perfect. Modern, sincere, universal yet personal, and above all brave.
November 11th, 2024 01:27
jarcher54 said:
This little soliloquy is near perfect. Modern, sincere, universal yet personal, and above all brave.
November 11th, 2024 01:27
I\'m Fine
2781 said:
I stopped looking in the mirror years ago!
Get a glimpse of myself sometimes, I like who I am.
Wasn\'t always that way.
November 6th, 2023 08:21
2781 said:
I stopped looking in the mirror years ago!
Get a glimpse of myself sometimes, I like who I am.
Wasn\'t always that way.
November 6th, 2023 08:21
A piece of my brain
2781 said:
There is way to much pressure placed on individuals. It\'s healthy to express our feelings as they say \"we are only as sick as our secrets.\"
April 26th, 2023 08:42
2781 said:
There is way to much pressure placed on individuals. It\'s healthy to express our feelings as they say \"we are only as sick as our secrets.\"
April 26th, 2023 08:42
A piece of my brain
Audrey A. said:
You should rest yourself. I find the best times for healing is between 10 pm and 2 am. It\'s when the lymphatic system goes to purge mode. Try your best to sleep or meditate at that time to maximize your healing. It will help what you are going through go faster.
It\'s a long road. Everyone thought you were gifted because you survive this road. Keep going and cry it all out.
April 26th, 2023 06:45
Audrey A. said:
You should rest yourself. I find the best times for healing is between 10 pm and 2 am. It\'s when the lymphatic system goes to purge mode. Try your best to sleep or meditate at that time to maximize your healing. It will help what you are going through go faster.
It\'s a long road. Everyone thought you were gifted because you survive this road. Keep going and cry it all out.
April 26th, 2023 06:45
Time
Audrey A. said:
Did you ever break through the clouds? Time slows again. It\'s a sight to see. I hope you get to see it.
April 24th, 2023 10:08
Audrey A. said:
Did you ever break through the clouds? Time slows again. It\'s a sight to see. I hope you get to see it.
April 24th, 2023 10:08
Time
2781 said:
Time seems to accelerate as we get older. You felt that in youth!
April 24th, 2023 09:41
2781 said:
Time seems to accelerate as we get older. You felt that in youth!
April 24th, 2023 09:41
The Window
L. B. Mek said:
insightful commentary
and a thought provoking read
thanks for sharing
(\'Shingles made of doubt
and a foundation made of talk.\'
a generational, shared ill-fate
repeated, in every generation
inheriting, a \'foundation-less\'
legacy
but, entrusted to curate and build
a stable future
for humanity to progress? on a dying planet
that catch-22
where idealistic fervency, masks
our inherited fallacy)
April 24th, 2023 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
insightful commentary
and a thought provoking read
thanks for sharing
(\'Shingles made of doubt
and a foundation made of talk.\'
a generational, shared ill-fate
repeated, in every generation
inheriting, a \'foundation-less\'
legacy
but, entrusted to curate and build
a stable future
for humanity to progress? on a dying planet
that catch-22
where idealistic fervency, masks
our inherited fallacy)
April 24th, 2023 06:12
The Window
Doggerel Dave said:
But are you committed to your words here? A really old guy like me needs to invest some hope in you.
Enjoy your stay at MPS. An interactive site, it works best when poets respond to others work and reply to commentary on their own poetry.
April 24th, 2023 01:46
Doggerel Dave said:
But are you committed to your words here? A really old guy like me needs to invest some hope in you.
Enjoy your stay at MPS. An interactive site, it works best when poets respond to others work and reply to commentary on their own poetry.
April 24th, 2023 01:46
