Comments received on poems by Yael Garcia
the night & the carnage
Poetic Licence said:
A very open, honest account of some of the effects of addiction on ones feelings, emotions and behaviour. Maybe it\'s that moment of tenderness that they are really craving. Real and from the heart write
May 23rd, 2025 11:12
Poetic Licence said:
A very open, honest account of some of the effects of addiction on ones feelings, emotions and behaviour. Maybe it\'s that moment of tenderness that they are really craving. Real and from the heart write
May 23rd, 2025 11:12
the night & the carnage
2781 said:
It\'s an honest portrait.
Everything is counterfeit, they say, drugs get you high, when they take you low.
They eat our bodies, and take our souls.
The day I got high, was the day I got low...
If you hear his voice..
You\'ll know.
May 23rd, 2025 10:18
2781 said:
It\'s an honest portrait.
Everything is counterfeit, they say, drugs get you high, when they take you low.
They eat our bodies, and take our souls.
The day I got high, was the day I got low...
If you hear his voice..
You\'ll know.
May 23rd, 2025 10:18
heights
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! what a dig. There seems to be a good deal of resentment here and the view of others as talentless and not to be respected. I hear the spite in this poem. Well written and powerful
May 23rd, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! what a dig. There seems to be a good deal of resentment here and the view of others as talentless and not to be respected. I hear the spite in this poem. Well written and powerful
May 23rd, 2025 04:37
Do You Have A Home?
NikNak73 said:
Wow. Powerful words for an experience shared by so many. Thank you for sharing.
May 22nd, 2025 20:59
NikNak73 said:
Wow. Powerful words for an experience shared by so many. Thank you for sharing.
May 22nd, 2025 20:59
Like the old days
Poetic Licence said:
Very powerful write of real pain and hurt covered in anger, a heartfelt write, nicely expressed
May 22nd, 2025 04:48
Poetic Licence said:
Very powerful write of real pain and hurt covered in anger, a heartfelt write, nicely expressed
May 22nd, 2025 04:48
Like the old days
sorenbarrett said:
So much regret in this piece it oozes with pain and drips anger. The hurt shines through. Powerful! Well written.
May 22nd, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
So much regret in this piece it oozes with pain and drips anger. The hurt shines through. Powerful! Well written.
May 22nd, 2025 04:42
Nighttime Rager
spilleronsheet said:
Rage, rage and rage..and must go on…nice write
April 3rd, 2025 23:43
spilleronsheet said:
Rage, rage and rage..and must go on…nice write
April 3rd, 2025 23:43
Nighttime Rager
sorenbarrett said:
Rage against the light. That is the light on my pipe. A fun read
April 3rd, 2025 19:06
sorenbarrett said:
Rage against the light. That is the light on my pipe. A fun read
April 3rd, 2025 19:06
Suicide is not for the weak
peto said:
I\'ve lost a couple of friends to this over the years
Question we are left with is why
Thank you for giving a voice to them and tackling such a subject
Respect
February 3rd, 2024 04:16
peto said:
I\'ve lost a couple of friends to this over the years
Question we are left with is why
Thank you for giving a voice to them and tackling such a subject
Respect
February 3rd, 2024 04:16
Drugs and Men
2781 said:
He bought me up also out of a horrible pit, out of the miry clay, and set my feet upon a rock, and established my goings.
July 6th, 2023 09:50
2781 said:
He bought me up also out of a horrible pit, out of the miry clay, and set my feet upon a rock, and established my goings.
July 6th, 2023 09:50
Drugs and Men
peto said:
Welcome
Very hard on yourself
We all experiment when young
You don\'t need to be nude to be desirable
I desire more writes from this talented pen
Super rhyme and content
July 6th, 2023 07:12
peto said:
Welcome
Very hard on yourself
We all experiment when young
You don\'t need to be nude to be desirable
I desire more writes from this talented pen
Super rhyme and content
July 6th, 2023 07:12
Prosperity Is Found In The Roads
Abby1234 said:
I agree life sucks. This poem is so expiring. Keep up the good work.
May 2nd, 2023 13:38
Abby1234 said:
I agree life sucks. This poem is so expiring. Keep up the good work.
May 2nd, 2023 13:38
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