Comments received on poems by Anouk
moment of truth
sunshine777 said:
Your a survivor, it was an honor to read your poem. Thank you for sharing!
April 5th, 2024 18:30
sunshine777 said:
Your a survivor, it was an honor to read your poem. Thank you for sharing!
April 5th, 2024 18:30
The quiet kid
Bobby O said:
That pounds like a bass drum deeply into my brain, it outlines truly awkward synergy w palpable uncertainty as existing tension turns every well intentioned plan into a wild guess.
May 11th, 2023 02:55
Bobby O said:
That pounds like a bass drum deeply into my brain, it outlines truly awkward synergy w palpable uncertainty as existing tension turns every well intentioned plan into a wild guess.
May 11th, 2023 02:55
That girl
Jan_Yin said:
that girl is me haha. I hope you don\'t mind but can I write a poem that has your words as the beginning but then I add mine kind of like a fusioned poem?.the title would be that girl is me .
May 9th, 2023 04:51
Jan_Yin said:
that girl is me haha. I hope you don\'t mind but can I write a poem that has your words as the beginning but then I add mine kind of like a fusioned poem?.the title would be that girl is me .
May 9th, 2023 04:51
That girl
B.E.Poet said:
Nice poem, i went through this for a couple of years until i decided to go into homeschooling. But thanks for showing the reality.
May 8th, 2023 22:32
B.E.Poet said:
Nice poem, i went through this for a couple of years until i decided to go into homeschooling. But thanks for showing the reality.
May 8th, 2023 22:32
That girl
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my ramble below
that line, felt like it was imbued
with a deep wrongness
and I just wanted to say something
or anything, to alert you
as that line
felt like an odourless smoke
poisoning your poetic ink..
forgive my overzealous n foolish nature
try to imagine I meant well
thanks for choosing to share
for choosing to fight
and become a light..
(\'she got used to it.\'
this is very wrong, do not trust
such mirage solutions, dear poet
humanity\'s, greatest curse
is our adaptability
even kidnap victim\'s
can be made to feel
like it\'s their fault, like
this nightmare
is where they belong;
this is wrong
this is our coping methodology
when our capacity to reason
logically
is overwhelmed, beyond
what we think, we can deal with
so we cocoon ourselves
within lies, just trying to survive..
You, dear poet
DESERVE
all the better, you can dream
in-to existence
never, give up on yourself
even if you think the entire world
has forsaken you
dig deep, within
find that strength, that spark
gifting you a smile, free of charge
hold on to it, build on it
and fight! fight for everything
you can force this fuck\'d up world
to give you, as your just rewards
for surviving, for believing
in yourself)
stay strong!
May 8th, 2023 07:41
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my ramble below
that line, felt like it was imbued
with a deep wrongness
and I just wanted to say something
or anything, to alert you
as that line
felt like an odourless smoke
poisoning your poetic ink..
forgive my overzealous n foolish nature
try to imagine I meant well
thanks for choosing to share
for choosing to fight
and become a light..
(\'she got used to it.\'
this is very wrong, do not trust
such mirage solutions, dear poet
humanity\'s, greatest curse
is our adaptability
even kidnap victim\'s
can be made to feel
like it\'s their fault, like
this nightmare
is where they belong;
this is wrong
this is our coping methodology
when our capacity to reason
logically
is overwhelmed, beyond
what we think, we can deal with
so we cocoon ourselves
within lies, just trying to survive..
You, dear poet
DESERVE
all the better, you can dream
in-to existence
never, give up on yourself
even if you think the entire world
has forsaken you
dig deep, within
find that strength, that spark
gifting you a smile, free of charge
hold on to it, build on it
and fight! fight for everything
you can force this fuck\'d up world
to give you, as your just rewards
for surviving, for believing
in yourself)
stay strong!
May 8th, 2023 07:41
That girl
2781 said:
The first part had me drifting into a delightful story of ultimate success.
Early bloomers fade, others get better with age.
I remember wanting to sleep my younger self away. It took me years but I eventually woke up.
May 8th, 2023 04:22
2781 said:
The first part had me drifting into a delightful story of ultimate success.
Early bloomers fade, others get better with age.
I remember wanting to sleep my younger self away. It took me years but I eventually woke up.
May 8th, 2023 04:22
