Comments received on poems by Oni Lana
The Wood\'s
Abby1234 said:
Love this poem. The woods are the best place to go to because it is so calming. Nice job Oni Lana.
May 2nd, 2023 13:31
Abby1234 said:
Love this poem. The woods are the best place to go to because it is so calming. Nice job Oni Lana.
May 2nd, 2023 13:31
Heartbreak Hurt\'s
L. B. Mek said:
so true, stay strong! dear poet
hope it won\'t be long
till you\'re afforded that grace
of forgetfulness
and a new, scent
is driving you wild, all over again
May 1st, 2023 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
so true, stay strong! dear poet
hope it won\'t be long
till you\'re afforded that grace
of forgetfulness
and a new, scent
is driving you wild, all over again
May 1st, 2023 05:48
Mother\'s Love
Bobby O said:
I wrote a piece recently that speaks to feelings when I lost my mom.
SHAKEN BALANCE
Suddenly My Path Got Jumbled
My Certain Plan Suddenly Was Unclear
Instinct , Find Strength Internal, Instead , I Just Found Fear
Charting a Courageous Course
a Jumbled Plan That Quickly Crumbled
Deep Sadness Lives Here , Now I Just Pray ,This Deep Sadness Disappears
This Jumbled Path Defines a New
Never , Starkly Alone, I Face This Bridge Iām Forced to Cross
I Take no Solace Knowing Billions
Have and Will Be Familiar with This Loss
See, My Mom is Gone
I Was Not Prepared
I Never Imagined the Sharpness of This Grief.
Denial, Anger, Bargain,
Depressed
Imprisoned in the Maze of Disbelief
Raised on Her Wisdom, I Must Trust Her Love. I Must Trust These Tears Will Turn to Smiles,
and That My Memories Turn to Blessings, After a Little While
Her Strength is in Me, Her Mighty Spirit My Inheritance
Her Guidance Leads My Jumbled Journey
My Acceptance Her Deliverance
Bobby O
ā¦
April 30th, 2023 10:53
Bobby O said:
I wrote a piece recently that speaks to feelings when I lost my mom.
SHAKEN BALANCE
Suddenly My Path Got Jumbled
My Certain Plan Suddenly Was Unclear
Instinct , Find Strength Internal, Instead , I Just Found Fear
Charting a Courageous Course
a Jumbled Plan That Quickly Crumbled
Deep Sadness Lives Here , Now I Just Pray ,This Deep Sadness Disappears
This Jumbled Path Defines a New
Never , Starkly Alone, I Face This Bridge Iām Forced to Cross
I Take no Solace Knowing Billions
Have and Will Be Familiar with This Loss
See, My Mom is Gone
I Was Not Prepared
I Never Imagined the Sharpness of This Grief.
Denial, Anger, Bargain,
Depressed
Imprisoned in the Maze of Disbelief
Raised on Her Wisdom, I Must Trust Her Love. I Must Trust These Tears Will Turn to Smiles,
and That My Memories Turn to Blessings, After a Little While
Her Strength is in Me, Her Mighty Spirit My Inheritance
Her Guidance Leads My Jumbled Journey
My Acceptance Her Deliverance
Bobby O
ā¦
April 30th, 2023 10:53
Unrequited Love
Christina8 said:
This is a beautifully well written and touching poem. Sometimes things are not meant to be. I often felt this way before I met my husband of 20+ years. Keep on loving and writing.
April 29th, 2023 05:43
Christina8 said:
This is a beautifully well written and touching poem. Sometimes things are not meant to be. I often felt this way before I met my husband of 20+ years. Keep on loving and writing.
April 29th, 2023 05:43
Love Found and Lost
JD said:
A well written poem. It flowed with ease. Sad but beautiful.
April 26th, 2023 05:31
JD said:
A well written poem. It flowed with ease. Sad but beautiful.
April 26th, 2023 05:31
Spring Flowers
David Wakeling said:
You have got to love flowers.They certainly make life colourful. Nice poem
April 25th, 2023 00:49
David Wakeling said:
You have got to love flowers.They certainly make life colourful. Nice poem
April 25th, 2023 00:49
