Comments received on poems by Just_my_poetic_side
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Cheeky Missy said:
I will disagree, time doesn\'t so much heal as cover the gaping crater eventually with enough sand you half think it no longer exists. But try to walk across as if the crater\'s truly gone, and the quicksand swallows you in a heartbeat, proving the pain is dampened, but the wound not entirely gone. Now you shall learn not to be so carefree with the label \"friend,\" sadly wincing at it, while more slowly accepting yet with inherent distrust the next soul. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 25th, 2025 00:36
Cheeky Missy said:
I will disagree, time doesn\'t so much heal as cover the gaping crater eventually with enough sand you half think it no longer exists. But try to walk across as if the crater\'s truly gone, and the quicksand swallows you in a heartbeat, proving the pain is dampened, but the wound not entirely gone. Now you shall learn not to be so carefree with the label \"friend,\" sadly wincing at it, while more slowly accepting yet with inherent distrust the next soul. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 25th, 2025 00:36
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Poetic Licence said:
A very touching write, where exact opposites cause confusion in the mind, nicely expressed and written
March 24th, 2025 05:32
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching write, where exact opposites cause confusion in the mind, nicely expressed and written
March 24th, 2025 05:32
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sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a dialectic with opposites clashing to reveal the truth. A Ying and Yang where disillusion is resolution. Well said.
March 24th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a dialectic with opposites clashing to reveal the truth. A Ying and Yang where disillusion is resolution. Well said.
March 24th, 2025 04:22
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orchidee said:
How come it\'s me? lol.
Note to self: Nooo, the poet don\'t mean YOU! lol.
March 25th, 2024 03:01
orchidee said:
How come it\'s me? lol.
Note to self: Nooo, the poet don\'t mean YOU! lol.
March 25th, 2024 03:01
