Comments received on poems by Torpedo
Kami
L. B. Mek said:
showcasing wonderful poetic technique
lovely flow as well as syllable rhythm
a great write!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
June 2nd, 2023 03:36
L. B. Mek said:
showcasing wonderful poetic technique
lovely flow as well as syllable rhythm
a great write!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
June 2nd, 2023 03:36
Smithy
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
\'A final resonating echo
Stretching through the valley
Like hammer on nail, and pen on paper\'
Thank you!
May 29th, 2023 03:43
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
\'A final resonating echo
Stretching through the valley
Like hammer on nail, and pen on paper\'
Thank you!
May 29th, 2023 03:43
Oasis
arqios said:
Resonates with the child I left for today and brings back memories of an oppressive childhood yesterday. Thanks for sharing. It surely has personal meaning to me.
May 27th, 2023 07:52
arqios said:
Resonates with the child I left for today and brings back memories of an oppressive childhood yesterday. Thanks for sharing. It surely has personal meaning to me.
May 27th, 2023 07:52
Oasis
Bobby O said:
Perfect cadence an unstoppable rhythm enlivens this piece and drew to a second read and I set accoutrements aside and absorbed the bare boned substance and registered its merit. It’s a victory and keeper.
May 27th, 2023 07:10
Bobby O said:
Perfect cadence an unstoppable rhythm enlivens this piece and drew to a second read and I set accoutrements aside and absorbed the bare boned substance and registered its merit. It’s a victory and keeper.
May 27th, 2023 07:10
An order
L. B. Mek said:
I laud your brave honesty
introspection\'s fruits
eloquently, exemplified!
Beautiful imagery, a memorable
read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 26th, 2023 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
I laud your brave honesty
introspection\'s fruits
eloquently, exemplified!
Beautiful imagery, a memorable
read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 26th, 2023 05:17
