Comments received on poems by Torpedo

B.H. said:

I love it, keep it up !!

October 9th, 2023 16:39

L. B. Mek said:

showcasing wonderful poetic technique
lovely flow as well as syllable rhythm
a great write!
thanks for sharing dear Poet

June 2nd, 2023 03:36

L. B. Mek said:

\'A final resonating echo
Stretching through the valley
Like hammer on nail, and pen on paper\'
Thank you!

May 29th, 2023 03:43

arqios said:

Resonates with the child I left for today and brings back memories of an oppressive childhood yesterday. Thanks for sharing. It surely has personal meaning to me.

May 27th, 2023 07:52

Bobby O said:

Perfect cadence an unstoppable rhythm enlivens this piece and drew to a second read and I set accoutrements aside and absorbed the bare boned substance and registered its merit. It’s a victory and keeper.

May 27th, 2023 07:10

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L. B. Mek said:

I laud your brave honesty
introspection\'s fruits
eloquently, exemplified!
Beautiful imagery, a memorable
thanks for sharing, dear poet

May 26th, 2023 05:17