Comments received on poems by Yael Olalde-Garcia
QUICK & EASY
sorenbarrett said:
Is this just alcohol or is there a metaphor here? A lovely write.
October 5th, 2025 19:43
sorenbarrett said:
Is this just alcohol or is there a metaphor here? A lovely write.
October 5th, 2025 19:43
MOVING WEIGHT THROUGH OMAHA
sorenbarrett said:
I like the feel of this poem it sounds so working man common, down to earth, well done
September 11th, 2025 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
I like the feel of this poem it sounds so working man common, down to earth, well done
September 11th, 2025 06:14
no colors
sorenbarrett said:
Modernistic, fragmentational I would call it and a bit surreal. Nicely worded and quite clever. Well done as well as raw
August 25th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Modernistic, fragmentational I would call it and a bit surreal. Nicely worded and quite clever. Well done as well as raw
August 25th, 2025 04:07
ritual II
sorenbarrett said:
Love word play and this poem is full of it all four lines.
August 19th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Love word play and this poem is full of it all four lines.
August 19th, 2025 04:53
Psalm for the Mosquito
sorenbarrett said:
A great message of giving even from one\'s own need. No violence toward others of any life form. Very Buddhist. Loved it
August 18th, 2025 14:49
sorenbarrett said:
A great message of giving even from one\'s own need. No violence toward others of any life form. Very Buddhist. Loved it
August 18th, 2025 14:49
ritual I
sorenbarrett said:
A quatrain with the same ending rhyme scheme but I am not sure how druids move. I would assume on two feet and maybe with a golden knife to cut the mistletoe from the oak. A fun read
August 17th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A quatrain with the same ending rhyme scheme but I am not sure how druids move. I would assume on two feet and maybe with a golden knife to cut the mistletoe from the oak. A fun read
August 17th, 2025 04:49
ritual I
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write free from love, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:49
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write free from love, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:49
I’M SO DEVOTED
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a mixture of the religious and sexual and indeed sex has been used as part of religion for some time. Now days just a bit more hidden. A most interesting poem
August 2nd, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a mixture of the religious and sexual and indeed sex has been used as part of religion for some time. Now days just a bit more hidden. A most interesting poem
August 2nd, 2025 05:14
life through the stained glass
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting vibe to this poem and its flow. Well done
July 31st, 2025 21:09
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting vibe to this poem and its flow. Well done
July 31st, 2025 21:09
spark
Poetic Licence said:
Not everything lasts forever, a sense of moving on to another relationship, nicely expressed and written
July 30th, 2025 15:29
Poetic Licence said:
Not everything lasts forever, a sense of moving on to another relationship, nicely expressed and written
July 30th, 2025 15:29
spark
sorenbarrett said:
Some relationships don\'t last long. A poem that is ready for another. Well done
July 30th, 2025 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
Some relationships don\'t last long. A poem that is ready for another. Well done
July 30th, 2025 15:26
YES I’M A WHORE
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful and angry write, returning that accusation with venom, nicely expressed and written
July 26th, 2025 11:17
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful and angry write, returning that accusation with venom, nicely expressed and written
July 26th, 2025 11:17
YES I’M A WHORE
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and raw this poem screams back the accusation over and over throwing it back as a weapon. We are all whores selling ourselves for money either at a job, in a relationship, for friends, votes, approval. Sex is just one way. A strong write
July 26th, 2025 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and raw this poem screams back the accusation over and over throwing it back as a weapon. We are all whores selling ourselves for money either at a job, in a relationship, for friends, votes, approval. Sex is just one way. A strong write
July 26th, 2025 05:39
the ache of staying alive
sorenbarrett said:
So powerful and identifiable it touches something deep inside and talks like an old friend. Your wording is well chosen and the short lines give pause to each thought. A lovely write and a fave
July 25th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
So powerful and identifiable it touches something deep inside and talks like an old friend. Your wording is well chosen and the short lines give pause to each thought. A lovely write and a fave
July 25th, 2025 04:27
the ache of staying alive
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed and written write
July 25th, 2025 02:56
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed and written write
July 25th, 2025 02:56
Hell
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of letting free all there emotions in anger, venting in full, nicely expressed
July 21st, 2025 12:14
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of letting free all there emotions in anger, venting in full, nicely expressed
July 21st, 2025 12:14
Hell
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of raw emotion set in words of rage. Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of raw emotion set in words of rage. Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 09:28
I’m Drunk
Poetic Licence said:
A strong sense of past history causing some resentment maybe anger as well, interesting and nicely written write
July 17th, 2025 04:35
Poetic Licence said:
A strong sense of past history causing some resentment maybe anger as well, interesting and nicely written write
July 17th, 2025 04:35
I’m Drunk
sorenbarrett said:
Am I mistaken or do I hear a tinge of resentment, a touch of irritation, a tad of anger in this poem? Some past history? This poem raises more questions than it answers in all its vivid imagery. Nicely written
July 17th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Am I mistaken or do I hear a tinge of resentment, a touch of irritation, a tad of anger in this poem? Some past history? This poem raises more questions than it answers in all its vivid imagery. Nicely written
July 17th, 2025 04:09
what the bloodshed forgave
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable read with the desire to be less human, nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 01:22
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable read with the desire to be less human, nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 01:22
what the bloodshed forgave
sorenbarrett said:
To feel more but to be human less than desired. A surreal poem. Nicely done
July 15th, 2025 19:24
sorenbarrett said:
To feel more but to be human less than desired. A surreal poem. Nicely done
July 15th, 2025 19:24
you asked for beauty and i rage
sorenbarrett said:
Gritty, grimy, dark a poem of use, abuse that conveys feelings of rebellion, anger, hedonism wrapped in addiction be it drugs or sex all for a thrill. It expresses it well in this poem
July 14th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Gritty, grimy, dark a poem of use, abuse that conveys feelings of rebellion, anger, hedonism wrapped in addiction be it drugs or sex all for a thrill. It expresses it well in this poem
July 14th, 2025 04:08
you asked for beauty and i rage
Demar Desu said:
I’m guessing this poem is for 18+
July 13th, 2025 23:05
Demar Desu said:
I’m guessing this poem is for 18+
July 13th, 2025 23:05
Weaponized Empathy
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this poem speaks to me of addiction and abuse and its effects on a relationship. A dark poem
July 9th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this poem speaks to me of addiction and abuse and its effects on a relationship. A dark poem
July 9th, 2025 04:06
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