I TALK TO JESUS
sorenbarrett said:

Hypocrisy rankers the soul. A wonderful read that puts it on the line. By their works ye shall know them

May 28th, 2025 05:34

the aftermath: Act II
sorenbarrett said:

Falling from a dream into reality is a shock and requires strength to surmount A most raw and felt poem of withdrawal not just from a drug but the drug that we put in us in our mind about perceptions ours and others. Lovely

May 27th, 2025 07:14

gravity has favorites
Soman Ragavan said:


The very title challenges one of the most common assumptions : that gravity applies equally to all. Some are born gently, with love; others are expelled even when in the womb. They are unwanted right from birth. They are destined to a sorry life….

Conflict existed even in those who came before. The birth was just a by-product…

The point about the impact and the crater is impactful… You can hardly walk away from a blow being totally unscathed. It has to leave some effects on you. Physical or emotional. The crater is there as proof that the contact had an effect.


Words are knives. They are also nuclear weapons, whose radioactivity drift far, far away and penetrate everywhere; there is no escape from them. For how long can you hunker down in an underground bunker ?... In Japan the radioactivity lasted many decades

“and the light you see
is just the supernova
that survived-...”
Thus, the poet appears like a bright light but was the product of a collision...
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May 26th, 2025 20:34

the aftermath
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed after the end of high levels of activity the body reacts sometimes slowly and sometimes in a crash. Nicely penned

May 25th, 2025 15:34

the night & the carnage
Poetic Licence said:

A very open, honest account of some of the effects of addiction on ones feelings, emotions and behaviour. Maybe it\'s that moment of tenderness that they are really craving. Real and from the heart write

May 23rd, 2025 11:12

heights
sorenbarrett said:

Wow! what a dig. There seems to be a good deal of resentment here and the view of others as talentless and not to be respected. I hear the spite in this poem. Well written and powerful

May 23rd, 2025 04:37

Like the old days
Poetic Licence said:

Very powerful write of real pain and hurt covered in anger, a heartfelt write, nicely expressed

May 22nd, 2025 04:48

Nighttime Rager
spilleronsheet said:

Rage, rage and rage..and must go on…nice write

April 3rd, 2025 23:43

Suicide is not for the weak
peto said:

I\'ve lost a couple of friends to this over the years
Question we are left with is why
Thank you for giving a voice to them and tackling such a subject
Respect

February 3rd, 2024 04:16

Drugs and Men
peto said:

Welcome
Very hard on yourself
We all experiment when young
You don\'t need to be nude to be desirable
I desire more writes from this talented pen
Super rhyme and content

July 6th, 2023 07:12