Comments received on poems by jjulia
Poesia of a call after 21:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'Too many people are still waiting for joy.\'
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
June 5th, 2023 02:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'Too many people are still waiting for joy.\'
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
June 5th, 2023 02:59
Poesia no. 27
MendedFences27 said:
Seems like a personal poem. Yet, so well written. \"The spare remains in my heart,\" makes it poetic. I enjoyed reading this, and it felt a bit sad. Hope you\'re O.K. Otherwise, these are wise words to follow. - Phil A.
May 16th, 2023 21:17
MendedFences27 said:
Seems like a personal poem. Yet, so well written. \"The spare remains in my heart,\" makes it poetic. I enjoyed reading this, and it felt a bit sad. Hope you\'re O.K. Otherwise, these are wise words to follow. - Phil A.
May 16th, 2023 21:17
Poesia no. 25
Rocky Lagou said:
Having a Brazilian father and being able to comprehend Portuguese semi-well makes me appreciate this poem all the more
May 16th, 2023 08:31
Rocky Lagou said:
Having a Brazilian father and being able to comprehend Portuguese semi-well makes me appreciate this poem all the more
May 16th, 2023 08:31
Poesia no. 25
B.E.Poet said:
This is so true! I definitely feel this.
Adoro que você coloque o português na sua escrita, vou começar a fazer algo parecido com a minha poesia. Eu falo espanhol e metade dos meus poemas são em espanhol, então talvez eu deva fazer uma mistura. Obrigado, grande inspiração.
May 15th, 2023 16:20
B.E.Poet said:
This is so true! I definitely feel this.
Adoro que você coloque o português na sua escrita, vou começar a fazer algo parecido com a minha poesia. Eu falo espanhol e metade dos meus poemas são em espanhol, então talvez eu deva fazer uma mistura. Obrigado, grande inspiração.
May 15th, 2023 16:20
Poesia no. 25
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(you posses a hi-definition
capacity
for empathetic, insight
it seems
dear poet, thanks for sharing)
May 15th, 2023 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(you posses a hi-definition
capacity
for empathetic, insight
it seems
dear poet, thanks for sharing)
May 15th, 2023 04:43
My sudden anger
Bobby O said:
I didn’t get it. Each new line seems unattached to others constantly breaking the continuity of the read. The second stanza has substance that interests. Things lines WERE linked. I’m guessing there is unhappiness w some limited or pigeonholed thoughts and approaches and perhaps just one example to shed that light could tie all together and the reader could rally w the cause?
May 12th, 2023 21:32
Bobby O said:
I didn’t get it. Each new line seems unattached to others constantly breaking the continuity of the read. The second stanza has substance that interests. Things lines WERE linked. I’m guessing there is unhappiness w some limited or pigeonholed thoughts and approaches and perhaps just one example to shed that light could tie all together and the reader could rally w the cause?
May 12th, 2023 21:32
Poesia no. 23
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sapiens with darkened frontal lobes.\'
that X-ray, shadow
of emptiness, a tell-tell symbol
that, try as we might
we can\'t fix, what\'s doesn\'t exist
(a really intriguing write
the vehemence in your poetic voice
adds to your delivery and power
a great read, thanks for sharing)
May 12th, 2023 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sapiens with darkened frontal lobes.\'
that X-ray, shadow
of emptiness, a tell-tell symbol
that, try as we might
we can\'t fix, what\'s doesn\'t exist
(a really intriguing write
the vehemence in your poetic voice
adds to your delivery and power
a great read, thanks for sharing)
May 12th, 2023 04:24
take me back to the hiraeth
MendedFences27 said:
Be sure to dress for the gala after your first book signing. You write beautifully, it displays your art, your poems are works of this art. you have enormous talent. Do not let it rest. Pursue your dreams through it.
This poem is amazing. I was stunned by the maturity of your wordings. Keep it up.- Phil A.
May 10th, 2023 21:57
MendedFences27 said:
Be sure to dress for the gala after your first book signing. You write beautifully, it displays your art, your poems are works of this art. you have enormous talent. Do not let it rest. Pursue your dreams through it.
This poem is amazing. I was stunned by the maturity of your wordings. Keep it up.- Phil A.
May 10th, 2023 21:57
Personification of my eyes
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful poem. I may not have gotten its full impact due to my singular language impairment. I sensed a sadness in the poem and hope nothing tragic has happened. I think you have a powerful gift and can\'t believe you are so gifted as to write like this at your age. Stay with it. - Phil A.
May 10th, 2023 07:44
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful poem. I may not have gotten its full impact due to my singular language impairment. I sensed a sadness in the poem and hope nothing tragic has happened. I think you have a powerful gift and can\'t believe you are so gifted as to write like this at your age. Stay with it. - Phil A.
May 10th, 2023 07:44
Themes of the mind no. 2
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful poem, JJ. You raise a great point, \" What is the magic behind understanding?\" You link it to \"Him\" and rightly so. It \" is the question we must all answer.\" Ther are so many things in life for which humanity has no answers. Life itself, is one of these. Keep pondering Life\'s mysteries. - Phil A.
May 8th, 2023 21:46
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful poem, JJ. You raise a great point, \" What is the magic behind understanding?\" You link it to \"Him\" and rightly so. It \" is the question we must all answer.\" Ther are so many things in life for which humanity has no answers. Life itself, is one of these. Keep pondering Life\'s mysteries. - Phil A.
May 8th, 2023 21:46
My epitaph
Rocky Lagou said:
This is actually legendary! You are such a wise poet, and this epitaph is so profound. We should discard the distractions of the world, and focus on living \"for strength.\"
May 5th, 2023 08:07
Rocky Lagou said:
This is actually legendary! You are such a wise poet, and this epitaph is so profound. We should discard the distractions of the world, and focus on living \"for strength.\"
May 5th, 2023 08:07
Themes of my heart
L. B. Mek said:
\'Commiserate Fear\'s apprehension\'
wonderfully worded, thanks for sharing
May 5th, 2023 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'Commiserate Fear\'s apprehension\'
wonderfully worded, thanks for sharing
May 5th, 2023 04:20
Control
Bobby O said:
Raise the caliber of your ideals.
What a great line and exact to the point avoiding cliche’. Just saw your age, SMH at the comfort you display while emanating first rate knowledge. I’m a fan. Nice piece
April 29th, 2023 21:56
Bobby O said:
Raise the caliber of your ideals.
What a great line and exact to the point avoiding cliche’. Just saw your age, SMH at the comfort you display while emanating first rate knowledge. I’m a fan. Nice piece
April 29th, 2023 21:56
