Comments received on poems by Yael Olalde-Garcia
ritual II
sorenbarrett said:
Love word play and this poem is full of it all four lines.
August 19th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Love word play and this poem is full of it all four lines.
August 19th, 2025 04:53
Psalm for the Mosquito
sorenbarrett said:
A great message of giving even from one\'s own need. No violence toward others of any life form. Very Buddhist. Loved it
August 18th, 2025 14:49
sorenbarrett said:
A great message of giving even from one\'s own need. No violence toward others of any life form. Very Buddhist. Loved it
August 18th, 2025 14:49
ritual I
sorenbarrett said:
A quatrain with the same ending rhyme scheme but I am not sure how druids move. I would assume on two feet and maybe with a golden knife to cut the mistletoe from the oak. A fun read
August 17th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A quatrain with the same ending rhyme scheme but I am not sure how druids move. I would assume on two feet and maybe with a golden knife to cut the mistletoe from the oak. A fun read
August 17th, 2025 04:49
ritual I
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write free from love, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:49
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write free from love, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:49
I’M SO DEVOTED
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a mixture of the religious and sexual and indeed sex has been used as part of religion for some time. Now days just a bit more hidden. A most interesting poem
August 2nd, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a mixture of the religious and sexual and indeed sex has been used as part of religion for some time. Now days just a bit more hidden. A most interesting poem
August 2nd, 2025 05:14
life through the stained glass
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting vibe to this poem and its flow. Well done
July 31st, 2025 21:09
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting vibe to this poem and its flow. Well done
July 31st, 2025 21:09
spark
Poetic Licence said:
Not everything lasts forever, a sense of moving on to another relationship, nicely expressed and written
July 30th, 2025 15:29
Poetic Licence said:
Not everything lasts forever, a sense of moving on to another relationship, nicely expressed and written
July 30th, 2025 15:29
spark
sorenbarrett said:
Some relationships don\'t last long. A poem that is ready for another. Well done
July 30th, 2025 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
Some relationships don\'t last long. A poem that is ready for another. Well done
July 30th, 2025 15:26
YES I’M A WHORE
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful and angry write, returning that accusation with venom, nicely expressed and written
July 26th, 2025 11:17
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful and angry write, returning that accusation with venom, nicely expressed and written
July 26th, 2025 11:17
YES I’M A WHORE
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and raw this poem screams back the accusation over and over throwing it back as a weapon. We are all whores selling ourselves for money either at a job, in a relationship, for friends, votes, approval. Sex is just one way. A strong write
July 26th, 2025 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and raw this poem screams back the accusation over and over throwing it back as a weapon. We are all whores selling ourselves for money either at a job, in a relationship, for friends, votes, approval. Sex is just one way. A strong write
July 26th, 2025 05:39
the ache of staying alive
sorenbarrett said:
So powerful and identifiable it touches something deep inside and talks like an old friend. Your wording is well chosen and the short lines give pause to each thought. A lovely write and a fave
July 25th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
So powerful and identifiable it touches something deep inside and talks like an old friend. Your wording is well chosen and the short lines give pause to each thought. A lovely write and a fave
July 25th, 2025 04:27
the ache of staying alive
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed and written write
July 25th, 2025 02:56
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed and written write
July 25th, 2025 02:56
Hell
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of letting free all there emotions in anger, venting in full, nicely expressed
July 21st, 2025 12:14
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of letting free all there emotions in anger, venting in full, nicely expressed
July 21st, 2025 12:14
Hell
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of raw emotion set in words of rage. Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of raw emotion set in words of rage. Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 09:28
I’m Drunk
Poetic Licence said:
A strong sense of past history causing some resentment maybe anger as well, interesting and nicely written write
July 17th, 2025 04:35
Poetic Licence said:
A strong sense of past history causing some resentment maybe anger as well, interesting and nicely written write
July 17th, 2025 04:35
I’m Drunk
sorenbarrett said:
Am I mistaken or do I hear a tinge of resentment, a touch of irritation, a tad of anger in this poem? Some past history? This poem raises more questions than it answers in all its vivid imagery. Nicely written
July 17th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Am I mistaken or do I hear a tinge of resentment, a touch of irritation, a tad of anger in this poem? Some past history? This poem raises more questions than it answers in all its vivid imagery. Nicely written
July 17th, 2025 04:09
what the bloodshed forgave
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable read with the desire to be less human, nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 01:22
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable read with the desire to be less human, nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 01:22
what the bloodshed forgave
sorenbarrett said:
To feel more but to be human less than desired. A surreal poem. Nicely done
July 15th, 2025 19:24
sorenbarrett said:
To feel more but to be human less than desired. A surreal poem. Nicely done
July 15th, 2025 19:24
you asked for beauty and i rage
sorenbarrett said:
Gritty, grimy, dark a poem of use, abuse that conveys feelings of rebellion, anger, hedonism wrapped in addiction be it drugs or sex all for a thrill. It expresses it well in this poem
July 14th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Gritty, grimy, dark a poem of use, abuse that conveys feelings of rebellion, anger, hedonism wrapped in addiction be it drugs or sex all for a thrill. It expresses it well in this poem
July 14th, 2025 04:08
you asked for beauty and i rage
Demar Desu said:
I’m guessing this poem is for 18+
July 13th, 2025 23:05
Demar Desu said:
I’m guessing this poem is for 18+
July 13th, 2025 23:05
Weaponized Empathy
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this poem speaks to me of addiction and abuse and its effects on a relationship. A dark poem
July 9th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this poem speaks to me of addiction and abuse and its effects on a relationship. A dark poem
July 9th, 2025 04:06
Coco
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like you are hungry with all the eat lines. A fun read. Enjoyed it.
July 2nd, 2025 19:16
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like you are hungry with all the eat lines. A fun read. Enjoyed it.
July 2nd, 2025 19:16
in between
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write very nicely worded, you are yourself and that\'s what is important, we are all just average normal people and should be proud of that, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 08:00
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write very nicely worded, you are yourself and that\'s what is important, we are all just average normal people and should be proud of that, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 08:00
in between
sorenbarrett said:
Balance is of critical importance in life and being able to find the middle ground is key. Here normality is what one sees themself as. If there were no normal there would be no exceptional nothing to compare to. It is perfectly fine to be average not in all things, that would be boring, but in any. A lovely poem with various meanings and a fave
June 28th, 2025 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
Balance is of critical importance in life and being able to find the middle ground is key. Here normality is what one sees themself as. If there were no normal there would be no exceptional nothing to compare to. It is perfectly fine to be average not in all things, that would be boring, but in any. A lovely poem with various meanings and a fave
June 28th, 2025 07:01
Ai could
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed what is real and what is not has become a question that can no longer be answered. A great write
June 5th, 2025 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed what is real and what is not has become a question that can no longer be answered. A great write
June 5th, 2025 09:18
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