Comments received on poems by Oni Lana



Sonnet : \"Endless Love\"
Oni Lana said:

Thank you Accidental šŸ˜Š

May 3rd, 2023 23:58

Love\'s Unending Quest
Accidental Poet said:

And when you do find them, write for them. šŸ‘

May 3rd, 2023 07:36

Sonnet : \"Endless Love\"
Accidental Poet said:

A love this strong is a blessing. For some never get to know the feeling within their heart, and that\'s the saddest thing in the world to have never known love in your heart. Well penned Oni. šŸ‘

May 3rd, 2023 07:33

The Wood\'s
Oni Lana said:

Thank you Abby

May 2nd, 2023 20:35

The Wood\'s
Abby1234 said:

Love this poem. The woods are the best place to go to because it is so calming. Nice job Oni Lana.

May 2nd, 2023 13:31

Heartbreak Hurt\'s
L. B. Mek said:

so true, stay strong! dear poet
hope it won\'t be long
till you\'re afforded that grace
of forgetfulness
and a new, scent
is driving you wild, all over again

May 1st, 2023 05:48

Mother\'s Love
Bobby O said:

I wrote a piece recently that speaks to feelings when I lost my mom.

SHAKEN BALANCE
Suddenly My Path Got Jumbled
My Certain Plan Suddenly Was Unclear
Instinct , Find Strength Internal, Instead , I Just Found Fear
Charting a Courageous Course
a Jumbled Plan That Quickly Crumbled
Deep Sadness Lives Here , Now I Just Pray ,This Deep Sadness Disappears

This Jumbled Path Defines a New
Never , Starkly Alone, I Face This Bridge Iā€™m Forced to Cross
I Take no Solace Knowing Billions
Have and Will Be Familiar with This Loss

See, My Mom is Gone
I Was Not Prepared
I Never Imagined the Sharpness of This Grief.
Denial, Anger, Bargain,
Depressed
Imprisoned in the Maze of Disbelief

Raised on Her Wisdom, I Must Trust Her Love. I Must Trust These Tears Will Turn to Smiles,
and That My Memories Turn to Blessings, After a Little While
Her Strength is in Me, Her Mighty Spirit My Inheritance
Her Guidance Leads My Jumbled Journey
My Acceptance Her Deliverance
Bobby O



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April 30th, 2023 10:53

Unrequited Love
Accidental Poet said:

Many a man scoffs at the thought of being a romantic, but love for one woman will be his biggest weakness, while also his greatest strength. Well penned Oni. šŸ˜‰

April 30th, 2023 03:31

Unrequited Love
Christina8 said:

This is a beautifully well written and touching poem. Sometimes things are not meant to be. I often felt this way before I met my husband of 20+ years. Keep on loving and writing.

April 29th, 2023 05:43

Love\'s Unending Quest
2781 said:

Nicely written.

April 27th, 2023 08:43

Love Found and Lost
JD said:

A well written poem. It flowed with ease. Sad but beautiful.

April 26th, 2023 05:31

Spring Flowers
David Wakeling said:

You have got to love flowers.They certainly make life colourful. Nice poem

April 25th, 2023 00:49