Comments received on poems by ShanikiSmith
I maybe poor but I love her
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication, raw emotion on our reading platter
October 22nd, 2020 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication, raw emotion on our reading platter
October 22nd, 2020 03:22
He is very much human
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
we all have a room that we daren\'t go in
Great write I like it!
February 22nd, 2019 08:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
we all have a room that we daren\'t go in
Great write I like it!
February 22nd, 2019 08:50
He is very much human
sylviasearcher said:
Ahh vampire love. I never watched it but makes me think I should...
February 22nd, 2019 02:33
sylviasearcher said:
Ahh vampire love. I never watched it but makes me think I should...
February 22nd, 2019 02:33
Singing That Same Old Tune - Poem by Shaniki L. Smith
Crystal Hope said:
wow! so beautiful,emotional,and incredible.
October 22nd, 2018 22:23
Crystal Hope said:
wow! so beautiful,emotional,and incredible.
October 22nd, 2018 22:23
Singing That Same Old Tune - Poem by Shaniki L. Smith
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! If you\'re writing about it then you\'re aware of what others may be saying about you or you\'ve realized your situation is hopeless.
Your words have a distinct meaning to you alone. Almost as if you know in your heart of hearts what you should do. Maybe it\'s time for a new song. :)
Thanks for posting.
October 22nd, 2018 15:47
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! If you\'re writing about it then you\'re aware of what others may be saying about you or you\'ve realized your situation is hopeless.
Your words have a distinct meaning to you alone. Almost as if you know in your heart of hearts what you should do. Maybe it\'s time for a new song. :)
Thanks for posting.
October 22nd, 2018 15:47
Cappuccino
Heartwriter said:
Some things are worth keeping and some worth letting go. I enjoyed this.
June 12th, 2018 08:37
Heartwriter said:
Some things are worth keeping and some worth letting go. I enjoyed this.
June 12th, 2018 08:37
Higher Love
drchito fl said:
Shaniki, I agree that higher love is deeper, more sublime and longer lasting. Well said!
Drchito fl
September 13th, 2017 19:38
drchito fl said:
Shaniki, I agree that higher love is deeper, more sublime and longer lasting. Well said!
Drchito fl
September 13th, 2017 19:38
Dear Friend Your Real Name Should Be Move On
RhymeTime said:
I love it i myself need a boost to move on move on move on. I have learned the same lesson before. You can\'t make someone love you even if you make you so damn easy to love
July 13th, 2017 23:26
RhymeTime said:
I love it i myself need a boost to move on move on move on. I have learned the same lesson before. You can\'t make someone love you even if you make you so damn easy to love
July 13th, 2017 23:26
Dear Friend Your Real Name Should Be Move On
RhymeTime said:
I love it i myself need a boost to move on move on move on. I have learned the same lesson before. You can\'t make someone love you even if you make you so damn easy to love
July 13th, 2017 23:26
RhymeTime said:
I love it i myself need a boost to move on move on move on. I have learned the same lesson before. You can\'t make someone love you even if you make you so damn easy to love
July 13th, 2017 23:26
Dear Friend Your Real Name Should Be Move On
Heather T said:
Sounds to me like somebody got some great advice. Tell me they listened!
July 13th, 2017 22:44
Heather T said:
Sounds to me like somebody got some great advice. Tell me they listened!
July 13th, 2017 22:44
Open Your Door
ShanikiSmith said:
Thank you Brain for taking time out to read my poetry. And I will do the same for you. Remember every women is not always bad. There are good women out there.
June 9th, 2016 23:55
ShanikiSmith said:
Thank you Brain for taking time out to read my poetry. And I will do the same for you. Remember every women is not always bad. There are good women out there.
June 9th, 2016 23:55
Open Your Door
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHANIKI for a very interesting poem ! There are BAD MAMA JAMMAS that consume our manhood and leave us drained of life and love.and almost destroy our capacity to accept or even allow a New Lady (however lovely) into our lives. I hear what you are saying SHANIKI that "You ain't no Bad Mama Jamma and that you will only give me TLC and no pain !" OMG I want to open the door and let you into my heart to release me from her "Toxic Love Pollution" I want to breath again. Promise me you won't hurt me and I will OPEN MY DOOR LOVINGLY to YOU ! Thanks for caring and sharing - Yours BRIAN
June 9th, 2016 05:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHANIKI for a very interesting poem ! There are BAD MAMA JAMMAS that consume our manhood and leave us drained of life and love.and almost destroy our capacity to accept or even allow a New Lady (however lovely) into our lives. I hear what you are saying SHANIKI that "You ain't no Bad Mama Jamma and that you will only give me TLC and no pain !" OMG I want to open the door and let you into my heart to release me from her "Toxic Love Pollution" I want to breath again. Promise me you won't hurt me and I will OPEN MY DOOR LOVINGLY to YOU ! Thanks for caring and sharing - Yours BRIAN
June 9th, 2016 05:58
Tarnish Tattoo
Benson said:
For the amount that you spent on that tattoo, you probs could have had a life long porn subscription. Sucks...
February 11th, 2016 14:47
Benson said:
For the amount that you spent on that tattoo, you probs could have had a life long porn subscription. Sucks...
February 11th, 2016 14:47
